My guess it is an EMP. So they either had a nuke onboard or overloaded their warpdrives or something to cause the EMP. So the ships systems were off and they were simply dead in space but still heading for their destination, the enemy ship. Using EMP waves when facing multiple enemies isnt that smart as you will shut off your friends as well.
@@markusburstrom3485the talosari are described as technologically superior by a large margin. Nukes and emps aren't obscure enough weapons for a galaxy conquering race to not develop a dedense against. I vote plothole
These are the best stories, and having outstanding story tellers relate them makes these the best choices of all of the Sci-Fi series I have listened. Keep up the good work, Great stories, outstanding talent.
Way better in my opinion, we see your face, the the story continue with the same voice, thus we know that's you, and yeah... we enjoy the background images with only your voice over knowing that's not an AI because we saw you in the beginning ;) So yes, I prefer this format of this very video.
How did we go from being superior or equal to a few engineers playing soldiers.. . .... then ofcause a magic bullet. Nicely read . Stop jumping 100 pages at a time
With the ship at first encounter disabled, why the heck would the human commander ram his ship into his opponent? Cruise up in a leisurely fashion, smack a few railgun rounds into the hull, expand your breech from there. And subsequent encounters, which are not documented in the story the "wave of energy" is totally useless, after taking down their shields in the first encounter? Yeah, you're missing 50-100 pages of narrative jumping to a devastated Earth.
Is there a single HFY out there not using the phrase "ruthless determination"? ^^ At this point I'm actually just saddened by the lack of new phrases or explanations in these stories. Can't be that hard to come up with something new...
@@InDadequate I'd also go out and grab Voyager 1 and then drop it off secretly at Carl Sagan's closest living relative's house, right in the front yard
Well... Uh... The talosari had no reason to raise shields for just another routine primitive species. And then were hit with the EMP before they could raise them. Plus, the EMP likely took out anything requiring digital systems on the human vessel, or perhaps even the analog ones too. Severely crippling the ship.
Plenty of nice ideas tho. Story feels like author had a start point and endpoint, just didn't know how to coherently go from one to the other. Narration is indeed great. I respect the presence of a real person taking the time to personally make the channel "Human" 😁
@@PhlyingPhil pretty sure many of the stories are AI generated. So many have major plot holes, repeating the same thing etc...i agree the narration is good. Even with the flawed stories I still seem to be addicted to listening to them. Lol
@@einyv I've also noticed that in a fw of the stories lately, one was like 1.5hours long, and im pretty sure it just told the same story twice from a different perspective for like 2/3's of it
@@InDadequate I saw that too just difficult because they all basically have the same title but I the one I saw had the shifting perspective, the earth force, one the earth force was protecting and the alien creature with psychic abilities perspective.
Real voice is so much better than tts to make stories more lively and rich, much appreciated effort deserving of my sub😃👍 Storie itself is non-sensical from beginning to end tho... Dialogs and humans dynamic are decently written but lacks some depth imho 4/10 HOW can an alien race, "dominant" for millenias be THAT dumb? Have they never encoutered, solar flares or EMPs, predators anywhere AND can't remember how use their own tools/brain to feed their AI data to devise ANY new counter-measures at all? Seriously? Unless they "dominated" empty space and no others had space faring tech before? Need more work on research and logic to make good Sci-Fi, not just techno-babble-sciency words and set it in space. Would recommend the author writing class and reading more of the giants in the genre. Not just unpublished web-authors, so many are between complete trash and passable, too few rise above a 6/10 imho. (Not an expert mind you, just an aging reader who had a lot of time in the past 35 years and declining vision, sorry if you think I'm too harsh)
I happen to be a small-time sci-fy writer. These are just hfy stories, no flak to the reader please- That said, yeah, I agree, the jumps are jolting. It can easily be explained that the EMP only was effective because they had no protecting shields up. I mean, it's a primitive vessel, no one would be so dumb to attack like that, right? Also, you've just fried your own systems power-so uh... the ship that used the EMP is now disabled. Except for analog powered engines and stuff. So their own vessel is pretty crippled. The question just is... why? Sure, they're snooty as hell, but does that warrant blowing up an EMP and then suiciding into another ship? Literally, WHY? I'm siding with the aliens here, it was logical that a ship wouldn't just attack and suicide into you for no reason. It just seems like a contrived premise. I know, i know. They like certian things to happen. Writer's perrogative to be doing things that make them happy. But can't you at least make it easier on us?
