my heart JUMPED when swiftpaw got yanked away from brightpaw thats how good this is. the details are everything. the thumb stroke on brightpaw's cheek. the paw holding. the way swiftpaw goes from resenting cloudtail in the beginning to guiding him to brightpaw and trusting him to take care of her UGHHGHGH THIS IS INCREDIBLE!!!
i am actually in TEARS the drama of it all really just got to me omg.....swiftpaw and cloudtail singing together "she's a, she's a lady" is what really hurt omg, he needs to know cloudtail is going to take care of her. and then her holding both their paws, i am SOBBING. everything about this is so breathtakingly gorgeous, FANTASTIC work!!
I don't think I've ever seen a Swiftpaw video that examined his relationship with Cloudtail like this. Amazing and such a unique angle. I also love how the fight scene was less fast-paced than most people portray, with time for Brightpaw and Swiftpaw to look at each other and really realize what's going on between the fighting. More of a hopeless battle of attrition rather than an intense fight to the death. The emotions are just so well developed.
Just when I think I'm past my hardcore warrior phase I watch a swiftpaw amv and then cry my eyes out and doggone it this was the most emotional and expressive one I've ever seen. Love your art a whole bunch, this is so smooth and lovely and your style is just a joy to see in motion, even when the contents are heartwrenching.
It's nice to see Swiftpaw's soul from StarClan coming to visit and show Cloudtail where Brightheart was. It really makes me happy when I see his soul. :) Good job on the video, your really good at drawing!
I CANNOT THINK OG ANY WORDS TO EVEN BEGIN TO DESCRIBE HOW FANTASTIC THIS IS!!! THERES SO MANY ABSOLUTELY AMAZING THINGS TO TALK ABOUT, LIKE THE BEAUTIFUL PORTRAYL OF EMOTIONS, AND TINY MOVEMENTS THAT ADD SO MUCH CHARACTER, AND YOUR AMAZING USE OF EXPRESSIONS, THE AMAZING ANGLES AND POSING, THE WAY THAT THE FIGHT SCENE PLAYS OUT, THE PRETTY WAY YOU DREW THE BLOOD AND GORE, THE WAY THAT ONE TRIES TO WARN THE OTHER REALIZING THERE MIGHT BE DOGS, THE WAY SWIFTPAW AND CLOUDTAIL'S HAIR FLOWS,, THE PACING AND STORYTELLING I JUST,,,,, ITS ALL STUNNKNG!!!! I AM OBSESSED
this is SO pretty… the MOVEMENT… and the lipsync & subsequent emotions conveyed through it are so very well done this is such a treat to watch EDIT: UUGHH the part where swiftpaw presses brights paw up to his face before floating off is DESTROYING ME this is so GOOD
i was already close to bursting in tears and THEN brightpaw caught swiftpaw's paw. she didn't want him to go. and he pressed his cheek against her paw. and then took away his own paw and flew away. by the end of that scene the table turned into a lake
MAN this is stocked FULL of emotions i cant get over it!! and i love how smooth the animation is, and its so expressive and shows what a heartbreaking story this actually is :(
i have no idea how i haven't seen this until now but HOLY CRAP this amv is absolutely incredible!!! swiftpaw is such a near and dear character to my heart and you portrayed him and his relationship to brightpaw so beautifully, I was ugly crying by the end when he's leading cloudtail to her body and, knowing that she's now safe, was finally able to depart ,, absolutely stunning, everything from the subtle emotional acting and the fight with the dogs, and the lipsync, the shot compositions, it's all just PERFECTION
Every so often I come back to this, and your rendition of the events breaks me /positive. Got me crying so hard at the way Swiftpaw regrets it all, how he looks after Brightpaw with his everything, getting over his grudge and guiding Cloudpaw to her, uhg, it's all so so good
Oh. My. GOD. This is honestly the best animation I've seen in a long time. It's all so incredible, the movements, the timing, the expressions, the lipsync. Omfg incredible job this is gorgeous
YESSS OMG THIS IS DELICIOUS THANK YOU FOR THE FOOD THE MOVEMENTS LIPSYNC EMOTION AND PACING ARE SO AMAZING IMMA REWATCH FOR ANOTHER 10 TIMES DONT MIND ME
This is amazing. It is so smooth and just beautiful. The lip syncing is impressive. I am just lost for words and I love all the emotion and the idea of swiftpaw apologizing to brightpaw for dragging her into this and his spirit leading cloudpaw/Cloudtail to the tragic sight so brightpaw could get help. Just uuuuugh cheft kiss
This is just- WOW! This is absolutely INCREDIBLE!!! I am in LOVE with every scene. Every second of this AMV was PACKED with emotion and it made me cry when swiftpaw was dragged away from brightheart/paw. This is just stunning!! And even when swiftpaw when SEARCHING FOR CLOUDPAW/TAIL!!! Oh my gosh, this is just, BEAUTIFUL!!
