I am so happy you included Aquarius' key in the closure, and I love what Lucy is doing after the war. I can imagine that when Natsu is talking to Zeref and his parents, they are in a place that was like the golden grasslands where we saw future Lucy reunite with fairy tail. That definitely gives us more of a closure then Team Natsu going off on another mission.
I absolutely love this rewrite. The way that you went with this is actually a lot more realistic for an actual war arc and I wish that I could’ve read this.
Honestly if Fairy Tail had ended this way I think that all the people who talk down about the series would hail it as a modern classic, because this is just a great way to send it off. Great video man
I like the rewrite but in the very last chapter I would have an old Lucy die whilst holding her keys in her hand and we see her in the afterlife at the age she is during Alveraz. She's walking down what seems like a road in magnolia and see's Gray and Juvia in a house hugging and stuff. Then we see happy fly down to her and hug her because he's been dead for a while now and before the chapter ends, as disclosure, we see Mavis and Zeref holding hands whilst they talk to Natsu. Natsu turns to Lucy and holds out his hand and says, "hey luce! Let's go on an adventure!" And she smiles and takes his hand and then the manga ends. I think your entire rewrite was amazing but I think this would've made the last chapter kinda disclosure for everyone like, they're all dead but they're all happy and it's not focused soley (or however you spell it) on the ship's, only partly
Pretty good video. Irene should have remained alive. In the war Jellal, Cobra and Laxus should have die along with Gray, Makarov should have rest in peace along with many things that wouldn't fit in a comment.. Probs for the God Serena vs Acnologia fight, since what was the point of introducing the Strongest Wizard Saint who also was a Dragon Slayer with 8 different Lacrimas.. It would have been epic if Natsu Demon and Dragon seed turned him into a Demonic-Dragon hybrid.
Dragon King Oscurare Totally agree on Irene, she should have been left alive or at very least died helping take down Acnologia (since she is Creator of Dragonslaying magic he was her responsibility), she could have been a major reason of Acnologias defeat and it would not seem an a*spull (like Ultears sacrifice during GMG was actually logical).
I just wanna say that out of all FT dedicated channels, yours is probably the most thought out, and well organized. I'm glad we have someone like you in our community!
This is a truly badass way for Fairy Tail to end, I agreed with just about everything save for Natsu’s death (I’ll go into that) and Lucy just breaking Loki’s key. For starters, I dont think Natsu would die because his whole character is living for his friends, but I LOVE the idea of afterlife Natsu searching for Aquariuses key, When he finds it, I think he should also leave his scarf with it, one so Lucy will know its from him, and two, Natsu is re united with Igneel in the afterlife, so he feels that since the scarf has gotten him through so much in life, it should be with the person he cared about most in life a part of him lives on. Lucy now wears the scarf and cares for it just the same if not more than Natsu did. Now with Lucy breaking Loki’s key, I feel that Loki(being the badass he is) has some way to stop time for short periods, giving them just enough time to talk about what has to happen. Loki of course agrees to for the sake of the world and his guild, but they both break down crying and Loki says something along the lines of “We’ll meet again someday” and time resumes and a heartbroken Lucy summons the celestial spirit king. After the 5 year time skip, Lucy is out on a job with Happy and meets a celestial wizard who is less than kind to her spirits. Naturally, this Wizard has a contract with Loki. This being this wizards(I picture them as a girl) trump card is Loki and summons him, to end up with Loki refusing to fight, giving Lucy a chance to kick her ass and regain Loki’s key (because I’m a sucker for happy endings) These are just my thoughts on how to adjust your ending to make it better.
Also after giving more thought, (and by that I read some other comments,) Gray going out in iced shell would make Juvia’s and Ur’s death pointless, as well as his friendship with Natsu because of those countless times he stopped Gray from using it. So, instead, I picture somehow, Lyon heard that Gray was fighting Deliorah, and learns about Juvias death, so Gray is about to use it, but is then bitch slapped by a pissed off Lyon because theres no way in hell he’s going to let his brother waste Juvia’s sacrifice and they take down the demon together, avenging their master and living together as brothers
P2M aren't you telling the fight with Natsu actually I would say both were equal in power at that time,if Erza hasn't interrupted their we may have seen a proper win . Oh yeah even Natsu also taken some beating from Gray
SenpaiFruit if you only ever think negatively you won’t accomplish anything. Maybe you never thought you could make a successful channel, but look, you have 30K subs and your doing great. Just believe in yourself. It may be a slow journey but never give up without trying
Alright let me rephrase it, I have no interest in writing anymore haha. In the past I had a whole synopsis for a book that I was going to write, but I've found interest more in trying to predict where others are taking their stories as well as critiquing other stories. Along with that, my creative outlet is no longer writing.
THEY BETTER FIND A WAY TO WORK THIS INTO THE ANIME! IT'S SO GOOD!! But I'm a really big fan on the second ending. It sounds more genuine and better suiting as it has so much emotion but the guide still carries on to be the guild that it's always been. And Natsu talking to Zeref about their past and him meeting his parents in the afterlife is honestly magnificent! Praise you Senpai, praise you!
