How to LINE EDIT a Novel (Like a Boss!)
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- Опубліковано 17 лип 2024
- What's up, my friend? Today we're talking about LINE EDITING. More specifically, what EXACTLY to look for when you're line editing a story. This is my editing process, start to finish! Comment below and tell me: what does YOUR editing process look like?
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0:00 My Editing Process
2:26 What I Watch For While Editing
4:29 Problem #1: Continuity Errors
5:20 Problem #2: Passive Voice
7:36 Problem #3: Character Voice
9:11 Problem #4: Weak Words
10:22 Problem #5: Spelling and Grammar
11:56 Final Pass Edit
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The fist thing I do is make Word read it for me. It has this feature so that a robot voice will read it for you. I can easily catch errors and also hear when a sentence sounds weird of too repetitive.
I never knew Word can read to you 😮 Why did they hide such a useful function? I'm definitely using it from now on.
How?
What!!! Great tip!
@@leannemcelroy8482 on a Mac, it's under Edit. Go to "Speech." In preferences, you can change the sound of the voice, as well as the speed.
@@leannemcelroy8482 go to review on left side next to word count. There are several text readers you can use online with different accents and genders. Google text readers.
Is it weird that i can’t wait to get to this part of my non-exsisting novel?... 😅
I am almost half way done with my novel but I am also weirdly excited about editing.
@Pedro Silva here is a tip, if you are taking a climax point and putting it in the beginning, the story will be too short. Explain some details and minor plot for a while then add in a bit of a climax. Stretch that out for a few thousand words and then explain more thoughts and plot or whatver works then. Add more climax and repeat! I hope this helped
Don’t be discouraged! You absolutely can write a novel. You just have to slow down and think about what your story is about, why you think it’s worth writing and then just spend time in the minds of your characters brainstorming
three years later and now I'm to this part of my now existing novel. insane!
Woohoo! How's it going? (I can't wait to get to that point)
i love how your comment about your used-to-be non-existing novel is just above this one
Just got up, grabbed my coffee, thinking to myself “I wanna do some editing today .”
*First thing that pops up when I open UA-cam:* Abbie Emmons: How To Line Edit A Novel
Are you spying on me Abbie?! Lol
haha
🤣🤣🤣
I use a lot of commas in my writing. 😂😂
I'm also on the "To many commas" team
Same here. 🎶All the wrong commas in all the wrong places 🎵
qurleq grammarly gets annoyed at me for that😭
Starosity your no alone haha
I write too fast to bother with commas but Grammarly reminds me.
For typos and grammar issues, using Microsoft Word's "read aloud" feature is SUPER helpful to me! I'm not sure if scrivener has a similar feature but when you hear your words read aloud, you can catch typos much faster (ex. if you accidentally used "out" instead of "our") and in general, helps to catch those awkward sounding phrases 😊
When I was reading through my first draft I had to add a whole couple of paragraphs to edit a continuity error. One of the characters mentioned that he had pretty much the same skin tone as the other, but I later changed it so that his skin was much lighter and that was a bit of a plot point. It had been a couple years since I'd written this scene so I completely forgot about it but I couldn't just take it out so I had to do some writing backflips and add a bit of dialogue to fix it
Your videos are better than anything on 'masterclass'. Thank you so much!
Wait, you do all of this on a physical copy of your manuscript? Damn, that's brave. I'd burn out if I attempted to do something like that. It's so much easier to just fire up "track changes" option in Word and insert comments when needed. I don't highlight text though, never really thought of it. I'll probably start doing that from now on. Thanks for the tips! 😊
Your videos are so helpful, thank you! :)
I just wanted to mention that if you read your manuscript backward you can catch the spelling errors easier :)
Interesting…
I have the em-dash addiction too XD
Same.
me too!
Same!
As crazy as it’s sounds I’m still developing my editing process lol. I’m so glad I found your UA-cam. You’ve been the most helpful.
You popping on glasses for that one bit was great hahahahaha. And I am also OBSESSED with em dashes. They're just SO versatile! Love your videos! So informative
Perfect timing! I just started editing my first book this week and am totally flailing. I'm working on revisions now, but this should really help with the next steps. Can't wait for the weak words video!
Interesting line editing method. I'll have to bookmark this video to come back when I get to this stage. Great video. Keep them coming.
Thank you for the great advice, Abbie. I'm a beginning writer and in the process of editing my first book on my own. Plus, I'm also an artist/cartoonist/animator so it is the best of both worlds for me to do my own book cover. Thanks again for the advice and the video. Have a wonderful weekend.