Very beautiful ! I'm always soft for Swiftpaw, and this pulls a bit too hard on my heartstrings. I might be crying a little.... or a lot.... Amazing piece of animation !
ARGHH THAT ACTUALLY MADE ME CRY, DUDE THIS IS AMAZING. ALL THE DIFFERENT ANGLE SHOTS AND THE ANIMATION ITS SO SMOOYH AND THE EMOTIOJS ARE PORTRAYED SO GOOD IM MELTING INTO A PUDDLE THIS IS TOO GOOD
WHA---?????? This is incredible!!!! I cannot stop watching it!!! Furthermore, I was looking for the name of this song, and now I've got it! :> I cannot tell you how much I love this!! I've never seen such a good use of frames and AAAAAA GOOD JOB!!!
Absolutely love the tail and fur movement throughout the video. Adds alot of smoothness to the movements. Lip sync was wonderful as well! I'm really glad that Swiftpaw is still getting content. He feels like a character who might've been overshadowed with time because he's an arc 1 cat, but this was wonderful! I loved your interpretation of Swiftpaw's ghost leading (I assume)Cloudtail to Brightpaw's injuried body. Awesome video! You've got a new sub :]
g o d i didn’t think i’d get emotional, but that reconcilliation at the end with swiftpaw, brightpaw, and cloudtail got me. absolutely fantastic amv - all the movements are extremely fluid and it’s all such a treat to watch!!!
AHHHH I MEANT TO COMMENT ON THIS BUT I FORGOT D: D: D: but OMG!! YOUR STORYTELLING IS JUST SO PERFECT!!! i absolutely LOVE that you portrayed swiftpaw as an older brother/protector to brightheart (cause i think they're actually cousins or smth iirc??) but dsjfhkjasdfj THAT SHOT WHERE GHOST SWIFTPAW TELLS CLOUDTAIL "she's a lady" AN BRINGS HIM TO SAVE BRIGHTHEART JUST KILLS ME!!!!!! seriously tho, you hit EVERY emotional beat just so perfectly, i feel like even non-warriors readers would cry watching this
Wow the animation in this!!! God it’s all so good, and you did emotion very well. The feelings from characters are super clear, and the end where swiftpaw’s spirit nuzzles brightpaws paw is so sweet
THE ACTING AND INTERPRETATIONS YOU HAVE ESPECIALLY TOWARDS THE END ARE SOMETHING SO UNIQUE AND WELL DONE- I’ve seen so many swiftpaw amvs and pmvs I thought I went numb to his story but for the first time in a VERY long time I saw that you were able to show the connection between swiftpaw and bright paw and longtail I really want to type way more but for some reason youtube has major delay right now and it’s taking 10 minutes to load every sentence 😭😭😭
omg..the last part when cloud and Swift both sing toghether.. my heart is just💔 ure such an amazing animator and your art is allways a bless for my eyes😭💕
I don't usually get the feels, but this had me holding back a tear. Incredibly well done- you convey emotions so well. The little knocking on his head was so freaking adorable and heart breaking all at the same time. Lovely work! It deserves so many more views than it has
MY GUY. You have improved SO MUCH. HOLY SHIT AAAAAAA I LOVE THIS IM SO PROUD OF YOUUUU!!! The animation is SO smooth and so PRETTY and ARRRGGGGG ITS SO GOOD!!! There’s so much emotion and movement and fluidity and AAAAAA SHAKING AND CRYING RN ITS SO GOOD!!!! It ripped my heart out holy shit. Ily Erm and I’m so proud of how far you’ve come!!