Wait so if the first talosari ship was disabled remotely by the human vessel why arent the humans utilizing it in the war? Either the person who wrote this can’t right coherently or it’s written by AI
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I watch this channel for the visual narrator and the good upbeat stories. This vid has only 1/2 of the equation. 7 seconds at the beginning doesn't count.
Are these writers able to use some other word than the same one over and over? I am really tired of hearing about determination. Its nauseating. Every single time they use it more and more.
Whoever wrote this should’ve had someone proofread this. It is VERY clumsy and at times so hard to follow it’s nonsensical. It seems like a LOT got skipped over. Pretty sure this sort of thing would be a low grade if it were a writing assignment.
Way too much plot holes and inconstistencies. Went from having the advantage of screwing with Talosari electronics to going fully desperate terrorist brained kamikaze mode. And the story itself doesn't do much to justify blowing up the planet other than than simply stating that humanity is in the brink of extinction, which is - as much as barbaric and animalistic humans as we know are especially with nothing to lose- still unrealistic/not grounded enough and ruins the immersion. EDIT: The story would maybe work if I completely shut down the left side of my brain but with sci-fi stories I expect to be intellectually stimulated and immersed at least within the context of the plot, even if some things doesn't make a lot of sense. Humans seem way too barbaric and braindead here, and HFY is the last thing that comes to mind. Loved the narration tho.
IKR? what happened to the weapon that disabled the first ship?? and what was it? some sort of EMP blast. I find it unbelievable that earth would be unprepared for an attack, not with human paranoia..
@@beingsneaky Probably doesn't work through shields and the aliens didn't have their shields up because who would be dumb enough to attack unprovoked? So what, you annoyed them by being snooty, are they going to WAIT WHAT THE FU- I mean, the sheer volitility of the humans in the beginning is almost memable. Like, you could throw a Vibe Check meme on the first 5 minutes and it'd land, but as a story? Meh. Just remember, human narration=good, even if story=bad
Why was humanity's war efforts being lead by someone with such a low rank? Doesn't make sense. And it's clear that humans were winning despite Anya's incompetent leadership. Tired of hearing stories of strong, independent, Wahmen. Enough already!
I like strong independant women! It's not that it has a strong independant woman in it that makes it bad, it's the story making no fucking sense that makes it bad and drags all the characters into the flaming hell with it.
This is stupid. Human tactics where predictable and unsustainable, and Telasari could have easily adjusted. Fine as a fiction story, but takes way too many creative liberty to be conceivable even in the imagination. Same would be as saying everything was on the enemy side but we where immortal, meh.
Thank you so much for the real voice narration. Makes all the AI voice stories unbearable to listen to.
If Earth had the advantage in that first encounter to disable everything, why would they be worried? What happened to that weapon? Major plot hole?
I was wondering the same thing
Same here. These stories are good but have a lot of plot holes in them.
My guess it is an EMP. So they either had a nuke onboard or overloaded their warpdrives or something to cause the EMP. So the ships systems were off and they were simply dead in space but still heading for their destination, the enemy ship. Using EMP waves when facing multiple enemies isnt that smart as you will shut off your friends as well.
@@markusburstrom3485the talosari are described as technologically superior by a large margin. Nukes and emps aren't obscure enough weapons for a galaxy conquering race to not develop a dedense against. I vote plothole
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These are the best stories, and having outstanding story tellers relate them makes these the best choices of all of the Sci-Fi series I have listened. Keep up the good work, Great stories, outstanding talent.
The visuals are good, but the story has holes, wheres the tech that disabled the aliens ships?
Some of you preferred not to have the cam throughout the video, let me know what you think to this new format :)
I liked the preface in the beginning too! Sometimes a cold open isn’t always needed :)
Way better in my opinion, we see your face, the the story continue with the same voice, thus we know that's you, and yeah... we enjoy the background images with only your voice over knowing that's not an AI because we saw you in the beginning ;)
So yes, I prefer this format of this very video.