This would be so awesome and if it were put together with some of the more amazing things in the Alvarez arc, then the manga wouldn’t have been so disappointing.
The original arc did have a bit to be desired, especially given the build up to Zeref. Hiro needed more stakes in this. A war arc is supposed to tell a reader what the author's stance on war.
wow your rewrite really hurts me, got me in my feels, but from story stand point it was absolutely necessary. I don't like that I'm in my feels even when it's not canon, especially Natsu being dead, but that goes to show that even a UA-camr can make a more compelling story than an actual writer. Though Hiro could have avoided Natsu's death in the first place if he never did the "he dies, I die" thing. I mean there's so many things you could have done; He could have made Fairy Heart some type of revival spell that Mavis tried to teach Lucy, knowing because she was in a crystal for so long she only had a few seconds to live, but dies half way through telling her. Forcing Lucy to do a Half Baked form of it. Although Natsu survives, he's not fully the same( whether it be him turning into a child again or him losing his memory or being half demon and half dragon, etc). Or have Gray use Ice Shall on Zeref, leaving Natsu alive, but killing off Gray in the most epic "for my bro" moment.
I really dislike term "asspull". Firstly because it's not an argument whatsoever and secondly because the idea that a certain plot point cant be interesting unless it's been forshadowed (aka dragged out) for 900+ chapters, is something heavily disagree with.
I don't remember if it happened but i would love to see Zeref vs Jellal with Jellal losing. It would hype Zeref up even more+plus it would help Jellal's character.
I prefer is Natsu ends up like Guildarts . Gajeel retires eith levy. Lucky is an author and creates more celestial spells. Erza is 2nd in command of fairy tail. Carla dies possibly in child birth and Windy is grown up
This arc started off good it just dragged the rest of the way. I hope most of it is changed in the anime Especially the fight with Irene, the fight between Gray and Natsu, Zeref and Acnologia need to be extended
Senpai, This is amazing. I feel like Natsu and Grey should have also been reunited in the afterlife tho, So like a mini team Natsu would be formed of Natsu, Grey, And Juvia as they searched for the Aquarius key.
Ima have to write my own although it will take a few months as it will be like an actual fan fiction consisting of almost 70 chapters... There are things I would have liked to have happened. I loved this rewrite and my only gripe is that Natsu didn't become a dragon.
i really loved ur re write in the one i'm stile working on i have it were write staff staing back at the s class exam ,i all so have it were natsu not linked to zeref in any way but gray is i'm going to have it were grays e.n.d. and hats why Deliora attcked him and his family caz Deliora and all other of zeref demons are trully more afraid of end then zeref or anyone else
I would put Dimaria in the spriggan because she was great at first and bloodman easily the best spriggan in the original so I would have loved to hear about them
It was pretty good for a rewrite dude especially the whole thing with Gray using Ice Shell and sacrificing himself as for the Natsu vs Acnologia in my rewrite I had it that Natsu and Zeref formed a "temporary" alliance to defeat Acnologia and it concluding with Acnologia being killed after a long battle between the three and Natsu and Zeref both sub-coming to their wounds and have a brother moment since Natsu was beginning to receive all his old memories and both brothers die together happy to be reunited again. Before going to heaven or wherever their afterlife is in the fairy tail world and meeting their parents again.
i like your rewrite. i would of killed off juvia, gray, happy, makarov, gildarts, Mavis, Natsu, gajeel, Laxus, zeref and acnologia but the rewrite you did was good
In a good story, with well developed characters, the cast would be dramatically affected after the events of a war. Whether it be emotionally, physically, or even in terms of their ideology. I would have loved to see Natsu undergo some much needed character development after losing himself in his rage over the fake out loss of Lucy, and becoming E.N.D. as well as fighting against and defeating Zeref. It would have been interesting to see Natsu suffer from some nightmares or just grow and mature and thus strengthen his relationship with Lucy, due to the things they lost from the Tartaros to the Alvarez arcs. Instead of Natsu and Lucy’s relationship ending exactly where it started.
Thank you for this. I didn’t like the ending, and I very much prefer this. Thank you for giving me some sort of “closure” everything thing I hated about the ending was fixed and I loved this. Thank you so much!
Senpai, if this ending were to actually happen, a *lot* more backlash and negative outcry would have happened. As you probably already know, many consumer's opinions of the series is mostly based off their favorite pairings and the moments they're waiting each chapter for. They give almost no fucks about the actual quality of the story. And hey, many of those types of consumers are fans of yours right now. The *only* reason they would have to agree with you is because you hold credibility, since you have that ethos of being someone to look up to and your opinion should be considered just for that reason. Whether you agree with me or not, just know I'm being completely honest...
More outcry from the shipping fanbases yes. I don't care about those fanbases. I've made it clear that although in the past I used to care a lot about ships, I don't give a fuck about them anymore and I think these fanbases are one of the main reasons why Fairy Tail was as bad as it was in Alvarez. On the contrary, I think all of the haters of the story would've been shown up which would've given Mashima massive respect.
