Written by someone who has obviously never served aboard a combat vessel. We don't shout, we don't scream, and we certainly don't panic in the face of certain death. We do our jobs, we support our shipmates, we die with dignity, and we make sure that we take every one of the enemy with us that is possible.
Yeah. On these kinds of scales, even a crime on the scald of genocide could be considered reasonable self defence if the other side threatens your whole species/nation’s existence. Heck, that is basically the unspoken basis for the MAD doctrine. A full on nuclear attack would be genocide, yet it is considered self defence to wave around said genocidal arsenals.
Five minutes stretched into eternity. I had given my attention until there was nothing left to give, but the purple prose stretched on and on in an endless morass, as though I were walking the slow steps up to a courthouse where my internet history was to be exposed to the world. The narrator was amazing and even he couldn't put life into the squelching mess of a story. I looked at the timeline: fifteen minutes of runtime. It was enough. Other brave viewers would have to make the sacrifice. As my brain grew numb and dim I hit the final button which would halt the relentless torrent of words.
Good story, like tue VA's range. The story itself felt kinda off, AI written? Because the Mothership Valkyrie basically sounded like a clapped out transport. The crew's mission profile seemed aimless, the unwillingness to use the Doomsday Weapons incapable of destroying a capital ship . . . . Just didn't make sense to me. But yeah, well spoken, humanity fuckyeah and asymmetric warefare for the win.
Who needs a super massive warship if one can strap a warp drive onto an asteroid and use FTL coms to FTL warp an asteroid into an enemy's ship before he shots at you in the future. FTL coms and warp drive makes changing the immediate past possible.
I love that you read these stories in person, but you ever proofread these first? The ship's not close enough to fire the planet cracking weapon but now it's in the atmosphere? Some of these stories just don't make any sense
You're doing a great job but, please, put the "subscribe message" either at the beginning or the end. It's frankly annoying to be interrupted when engaged in such a great story.
For sure if Humankind even thinks about starting colonies on other planets outside of our solar system, we better have a huge navel fleet to protect them. There are alien species out there, that are hundreds of thousands of years old. We better ask them if it would be OK to put colonies on certain planets.
@@creinicke1000 it disrupts the flow of the story and ruins the immersion. That makes it not only disrespectful to the audience, but the author as well.
What does the mindset of the enemy have to do with anything? The enemy wiped out human worlds drawing first blood. "OOPS we thought you were mean" means nothing. If nothing else any government that had committed to destroying the humans with that much blood and treasure would NOT be able to back out. It wouldn't matter if it was a government of monks, they would not be able to change directions nearer to the end than the beginning. The humans wouldn't be able to make those concessions either. Well past no return. BUT think happy thoughts, I guess.
Clearly who or what-ever wrote this has no understanding of physics in the vacuum of space. Destroying the ship's engines wouldn't stop it. Inertia would carry it on its same trajectory and at its same speed. Such a pathetic "colossal mothership" to be so quickly and easily laid low by fighters within minutes. Sounds like the Death Star except there was no weak point. It makes little sense.
Who'd stop mid battle to open comms and ask what wasThier intentions were? And the admirals transmission what was the point of that....the doomsday weapon not useful against ships, surely they'd have known that before the mission? Waste of a ship, crew and weapon due to a stupid plan that was no plan to begin with, waste of resources that couldn't be replenished and better used elsewhere, wouldn't the weapon be primed and ready at the begining? can tell its an AI story due to all the grim this and grim that, the aliens use genocide and the humans are on the brink of extinction and the humans won't reply inkind? sorry not a good story this time.
As The Doctor once...and likely will have to say many times from now until the end of time: "Sit Down And TALK!" Shame it's such a challenge even with a universal translator
Horriable. Why would she ship stop if it lost its engines ? The device really dependant on the hull of the ship ? The subscribe comershial in the middle.
Hey, not even subscribed and yet i'm early. Congrats, you're infecting my feed. Consider me subscribed now. You do a very good job, and it's a lot different than all that AI stuff.
