You did a pretty good job, young man. Allow me you offer a little advice. Before you record your narration over the video presentation, make an outline that will help you remain organized and improve your delivery. Also, don't repeat a phrase such as, he was only 14 years old so many times. Lastly, I wouldn't play thru optional moves too much because it's distracting and confuses the flow of the game, and don't cite the move-by-move plus or minus changes unless there's a really bad or good move. Keep practicing!
You did a pretty good job, young man. Allow me you offer a little advice. Before you record your narration over the video presentation, make an outline that will help you remain organized and improve your delivery. Also, don't repeat a phrase such as, he was only 14 years old so many times. Lastly, I wouldn't play thru optional moves too much because it's distracting and confuses the flow of the game, and don't cite the move-by-move plus or minus changes unless there's a really bad or good move. Keep practicing!