How did we go from being superior or equal to a few engineers playing soldiers..
. .... then ofcause a magic bullet.
Nicely read . Stop jumping 100 pages at a time
You narrations are nicely done, thanks for your work.
Glad you like them!
You pick a warm planet we humans we never back down
What do you get when invincible aliens meet humans?
The domesticated cat.
With the ship at first encounter disabled, why the heck would the human commander ram his ship into his opponent? Cruise up in a leisurely fashion, smack a few railgun rounds into the hull, expand your breech from there. And subsequent encounters, which are not documented in the story the "wave of energy" is totally useless, after taking down their shields in the first encounter? Yeah, you're missing 50-100 pages of narrative jumping to a devastated Earth.
Was this written using AI, it feels so incoherent?
Thank you for showing your real person saying stories.I've been so screwed off of a I so many times
Ah someone who can effortlessly say effortlessly
Is there a single HFY out there not using the phrase "ruthless determination"? ^^ At this point I'm actually just saddened by the lack of new phrases or explanations in these stories. Can't be that hard to come up with something new...
Imagine if this was our intro into the galactic stage.
If I had a spaceship I'd paint insults on the moon
way to think big
A penis sign visable from earth, like the nazka lines but on the moon
@@InDadequate I'd also go out and grab Voyager 1 and then drop it off secretly at Carl Sagan's closest living relative's house, right in the front yard
What happened to the EMP weapon on first contact? Why did the humans attacked on first contact?
Well... Uh... The talosari had no reason to raise shields for just another routine primitive species.
And then were hit with the EMP before they could raise them.
Plus, the EMP likely took out anything requiring digital systems on the human vessel, or perhaps even the analog ones too. Severely crippling the ship.
i appreciate a human narrator
I'm pretty sure this is only the second time in my life I have heard the word 'abattoir' used.
Love the tron logo
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Really good narration
Narration is great, story is devastatingly flawed.
Plenty of nice ideas tho. Story feels like author had a start point and endpoint, just didn't know how to coherently go from one to the other.
Narration is indeed great. I respect the presence of a real person taking the time to personally make the channel "Human" 😁
@@PhlyingPhil pretty sure many of the stories are AI generated. So many have major plot holes, repeating the same thing etc...i agree the narration is good. Even with the flawed stories I still seem to be addicted to listening to them. Lol
@@einyv I've also noticed that in a fw of the stories lately, one was like 1.5hours long, and im pretty sure it just told the same story twice from a different perspective for like 2/3's of it
@@InDadequate I saw that too just difficult because they all basically have the same title but I the one I saw had the shifting perspective, the earth force, one the earth force was protecting and the alien creature with psychic abilities perspective.
I love the narrator format. But the story, who started the fight, and why?
Just found this OMG Want more!!!!
NEVER give humanity a common enemy. We are next level crazy.
4000 quatloo's the humans cannot be contained!
Hmmm... utilizing the "Devine Wind!"
Nothing like knocking the haughty off their thrones.
its why historically it was a well known and unwritten rule to never invade Russia in the winter.
a real human narrator...auto like
Real voice is so much better than tts to make stories more lively and rich, much appreciated effort deserving of my sub😃👍
Storie itself is non-sensical from beginning to end tho... Dialogs and humans dynamic are decently written but lacks some depth imho 4/10
HOW can an alien race, "dominant" for millenias be THAT dumb? Have they never encoutered, solar flares or EMPs, predators anywhere AND can't remember how use their own tools/brain to feed their AI data to devise ANY new counter-measures at all? Seriously? Unless they "dominated" empty space and no others had space faring tech before?
Need more work on research and logic to make good Sci-Fi, not just techno-babble-sciency words and set it in space. Would recommend the author writing class and reading more of the giants in the genre. Not just unpublished web-authors, so many are between complete trash and passable, too few rise above a 6/10 imho. (Not an expert mind you, just an aging reader who had a lot of time in the past 35 years and declining vision, sorry if you think I'm too harsh)
I happen to be a small-time sci-fy writer. These are just hfy stories, no flak to the reader please-
That said, yeah, I agree, the jumps are jolting. It can easily be explained that the EMP only was effective because they had no protecting shields up. I mean, it's a primitive vessel, no one would be so dumb to attack like that, right?