Someone taught me to read the sentence backwards. It slows down the mind helping you to focus on the individual word.
That sounds like such a good idea, totally using this now, thanks :)
I’ve been procrastinating on editing my first manuscript (for like a year). This was a great video and I’m going to go watch your other videos so maybe I’ll finally start the editing process! It intimidates me like crazy. I do know I have a comma problem. I like my commas.
I swear you read my mind! This is what I'm doing right now, and I'm a bit lost, since it's the first time I edit a book. You are a life saver
This is PERFECT TIMING! My novel is due on Saturday. Soon the revision process will be begin!!!
I love the em-dash! Great video--thanks for sharing!
I like your videos on writing a lot. They have really helped me, and I’ve decided that I am finally going to write my first novel. So first I get a story idea, then a premise, then do research, then flesh out characters, then write a synopsis, then do outline, and then finally write right?
Sounds like a plan! So glad I could inspire you.
That is a really good plan, the only thing I would add is I would think about “why” you want to write that story and what it is you love about it before you begging flushing out characters and coming up with a plot. Because it’s very pivotal that you know why you love your story so that your motivated to stay on it for moths
I love the ellipses and have to watch out for it constantly 😂😊. Thank you for the awesome videos Abbie!
This video (as well as the information provided) is so BEAUTIFULLY composed & edited!
Xo,
Laurel
Great video, Abbie. I do also read a sentence many, many times, and when I later spot an obvious typo, have no idea how it got through every single previous reading. And love your last comment. I will write these notes to myself on the magnetic whiteboards on my fridge, and I always somehow ensure that my, normally fine, handwriting is illegible. And I write in codes with initials and abbreviations, and I don't know what half of them mean myself, by the time I return to them. I think it's so that no one else can understand them - but defeats the purpose, when I don't myself. 😀💝
I loved this video! But I totally realize my editing process is SO AMATEUR in compared to yours! I usually do a read through. Both digitally and printed, then I hand it off to one beta reader and make changes then let another editing friend take a look. I'm absolutely going to try your methods next time!
Very interesting and helpful video. Good reminders, especially on the character voice. Thanks for doing this.
What helps me with some editing is running Text to Voice on my drafts, such as in Scrivener. This helped me see (and hear) a ton of missing words and duplicate words and more by following the voice as I read along with it. It seems that I can in fact miss errors by reading my own work, but when I HEAR it, and also when the voice struggles to pronounce it, I am able to see it and fix it. Text to Voice has become the single best tool I've used to find all kinds of errors.
This is why reading it out loud - old school style - works for me.
I went back and read something.... I’m gonna blame autocorrect for this 😆 but I write “Blue” instead of “blew.” I also use a lot of em-dashes and en-dashes. Mostly for dialogue when someone stops abruptly or are interrupted. I tried cutting them out of other instances.
Wonderful tips Abbie! well said
As always, Abbie, fantastic video. I'm also a proud card-carrying member of the Cult of Em Dash. I don't know, it seems to lend itself to the way I think--you know always pausing for a brief interlude.
Thank you so much for recommending This Beautiful Fantastic in last week's video, I watched it and it was indeed beautiful and fantastic! I also loved 100 Days of Sunlight :)
Yay!!! I am so glad you enjoyed. Thank you so much!!
Not there just yet, but definitely thinks I've been wondering about. Thanks!
Oh my goodness. I had my first session with a writing mentor and had to confess that I am obsessed with em-dashes too!!
Hey abbie! Came across your channel today and absolutely love your content :) subscribed!
This is really helpful 👏
Thanks for the great tips! 😊
I wrote a book 12 years ago and went through it several times and changed many things. I even self-published it and had some printed. There are about 20 printed copies floating around and two cooies in a high school library. Now, I decided to look at it again and go through the editing process again. I have cut about 20 pages from the story, and it is much better, but I'm not done yet. As it sets right now, it's 260 pages, and I think that by the time I'm actually finished, I'll probably lose another 5.
Come across your vdo from Thailand. Thank you! I need this!
The semicolon is my favourite! I even got a small tattoo of it four years ago! Also, my mom is the exact same way lol
speaking about punctuation obsession ... I guess I use the three dots waaay too much ... and I love them too much to cut them out 😂
Thanks for that great insights on your editing process! Really, really helpful!
