Alien Explorers Uncover Ruins of Legendary Human Juggernaut | HFY Full Story
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Now I want to run a D&D style campaign where the "dungeon" is a derelict spaceship that was mostly buried when it crash landed, but still has some functioning security systems.
GURPS is your friend for a campaign like that .
@@Dr.Westside thanks, I will look into it.
Expedition to the Barrier Peaks. D&D adventure module 1st edition, published in 1980.
There was a follow up to that a little less published. I remember having played White Plume Mountain around that time. Fun times man. Edited for sprelling.
That gives me AvP vibes...
Ahh! The zorgans again, they get
Everywhere. 😮
It could be better... Try make a map of the timeline, when and where individuals are interacting, and where they are at certain times. Also keep track of the location of all elements in the story. As it is, they left the planet twice?
Also, do not jump from one critical point to another, maybe they should have had a bit more time to explore the big ship, first woken the AI that helped them with repair, after that the enemies could have entered and made them hastily have to flee, with a somewhat working ship.
these stories are generated by AI.
@@Firestar-hk3lq
it might be so, but they should be proof read before publishing...
They suck...
but I guess it is all autogenerated? AI text/content, AI images and automatic uploading... No work at all...
All complaints aside it was a great story
Guy's say what you will. I liked it's lovely creative twists in every bend, the friendship and bond created between enemies, the search and fight for a dream, the understanding that what you thought was a noble legacy of the human race turned out its darker side a distroyer of worlds. Truly guy's i love creative in every form it may come, keep up the good work 😊😊😊😊😊
So, how did the zorgons go from an unknown entity for thousands of years, to a galactic menace threatening the aliens?
There is only so many way's you can say "The fate or sake of the Galaxy". Enjoyable story though 🎉😅
These stories are rather choppy. Its all over the place as though its going through different potential story lines of the same story.
Love the story but about to erase UA-cam cause of commercials
I loved the story, it is unsettling to see your stories on other yt channels though.
Well I have enjoyed it. 😊
Great story.
Like this story
I liked the storie keep it up
Love the story should make a movie
Not even pages whole chapters out of sjequence
I really thing someone confused the words dreadnought and juggernaut...
The Dreadnought is their ships the Juggernaut is there ai
This would be great. If it wasn't for all the damn ads
If you use Brave you won't have any ads.
Wasn't there a comedy movie, about an assassin trying to kill his target; but just couldn't.
Seems it went from the captain to the doctor going to save the planet
Get your pages strait 59:05
Aliens will fear humanity
Too many ads. I can't finish.
Would of been a really good story if edit was done correctly and a lil bit of thought in how you switch from one character story too the next but story really good and the frozen captain could of been a better bit to turn into a larger part of story got a bit from most modern stories like stargate universe and ship and person combined .
Anyone know where i could find some more stuff like this where humans are considered acient and well no longer around but maybe still alive hidden somewhere just kinda dormant more or less like this perfably more well written since uh juggernaught cant even move its nav and engines were destroyed and while idk how hold if theres enough dust to even see while its dark that thing must be old old because while it may have some power no way its space worthy if it crashed and has hull breaches with everyone dead but the captain in cyro and also uh i get hes old and what not but why does it sound like he was dead even affter they found him alive i get they cant get him out yet but still
Good idea for a story. Ok they find a human ship but are surprised to find a human crew? The ship didn't have engines but it works after the team finds it? Then they never heard of the zorgon but they were on top of them the whole time? Where was the ship they came in?
Its 100% An ai written story without any proofreading or editing.
Oki
I understand ads but is every 10 seconds really necessary? And it’s 2 ads every time. I know that the channel maybe can’t do anything about the amount of ads and where they are on the video but @youtube can maybe do something.
Again I understand ads and has nothing against them but 2 ads every 10 seconds is just not it
Wait! Isn't the original Capt still in stasis in the med bay?
Is this the same krell as in forbidden planet?
Hello, my name is Marcelo, where did you imagine the name of the Zorgans?
