Wreck the Lines

I recorded this some time ago, can't remember the chords or whatever..wrote lyrics to it today about saying goodbye to a dying love..strangers will come, a new moon will shine..no devotion remains drifting on an ocean alone.
Wreck the Lines came to mind as a title..well it brought me to power lines and disruption of it all as shown in the thumbnail .. Added a choir to it to get a more sophisticated sound.
Wreck the Lines
© 180324 John Schuur
Let me hold you
Just one more time
Before I let you slip away
to the backyard of my mind
Chorus
All against the danger
Becomes so refined
Another stranger
will decide it’s time
To wreck the lines
Stretching the distance
Leading to
Another moon to shine
Burning everything
You left behind
No devotion remains
Everything reminds
of pain
How we changed
Drifting on this ocean
Alone - never to find
Another love …..
Interlude
It was so unreal
never felt
Something like this
A closed deal
Compartmentalized
memories in disguise …
totally outworn
Loving lies
Interlude
Outro
To wreck the lines
Another moon will shine
Burning everything
You left behind
For another love
Another moon to shine

[@Ellenmendenhall]

😥 sometimes it is only for a season or two that people are in our lives, fantastic song, really grabbed my heart today 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏✌🏼❤️

[@JohnGSchuur]

Sadly you’re right .. the time is never given ..

[@RotraudSchulte]

Amazing performance as always
Great music, wonderful video....
Thanks for sharing .....
Love it John...
Have a nice week , Lolo 😘🎶

[@JohnGSchuur]

Thank you Lolo !! Great to have you here 😊

[@SharamGill]

Memories in disguise- I like that. It’s great to be listening to friends sing again. Enjoyed your song, John. Thanks.

[@JohnGSchuur]

It’s great to hear you back on the tube , keep going 🙏

[@LeftisMusicChannel]

Sometimes something happens and the lyrics come very fast and here you have such deep lyrics..
Excellent track with a very nice bass line and perfect guitar my friend John!!
"Wreck the Lines" IS FANTASTIC TITLE AND SONG!🎸🎵👍👍👍

[@JohnGSchuur]

All it needs is a spark to set off the avalanche of words to create the story .. or better the story unfolds and I write it down …

[@jean-pierrebesson4922]

Bonjour John et Merci pour cette belle composition de chanson; Bravos à toi. Amitiés;Jean-Pierre.

[@JohnGSchuur]

Merci … merci … Jean-Pierre

[@kurikokaleidoscope]

Excellent. Thank you 😊

[@JohnGSchuur]

Thank you kindly 🙏

[@TonyMcGreal]

Superb music 🎵🎵

[@JohnGSchuur]

Thanks Tony 👋

[@DinamicJonMMusikGermany]

Powerfull music John...excellent song, bass line and guitar.....great video, performance 😊🎵🎶🎼

[@JohnGSchuur]

Thanks for mentioning the bass , that’s awesome 👏 you’re so good at this

[@karenmuenchen]

Wonderful John !!!!! Big like my friend !😀 Best wishes, Karen :-)) 🙋‍♀🤗🎶🎶

[@JohnGSchuur]

Thanks for stopping by Karen ! 😊

[@jeffreyhartmannmusic]

dramatic writing John . . powerful my friend . . . You are the man. . . thanks . .. Jeff

[@JohnGSchuur]

Thanks Jeff , not only music has power , words too 😅

[@DanAnderson_TheMaddestShredder]

My Dear Friend John. Your So Incredible My Brother Ty Ty Ty For Stopping By My Live.

[@JohnGSchuur]

Thanks Dan for your inspiring playing !!

[@KenKuninmusic]

I really enjoyed this. It has a cool Crazy Horse feel to it especially with that bass line that kind of cruises in and out of the expected and the unexpected.

[@JohnGSchuur]

Thanks Ken 😊 didn’t think of Neil Young and Crazy Horse but now I’ll get what you mean by the comparison…. Yes you’re right

[@klarifoon]

Indeed a catchy one. Like the guitars...

[@JohnGSchuur]

thanx ! I have one rhythm guitar in the centre and two lead lines panned. with reverb and compression .. together you'll get this wall of sound idea..

