300yr ago the dark enemy from deep space was 50yrs away from the solar system, not the Galaxy, huh? 13:30. 300yrs later it still hadn't been noticed?. Where's the rest of this remake of a past story?
It would have been nicer with logic and consistency. A threat that was too imminent at "50 years away" for humanity to counter directly; check. But if humanity first built perfectly concealed hiding places, nearly all went to sleep, and THEN a quiet fraction of them began working on a defense, why, they would have three HUNDRED years to complete the preparations? Riiight...
Typical -- end the story before anything has happened or been decided. Obviously intended to get us to click again for the next installment. SORRY! I didn't sign up for a series. Tell the story completely, or don't bother to upload anything.
Great story, definitively needs a part 2.
Loved this story. Needs part 2
That's the ploy -- to keep you clicking.
Great story.
Part 2 please.
That's the ploy -- to keep you clicking.
Beautiful Tale...!
Impressive, most Impressive 👍
No really. Just word salad, full of inconsistencies and impossibilities.
300yr ago the dark enemy from deep space was 50yrs away from the solar system, not the Galaxy, huh? 13:30. 300yrs later it still hadn't been noticed?. Where's the rest of this remake of a past story?
agree, timings are rubbish, unless the estimate of 50 years was a big mistake but why did they then wait 300 years
Jinai... Run Forest run
Not bad at all.
Actually, pretty terrible.
Great story, too bad the names didn't seem to have any set spelling. WHO is Bitna and where did she come from?
Half a story, at best. That's the ploy -- to keep you clicking.
300 earth orbits or alien orbits ?
300 orbits of the Galaxy for Earth!!! That’s 275 million Earth years each time around.
Open the box Pandora, Mary
All lull say is nice one well done
It would have been nicer with logic and consistency. A threat that was too imminent at "50 years away" for humanity to counter directly; check. But if humanity first built perfectly concealed hiding places, nearly all went to sleep, and THEN a quiet fraction of them began working on a defense, why, they would have three HUNDRED years to complete the preparations? Riiight...
WHAT happened?????????????????????????????????????
am i still alive?
I hope so
That's the ploy -- to keep you clicking.
Typical -- end the story before anything has happened or been decided. Obviously intended to get us to click again for the next installment. SORRY! I didn't sign up for a series. Tell the story completely, or don't bother to upload anything.
the timeline is off