?(!!( IM SO LATE TONTHIS BUT JESUS WHEN I TWLL YOU I SOBBED MY EYES OUT AT THE END WHEN SWIFTS SPIRIT APPEARED I WEEPED SO HARD. AND THEN THE SCENE WITH BRIGHT TUGGING ON SWIFTS PAW I JUST BROKE DOWN IM KICKING N SCREAMING THIS IS SO BEAUTIFULLY PUT TOGETHE
WOAHH!!! I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!! IVE WATCHED IT 7 TIMES ALREADY NOT EVEN JOKING YOU!! THE WAY YOU DO LIPSYNC IS BEAUTIFUL!!! YOUR CHOICE OF STORYBOARDING IS AMAZING AND REALLY MAKES YOU F E E L IN THE MOMENT!! I LOVE YOUR ART STYLE AND EVERYTHING THAT COMES ALONG WITH IT!! :D
Is that swift x brightheart?! Thats just..... wrong. 1st of, they are realated,closely. 2nd there was nothing in the books just, niudging the idea of their ship, she just agreed with his plan to kill the dogs! Also later we get a desqusting comeback and erins forse us to just read about bright heart linkeing swift paw and reverse. They were just friends! Everything else, epic! The plan is still nice and creative, and im not a karen that will force my beleves down your throat. I dont expect you to change that part, and you dont need to.
ARGHH ERM YOUR WORK NEVER FAILS TO IMPRESS OR MAKE THE FEELS COM'A RUSHIN, MY GOD !! I love you sketch amvs so so SO MUCH I ADORE Papers BUT THIS ONE TAKES THE CAKE AWOOGAH
my heart JUMPED when swiftpaw got yanked away from brightpaw thats how good this is. the details are everything. the thumb stroke on brightpaw's cheek. the paw holding. the way swiftpaw goes from resenting cloudtail in the beginning to guiding him to brightpaw and trusting him to take care of her UGHHGHGH THIS IS INCREDIBLE!!!
I LOVE the idea of Swiftpaw leading Cloudpaw to Brightpaw. It's so cute!
I cried at it😢
i am actually in TEARS the drama of it all really just got to me omg.....swiftpaw and cloudtail singing together "she's a, she's a lady" is what really hurt omg, he needs to know cloudtail is going to take care of her. and then her holding both their paws, i am SOBBING. everything about this is so breathtakingly gorgeous, FANTASTIC work!!
I don't think I've ever seen a Swiftpaw video that examined his relationship with Cloudtail like this. Amazing and such a unique angle. I also love how the fight scene was less fast-paced than most people portray, with time for Brightpaw and Swiftpaw to look at each other and really realize what's going on between the fighting. More of a hopeless battle of attrition rather than an intense fight to the death. The emotions are just so well developed.
Just when I think I'm past my hardcore warrior phase I watch a swiftpaw amv and then cry my eyes out and doggone it this was the most emotional and expressive one I've ever seen.
Love your art a whole bunch, this is so smooth and lovely and your style is just a joy to see in motion, even when the contents are heartwrenching.
It's nice to see Swiftpaw's soul from StarClan coming to visit and show Cloudtail where Brightheart was. It really makes me happy when I see his soul. :) Good job on the video, your really good at drawing!
