Verbal Diarrhea like a story wrote by a grade 4 student Repeat repeating repeated theme and sentences all fluff to puff up a 500 word story to 2500 words
Even a 4th grader could write a better story. This is more like something you'd find in a history textbook. This is a word salad with some parts repeated over and over. This wouldn't pass muster as a Hollywood script. It would need a total rewrite by writers who just got through college with a D average.
Apparently written by a child of the city who thinks that the "urban environment" is inviolable and eternal. It is not. Any Alien Empire accustomed to using their technology to successfully "win from a distance" would simply continue to do so. If the urban environment favored the Humans, then remove the urban environment. It even works for the Russians in Ukraine. Pointless "meat wave" infantry attacks accomplish little more than wasting resources. But they constantly fire their artillery, lob dumb bombs, and pound away at the enemy stronghold; AKA "urban environment" , until it is reduced to a pile of broken bricks. It has been "liberated". Methinks Advanced Alien Technology could accomplish this task far more quickly and efficiently ... and without flushing countless lives down the drain in STUPID infantry assaults.
Way too much REPETITION ! Diarhea of the pen! Reminds me of a writer maximizing word count because their pay was per word. Of course, this tail, er-tale was not only read by weak AI algorithms, it was ptobably created by AI. Frankly, I doubt that any person who knew Third Grade English could write this bad ! My rating would be at 0.0001 out of 1000 !
I wonder if we could hear a story about the Aliens against the humans in a Canasta Tournament.
Pete And Repete With Bad Pronunciation.
If you're going to have an AI read it, at least phonetically spell the MAIN WORDS (MA GAAH) so it doesnt say MEGA over and over
Too much repetition and mispronunciation.
Verbal Diarrhea like a story wrote by a grade 4 student Repeat repeating repeated theme and sentences all fluff to puff up a 500 word story to 2500 words
Even a 4th grader could write a better story. This is more like something you'd find in a history textbook. This is a word salad with some parts repeated over and over. This wouldn't pass muster as a Hollywood script. It would need a total rewrite by writers who just got through college with a D average.
Apparently written by a child of the city who thinks that the "urban environment" is inviolable and eternal. It is not. Any Alien Empire accustomed to using their technology to successfully "win from a distance" would simply continue to do so. If the urban environment favored the Humans, then remove the urban environment. It even works for the Russians in Ukraine. Pointless "meat wave" infantry attacks accomplish little more than wasting resources. But they constantly fire their artillery, lob dumb bombs, and pound away at the enemy stronghold; AKA "urban environment" , until it is reduced to a pile of broken bricks. It has been "liberated".
Methinks Advanced Alien Technology could accomplish this task far more quickly and efficiently ... and without flushing countless lives down the drain in STUPID infantry assaults.
magaaaaa not mega
The explanation of krav mega was so repetitious I couldn't
make it past 15 min even fast forwarding! Waste of time.
Way too much REPETITION ! Diarhea of the pen! Reminds me of a writer maximizing word count because their pay was per word. Of course, this tail, er-tale was not only read by weak AI algorithms, it was ptobably created by AI. Frankly, I doubt that any person who knew Third Grade English could write this bad ! My rating would be at 0.0001 out of 1000 !
How do I get sucked into this crap story telling