He saved them three times not twice. The ending was rushed without explaining what they found and what would happen to the artifact? Good start but you needed more work on the development of the importance of the artifact .
Earth could have sent cyber-emus and a Florida man. But there would be nothing left but Zakkarian ships on blocks modified to function as barbeque grills and their territories overrun by flightless hyper-aggressive land avioids that can affect targeting solutions for small unit aggressor/defender tactics. But that is just crazy talk at this point.
Why is the captain scaled but her comm officer is furred? They are supposed to be the same race/species. "You can't take on three warships by yourself," she says to the guy who has just done exactly that -- twice. Story is very predictable. Several trite phrases are repeated over and over again. So they go down to investigate a structure, and the XO is surprised to find ... a structure. Ooookay, then.
He saved them three times not twice. The ending was rushed without explaining what they found and what would happen to the artifact? Good start but you needed more work on the development of the importance of the artifact .
Earth could have sent cyber-emus and a Florida man.
But there would be nothing left but Zakkarian ships on blocks modified to function as barbeque grills and their territories overrun by flightless hyper-aggressive land avioids that can affect targeting solutions for small unit aggressor/defender tactics.
But that is just crazy talk at this point.
If the structure inside the moon has defenses then all they need to do is find degate.
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A decent 2nd part would be great to continue this story. It is the interruption that drives me insane 🤬🤬🤬🤬
The ending on this story sucks
Why is the captain scaled but her comm officer is furred? They are supposed to be the same race/species.
"You can't take on three warships by yourself," she says to the guy who has just done exactly that -- twice.
Story is very predictable. Several trite phrases are repeated over and over again.
So they go down to investigate a structure, and the XO is surprised to find ... a structure. Ooookay, then.
Poor AI pronunciation.
Lame ending