As he came into the window It was the sound of a crescendo He came into her apartment He left the bloodstains on the carpet She ran underneath the table He could see she was unable So she ran into the bedroom She was struck down It was her doom Annie, are you okay? So, Annie, are you okay? Are you okay, Annie? Annie, are you okay? So, Annie, are you okay? Are you okay, Annie? Annie, are you okay? So, Annie, are you okay? Are you okay, Annie? Annie, are you okay? So, Annie, are you okay? Are you okay, Annie? Annie, are you okay? Will you tell us that you're okay? There's a sign in the window That he struck you - a crescendo, Annie He came into your apartment He left the bloodstains on the carpet Then you ran into the bedroom You were struck down It was your doom Annie, are you okay? So, Annie, are you okay? Are you okay, Annie? You've been hit by You've been hit by a smooth criminal Ow! Ow! Aw! Annie, are you okay? (I don't know) Will you tell us that you're okay? (I don't know) There's a sound at the window (I don't know) Then he struck you, a crescendo Annie? (I don't know) He came into your apartment (I don't know) Left bloodstains on the carpet (I don't know why, baby) And then you ran into the bedroom (help me) You were struck down It was your doom Annie (dag gone it) Annie, are you okay? So, Annie, are you okay? Are you okay, Annie? You've been hit by You've been hit by a smooth criminal
hey man this is actually really good! i love the sound you got on this just 2 things I'd say: first IMO the guitar is too loud, I'd bring it down a little bit, also is it a vst guitar?? and the second thing is id recommend something like SSD5 (free) or Superior Drummer (paid) if you want to get some nice sounding drums here, though the drumeo source is fine. apart from that amazing work!!!
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oh and also i forgot, you missed the sawtooth synth in the pre-chorus and the horns before the chimpanzee part
Hey man, thank you so much for the feedback! i'm glad you enjoyed it. i'll definitely take your suggestions in for the next one. To answer your questions, yes, it's a VST guitar. i'll work on adjusting the volume and look into those drum plugins you mentioned. Thanks for pointing out the missed sounds too, i'll make sure to not miss them next time. 🤝
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@@prodstphntysm for taking the time to read my rambling!! skskdk if you'd like i could make my attempt to play guitars on this
That’s wonderful.. kindly continue for more of Mj Songs
Thank you! More MJ songs are on the way! Stay tuned!
Please make they don't care about us instrumental please
As he came into the window
It was the sound of a crescendo
He came into her apartment
He left the bloodstains on the carpet
She ran underneath the table
He could see she was unable
So she ran into the bedroom
She was struck down
It was her doom
Annie, are you okay?
So, Annie, are you okay?
Are you okay, Annie?
Annie, are you okay?
So, Annie, are you okay?
Are you okay, Annie?
Annie, are you okay?
So, Annie, are you okay?
Are you okay, Annie?
Annie, are you okay?
So, Annie, are you okay?
Are you okay, Annie?
Annie, are you okay?
Will you tell us that you're okay?
There's a sign in the window
That he struck you - a crescendo, Annie
He came into your apartment
He left the bloodstains on the carpet
Then you ran into the bedroom
You were struck down
It was your doom
Annie, are you okay?
So, Annie, are you okay?
Are you okay, Annie?
You've been hit by
You've been hit by a smooth criminal
Ow!
Ow!
Aw!
Annie, are you okay? (I don't know)
Will you tell us that you're okay? (I don't know)
There's a sound at the window (I don't know)
Then he struck you, a crescendo Annie? (I don't know)
He came into your apartment (I don't know)
Left bloodstains on the carpet (I don't know why, baby)
And then you ran into the bedroom (help me)
You were struck down
It was your doom Annie (dag gone it)
Annie, are you okay?
So, Annie, are you okay?
Are you okay, Annie?
You've been hit by
You've been hit by a smooth criminal
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hey man this is actually really good! i love the sound you got on this
just 2 things I'd say: first IMO the guitar is too loud, I'd bring it down a little bit, also is it a vst guitar??
and the second thing is id recommend something like SSD5 (free) or Superior Drummer (paid) if you want to get some nice sounding drums here, though the drumeo source is fine.
apart from that amazing work!!!
oh and also i forgot, you missed the sawtooth synth in the pre-chorus and the horns before the chimpanzee part
Hey man, thank you so much for the feedback! i'm glad you enjoyed it. i'll definitely take your suggestions in for the next one. To answer your questions, yes, it's a VST guitar. i'll work on adjusting the volume and look into those drum plugins you mentioned. Thanks for pointing out the missed sounds too, i'll make sure to not miss them next time. 🤝
@@prodstphntysm for taking the time to read my rambling!! skskdk
if you'd like i could make my attempt to play guitars on this
@ No problem at all!! I'd love to hear your guitar playing on my tracks! Feel free to message me so we can discuss things. Looking forward to it man!
@@prodstphn alr! i just talked to you via Instagram