Obviously better than Hiro mashima's. But there are some flaws. Obviously nothing is perfect, and given that you only took a few days to plan this out, it is good for what it is. But in the original when gray is about to die juvia uses blood transfusion magic to keep him alive. So killing off Gray by using iced shell would be a waste in both juvia's death, as well as Ur's, Ultear's, and all those other times Gray was either saved or stopped from using iced shell. I could go into more but at the moment I am writing this my dad is yelling at me to do the dishes. Goodbye, keep up the good work.
And given Gray is a devil Slayer, he could easily beat deliora, since he was able to go head to head with end, but I don't know how the power scaling in this version is since we never get to see it.
What upset me about the ending was the final chapter itself. There were a couple deaths in the chapters before where I thought the character should've died, but I was fine with it until the final chapter. It felt rushed and just unbelievable, and I just HATED it. I liked the rewrite, there are things I don't agree that you said in the rewrite, but I still liked it, great video. Keep it up!
This rewrite is better than the original. Of course, it does have its flaws, as most may have pointed out, but I personally love it. I like the fact that you let Natsu turn into E.N.D instead of the talking-to-Igneel-in-his-heart-and-deciding-he’s-human bullshit. Juvia’s sudden “revival” in the original also gave her death so much less meaning, and it just wasted her last words that were meant for Gray. Gray, as many have pointed out, may have actually stood a chance against Deliora, being a devil slayer. After all, he was still enraged after Juvia’s death and might have wanted to own up to his fears and defeat Deliora, giving him a little bit of closure. Something from the original I didn’t really mind, and actually liked, was the rewriting of E.N.D, the book. However, if Mavis used Fairy Heart, then I guess Natsu’s death would have still been unavoidable. I’d still like to see him survive, but that’s probably because of my NaLu shipping booty that’s still pissed after that ending. I did like the Aquarius key touch, when Natsu goes to the afterlife. But something I think would have been dope af to see would be Lucy using all of her keys at once, which... would most likely be impossible, but I can dream! This is for the scrapped scene, showed in the video, of Lucy and Zeref. This is also assuming Yukino could somehow have been killed, and gave Lucy her last two keys. I also think after being in a Lacrima for so long, Mavis’ body would still have been incredibly weak, and it would’ve been extremely difficult for her to even move. I think Lucy would have used all those Celestial keys in an attempt to kill Zeref, before Mavis gets hurt, however while not being killed, he could be extremely weakened, and make it easy for Fairy Heart to even remove all traces of his existence. After all the keys have been used at once, the Celestial King guy - I can’t remember his name, I’m sorry - will probably show up. He’ll offer Lucy help killing Zeref, but she will decline, remembering that Natsu will die if Zeref dies as well. She pleads for him to give her some time, and then kill Zeref, and the request is accepted. She then goes off to find Natsu, while still feeling extremely weak, and very much so in pain. She runs into E.N.D fighting with Acnologia, however Natsu’s strength is only decreasing, especially after his brother’s not in the best of conditions. Now, Lucy can call for the Celestial King dude guy to come along and help Natsu kick Acnologia’s ass along with the fellow spirits and maybe dragon slayers. Acnologia dies, and meanwhile Mavis regains her power after getting some rest. She’d be able to kill Zeref easily using Fairy Heart, but is saddened seeing the person that was once her lover in such a state, that she hesitates to kill him. Lucy knows Natsu has a limited amount of time, so she panicks and doesn’t know what to do, being aware that she can’t rush to Mavis and Zeref now, it’d be too late. They confess to each other, because it’s MY kinda shitty rewrite, and I get to do whatever I want! Natsu could survive, maybe he won’t, probably won’t. But I can’t really see Lucy wanting to or even being able to live without him, so she is left in tears while she and the other dragon slayers watch him go... (I mean, I don’t think Wendy’s powers would be very effective in this particular case). Lucy probably dies from blood loss while gripping onto Natsu for dear life, however doesn’t accept help from Wendy, and instead dies with Natsu on her lap or hugging her or something. That was my fangirling side taking over, excuse me.
Wow I really like this. Made me a little sad to think about some of our faves dying. But I still agree some ppl needed to die. It's a war for goodness sakes
Hey senpai, i have some blank paper laying around my room, so if you want i can draw this into a comic for you? i'll give 100% credit to you and your creative mind. i really like the rewrite, it sounds incredible!! if you don't want me to do it, that's totally cool 👌
Seems like the creator took something from naruto's fourth great ninja war, the reanimation ability who brought the dead back to life, even if someone were to kill the caster, the reanimation wouldn't go off
Before I watch the video lemme make my own ending. Zeref awakens END within Natsu, Acnologia appears, END vs Acnologia, END wins. Juvia? Dead. Makarov? Dead. Gajeel? We’ll get you out of hell later. No one can beat END so somebody has to destroy the book, I don’t really care who does but someone does. So Natsu? Dead.
Oh yeah forgot, Jellal and the rest of the Oracion Seis? Dead, August killed them. But after August he will be defeated and killed as well but his death will be handled way better than it did. That blood shit Juvia did to Gray, nah fuck that. Gray? Dead. I lowkey wanted Gildarts to die in here as well because, August was lowkey beating his ass but it’s whatever. K I’m done.
