Some of the changes this author makes are totally unnecessary. For instance, while limited the exam to 3 days why change the one Sasuke fights to rain ninja when he was part of Sasuke's village, I'm just confused why all these unnecessary changes were made. It's not really a criticism, it's I'm literally confused because I'm. One of those. If it doesn't actually enhance your story, then don't change it. I'm not against changing cannon if it enhances your story, but some of it doesn't make sense. It just seems like he made it more complicated as a writer for himself, then actually to improve the story. Now, my question on their behaviors, I like the way this story is going, but the one thing that has happened that just sort of rubs me. The wrong way is Kakashi. Tried to kill Naruto twice and they let him live. And what universe does that happen? This is a futile era. It is a military dictatorship and you let the guy that tries to kill your son twice live, I'm sorry, no. If anything he would've been drug away without his f****** legs and arms they would have come off and I would have burnt them to Claudette. Just so he could live through the torture. But no, this guy wouldn't be walking away or even drug away. He would have to been carried away on a cart.
Some of the changes this author makes are totally unnecessary. For instance, while limited the exam to 3 days why change the one Sasuke fights to rain ninja when he was part of Sasuke's village, I'm just confused why all these unnecessary changes were made. It's not really a criticism, it's I'm literally confused because I'm. One of those. If it doesn't actually enhance your story, then don't change it. I'm not against changing cannon if it enhances your story, but some of it doesn't make sense. It just seems like he made it more complicated as a writer for himself, then actually to improve the story.
Now, my question on their behaviors, I like the way this story is going, but the one thing that has happened that just sort of rubs me. The wrong way is Kakashi. Tried to kill Naruto twice and they let him live. And what universe does that happen? This is a futile era. It is a military dictatorship and you let the guy that tries to kill your son twice live, I'm sorry, no. If anything he would've been drug away without his f****** legs and arms they would have come off and I would have burnt them to Claudette. Just so he could live through the torture. But no, this guy wouldn't be walking away or even drug away. He would have to been carried away on a cart.