I CANNOT THINK OG ANY WORDS TO EVEN BEGIN TO DESCRIBE HOW FANTASTIC THIS IS!!! THERES SO MANY ABSOLUTELY AMAZING THINGS TO TALK ABOUT, LIKE THE BEAUTIFUL PORTRAYL OF EMOTIONS, AND TINY MOVEMENTS THAT ADD SO MUCH CHARACTER, AND YOUR AMAZING USE OF EXPRESSIONS, THE AMAZING ANGLES AND POSING, THE WAY THAT THE FIGHT SCENE PLAYS OUT, THE PRETTY WAY YOU DREW THE BLOOD AND GORE, THE WAY THAT ONE TRIES TO WARN THE OTHER REALIZING THERE MIGHT BE DOGS, THE WAY SWIFTPAW AND CLOUDTAIL'S HAIR FLOWS,, THE PACING AND STORYTELLING I JUST,,,,, ITS ALL STUNNKNG!!!! I AM OBSESSED
HOLY SHIT THIS LOOKS SO GOOD???? LIKE I CAN'T GET OVER THE EMOTION IN THIS,,, THE STORYTELLING,,,, THE ANIMATION IS ON POINT I AM SCREAMING
this is SO pretty… the MOVEMENT… and the lipsync & subsequent emotions conveyed through it are so very well done this is such a treat to watch
EDIT: UUGHH the part where swiftpaw presses brights paw up to his face before floating off is DESTROYING ME this is so GOOD
i was already close to bursting in tears and THEN brightpaw caught swiftpaw's paw. she didn't want him to go. and he pressed his cheek against her paw. and then took away his own paw and flew away. by the end of that scene the table turned into a lake
MAN this is stocked FULL of emotions i cant get over it!! and i love how smooth the animation is, and its so expressive and shows what a heartbreaking story this actually is :(
i have no idea how i haven't seen this until now but HOLY CRAP this amv is absolutely incredible!!! swiftpaw is such a near and dear character to my heart and you portrayed him and his relationship to brightpaw so beautifully, I was ugly crying by the end when he's leading cloudtail to her body and, knowing that she's now safe, was finally able to depart ,, absolutely stunning, everything from the subtle emotional acting and the fight with the dogs, and the lipsync, the shot compositions, it's all just PERFECTION
It's been two years, suddenly this pops back onto my feed, I've seen it a couple times and IT STILL MAKES MY EYES WATER OMG
Every so often I come back to this, and your rendition of the events breaks me /positive. Got me crying so hard at the way Swiftpaw regrets it all, how he looks after Brightpaw with his everything, getting over his grudge and guiding Cloudpaw to her, uhg, it's all so so good
I just can't tell you how GOOD this is. I cried when Brightpaw and Swiftpaw got hurt and the ending made me cry even harder
okay this absolutely broke me...and yet I want to watch it over and over. Like literally tears pouring down my face.
OMG THIS MADE ME SOB PLEASE CONTINUE THIS AND MAKE IT FULL COLOR OMG WE NEED IT.
Oh. My. GOD. This is honestly the best animation I've seen in a long time. It's all so incredible, the movements, the timing, the expressions, the lipsync. Omfg incredible job this is gorgeous
YESSS OMG THIS IS DELICIOUS THANK YOU FOR THE FOOD
THE MOVEMENTS LIPSYNC EMOTION AND PACING ARE SO AMAZING IMMA REWATCH FOR ANOTHER 10 TIMES DONT MIND ME
AGH THANK YOU SO MUCH! That means a lot coming from you, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
This is amazing. It is so smooth and just beautiful. The lip syncing is impressive. I am just lost for words and I love all the emotion and the idea of swiftpaw apologizing to brightpaw for dragging her into this and his spirit leading cloudpaw/Cloudtail to the tragic sight so brightpaw could get help. Just uuuuugh cheft kiss
This is honestly the best swift paw animation with the most beautiful of headcanons I have ever seen
You should honestly make this into a MAP. It would be so awesome to see this finished!
Actually, would you mind if I cleaned it up a bit, just for fun? If not, I absolutely understand
This is insane oml- The fact that you did the whole song and the entirety is smooth. Excellent work!
Great video!! Also it would have broken my heart in a good way if Cloud and Bright had named one of their kits Swiftkit
this is the most emotional I think I’ve ever felt watching an amv, you do an excellent job with motion, expressions and timing!!
