How to Write a Contained Thriller

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  • Опубліковано 1 сер 2024
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    Today I'll be taking a look at a different kind of story: the contained thriller. Contained thrillers are tightly wound stories that work more like roller coasters than stories with deep philosophical plot.
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  • @TylerMowery
    @TylerMowery  3 роки тому +5

    Get Practical Tools to Write Your Great Screenplay: www.practicalscreenwriting.com

  • @m.mishra9133
    @m.mishra9133 3 роки тому +105

    I think "don't breathe" was a fairly good contained thriller too.

  • @maryjocampbell6019
    @maryjocampbell6019 Рік тому +5

    I’m writing a thriller novel and feel that tips for writing screenplays are so much more accessible than craft writing books/videos. Thank you for this!

  • @lewisanderton8062
    @lewisanderton8062 3 роки тому +32

    12 Angry Men is one of my alltime favourite films ever.

    • @lewisanderton8062
      @lewisanderton8062 3 роки тому +5

      @@aj.s... "You don't really mean you'll kill me, do you."

    • @TomEyeTheSFMguy
      @TomEyeTheSFMguy 2 роки тому

      @@lewisanderton8062 that moment was legendary.

  • @scotia7326
    @scotia7326 3 роки тому +39

    “Hush” (2016) is a little masterpiece in my opinion.

    • @taylorfrizzell5119
      @taylorfrizzell5119 3 роки тому +1

      It sucks so bad. The bad guy was revealed too early.

    • @adrianosoto1586
      @adrianosoto1586 3 роки тому

      Im agree with you!

    • @NUCLEARDASH
      @NUCLEARDASH 2 роки тому +2

      @@taylorfrizzell5119 his face is not important to the story, it is importante to build up tension then he says "now you see" to her.
      Besides, it is a contained thriller, not a giallo film

    • @NUCLEARDASH
      @NUCLEARDASH 2 роки тому

      Indeed it is. Hush is one of my most studied movies. Besides his inconsistence about real deaf people, it is perfect at his structure

  • @terrellujah
    @terrellujah 3 роки тому +16

    I’ve literally been watching all his videos to prepare to write my thriller film and now I’m blessed with this? Thank you!

  • @leninmckay3144
    @leninmckay3144 3 роки тому +11

    Ive been trying to write a contained thriller for weeks and nobody has any good videos on it, thank you.

  • @jayfolk
    @jayfolk 3 роки тому +14

    Thrillers: make your audience breathing quickly
    Suspense: make your audience hold their breath
    Horror: disturb your audience (question norms, try not to disgust)

  • @GomezProductions
    @GomezProductions 3 роки тому +7

    Me and my friend were really talking about writing a contained thriller and the next day you release this video. Your a genius thank you.

  • @raphaelmotta7630
    @raphaelmotta7630 3 роки тому +4

    10 Cloverfield Lane has the best idea for a film I've seen in a while, alltough I thought the writing could've been a bit better, it's not bad at all.

  • @BBrunnel
    @BBrunnel 3 роки тому +3

    Was literally mind mapping a thriller for the past few days and here you are with the perfect video. Thank you Tyler!

  • @ev7785
    @ev7785 3 роки тому +3

    First! I love how you go above and beyond and explore how to write all stories and not just drama :) there are a lot more contained thrillers than I realized.

  • @ravenproductions5609
    @ravenproductions5609 3 роки тому +48

    can't contained thrillers be more than just roller coaster rides tho? I feel there is potential in any film to have a dramatic narrative and philosophical content no matter what the genre is and how many locations are used. I am just curious because thrillers are some of my favorite movies and I do want to make thrillers but I also want to make films of importance that have philosophical conflict and meaning to them.

    • @pufelmulticolorido
      @pufelmulticolorido 3 роки тому +7

      Of course. You don't need the permission of someone on youtube to do that.

    • @ravenproductions5609
      @ravenproductions5609 3 роки тому +6

      @@pufelmulticolorido well yeah I know I don't need his permission I am just asking for his opinion on that whether I might agree or disagree with him.

    • @fransbuijs808
      @fransbuijs808 8 місяців тому +1

      Would you like a play in which the action unwinds like a coiled spring and every single speech develops the situation, but a play, too, in which the characters are all created and exhibited in the round? Yes, you would. And so would I. And it can't be done.
      This is a quote by playwright J.B. Priestley.
      So either character development or plot has to take first place. You cannot have both at the same time, which of course does not mean that it has to be one or the other, just that one has to be the most important. You can have philosophical elements in a thriller, but they have to be part of the plot. Take the Da Vinci Code for example, where the whole story about Jesus and the Last Supper is part of the plot. But there is not much character development.