God damn this video was chock full of ads. It's not fun to listen to. I know UA-cam advertising is important, but 6 advertising blocks are too many in a 40-minute video
Poorly written AI rubbish. Got about 1/3 the way but cant stomach this garbage. For those enjoying a mothership dancing and evading fighters.. gluck.. i can recommend wheels on the bus go round for your next story.
Dont do that either do it at the end or the beginning dint jump in the middle of the story begging for subs and likes it makes me not want to sub and not watch any of your content plz dont do this in the future
The silly voices are an evil distraction. Was thinking if this was for children, but then he screamed at the microfon again. My main attention is on the volume button. Could've put the time to a better use.
Honestly, the interruption asking me to subscribe only makes me want to unsubscribe. Are you sure it’s having a statistically positive effect on your channel’s growth? Setiously, it interrupts the immersion.
Written by someone who has obviously never served aboard a combat vessel.
We don't shout, we don't scream, and we certainly don't panic in the face of certain death.
We do our jobs, we support our shipmates, we die with dignity, and we make sure that we take every one of the enemy with us that is possible.
Exactly 💯💯💯💯😊
Are you a WW2 veteran? Because otherwise pretty sure you don’t know what real danger is. And unless you’ve died how would u know 🤷🏽♂️
@@PhilandSofia haven't wars happened since WW2?
@@RogatkaWR Not that many crazy naval battles.
@@PhilandSofia I am in the Army and he is 100% correct and you are 100% incorrect.
I wouldn't think twice using a planet killer if it meant survival
without planet killers, fck xenos will never find out when they fck around, always better have few hundreds in stock, then need one and dont have
Sometimes, you just gotta crack a planet.
Id use it for fun
@@jimmymillerdragonheart5282On an uninhabited planet, right? Right???
Yeah. On these kinds of scales, even a crime on the scald of genocide could be considered reasonable self defence if the other side threatens your whole species/nation’s existence.
Heck, that is basically the unspoken basis for the MAD doctrine. A full on nuclear attack would be genocide, yet it is considered self defence to wave around said genocidal arsenals.
Why on earth would anyone go into combat with their main weapon on a countdown timer of minutes lmao. That killed it. Talk about manufacturing tension
Five minutes stretched into eternity. I had given my attention until there was nothing left to give, but the purple prose stretched on and on in an endless morass, as though I were walking the slow steps up to a courthouse where my internet history was to be exposed to the world. The narrator was amazing and even he couldn't put life into the squelching mess of a story. I looked at the timeline: fifteen minutes of runtime. It was enough. Other brave viewers would have to make the sacrifice. As my brain grew numb and dim I hit the final button which would halt the relentless torrent of words.
So, so well put.
Lol
Good story, like tue VA's range.
The story itself felt kinda off, AI written? Because the Mothership Valkyrie basically sounded like a clapped out transport. The crew's mission profile seemed aimless, the unwillingness to use the Doomsday Weapons incapable of destroying a capital ship . . . . Just didn't make sense to me.
But yeah, well spoken, humanity fuckyeah and asymmetric warefare for the win.
You execute commands, you dont question them or hold a conversation about them, you do what your told. Especially when its obvious time is short.
Who needs a super massive warship if one can strap a warp drive onto an asteroid and use FTL coms to FTL warp an asteroid into an enemy's ship before he shots at you in the future. FTL coms and warp drive makes changing the immediate past possible.
I love that you read these stories in person, but you ever proofread these first? The ship's not close enough to fire the planet cracking weapon but now it's in the atmosphere? Some of these stories just don't make any sense
You're doing a great job but, please, put the "subscribe message" either at the beginning or the end. It's frankly annoying to be interrupted when engaged in such a great story.
I dont care or mind
@@creinicke1000 Good for you!
@@creinicke1000you are both sharing equally valid opinions. It bugs me a tiny bit. The channel can make the decision to change or not.