This is just- WOW! This is absolutely INCREDIBLE!!! I am in LOVE with every scene. Every second of this AMV was PACKED with emotion and it made me cry when swiftpaw was dragged away from brightheart/paw. This is just stunning!! And even when swiftpaw when SEARCHING FOR CLOUDPAW/TAIL!!! Oh my gosh, this is just, BEAUTIFUL!!
MY JAW IS ON THE F LO O R THIS IS ABSOLUTELY INCREDIBLE
Very beautiful ! I'm always soft for Swiftpaw, and this pulls a bit too hard on my heartstrings. I might be crying a little.... or a lot....
Amazing piece of animation !
ARGHH THAT ACTUALLY MADE ME CRY, DUDE THIS IS AMAZING. ALL THE DIFFERENT ANGLE SHOTS AND THE ANIMATION ITS SO SMOOYH AND THE EMOTIOJS ARE PORTRAYED SO GOOD IM MELTING INTO A PUDDLE THIS IS TOO GOOD
THIS IS AMAZING??? the EMOTION the MOVEMENT the PACING its all just **MWAH** so we’ll done!!! This deserves so much more attention!!!
WHA---?????? This is incredible!!!! I cannot stop watching it!!! Furthermore, I was looking for the name of this song, and now I've got it! :> I cannot tell you how much I love this!! I've never seen such a good use of frames and AAAAAA GOOD JOB!!!
Absolutely love the tail and fur movement throughout the video. Adds alot of smoothness to the movements. Lip sync was wonderful as well!
I'm really glad that Swiftpaw is still getting content. He feels like a character who might've been overshadowed with time because he's an arc 1 cat, but this was wonderful! I loved your interpretation of Swiftpaw's ghost leading (I assume)Cloudtail to Brightpaw's injuried body.
Awesome video! You've got a new sub :]
g o d i didn’t think i’d get emotional, but that reconcilliation at the end with swiftpaw, brightpaw, and cloudtail got me. absolutely fantastic amv - all the movements are extremely fluid and it’s all such a treat to watch!!!
Haven’t cried over something like this in a while. Thanks.
This is very good though
Literally sobbing I love swiftpaw and brightheart
AHHHH I MEANT TO COMMENT ON THIS BUT I FORGOT D: D: D:
but OMG!! YOUR STORYTELLING IS JUST SO PERFECT!!! i absolutely LOVE that you portrayed swiftpaw as an older brother/protector to brightheart (cause i think they're actually cousins or smth iirc??)
but dsjfhkjasdfj THAT SHOT WHERE GHOST SWIFTPAW TELLS CLOUDTAIL "she's a lady" AN BRINGS HIM TO SAVE BRIGHTHEART JUST KILLS ME!!!!!!
seriously tho, you hit EVERY emotional beat just so perfectly, i feel like even non-warriors readers would cry watching this
THIS IS THE SADDEST AND MOST BEAUTIFUL AMV SKETCH I’VE EVER SEEN!!
Wow the animation in this!!! God it’s all so good, and you did emotion very well. The feelings from characters are super clear, and the end where swiftpaw’s spirit nuzzles brightpaws paw is so sweet
THE ACTING AND INTERPRETATIONS YOU HAVE ESPECIALLY TOWARDS THE END ARE SOMETHING SO UNIQUE AND WELL DONE- I’ve seen so many swiftpaw amvs and pmvs I thought I went numb to his story but for the first time in a VERY long time I saw that you were able to show the connection between swiftpaw and bright paw and longtail
I really want to type way more but for some reason youtube has major delay right now and it’s taking 10 minutes to load every sentence 😭😭😭
omg..the last part when cloud and Swift both sing toghether.. my heart is just💔 ure such an amazing animator and your art is allways a bless for my eyes😭💕
I don't usually get the feels, but this had me holding back a tear. Incredibly well done- you convey emotions so well. The little knocking on his head was so freaking adorable and heart breaking all at the same time. Lovely work! It deserves so many more views than it has
this is like the only animatic i would cry to
MY GUY. You have improved SO MUCH. HOLY SHIT AAAAAAA I LOVE THIS IM SO PROUD OF YOUUUU!!!