Also, you've just fried your own systems power-so uh... the ship that used the EMP is now disabled. Except for analog powered engines and stuff. So their own vessel is pretty crippled.
The question just is... why? Sure, they're snooty as hell, but does that warrant blowing up an EMP and then suiciding into another ship? Literally, WHY? I'm siding with the aliens here, it was logical that a ship wouldn't just attack and suicide into you for no reason.
It just seems like a contrived premise. I know, i know. They like certian things to happen. Writer's perrogative to be doing things that make them happy. But can't you at least make it easier on us?
If I'm going to Hell, I'm taking you with me.
As an honor guard!
Humanity is TERRIFYING
I appreciate the narration too, but I gotta ask you. Where did you find the story this is like some deeply confused ChatGPT thing.
I don't get how we have an EMP on a spaceship But no other weapons
Do they want exterminatus?
Because that's how you get exterminatus.
My good sir they exterminatus'ed themselves and still kept up the fight.
Wait so if the first talosari ship was disabled remotely by the human vessel why arent the humans utilizing it in the war? Either the person who wrote this can’t right coherently or it’s written by AI
i've this strange need to play mass effect again
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Why did the aliens tell them that they were going to exterminate them? Just do it. Don't talk about it.
That... Is not a particularly logical species...
Just egotistical who lie to themselves.
I watch this channel for the visual narrator and the good upbeat stories. This vid has only 1/2 of the equation. 7 seconds at the beginning doesn't count.
Like a lot of others. I prefer to have you read rather than AI or other reading apps that others use.
Are these writers able to use some other word than the same one over and over? I am really tired of hearing about determination. Its nauseating. Every single time they use it more and more.
Whoever wrote this should’ve had someone proofread this. It is VERY clumsy and at times so hard to follow it’s nonsensical. It seems like a LOT got skipped over. Pretty sure this sort of thing would be a low grade if it were a writing assignment.
Way too much plot holes and inconstistencies. Went from having the advantage of screwing with Talosari electronics to going fully desperate terrorist brained kamikaze mode. And the story itself doesn't do much to justify blowing up the planet other than than simply stating that humanity is in the brink of extinction, which is - as much as barbaric and animalistic humans as we know are especially with nothing to lose- still unrealistic/not grounded enough and ruins the immersion.
EDIT: The story would maybe work if I completely shut down the left side of my brain but with sci-fi stories I expect to be intellectually stimulated and immersed at least within the context of the plot, even if some things doesn't make a lot of sense. Humans seem way too barbaric and braindead here, and HFY is the last thing that comes to mind.
Loved the narration tho.
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A foolish story. It started out fine, but dissolved into crap, and the ending was just plain stupid.
IKR? what happened to the weapon that disabled the first ship?? and what was it? some sort of EMP blast. I find it unbelievable that earth would be unprepared for an attack, not with human paranoia..
@@beingsneaky Probably doesn't work through shields and the aliens didn't have their shields up because who would be dumb enough to attack unprovoked? So what, you annoyed them by being snooty, are they going to WAIT WHAT THE FU-
I mean, the sheer volitility of the humans in the beginning is almost memable. Like, you could throw a Vibe Check meme on the first 5 minutes and it'd land, but as a story? Meh.
Just remember, human narration=good, even if story=bad
Meh.
Applaud human narration, but story selection a bit meh, this ine is full of narrative leaps and ill-defined plot lines.
Why was humanity's war efforts being lead by someone with such a low rank? Doesn't make sense. And it's clear that humans were winning despite Anya's incompetent leadership. Tired of hearing stories of strong, independent, Wahmen. Enough already!
I like strong independant women!
It's not that it has a strong independant woman in it that makes it bad, it's the story making no fucking sense that makes it bad and drags all the characters into the flaming hell with it.
YA STORY DOESN'T WORK
crap
Edit: Shit Story!
This is stupid. Human tactics where predictable and unsustainable, and Telasari could have easily adjusted. Fine as a fiction story, but takes way too many creative liberty to be conceivable even in the imagination. Same would be as saying everything was on the enemy side but we where immortal, meh.
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Bravo.