Tbh I like both versions. I do like the original Alvarez arc even tho I agree with a few asspull moments. I would have liked Makarov to stay dead. Irene and August should have gone down in a better way. Acnologia should have had his own arc and i do like the idea of lucy fighting zeref. In terms of Natsu the book of end thing was actually kinda nice. Just written better they should have tried to reverse the link between zeref and natsu. I think that is exactly what lucy did subconciously. Juvias death could have been a thing as well as greys, and i like your rewrite of invel. So personally a combination of both versions plus freezing acno in the ravines with fairy sphere and collecting recources over 7 years to be able to defeat him in one final fight would have been cool. So a mix of yours, mashimas and an added acno arc would have been ideal in my point of view But as the open minded acno fangirl idiot I am I like pretty much all versions that don't pull too much bs on how acno goes down.
I havent watched the video yet but seeing the title DONT YOU FRIGGIN GO MAKE NATSU DIE LISTEN HER EHE IS ONE OF MY 12 HUSBANDS LAY A FINGER AND I WILL END YOU
I prefer your ending. But there are things in the end that Hiro did that I would not have changed. Of course Zeref's fight with Natsu was forced and that part I would change ... but in the end I like to believe that Zeref died, not because of the fight, but because of the curse he and Mavis had. Everything they love dies, as both have a curse and they love each other, both end up dying ... Juvia's and Gray's death I agree (all wars have their sacrifices) but I do not agree with Natsu's death... I think the fight you did with Natsu and Achnology is cool but Natsu should not die in the end (he would only be very weak, especially END that was controlling him). With the death of Zeref the END disappears and Natsu returns to normal (or almost, he could lose his arm just like Igneel or something) ... But this is just my opinion I really liked your version (: thanks for the video! kisses from Portugal!
I liked the video but I Did not watch it because I have only Watched the Anime and I am waiting for the final season to air to watch the ending of FT. How Many Episodes do you think Season 3 of FT will have? My guess is 130 or something but it depends if they add filler or not.
Awesome Rewrite Senpai! I totally get where you are coming from with how the Alvarez arc was just a bunch shit piled on top of even more bullshit😂 But I have to ask will you still read the next generation of FT regardless of the fact that it is being drawn by another mangaka???? I know at least I will give it a shot..
But I heard there gonna finish it and when they finish this arc they are gonna start the next generation of fairy tail which will be there kids. But I don’t know it’s just what I heard
As promised, my Alvarez rewrite is finally here! LIKE this video if you enjoy my rewrite 👍
This is so beautiful yet so hurtful. I wish some of these things would’ve happened but then NaLu wouldn’t happen.
SenpaiFruit This is Pretty Good Writing Skills and a war will end like that BUT I WANTED To SEe NALU TOGETHER But It’s good Story
dan Inana lol yeah 😂
Clara Martinez Varsity True
THE DEAD ANIME MAN Okay lol
I am so happy you included Aquarius' key in the closure, and I love what Lucy is doing after the war. I can imagine that when Natsu is talking to Zeref and his parents, they are in a place that was like the golden grasslands where we saw future Lucy reunite with fairy tail. That definitely gives us more of a closure then Team Natsu going off on another mission.
I absolutely love this rewrite. The way that you went with this is actually a lot more realistic for an actual war arc and I wish that I could’ve read this.
Honestly if Fairy Tail had ended this way I think that all the people who talk down about the series would hail it as a modern classic, because this is just a great way to send it off. Great video man
Thanks haha
That Final Ending Almost Made Me Cry.
I like the rewrite but in the very last chapter I would have an old Lucy die whilst holding her keys in her hand and we see her in the afterlife at the age she is during Alveraz. She's walking down what seems like a road in magnolia and see's Gray and Juvia in a house hugging and stuff. Then we see happy fly down to her and hug her because he's been dead for a while now and before the chapter ends, as disclosure, we see Mavis and Zeref holding hands whilst they talk to Natsu. Natsu turns to Lucy and holds out his hand and says, "hey luce! Let's go on an adventure!" And she smiles and takes his hand and then the manga ends.
I think your entire rewrite was amazing but I think this would've made the last chapter kinda disclosure for everyone like, they're all dead but they're all happy and it's not focused soley (or however you spell it) on the ship's, only partly
Hidden Identity that end would've actually made me cry
Pretty good video.
Irene should have remained alive.
In the war Jellal, Cobra and Laxus should have die along with Gray, Makarov should have rest in peace along with many things that wouldn't fit in a comment..
Probs for the God Serena vs Acnologia fight, since what was the point of introducing the Strongest Wizard Saint who also was a Dragon Slayer with 8 different Lacrimas..
It would have been epic if Natsu Demon and Dragon seed turned him into a Demonic-Dragon hybrid.
Dragon King Oscurare Yesss that would be epic
Gissille 117 Thanks
Dragon King Oscurare Totally agree on Irene, she should have been left alive or at very least died helping take down Acnologia (since she is Creator of Dragonslaying magic he was her responsibility), she could have been a major reason of Acnologias defeat and it would not seem an a*spull (like Ultears sacrifice during GMG was actually logical).