Thank you
We Wuz Krell
How can a skeliton stay together when all else rotted away and if rotted how can the uniform still be bits left
I really like the story line. But after a scene, it back tracked and read the same scene, just a tweak different. Not cool.
Never heard such unreal nonsense before. How likely is it that a ship that has been hidden for a thousand years will be found and at the same moment an enemy will appear, who has also not been heard from for a thousand years? And then suddenly the wrecked ship becomes a fully airworthy ship and escapes the planet 2 times? Who wrote such nonsense? At least you could stick to the timeline and be consistent with your story.
Yup, sounds like AI generated trash.
Shhh. Leave the AI alone. It's trying its best.
Yeah, the fact that they'd never heard of the Zorgons and that Humans were mere myth should have meant this story was leading to something more "carry on the human legacy" or "the humans were so advanced, even their dead can be brought back to life if we repair the damaged power components and breathe new life into their unknowably hyper advanced medical bay".
At 14 or so minutes in, I was fully expecting the AI to tell them that this wasn't actually an AI, it's the digitized consciousness of the actual human captain.
Then have him request aide.
If they accept, he then walks them through the process of restoring the medical bay technology to a functional enough point that it can clone new bodies for the crew from DNA samples and medical profiles kept on file.
As well as upload the digitized consciousnesses of all the crew to the clones of their old bodies. Say that each crewmember's conciousness was saved by their armor (or some component of their uniforms, like something along the lines of the Star Trek communicator badges) at the moment of death and transmitted back to the ship's computer.
Hence S-F
Ai
so mankind is already extinct?
Started out decent, but then excessive repeated phrases and words, back tracking in the story , which broke the continuity.
So the "explorers" went from looking around an ancient derelict to competently launching the suddenly fully-operative dreadnaught, with working engines, shields, and weapons?
Just a BIT of inconsistency... don't you think?
And then there's the inconsistent timeline.
They went from escaping in the lifepods, the core stablized and the enemy leader apparently killed as the ship purged itself, to being back in battle on the dreadnaught, with the core destablizing and about to blow as they...once again...battle the Zargon leader.
These are rookie mistakes.
Don't y'all proofread?
A great story, but it...and the readers...deserve better editing.
And whatever happened to the captain in stasis?
Dr. Corbin woke up, why not the captain?
story often read out of sequence... spoiled a decient story. AI mispronounced a number of words too
Yeah i dont really care for this one, the time line doesn't make sense. Stating explorers discovered an crashed human ship thousands of years old long after humans became myth and legend but apparently the war that wasn't mentioned beforehand is still going on and nearly every decision they make determines "the fate of the Galaxy" that phrase got annoying real quick.
I'm going to have to agree with one of the other comments this sound like an AI generated story
Why does he keep repeating him self.
What a crap AI story.. I understand what the algorithm was trying to do, but it failed. The lack of "memory" and real awareness of a framework for a story meant that the program basically keeps repeating sections of the story over and over again, slightly different each time, sometime with dead characters coming back to life, sometimes the plot just rewinds and events that were exposited are no longer the case and a new reality emerges, sometimes with new characters and enemies just appearing out of the blue...
He really talks too much I
wish he would just tell the story it's not a bad story line but the bs is way overboard.
The ship was damaged so bad it crash landed. "Technology a Is millennia ahead of ours". And you a non human, suddenly know english, spelling, coding and military terms. Are going to get the ship to take off. After the humans who were on it couldn't. And you did not do any mechanical repairs.
To far fetched even if it was anime. Down vote. Did not finish. 😢
Sorry but this story is full of illogical and straight nonsense. Dyson sphere shook? From fire of few ships?
This is a really terrible and repetitive AI written story. The timeline jumps constantly and it's full of plot holes. Can you at least proof read what you're gonna post before you waste our time
Jumps back and forth a dozen zorgons turns into countless and too much repeated his fingers flew over the keys and such. One minute they were in escape pods and a second later they were running and fighting 😂😂
Hello, my name is Marcelo, where did you imagine the name of the Zorgans?
Thank you.