You did not know he is not a Captain, he is a Capitan. Higher than high, mightier than mighty. Besides Brandon called in and the AG at Galactic headquarters was fired.
As a Brit l really think it was a backwards step when they stopped the Rum ration in the armed force's The Dutch issued Gin hence Dutch courage ( I think that's right)
You can tell these stories are mostly written by AI, usually ChatGPT coz names etc are almost always the same... James, Zara, etc and ships are mostly called Resolute or Indomitable lol
They more than likely didn’t mean literally. I personally believe he is saying that for the sake of the moment. Others may take it differently, though.
"Appointed representative," would indicate that he's been empowered in this situation by a higher power (president, legislature, commander in chief), to have primary command over this situation. Not a stretch that he could order those higher in the chain of command in said situation.
Martian a bipedal insectoid with an exoskeleton? I thought there's no plant/animals in Mars. Is this setting not in this universe or not in this times? A mere captain giving orders to an admiral and a general?
The new AI stories are getting better, still a lot of rambling story but still palatable. Read a Harlequin romance novel intend for women who came of age in the 50s 60s 70s and 80s, not my topic of interest but readable and well written. So to will AI reach this level of authorship.
Harlequin tried their formula on SF too, ref "Laser Publications" . Give an outline to a ghost writer, send that to a committee to remove large words, anything controversial or thought provoking, publish. Total waste of paper and failed spectacularly.
The story concept was good and the flow not bad, but the execution was bad. As others commented a Captain representing the Earth then ordering Admirals and Generals around is totally BS.
Probably for balance of the galactic order, like if this one is replaced will it be replaced by someone worse or will the void be filled with multiple others causing more war, chaos and death. Only the writer would know
What I'm more interested in is that every story I've listened to from this channel either has a chunk missing or starts over from the beginning somewhere in the middle. Thumbs down, again!
In navy parlance, at least in the in the US, a Captain is the equal to a full bird Colonel. Most future Earth stories use naval ranks for the spacing fleet.
Wow... At least decide how you're going to spell the alien race consistently in the captions... So sloppy. You'd think they'd teach ChatGPT how to spell...
Like most of these stories creators ..... they have no idea of the "Chain of Command" or of positions of top command officers. I've listened to dozens of stories with mere "Lieutenants" as executive officers. That would only happen on a very small command. And there are always the same tired phrases and dialogue in every story.
Was wondering how a mear captain was giving orders to both an admiral and general. This is not how the chain of command is done captains are lower than a general or an admiral. Someone didn't do here homework 🙃
I don't think I've listened to one of these stories yet that hasn't used the word "cacophony." Also, whoever, or whatever, is doing your auto-text sucks. The same words get misspelled, incorrect words on the screen that don't match the voice, etc. Also, when referring to a Naval ship, or star ship, the first time the name is used is U.S.S. xxxx, thereafter it's just xxxx.
That is true but he can’t order around an admiral nor other captains , which is what he is doing . An admiral would lead the squadron of ships with each captain having control of their specific ship. This isn’t happening here
Wait, a mere captain is representing all of humanity, and also giving orders to an admiral and a general? wtf is going on?
That's what happens when people write stories without any clue as to how the military rank structure is.
You did not know he is not a Captain, he is a Capitan. Higher than high, mightier than mighty. Besides Brandon called in and the AG at Galactic headquarters was fired.
Meanwhile in the NCO ranks…”Specialist Riker ordered Sergeant Major Vance to retreat because the tension was palpable”.
@bbryan1973 the tension is ALWAYS "palatable" in these stories!!!!😂😂😂😂😂
@@josefhyatt2780palatable? Or palpable?😂
The writer does not seem to know where a captain is placed in the chain of command. 😮
Because majority of these stories are written by AI, usually ChatGPT
Captain is a O-6
So much for AI being so Smart 🙄
It's been done before, using lowest ranking soldier available to represent one side to humiliate enemies during negotiations.
@@oliveriobarro4505 In the Army a Captain is a 0-3
The human troops fueled by adrenaline and determination....BS! WE'RE FUELED BY COFFEE AND HATE!!!! 😂😂😂😂
And, fresh pop-tarts...lol
As a Brit l really think it was a backwards step when they stopped the Rum ration in the armed force's
The Dutch issued Gin hence Dutch courage ( I think that's right)
Damn Skippy!!
And the Marines are fueled by crayons. Lol never be the work that has to be done before a crayon snack and a nap.
@@mikehenthorn1778 Leave the red ones alone!!!! THEY'RE MINE!!!! Semper Fidelis and as always YAT-YAS!!! PALADIN SENDS
You can tell these stories are mostly written by AI, usually ChatGPT coz names etc are almost always the same... James, Zara, etc and ships are mostly called Resolute or Indomitable lol
Space is an area of endless blackness, broken by small pinpricks of light. So, how do you start a battle at dawn?
They more than likely didn’t mean literally. I personally believe he is saying that for the sake of the moment. Others may take it differently, though.
It's ZULU time, duh! Otherwise known as GMT.
You've heard the expression, "It's 5 PM somewhere," right? 😉
Admirals and Generals commanded by a captain, must be a James Tiberius Kirk wanna be
You need to forget the words "determination" and "resolute". They're like a drug to you. Your writing can't progress with them. Get a "thesaurus".
This is a whole lot better than some of them they use the same words hundreds of times to describe the same events
"Appointed representative," would indicate that he's been empowered in this situation by a higher power (president, legislature, commander in chief), to have primary command over this situation. Not a stretch that he could order those higher in the chain of command in said situation.