Love your videos, Abbie! So mine isn't a punctuation obsession, but I definitely italicize for emphasis waaay too much. Like. It's a problem. Thanks for such great content, as always :D
Thank you so much for your kind words! They mean so much to me, and I am thrilled that the content I make encourages you to chase your dreams and make your story MATTER!
Lol I love em dashes. I use it a lot too 😁
😎 You are cool and an inspiration, a guide to many
I am a reader that thinks i have afew stories bouncing around in my head. After watching your videos i read one of my stories. Not bad but could be way better. And other editors on line sound like they have bad microphones. On the other hand in your videos i can hear you loud and clear,even while turned away. Thanks
Ha! You mentioned your love of the "m-dash". I'm stuck on the ellipsis... see?
I "over use" the semi-colon, according to my editor; I think she's wrong. My process for line editing is doing a read with highlighters but digitally; I put it on my Kindle and use it's notes and highlighting feature. Once I've made the corrections from that, then I use PWA and Scrivener's linguistic focus to keep tightening. Finally, I export to Word and use the Read Aloud feature because it has the best robot voices.
Alpha and beta readers usually happen sporadically mixed in there as I can't control others schedules as well as I can my own and trying to fit my schedule around others just gave me a headache.
I’m using Dabble and it’s been super helpful at catching my passive voice sentences! Basically, just trying not to use *”was”* so much! 😂
the way Abbie grabs the pen is just... especial.
I love the em-dash too ^^
the way you hold pens and highlighters is fascinating
Thank you!
I love the ellipses...
Very helpful
This was awesome. I needed this. So any advice on finding a good fantasy editor?
I’m an M-dash guy myself-but prioritize them for emphasis! :)
Thanks!
Do you look for all of the line edit categories at the same time, or do you go through your manuscript a separate time for each category? I feel like neither option is great. Doing it separately feels like A LOT of time. But doing it all at once, I've found, makes it easier to miss things. I'm having the same issue with revisions (which I'm doing right now on my current WIP). Once I've decided what needs to be changed, do I start at the beginning and change everything as I go, or do I take one revision area and do it all the way through the manuscript, then go back to the beginning and start with the next revision area? Right now I'm trying the 'start the beginning and do it all' approach, but I keep having to loop back for additional changes. (UGH! I will never understand why so many writers love revisions more than drafting. I love the energy of writing a first draft. But revising? It feels like a slog...even when I know it's making the story 100 times better.)
P.S. Thanks for all your great content!
As my favorite author says, the Revision Process will try your soul; Line Editing will take your will to live.
Would love to see a video with edit examples for active voice.
Yes! I've also read stuff in the past and totally missed obvious typos in them! It's so annoying.
There are definitely some days I use way too many semicolons, but I would say that, overall, I use way too many commas. That last sentence is just an example of that. 😂
Posted 8 hrs ago.
Already over 1.2k views.
Keep going!
Thanx for the positivity
Thank you so much for your kind words! They mean so much to me, and I am thrilled that the content I make encourages you to chase your dreams and make your story MATTER!
I highlight things in my word document. Green means I need to rewrite the sentence or add/remove things. Blue means it needs to be moved, or have been moved, red means there's an issue here with the content itself, yellow, keep track of/remember this for continuity (I hope I used that word correctly) in the story etc. But I never print all of it for ending. Gosh, I'd need to buy so much paper and ink. XD
I use commas obsessively and am quite fond of my dashes, so I feel you.
Really needed that!!!! Are you a mind reader?
Thank A!
such a exclamation and comma lover lol I say Like, also and so, too much
My editing process is pure chaos
I use a lot of em-dashes and commas, in part because I seem to have a writer-love-affair with conjunctions and other connector words. Like filter words, I keep of the ones that pop up a lot to go through my work and cut up my sentences a bit more than I naturally tend to want to do.
I just finished writing last month. I already beta-read by an editor, and the book was out online, but now I need to edit it and edit from scratch! I didn't write it in English. Thank you for your vdo. I need help finding good writing tips in my mother tongue language.
Congratulations on finishing your book , do you need a cover design ?
I edit grammar, spelling, and punctuation. The comma(,), dashes(-), semicolons(;), colons(:), and full-stops. Syntax and semantics- sentence structure, and sentence meaning- are key to making your writing sound like [you]. Of course making your writing simple, terse, laconic, and concise is key sometimes, making your writing feel warm and friendly.
I use ellipses way too much! I once had a professor call me the Ellipses Queen! LOL
I always had an unfortunate obsessions with "st-st-stuttering" (hopefully fixed) and ellipses.
btw what do you think about Shaelin's editing tips? they are super specific and were very helpful.