[@MrRayzer1]

Excellent song John, great ending too, with the choir and stuff. Loved it :)

[@JohnGSchuur]

Yes with the choir , I had a few more things to say at the end of …. Swallowed by the sea and noise I guess

[@AdamBurseMusic]

Great work John, that was awesome 😀🤘🎵🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

[@JohnGSchuur]

Thanks Adam 🤘

[@bernardbigorgne2535]

Excellent creation and performance dear John....Bernard

[@JohnGSchuur]

Thanks Bernard ! Great to hear from you , hope all is well 😊

[@practical-taijiquan]

thumbs up 👍💥🎈

[@JohnGSchuur]

Thank you 🙏

[@MelaniCholie]

Hei John!!! its a great song....and a new moon will shine as long one does not stick to the past. My like and full listen support to you

[@JohnGSchuur]

How cool is that , the moon salutes you

[@toothpickvic]

Love your work John...Great song...keep it up friend❤

[@JohnGSchuur]

Thanks for stopping by and support , got a few new tubes I’m working on

[@LayilaFaon]

Catchy arrangement, really cool song

[@JohnGSchuur]

thanxx for liking the song (and arrangements) Layila

[@AlexandersGuitarplay]

Great! 🙂

[@JohnGSchuur]

Super thanx 💪

[@autocrow]

Fantastic sounding track!

[@JohnGSchuur]

Thank you kindly 🙏

[@folkenbluzer]

Excellent John!!

[@JohnGSchuur]

🙏 great to hear this from you

[@lunarvibe]

Great song and excellent lyric writing. 👏👏👍👍

[@JohnGSchuur]

That’s great to hear that you like my lyrics

[@hubertgunpowder]

That was fantastic, John !! ♫

[@JohnGSchuur]

Thanks for your continuous support Hubert

[@steenbeanl7170]

Nice original! 🎶😊I like the addition of other voices in the song

[@JohnGSchuur]

thanks, the choir isn't me but a little loop I found in garageband, I made it work by cut and paste and transposing it to the right key... sounds warm and full doesn't it

[@steenbeanl7170]

@@JohnGSchuur it does!

[@ccjmusic]

Another great composition John!

[@JohnGSchuur]

Thanks 🙏

[@VitoGaarin]

Reminds me a bit of Wishbone Ash 👌👌👌Fantastic John

[@JohnGSchuur]

That’s an amazing band from the 70 ies , double guitar licks … thanks for mentioning ✨

[@PatrickFBMusic]

Man, very good stuff! Sounds great

[@JohnGSchuur]

Alright 👍 very good is enough for me

[@tokmind]

That's so cool!

[@JohnGSchuur]

Thank you 🙏

[@tps607]

A good song, John...sound reminds me a bit of Neil Young in the era with his band Crazy Horse

[@JohnGSchuur]

You mentioned it … Neil Young …. And I agree

[@jorjasvideo]

Klinkt heel goed .👍👍

[@JohnGSchuur]

Thank you … thank you ….

[@Viper6-MotoVlogger]

Awesome vibes in this tune bro 👍

[@JohnGSchuur]

Right ! Thanks bro 😎

[@Herfortz]

This sound's great, John.

[@JohnGSchuur]

Cool 😎 thanks 🙏

[@TrevorRoper.]

Great lyrics John , big like 👍 😊 Trevor

[@JohnGSchuur]

Thanks Trevor !! 🙏✨

[@Blues-man.]

Great stuff. 😊

[@JohnGSchuur]

Thanks Mr Blues man 👨

[@BadassBrutusGuitar]

Prachtige origineel John, zit erg goed in elkaar en klinkt prachtig!
Bert

[@JohnGSchuur]

Dank je Bert 🙃

[@farukcosic7099]

Like my Friend

[@JohnGSchuur]

Thank you for the like Faruk !!!!

[@rexgeorg7324]

well done jon

[@JohnGSchuur]

Thanks 🙏

[@jeffunderwood6235]

Sounds great brother

[@JohnGSchuur]

Thank you ….. thank you ☺️

[@crettawva]

I like the vocals on this track. Some of your better vocals on this track yet.

[@JohnGSchuur]

Thanks 🙏

[@crettawva]

No John. Thanks to you for all the awesome music you make. @@JohnGSchuur

[@STUDIOCHINCHAN]

Hey John, je mag van mij nog veel van die oudere opnamen laten horen.....Knap all around....Eric

[@JohnGSchuur]

En …. Ik heb nog veel meer oudere opnames 😊