  • @jesrieldaug1258
    @jesrieldaug1258 3 роки тому +9

    I hope David Fincher will make another Thriller Movie like Panic Room.

  • @YouCanCallMeCaius
    @YouCanCallMeCaius 3 роки тому +2

    Stunning work as usual Tyler! You're a great inspiration. Thanks for sharing.

  • @directedbydavid
    @directedbydavid 2 роки тому

    "7500" great movie! the whole thing in a planes cockpit!

  • @bophenry
    @bophenry 3 роки тому

    Always love your videos! Great, new explainer animations/graphics in this one!

  • @january1041
    @january1041 2 місяці тому

    This is seriously so fun to watch!! How about 'How to Write' other genre?

  • @vitaminq4348
    @vitaminq4348 3 роки тому

    Great breakdown of a common writing pain point Tyler. Thanks for this.

  • @HollywoodCharityAuctioncom
    @HollywoodCharityAuctioncom 2 роки тому

    Tyler, this was an excellent video. Thank you for posting/creating.

  • @braigbrothers
    @braigbrothers 3 роки тому +2

    I was just thinking about thrillers um and you publish this. Crazy

  • @randomrey6568
    @randomrey6568 3 роки тому +6

    Hey Tyler, just want to say your videos help me a lot so much but is okay if you can do a video on how to Subvert Expectations successfully?

  • @popflicktionedits3256
    @popflicktionedits3256 3 роки тому +3

    This came at the perfect time for me

  • @Ambuba_Entertainment
    @Ambuba_Entertainment Рік тому

    Tyler thank you so much!

  • @Pinwheel622
    @Pinwheel622 3 роки тому

    Thank you Tyler!

  • @andrewdowney2264
    @andrewdowney2264 3 роки тому +1

    Keep up the good work!

  • @fransbuijs808
    @fransbuijs808 8 місяців тому

    And as Ernest Hemingway said: your easy reading makes damn hard writing for me!

  • @DangerousMuteLunatic
    @DangerousMuteLunatic 3 роки тому +1

    Looking forward to contrasting this with Max Landis' "Measures" theory

  • @abhideshmukh2182
    @abhideshmukh2182 3 роки тому +1

    👍🏻1st like nd Watch❤️🔥

  • @jayraveendran8838
    @jayraveendran8838 3 роки тому +1

    Hey man I'm a big fan of your work and I've learnt a lot from you about screenplays and story creation. Could you make a video about how to write a love story or something of a romantic nature? Thank you :)

  • @cabbage4891
    @cabbage4891 3 роки тому +3

    Can you do a similar video for the mystery genre?

    • @anthonycorcino6700
      @anthonycorcino6700 3 роки тому +2

      For that its usually someone you always least suspect.

  • @anshumehta7399
    @anshumehta7399 3 роки тому +3

    can you please make a video on how to write action scene

  • @overtone55
    @overtone55 3 роки тому

    I enjoyed Hush, which fits this style

  • @bumpv1997
    @bumpv1997 3 роки тому +1

    Hey Tyler can you make a video on how to write for tv like should each episode for tv be written, not formulaic, but close to Harmons story circle? or is tv different than film? and how do you balance time with a cast of many characters? shows like game of thrones walking dead, breaking bad, ozark all jump around quite a bit but balance and develop characters really well. I could use another head in trying to breakdown how they develop characters while also building towards the main goal.

  • @m.mishra9133
    @m.mishra9133 3 роки тому +33

    Doesn't save the cat call it "monster in the house" genre

    • @seankovacs4917
      @seankovacs4917 3 роки тому +8

      Ahahahaaha, I remember that passage

    • @Fred_l_l_
      @Fred_l_l_ 3 роки тому

      Not exactly. Monster in the house is about a creature that kills its own creator and where the setting is primordial and should be a single small well defined place. Here Tyler is talking about contained places, aka « huis clos », which is very similar to theatre or stage play. Contained is tough and relies a lot on entries and exits, and/or alternatively all the great thing Tyler talks about in this video.

    • @m.mishra9133
      @m.mishra9133 3 роки тому +1

      @@Fred_l_l_ that's why i posed it as a question. I was confused too.
      What i remeber reading is--that the conflict/antagonist exists in a contained space and the protagonist has to save himself/others.
      Coz i remeber the book gave the example of jurassic park.
      So is jurassic park a contained thriller or a monster in the house?