Also what about 'that' and '-ing' words? I often have to chose between the two options, but both should be avoided if possible... which one is the lesser evil? He was wearing trousers that covered his ankles / he was wearing trousers covering his ankles. which is better? (and don't give me: 'his trousers covered his ankles.' this is a hypothetical question! )
Abbie is just like me!!
There is a Facebook meme about how as long as the first and last letters of a word are correct, the brain can still process and comprehend the word. Since seeing that, I have slowed down how fast I read when I edit because most of my issues are when I have jumbled letters when typing too fast. I do tend to miss those if I read through too quickly. It's wonderfully weird how the brain works at times.
Do you use your home printer or do you go to a place like Staples to print it? I have a long manuscript and last time I had it printed at Staples because of the cost to print at home.
awesome video
With your theme of using em dashes, I have the theme of always adding commas lol
1:20 when abbie said this "FINISHED" i was like WTF😂😂
E M D A S H E S F O R L I F E!!!!
I finished my manuscript n Sept 2022. I enjoyed the first draft. Not so much the second. 106,000 words is a lot to digest. The task seems insurmountable. I am stuck on chapter four of twenty-six chapters. BTW this is my first novel, so I hope the process gets better for my next one.
Could you do a video on how to format your novel?
I'm having a little bit of an issue. I really want to start writing my book but I haven't finished the outline and I have like 5 things due in one class. I know I should be working on those instead of my book but the book is much more interesting 😂. I've outlined 1/3 of the book pretty well but I've barely even started the other 2/3 of it. Also, the 1/3 I have done still has some issues like the timeline, and building the actual characters, not just the overall tribe (it's a bit of a tribal story), and I have to build the actual world that the characters are in, like terrain and all that. A big problem is that the main person helping me with this book only has about 3 hours a week or less. That's not enough. The other person who is helping me, has a crazy schedule so I don't even know when he's awake.
I use semi colons a lot in replacement of co-ordinating conjunctions I know I arrived late.. like really late but still..
I am not a grammar expert either but perhaps we should refer to the one who does the action in Passive voice as an agent. I have come across one website where a lot is said in favor of Passive voice. Goodness, I am obsessed about M-dashes!
My favorite punctuation to abuse is the semi-colon; it comes in handy
I have the same problem with ellipses that you do with em-dashes.
is your revision the same as developmental editing? I just wrote my first book and I am giving it a month or two to sit...before I start editing it. :-)
i always use em dash when writing lol!
I don't have a laptop to write on, I write on notebook. Can you suggest ways about how to line edit in that case?
😭 my novel needs both structural edits AND line edits. Boohoo!
Don't forget when you're editing to simplify and combine sentences wherever you can. What I mean by that is sometimes you write two, three, etc. sentences that could easily be combined into one. Say you have one sentence that's a description of the location, and the next sentence is the character, I don't know, picking up an object. You could combine it like this:
Instead of saying: "The library was dark and forbidding. Alexander pulled a book out of the tallest bookcase."
You could simplify and speed up the pace by saying: "Alexander pulled a book out of the tallest bookcase in the dark and forbidding library."
I don't know, but I hope this is helpful to someone because this advice made my writing *so* so much better.
To add on: Even though both examples above have the same amount of words, when you combine two sentences into one, you read it faster without a pause in between, so it flows better. It's the same way commas make you read it with a pause.
The texts are written on computer, right? So, why you print them and highlight them? Can the writing software do that? That will be economical.
Why do you print the story to edit? Why not just edit it on digital format?
I'm asking to know if I should do the same or not, depending on the pros and cons.
Great advice love the info. What if you really need beta readers but don,t have a platform?
Could you explain a little bit more on the Hook and Inciting Incident? I'm having trouble on those.
Keep watching the series, we'll be tackling all of these!
A good way that kinda works well to spot passive voice is to put "by zombies" at the end
Ex: She was hurt *by zombies*
It makes sense so it's passive voice
Ex: She was beautiful *by zombies*
It doesn't make sense
So not all sentences containing was are passive voice
Hi, I'm from the future, and at 10:07 you're just pointing into the air.
When I search for spelling grammar problems, I use the phrase, "I read like I am stupid." I basically, read the draft as though I just learned English. This involves sounding out words as spell phonetically before saying it correctly. I long pause on comma's and other grammatical usages to see if they actually fit the prose.