I agree because death to Jellal!
vakho gabelia Exactly she also wanted to avenge Belserion who was killed by Acnologia.
I just wanna say that out of all FT dedicated channels, yours is probably the most thought out, and well organized. I'm glad we have someone like you in our community!
NOOOOOO NATSU 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Mannnnn the Alvarez arc wasnt even close to being as good as this.
Haha
TheBmans bunker What's *this*
This is a truly badass way for Fairy Tail to end, I agreed with just about everything save for Natsu’s death (I’ll go into that) and Lucy just breaking Loki’s key.
For starters, I dont think Natsu would die because his whole character is living for his friends, but I LOVE the idea of afterlife Natsu searching for Aquariuses key, When he finds it, I think he should also leave his scarf with it, one so Lucy will know its from him, and two, Natsu is re united with Igneel in the afterlife, so he feels that since the scarf has gotten him through so much in life, it should be with the person he cared about most in life a part of him lives on. Lucy now wears the scarf and cares for it just the same if not more than Natsu did.
Now with Lucy breaking Loki’s key, I feel that Loki(being the badass he is) has some way to stop time for short periods, giving them just enough time to talk about what has to happen. Loki of course agrees to for the sake of the world and his guild, but they both break down crying and Loki says something along the lines of “We’ll meet again someday” and time resumes and a heartbroken Lucy summons the celestial spirit king.
After the 5 year time skip, Lucy is out on a job with Happy and meets a celestial wizard who is less than kind to her spirits. Naturally, this Wizard has a contract with Loki. This being this wizards(I picture them as a girl) trump card is Loki and summons him, to end up with Loki refusing to fight, giving Lucy a chance to kick her ass and regain Loki’s key (because I’m a sucker for happy endings)
These are just my thoughts on how to adjust your ending to make it better.
Also after giving more thought, (and by that I read some other comments,) Gray going out in iced shell would make Juvia’s and Ur’s death pointless, as well as his friendship with Natsu because of those countless times he stopped Gray from using it. So, instead, I picture somehow, Lyon heard that Gray was fighting Deliorah, and learns about Juvias death, so Gray is about to use it, but is then bitch slapped by a pissed off Lyon because theres no way in hell he’s going to let his brother waste Juvia’s sacrifice and they take down the demon together, avenging their master and living together as brothers
Gray could’ve beaten delioura without iced shell because he got demon slayer from his dad where he can defeat demons
The Dimaria fight should’ve been kept in😭
Deliora is a mortal demon and Gray is a devil slayer who is quite strong enough to give a good fight with END
P2M aren't you telling the fight with Natsu actually I would say both were equal in power at that time,if Erza hasn't interrupted their we may have seen a proper win .
Oh yeah even Natsu also taken some beating from Gray
P2M yeah I know but I do feel that the story he rewrited is lame
He doesn't fight E.N.D in this. Also, that was E.N.D in mid transformation. 100% E.N.D would've whooped Gray's ass easily.
SenpaiFruit agreed
SenpaiFruit Yup.
Fairy tail timeskip had so much potential....
The backstories and foreshadowing are godlike tho
I actually like your way of how Fairy Tail ended
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Same
I love this, why could this have not happened. You should write your own stories
Oh god... I would never be able to write my own story.
SenpaiFruit if you only ever think negatively you won’t accomplish anything. Maybe you never thought you could make a successful channel, but look, you have 30K subs and your doing great. Just believe in yourself. It may be a slow journey but never give up without trying
Alright let me rephrase it, I have no interest in writing anymore haha. In the past I had a whole synopsis for a book that I was going to write, but I've found interest more in trying to predict where others are taking their stories as well as critiquing other stories. Along with that, my creative outlet is no longer writing.
THEY BETTER FIND A WAY TO WORK THIS INTO THE ANIME!
IT'S SO GOOD!!
But I'm a really big fan on the second ending. It sounds more genuine and better suiting as it has so much emotion but the guide still carries on to be the guild that it's always been.
And Natsu talking to Zeref about their past and him meeting his parents in the afterlife is honestly magnificent!
Praise you Senpai, praise you!
This would be so awesome and if it were put together with some of the more amazing things in the Alvarez arc, then the manga wouldn’t have been so disappointing.
I still think august should have been a mage who trained heart to learn every magic which everyone thought he was at first
The most perfect ending for fairy tail the thing I wanted with Natsu's fight
The original arc did have a bit to be desired, especially given the build up to Zeref. Hiro needed more stakes in this. A war arc is supposed to tell a reader what the author's stance on war.
Exactly.
wow your rewrite really hurts me, got me in my feels, but from story stand point it was absolutely necessary. I don't like that I'm in my feels even when it's not canon, especially Natsu being dead, but that goes to show that even a UA-camr can make a more compelling story than an actual writer.
Though Hiro could have avoided Natsu's death in the first place if he never did the "he dies, I die" thing. I mean there's so many things you could have done; He could have made Fairy Heart some type of revival spell that Mavis tried to teach Lucy, knowing because she was in a crystal for so long she only had a few seconds to live, but dies half way through telling her. Forcing Lucy to do a Half Baked form of it. Although Natsu survives, he's not fully the same( whether it be him turning into a child again or him losing his memory or being half demon and half dragon, etc).