    • @Fred_l_l_
      @Fred_l_l_ 3 роки тому +2

      @@m.mishra9133 well. I’d say that a monster in a house (or an island) fits Jurassic Park. In Panic Room or Room there is no monster per se. And a monster is an antagonist, sure, but not a conscious person with an arc. So I’d definitely consider Monster in the house a type of contained movies. So, a monster in the house is often contained and should be (gives the example of Arachnophobia that is not contained and hence failed as a monster in the house movie). On the other hand, a contained movie is definitely not always a Monster in the house movie.
      I hope I explained myself clearly.

    • @m.mishra9133
      @m.mishra9133 3 роки тому +2

      @@Fred_l_l_ That does make sense. The Room is a good example.
      Thanks 👍👍👍

  • @shadyboltbandit3302
    @shadyboltbandit3302 2 роки тому +1

    This is great explanation and good info. However, I've watched your channel and learned the "Dan Harmon's Story Circle", and the question I have is, how can you incorporate the story circle to a contained thriller?

  • @shivamnanchahal4035
    @shivamnanchahal4035 3 роки тому +1

    Nice topic

  • @thegoodgeneral
    @thegoodgeneral 2 роки тому +1

    I clicked on this SPECIFICALLY hoping you’d bring up “Panic Room.”

  • @m.mishra9133
    @m.mishra9133 3 роки тому +16

    Would you call the netflix film "the platform" a contained thriller?

  • @something65789
    @something65789 3 роки тому +1

    Short Film finished.
    So What do I do Now?

  • @jamescater7727
    @jamescater7727 3 роки тому +1

    Talk about THE HATEFUL EIGHT

  • @morrigang5095
    @morrigang5095 3 роки тому

    Once again, awesome video (no surprise there though)! I would love to see you do one on death scenes

  • @Schnitzelschlotz
    @Schnitzelschlotz 3 роки тому +27

    Now he‘s talking about genre. Alright.

    • @jayfolk
      @jayfolk 3 роки тому +8

      but what about the central philosophical conflict?

    • @DainDenham
      @DainDenham 3 роки тому +1

      @@jayfolk lmao

    • @anthonycorcino6700
      @anthonycorcino6700 3 роки тому

      @@jayfolk Well honestly write what you want.

    • @theawesomebat1244
      @theawesomebat1244 2 роки тому

      @@anthonycorcino6700
      I think he was just joking because Tyler Mowery is known for explaining the “Philosophical Conflict” in all of his videos.

  • @thekhan4503
    @thekhan4503 3 роки тому

    Wow

  • @DaVontae12T
    @DaVontae12T 3 роки тому

    Would you consider the collection a contain thriller?

  • @TiagoCavalcanti-ji6hu
    @TiagoCavalcanti-ji6hu 9 місяців тому

    neat

  • @thewhitewolf58
    @thewhitewolf58 3 роки тому

    9:12 what was the name of that movie i searched lock but couldnt find it

  • @FrostByteFilms
    @FrostByteFilms 3 роки тому +1

    Ok

  • @AB89DIK
    @AB89DIK 3 роки тому +1

    What is the movie at @1:08 ???

    • @H5Fredux
      @H5Fredux 3 роки тому +2

      Clue (1985)

    • @AB89DIK
      @AB89DIK 3 роки тому +1

      @@H5Fredux Thank you so much :)

  • @angelsacredcamp5497
    @angelsacredcamp5497 3 роки тому

    Hey, Tyler, what apps do you think best for screenplays? i’ve been searching for it and still no idea, pls answer this question

  • @Dina8485
    @Dina8485 3 роки тому

    I just watched that new film "Run" on Hulu and it does all of this wrong in my opinion. Tension doesn't build slowly enough and it's overacted and fairly simple. It ended up being a less interesting Gypsy Rose story.

  • @Peachu_n_Goma_Home
    @Peachu_n_Goma_Home 3 роки тому

    CUBE. :)

  • @pnr2736
    @pnr2736 2 роки тому

    Yoooo

  • @directedbydavid
    @directedbydavid 2 роки тому

    Sleuth just 2 dudes and a house

  • @mtb0169
    @mtb0169 3 роки тому +2

    This guys' timing...

  • @GDHCole-uj7mc
    @GDHCole-uj7mc 3 роки тому +2

    No

  • @thekhan4503
    @thekhan4503 3 роки тому

    Now I feel like sometimes his abit too much. Like into philosophical conflict. There are movies which has done great with not much of philosophical conflict, still has but not as much as he says. Sometimes we just have to get entertained and enjoy while also learning. With great conflicts also.