The animation is SO smooth and so PRETTY and ARRRGGGGG ITS SO GOOD!!!
There’s so much emotion and movement and fluidity and AAAAAA SHAKING AND CRYING RN ITS SO GOOD!!!! It ripped my heart out holy shit.
Ily Erm and I’m so proud of how far you’ve come!!
?(!!( IM SO LATE TONTHIS BUT JESUS WHEN I TWLL YOU I SOBBED MY EYES OUT AT THE END
WHEN SWIFTS SPIRIT APPEARED I WEEPED SO HARD. AND THEN THE SCENE WITH BRIGHT TUGGING ON SWIFTS PAW I JUST BROKE DOWN IM KICKING N SCREAMING
THIS IS SO BEAUTIFULLY PUT TOGETHE
Omggg the expressions in their eyes and faces how 😭😭
This. Blew. My. Mind!! I don’t ever think I’ve seen an animation as good as this one right here.
THIS IS POETRY. THIS IS AMAZING GREAT JOB.
I HAVE CHILLS LITERAL CHILLS!!! this is gorgeous and so well put together
Swiftpaw and Cloudtail running together 🥺😭❤️🩹
THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL. AND I CAN'T BELIVE THAT IN THE BOOKS BRIGHT'HEART DIDN'T REMEMBER ANYTHING, LIKE HOW WOULDN'T YOU?!?!?!?
DUDE THIS IS MY FAVORITE SONG OMG IM IN LOVE???? I LOVE SWIFTY TOO?????
ERM OH MY GOD THIS IS INCREDIBLE
Please please please finish this one! I wanna see how it looks fully done
THIS IS ABSOLUTELY GORGEOUS!!!!!! I'M IN AWE!!!
THIS MOVED ME TO TEARS GODDAMNIT.
IM GONNA CRY THIS IS SO SADDDD
THE ANIMATION IS SO SMOOTH AND GOOD
IM NOT CRYING! YOU ARE!
man i love the animation on showning in a more realistic way. and more how was like a horror and sad movie scene i love it
THE SMOOTHNESS QPHDKEHDJSJSJSHJ I CAN'T- THIS IS SO PRETTY
Your animation and the way you make their body language is beautiful!!
i rewatch it every day now since i found it.
i still do, not daily, but quite often, and it gets me every time. couldn't help but cry in the bus just now
This is a routine of mine now to watch this every day.
I love everything about this video sm
This is so underrated
I am cryinG
woahh all of this is absaloutly amaizng
WOAHH!!! I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!! IVE WATCHED IT 7 TIMES ALREADY NOT EVEN JOKING YOU!! THE WAY YOU DO LIPSYNC IS BEAUTIFUL!!! YOUR CHOICE OF STORYBOARDING IS AMAZING AND REALLY MAKES YOU F E E L IN THE MOMENT!! I LOVE YOUR ART STYLE AND EVERYTHING THAT COMES ALONG WITH IT!! :D
AYO UNDERATED. BRO I CRIED
INCREDIBLE
god dammit now i'm crying
No swiftpaw don't rip the dog ear off
UNDERRATED AS FUCK
Am I the only one that thinks that cloudpaw looks like a chicken?
Is that swift x brightheart?! Thats just..... wrong. 1st of, they are realated,closely. 2nd there was nothing in the books just, niudging the idea of their ship, she just agreed with his plan to kill the dogs! Also later we get a desqusting comeback and erins forse us to just read about bright heart linkeing swift paw and reverse. They were just friends! Everything else, epic! The plan is still nice and creative, and im not a karen that will force my beleves down your throat. I dont expect you to change that part, and you dont need to.
ARGHH ERM YOUR WORK NEVER FAILS TO IMPRESS OR MAKE THE FEELS COM'A RUSHIN, MY GOD !! I love you sketch amvs so so SO MUCH I ADORE Papers BUT THIS ONE TAKES THE CAKE AWOOGAH
Swiftpaws my fav character! And I can’t even explain WORDS on how good this is!!!!!!! Keep up this amazing work! 😊😊