Or have Gray use Ice Shall on Zeref, leaving Natsu alive, but killing off Gray in the most epic "for my bro" moment.
I think Natsu needed to die in the grand scheme of things. It was the best way for the story to end.
SenpaiFruit yeah, I'm just holding on. But I do agree.
Yeah, I think it’s the “You die, I die” thing that screwed all of us over.
It was awesome, good job
I dont like that every one dies
I wanted to sound smart and give input but I honestly forget over half of the whole original arc oops.
I like the rewrite
Great idea with natsu searching aquarius
I really dislike term "asspull". Firstly because it's not an argument whatsoever and secondly because the idea that a certain plot point cant be interesting unless it's been forshadowed (aka dragged out) for 900+ chapters, is something heavily disagree with.
I don't remember if it happened but i would love to see Zeref vs Jellal with Jellal losing. It would hype Zeref up even more+plus it would help Jellal's character.
Cool. I want to hear this man
I prefer is Natsu ends up like Guildarts .
Gajeel retires eith levy.
Lucky is an author and creates more celestial spells.
Erza is 2nd in command of fairy tail.
Carla dies possibly in child birth and Windy is grown up
This arc started off good it just dragged the rest of the way.
I hope most of it is changed in the anime
Especially the fight with Irene, the fight between Gray and Natsu, Zeref and Acnologia need to be extended
Senpai, This is amazing.
I feel like Natsu and Grey should have also been reunited in the afterlife tho, So like a mini team Natsu would be formed of Natsu, Grey, And Juvia as they searched for the Aquarius key.
That would be cool, yeah!
theres a month between avatra and the last arc
amazing ending dude!!!! (btw can you make another eden zero vid)
Will be making more Edens Zero videos, yes.
On the same day im watching this
*Reads Title* 😢😢😢😢😢😢
I am upset that NALU didn’t make it
I honestly don’t think natsu needed to die. I think you should have kept the dragon slayers vs aconolgia but wrote it a different way
Ima have to write my own although it will take a few months as it will be like an actual fan fiction consisting of almost 70 chapters... There are things I would have liked to have happened.
I loved this rewrite and my only gripe is that Natsu didn't become a dragon.
i really loved ur re write in the one i'm stile working on i have it were write staff staing back at the s class exam ,i all so have it were natsu not linked to zeref in any way but gray is i'm going to have it were grays e.n.d. and hats why Deliora attcked him and his family caz Deliora and all other of zeref demons are trully more afraid of end then zeref or anyone else
Nice
Btw @senpaifruit why do u delete ur live streams
I would put Dimaria in the spriggan because she was great at first and bloodman easily the best spriggan in the original so I would have loved to hear about them
It was pretty good for a rewrite dude especially the whole thing with Gray using Ice Shell and sacrificing himself as for the Natsu vs Acnologia in my rewrite I had it that Natsu and Zeref formed a "temporary" alliance to defeat Acnologia and it concluding with Acnologia being killed after a long battle between the three and Natsu and Zeref both sub-coming to their wounds and have a brother moment since Natsu was beginning to receive all his old memories and both brothers die together happy to be reunited again. Before going to heaven or wherever their afterlife is in the fairy tail world and meeting their parents again.
Wow, 👏👏👏 my Alvarez rewrite seems like crap now.
Cool I want to hear this
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i like your rewrite. i would of killed off juvia, gray, happy, makarov, gildarts, Mavis, Natsu, gajeel, Laxus, zeref and acnologia but the rewrite you did was good
Holy. Shit.
In a good story, with well developed characters, the cast would be dramatically affected after the events of a war. Whether it be emotionally, physically, or even in terms of their ideology. I would have loved to see Natsu undergo some much needed character development after losing himself in his rage over the fake out loss of Lucy, and becoming E.N.D. as well as fighting against and defeating Zeref. It would have been interesting to see Natsu suffer from some nightmares or just grow and mature and thus strengthen his relationship with Lucy, due to the things they lost from the Tartaros to the Alvarez arcs. Instead of Natsu and Lucy’s relationship ending exactly where it started.
Natsu goes on the 100 year quest with friends at the end of Fairy Tail.
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Here senpai!
Nooooo so natsu is going to die in the end (talking about the thumbnail)
Nevermind I don't like your ending
Thank you for this. I didn’t like the ending, and I very much prefer this. Thank you for giving me some sort of “closure” everything thing I hated about the ending was fixed and I loved this. Thank you so much!
Just curious: Who died and who survived? Would you keep a couple of characters alive that looked like they were anout to die?
No fake outs. If they look like they're about to die, they will die.
Senpai, if this ending were to actually happen, a *lot* more backlash and negative outcry would have happened. As you probably already know, many consumer's opinions of the series is mostly based off their favorite pairings and the moments they're waiting each chapter for. They give almost no fucks about the actual quality of the story.
And hey, many of those types of consumers are fans of yours right now. The *only* reason they would have to agree with you is because you hold credibility, since you have that ethos of being someone to look up to and your opinion should be considered just for that reason.
