Good story! The only thing i would change is all the bunk beds moving at the camp or the huge family bed being moved, or the way the brother was kidnapped - like it would have been better to leave out stuff that is just physically impossible, if you're going to make the villain realistic (and not some ghost) in the end.
Yeah, I like the story overall but I feel its strange to present it as "it was just some guy" at the end. Between the camera malfunctioning, him making the brother vanish, etc. it felt imploausable. I guess maybe we can assume that that guy has some limited superpowers that he used to torment one kid/young adult every night? But like, he dragged a whole guy with a bed to the middle of the forest for a 2 hour walk but couldn't get out of a fallen closet?
"But like, he dragged a whole guy with a bed to the middle of the forest for a 2 hour walk but couldn't get out of a fallen closet?" Lol you're right, i didn't even think about it. Did he fall headfirst into his sleep gas mask or what?
Your cadence was consistent and even though I think I may have heard this somewhere else I rather enjoyed hearing again because the narration had decent inflection which is something some creators struggle with. With this not being the case, my only real criticism is a couple of typos.
For some reason this comment bothered me, I guess it was the criticism part . . Your only criticism?? I don't recall him asking for feedback . Plus the typos are probably 100% computer generated captions so shrug
@@ryan_star I don't recall asking you for your opinion either yet here we are. How about you fuck off and if he has criticism for my trying to help improve content let him say it instead?
@@ryan_star you should be happy the mods deleted my first reply. Because it highlighted just how dumb that statement was and it wasn't very nice. I am not a nice person. Maybe keep your unsolicited opinions to your self and let the channel handle it. Because I can guarantee if they had a problem with my input I would have already heard from them about it.
@@ryan_star say what you will but I'm not the one trying to look like some kinda White Knight on the internet because a random person suggested typos exist. Which may have simply not been noticed in editing. I get the impression that you probably wouldn't want someone else to mischaracterize anything you said. They weren't even major and you probably missed the interchangeable use of one and 1 too and are just being obtuse.
Yes! Macabre Horror has been a constant companion the past month. I also love Lighthouse Horror and Viildith22. Mr. Creeps is not my fav- nothing personal, just not a huge fan of his narration style. Mr. Sinister is climbing to my top 5 👻
@mippettes I forgot about lighthouse, but I don't know the other one. I'll have to check it out . As for Mr. creeps, for me , I like the way he does it, but it's okay, you don't.
@@RaeRewmy guess is you'll really like Viidith. There's a channel called Don't Fall Asleep I recommend too - it's a small channel, just barely hit 1000 subs but he's an audiobook narrator who posts every Friday & usually has pretty original stories.
This story disappointed me. There is absolutely no way this was a real person and not supernatural. How did he move the whole camp without anybody waking up??
Hmm.. honest critique? I loved the story but the ending… idk. Felt rushed a bit. Tell me HOW this weirdo ended up there in the first place- some link my mind can make lol. I also would’ve liked resolution to the brother since this was not some kind of supernatural event. Overall, it was a smooth listen that kept me intrigued until the end. ❤ thank you for the story, writer and thank you for the narration, Mr. Sinister ❤
All the comments are saying "it's just a man??? Lame!!!" but I feel like the man was the brother, and the actual entity gave up out of frustration? Idk maybe that's just me.
No man I got that vibe as well. But imagine waking up at night at summer camp to pee then leaving you're cabin and seeing a creepy guy reassembling bunk beds outside in the dark next unconscious campers
Good story! The only thing i would change is all the bunk beds moving at the camp or the huge family bed being moved, or the way the brother was kidnapped - like it would have been better to leave out stuff that is just physically impossible, if you're going to make the villain realistic (and not some ghost) in the end.
Yeah, I like the story overall but I feel its strange to present it as "it was just some guy" at the end. Between the camera malfunctioning, him making the brother vanish, etc. it felt imploausable.
I guess maybe we can assume that that guy has some limited superpowers that he used to torment one kid/young adult every night? But like, he dragged a whole guy with a bed to the middle of the forest for a 2 hour walk but couldn't get out of a fallen closet?
"But like, he dragged a whole guy with a bed to the middle of the forest for a 2 hour walk but couldn't get out of a fallen closet?"
Lol you're right, i didn't even think about it. Did he fall headfirst into his sleep gas mask or what?
Your cadence was consistent and even though I think I may have heard this somewhere else I rather enjoyed hearing again because the narration had decent inflection which is something some creators struggle with. With this not being the case, my only real criticism is a couple of typos.
For some reason this comment bothered me, I guess it was the criticism part . . Your only criticism?? I don't recall him asking for feedback . Plus the typos are probably 100% computer generated captions so shrug
@@ryan_star I don't recall asking you for your opinion either yet here we are. How about you fuck off and if he has criticism for my trying to help improve content let him say it instead?
@@ryan_star you should be happy the mods deleted my first reply. Because it highlighted just how dumb that statement was and it wasn't very nice. I am not a nice person. Maybe keep your unsolicited opinions to your self and let the channel handle it. Because I can guarantee if they had a problem with my input I would have already heard from them about it.
@@robertstewart448 🎻
@@ryan_star say what you will but I'm not the one trying to look like some kinda White Knight on the internet because a random person suggested typos exist. Which may have simply not been noticed in editing. I get the impression that you probably wouldn't want someone else to mischaracterize anything you said. They weren't even major and you probably missed the interchangeable use of one and 1 too and are just being obtuse.
I absolutely love the weirder stories like this one
What a mysterious story, excellent!
Another great yt channel is Macabre horror for anyone who wants more stories to listen to 😊 oh and also, Mr.Creeps
Yes! Macabre Horror has been a constant companion the past month. I also love Lighthouse Horror and Viildith22. Mr. Creeps is not my fav- nothing personal, just not a huge fan of his narration style. Mr. Sinister is climbing to my top 5 👻
@mippettes I forgot about lighthouse, but I don't know the other one. I'll have to check it out . As for Mr. creeps, for me , I like the way he does it, but it's okay, you don't.
@@RaeRewmy guess is you'll really like Viidith. There's a channel called Don't Fall Asleep I recommend too - it's a small channel, just barely hit 1000 subs but he's an audiobook narrator who posts every Friday & usually has pretty original stories.
Love starting the day with a new Mr. Sinister story
This story disappointed me. There is absolutely no way this was a real person and not supernatural. How did he move the whole camp without anybody waking up??
You should ask the dark somnium if you can have a partnership to help produce more content bc I think you are really good at reading
Hey everybody have a frightening Friday night 🌙 🌒🌓🌔🌕🌖 always glad to see one of these stories.
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A strange story, I liked it though
Hmm.. honest critique?
I loved the story but the ending… idk. Felt rushed a bit. Tell me HOW this weirdo ended up there in the first place- some link my mind can make lol. I also would’ve liked resolution to the brother since this was not some kind of supernatural event.
Overall, it was a smooth listen that kept me intrigued until the end. ❤ thank you for the story, writer and thank you for the narration, Mr. Sinister ❤
All the comments are saying "it's just a man??? Lame!!!" but I feel like the man was the brother, and the actual entity gave up out of frustration? Idk maybe that's just me.
No man I got that vibe as well. But imagine waking up at night at summer camp to pee then leaving you're cabin and seeing a creepy guy reassembling bunk beds outside in the dark next unconscious campers
I'm going to have to unsubscribe from you. I believe you have run out of stuff to read about.
Just know that people are laughing at you.
I disagree
@@RaeRew You can disagree. The order wasn't to agree with it. The order was simply to know it.
And know it you do.
@devinpaul9026 my comment was meant for crafter not to urs 😅
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