& sunlight Came pouring down on me Then at nite I hear the sound empty In my bones In my own Watch the low It's turning on the ledge Moving slow & burning at the edge In my bones In my own Shallow sun light Hallow rain at nite Shallow sun & light Mixing with the rain In my bones In my own
Very nice! I like that many of your lyrics seem to be about observing a time and place and the feeling you get even if it is from something simple like watching the weather - it seems to channel the Buddhist concept of mindfulness - the awareness of surroundings without judgment. Awesome!👍👍
& sunlight
Came pouring down on me
Then at nite
I hear the sound empty
In my bones
In my own
Watch the low
It's turning on the ledge
Moving slow
& burning at the edge
In my bones
In my own
Shallow sun light
Hallow rain at nite
Shallow sun & light
Mixing with the rain
In my bones
In my own
Very nice! I like that many of your lyrics seem to be about observing a time and place and the feeling you get even if it is from something simple like watching the weather - it seems to channel the Buddhist concept of mindfulness - the awareness of surroundings without judgment. Awesome!👍👍
Thank U so much, @AWorkingMansGuideToComedy. That might be the best compliment I've ever gotten 4 my lyrics. 🙏🌹🌹
Really nice song. I'm hearing more and more expressiveness in your voice. Good job! 🌻
Thank U, Darlene. ☺🌹🌹🌹