Whether you agree with me or not, just know I'm being completely honest...
More outcry from the shipping fanbases yes. I don't care about those fanbases. I've made it clear that although in the past I used to care a lot about ships, I don't give a fuck about them anymore and I think these fanbases are one of the main reasons why Fairy Tail was as bad as it was in Alvarez.
On the contrary, I think all of the haters of the story would've been shown up which would've given Mashima massive respect.
Obviously better than Hiro mashima's. But there are some flaws. Obviously nothing is perfect, and given that you only took a few days to plan this out, it is good for what it is. But in the original when gray is about to die juvia uses blood transfusion magic to keep him alive. So killing off Gray by using iced shell would be a waste in both juvia's death, as well as Ur's, Ultear's, and all those other times Gray was either saved or stopped from using iced shell. I could go into more but at the moment I am writing this my dad is yelling at me to do the dishes. Goodbye, keep up the good work.
And given Gray is a devil Slayer, he could easily beat deliora, since he was able to go head to head with end, but I don't know how the power scaling in this version is since we never get to see it.
You do have some points here. In this version, E.N.D would've smoked Gray the fuck out. E.N.D >>>>>> Deliora > Gray without iced shell.
SenpaiFruit ok just wanted make sure.
Nice 👌👌
Long live fairy tail ♡♡♡♡
Great job man on this rewrite
What upset me about the ending was the final chapter itself. There were a couple deaths in the chapters before where I thought the character should've died, but I was fine with it until the final chapter. It felt rushed and just unbelievable, and I just HATED it. I liked the rewrite, there are things I don't agree that you said in the rewrite, but I still liked it, great video. Keep it up!
Oh god when you said lucy and natsu are going to be looking for aquarious’s key I started to cry😅
This ending was beautiful 😭😭😢😢😭😭😭
This rewrite is better than the original. Of course, it does have its flaws, as most may have pointed out, but I personally love it. I like the fact that you let Natsu turn into E.N.D instead of the talking-to-Igneel-in-his-heart-and-deciding-he’s-human bullshit. Juvia’s sudden “revival” in the original also gave her death so much less meaning, and it just wasted her last words that were meant for Gray. Gray, as many have pointed out, may have actually stood a chance against Deliora, being a devil slayer. After all, he was still enraged after Juvia’s death and might have wanted to own up to his fears and defeat Deliora, giving him a little bit of closure. Something from the original I didn’t really mind, and actually liked, was the rewriting of E.N.D, the book. However, if Mavis used Fairy Heart, then I guess Natsu’s death would have still been unavoidable. I’d still like to see him survive, but that’s probably because of my NaLu shipping booty that’s still pissed after that ending. I did like the Aquarius key touch, when Natsu goes to the afterlife. But something I think would have been dope af to see would be Lucy using all of her keys at once, which... would most likely be impossible, but I can dream! This is for the scrapped scene, showed in the video, of Lucy and Zeref. This is also assuming Yukino could somehow have been killed, and gave Lucy her last two keys. I also think after being in a Lacrima for so long, Mavis’ body would still have been incredibly weak, and it would’ve been extremely difficult for her to even move. I think Lucy would have used all those Celestial keys in an attempt to kill Zeref, before Mavis gets hurt, however while not being killed, he could be extremely weakened, and make it easy for Fairy Heart to even remove all traces of his existence. After all the keys have been used at once, the Celestial King guy - I can’t remember his name, I’m sorry - will probably show up. He’ll offer Lucy help killing Zeref, but she will decline, remembering that Natsu will die if Zeref dies as well. She pleads for him to give her some time, and then kill Zeref, and the request is accepted. She then goes off to find Natsu, while still feeling extremely weak, and very much so in pain. She runs into E.N.D fighting with Acnologia, however Natsu’s strength is only decreasing, especially after his brother’s not in the best of conditions. Now, Lucy can call for the Celestial King dude guy to come along and help Natsu kick Acnologia’s ass along with the fellow spirits and maybe dragon slayers. Acnologia dies, and meanwhile Mavis regains her power after getting some rest. She’d be able to kill Zeref easily using Fairy Heart, but is saddened seeing the person that was once her lover in such a state, that she hesitates to kill him. Lucy knows Natsu has a limited amount of time, so she panicks and doesn’t know what to do, being aware that she can’t rush to Mavis and Zeref now, it’d be too late. They confess to each other, because it’s MY kinda shitty rewrite, and I get to do whatever I want! Natsu could survive, maybe he won’t, probably won’t. But I can’t really see Lucy wanting to or even being able to live without him, so she is left in tears while she and the other dragon slayers watch him go... (I mean, I don’t think Wendy’s powers would be very effective in this particular case). Lucy probably dies from blood loss while gripping onto Natsu for dear life, however doesn’t accept help from Wendy, and instead dies with Natsu on her lap or hugging her or something. That was my fangirling side taking over, excuse me.
Wow I really like this. Made me a little sad to think about some of our faves dying. But I still agree some ppl needed to die. It's a war for goodness sakes
Loved it
Love the story except the deaths and the ending
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO NOT THE END OF THE FAIRY TAIL I LOVE FAIRY TAIL TO MUCH!