Well I've officially listened to enough of these to learn that when the author uses the word palpable the story is mediocre at best.
Martian a bipedal insectoid with an exoskeleton? I thought there's no plant/animals in Mars. Is this setting not in this universe or not in this times? A mere captain giving orders to an admiral and a general?
As am listening the command structure is backwards
The spelling errors in the text window are hilarious.
The new AI stories are getting better, still a lot of rambling story but still palatable. Read a Harlequin romance novel intend for women who came of age in the 50s 60s 70s and 80s, not my topic of interest but readable and well written. So to will AI reach this level of authorship.
Harlequin tried their formula on SF too, ref "Laser Publications" . Give an outline to a ghost writer, send that to a committee to remove large words, anything controversial or thought provoking, publish.
Total waste of paper and failed spectacularly.
The story concept was good and the flow not bad, but the execution was bad. As others commented a Captain representing the Earth then ordering Admirals and Generals around is totally BS.
Why would you put troops on the ground when you can just destroy the shipyards from space.
Aside from the horriable military refrences, why did the council care about the deaths and downfall of the agressive empire.
Probably for balance of the galactic order, like if this one is replaced will it be replaced by someone worse or will the void be filled with multiple others causing more war, chaos and death. Only the writer would know
@@yeetsahoy7867
Thats the point. The writer should have written the answer.
What a crappy ending
I dont mind the ai voice over, but these ai stories are all the same bro. 😭
I thought they were going to attack the supply lines, not the shipyards, but then they did just the opposite.
A choke point in space? Do writer know the vastness of space?
Play stellaris, and you'll get the idea of it
@@rainemiller5016 will try thank you
Paired black holes, perhaps, orbiting each other, in a sense?
Multiple Meteor fields?
What I'm more interested in is that every story I've listened to from this channel either has a chunk missing or starts over from the beginning somewhere in the middle. Thumbs down, again!
minute stories ... written in 1 minute without any knowledge on the subject ...
Retreat? He'll, we just got here.
Why is an Admiral and a General briefing a mere Captain? A VERY junior officer?
In navy parlance, at least in the in the US, a Captain is the equal to a full bird Colonel. Most future Earth stories use naval ranks for the spacing fleet.
Wow... At least decide how you're going to spell the alien race consistently in the captions... So sloppy. You'd think they'd teach ChatGPT how to spell...
Nah. Unconditional surrender is the ONLY right decision. Right at the moment of probable total victory this Human leader blew it.
Like most of these stories creators ..... they have no idea of the "Chain of Command" or of positions of top command officers.
I've listened to dozens of stories with mere "Lieutenants" as executive officers.
That would only happen on a very small command.
And there are always the same tired phrases and dialogue in every story.
“They started a war and we are going to finish it” this is a quote directly ripped from Franklin Delano Roosevelt
Weak Ending WTF is this Peace Talk. Alien Lizards Attack we WRECK THEM.😊
Don't start the mower if you don't want ALL the grass mowed. And to quote TFE, "It's never a war crime the first time."
Lousy narration. Jumps forward to completely different sequence of events
A f'n Captain in charge again and not an Admiral or General but both reporting to a Captain. Shove this story where the sun does not shine.
Was wondering how a mear captain was giving orders to both an admiral and general. This is not how the chain of command is done captains are lower than a general or an admiral. Someone didn't do here homework 🙃
YES! Noone seems to really understand military ranks, esp the Navy (a captain is equiv to a colonel), not a general
AI is failing miserably in many things. Story telling is the tip of the iceberg.
"We strike at dawn" WTF?
In space there is no dawn... SMH
Low Rent, Scuffed, Offbrand Mass Effect knockoff.
How is a captain giving orders to an admiral and a general, it should be the other way around
Should have answered that there would never be true peace while yheir Emperor lived.
I'm not even half way through. I'm greatly enjoying the story line. finally something different
Thank you for your feedback!!!! 😊💯
This story was painfully simplistic.
A space battle that launches at DAWN!? Sheesh
The grammar wasn’t exactly stellar.
when does a captain order an admiral
In AI Stories, and people ignorant of Military Ranks
I don't think I've listened to one of these stories yet that hasn't used the word "cacophony." Also, whoever, or whatever, is doing your auto-text sucks. The same words get misspelled, incorrect words on the screen that don't match the voice, etc. Also, when referring to a Naval ship, or star ship, the first time the name is used is U.S.S. xxxx, thereafter it's just xxxx.
You need to fix the rank structure.
6:50 AI.... Not drivel. But shows an amazing lack of understanding of the setting and its own 'worldbuilding'.
Too many errors to bother with .
Even if you consider him as a Navy Captain, which is in the army a Full Bird Colonel, he is still Jr to an Admiral and a General.
If you would use real voice actors instead of AI, I'd respect this.
We had those as a Paratrooper when I was stationed in Italy, they're a little spooky, lol
"We strike at dawn" has no meaning in space
Future things change
why is a ship's captain telling an Admiral and a General what to do
Ship's Captain has exclusive authority on his/her ship.
That is true but he can’t order around an admiral nor other captains , which is what he is doing . An admiral would lead the squadron of ships with each captain having control of their specific ship. This isn’t happening here
Great battles are ahead for humanity this is just the beginning, it's our DNA. 😊
I thought of Israel and Hamas when I listened to this story.