I don't want fairy tail to end tho like I love fairy tail I watch it when it first camed out 😤😢😟😞
Doesn't Neinhart bring back a weaker version of the person, and at beginning, natsu one shot deliora.
Fairy tail is my favorite anime and i well be professional soccer player .. Never give up
Hey senpai, i have some blank paper laying around my room, so if you want i can draw this into a comic for you? i'll give 100% credit to you and your creative mind. i really like the rewrite, it sounds incredible!! if you don't want me to do it, that's totally cool 👌
Go ahead
yay! thank you!!
Ash_Ol_Ro I would like to see that too
This sounds awesome!
InsaneK plays really?? thank you!!
So no more nalu
SenpaiFruit, is this your version of a true ending for the final arc of FT? Or is there a part 2? Because you left us on a huge cliffhanger there
Seems like the creator took something from naruto's fourth great ninja war, the reanimation ability who brought the dead back to life, even if someone were to kill the caster, the reanimation wouldn't go off
Before I watch the video lemme make my own ending. Zeref awakens END within Natsu, Acnologia appears, END vs Acnologia, END wins. Juvia? Dead. Makarov? Dead. Gajeel? We’ll get you out of hell later. No one can beat END so somebody has to destroy the book, I don’t really care who does but someone does. So Natsu? Dead.
Oh yeah forgot, Jellal and the rest of the Oracion Seis? Dead, August killed them. But after August he will be defeated and killed as well but his death will be handled way better than it did. That blood shit Juvia did to Gray, nah fuck that. Gray? Dead. I lowkey wanted Gildarts to die in here as well because, August was lowkey beating his ass but it’s whatever. K I’m done.
Tbh I like both versions. I do like the original Alvarez arc even tho I agree with a few asspull moments. I would have liked Makarov to stay dead. Irene and August should have gone down in a better way. Acnologia should have had his own arc and i do like the idea of lucy fighting zeref.
In terms of Natsu the book of end thing was actually kinda nice. Just written better they should have tried to reverse the link between zeref and natsu. I think that is exactly what lucy did subconciously.
Juvias death could have been a thing as well as greys, and i like your rewrite of invel. So personally a combination of both versions plus freezing acno in the ravines with fairy sphere and collecting recources over 7 years to be able to defeat him in one final fight would have been cool. So a mix of yours, mashimas and an added acno arc would have been ideal in my point of view
But as the open minded acno fangirl idiot I am I like pretty much all versions that don't pull too much bs on how acno goes down.
I havent watched the video yet but seeing the title DONT YOU FRIGGIN GO MAKE NATSU DIE LISTEN HER EHE IS ONE OF MY 12 HUSBANDS LAY A FINGER AND I WILL END YOU
oopsies
I love how he just said “oopsies” like he just spilled over a cup of apple juice
xD
I was hopeing for 6 springents and i wanted to see Lucy and Brandish become friends
I prefer your ending. But there are things in the end that Hiro did that I would not have changed. Of course Zeref's fight with Natsu was forced and that part I would change ... but in the end I like to believe that Zeref died, not because of the fight, but because of the curse he and Mavis had. Everything they love dies, as both have a curse and they love each other, both end up dying ... Juvia's and Gray's death I agree (all wars have their sacrifices) but I do not agree with Natsu's death... I think the fight you did with Natsu and Achnology is cool but Natsu should not die in the end (he would only be very weak, especially END that was controlling him). With the death of Zeref the END disappears and Natsu returns to normal (or almost, he could lose his arm just like Igneel or something) ...
But this is just my opinion I really liked your version (:
thanks for the video!
kisses from Portugal!
Why am I crying
Early
I liked the video but I Did not watch it because I have only Watched the Anime and I am waiting for the final season to air to watch the ending of FT. How Many Episodes do you think Season 3 of FT will have? My guess is 130 or something but it depends if they add filler or not.
I'd assume somewhere around 100.
Who says that fairy tail is ending the 100 years quest is still there
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I would keep everything of the arc up to gajeel vs bloodman change the test but keep ur idea of macarofe being killed
I Like this Rewrite Better
OtakuMetal 17 i want to see Brandish and Lucy interact
*WHY NO*
Jk Luv you
heyy thats pretty good
Damn
i would make natsu live and become the strongest in all of fairy tail but hey your story
I feel like August vs Gildarts was good the way it was
but why Natsu have to die tho😭😭😭😭😭
Awesome Rewrite Senpai!
I totally get where you are coming from with how the Alvarez arc was just a bunch shit piled on top of even more bullshit😂 But I have to ask will you still read the next generation of FT regardless of the fact that it is being drawn by another mangaka???? I know at least I will give it a shot..
But I heard there gonna finish it and when they finish this arc they are gonna start the next generation of fairy tail which will be there kids. But I don’t know it’s just what I heard
You spelled "write" incorrectly in the description, just in case you didn't notice.
I was rushed to do the description as I had to go and get a haircut haha
SenpaiFruit lmao no worries. Great video by the way man.
Immm hereerereew