It's done like that because people are inately more likely to register it in the middle of the story rather than the beginning or end.
interesting story with an unexpected end
thanks for the narration
Literally Space Battleship Yamato
For sure if Humankind even thinks about starting colonies on other planets outside of our solar system, we better have a huge navel fleet to protect them. There are alien species out there, that are hundreds of thousands of years old. We better ask them if it would be OK to put colonies on certain planets.
Day 3 protesting the interrupting subscription message. Please place at beginning or end!
Why are you upset? It's 2 seconds..
@@creinicke1000 it disrupts the flow of the story and ruins the immersion. That makes it not only disrespectful to the audience, but the author as well.
Just as bad as a UA-cam ad
@@matttori7163 whats a youtube ad? I didnt know it had them
Why come out of FTL hours from target? I can understand stopping in orbit could not work. But if it’s a suicide mission. Strip it down
This seems like a AI written story. The story is a jumble and doesn’t make sense at times.
I am subscribed. 🎉
What does the mindset of the enemy have to do with anything? The enemy wiped out human worlds drawing first blood. "OOPS we thought you were mean" means nothing. If nothing else any government that had committed to destroying the humans with that much blood and treasure would NOT be able to back out. It wouldn't matter if it was a government of monks, they would not be able to change directions nearer to the end than the beginning. The humans wouldn't be able to make those concessions either. Well past no return. BUT think happy thoughts, I guess.
Clearly who or what-ever wrote this has no understanding of physics in the vacuum of space. Destroying the ship's engines wouldn't stop it. Inertia would carry it on its same trajectory and at its same speed. Such a pathetic "colossal mothership" to be so quickly and easily laid low by fighters within minutes. Sounds like the Death Star except there was no weak point. It makes little sense.
i must say i like the ending no losers they both win peace and non aggression is true victory
What happened to the mothership Red line says one thing the story says another
Thanks for actually reading this. Ai sucks rn
But but Captain thats genocide.
Captain "Your right better our people than them right Private?
Good story but too many long commercials. I cacelled my subscription half way thru.
Content makers don't get to choose where and how many commercials will be shown anymore.
Buy premium bud
Title was apparently clickbait. Noted.
Who'd stop mid battle to open comms and ask what wasThier intentions were? And the admirals transmission what was the point of that....the doomsday weapon not useful against ships, surely they'd have known that before the mission? Waste of a ship, crew and weapon due to a stupid plan that was no plan to begin with, waste of resources that couldn't be replenished and better used elsewhere, wouldn't the weapon be primed and ready at the begining? can tell its an AI story due to all the grim this and grim that, the aliens use genocide and the humans are on the brink of extinction and the humans won't reply inkind? sorry not a good story this time.
The story was a hot mess from the start.
As The Doctor once...and likely will have to say many times from now until the end of time: "Sit Down And TALK!"
Shame it's such a challenge even with a universal translator
Started good, broke down quickly, ended horribly.
17:40 Bla bla bla...
Nah! Theodoric of York.
Horriable. Why would she ship stop if it lost its engines ?
The device really dependant on the hull of the ship ?
The subscribe comershial in the middle.
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Hey, not even subscribed and yet i'm early. Congrats, you're infecting my feed. Consider me subscribed now. You do a very good job, and it's a lot different than all that AI stuff.
Welcome aboard!
I know this is old, and youve probably stopped, but for the love of god stop interrupting stories with sub ads
God damn this video was chock full of ads. It's not fun to listen to.
I know UA-cam advertising is important, but 6 advertising blocks are too many in a 40-minute video
what bull
Who/what speaks in this ridiculous fashion?
The story is lame - the way it is narrated does not make it more convincing at all!
No "collosal" mothership and the story is overdramatic.
This ai shit is getting old.
This was just...bad. Also, dial down rhe ham a smidge.
I like the stories but really hate the sudden interruptions makes me want to click away. Luckily I can skip forward for this but it's very irritating.
Why do you have to speak to introduce the story?
It's annoying
most people enjoy seeing that a human narrator is behind this :)
Poorly written AI rubbish. Got about 1/3 the way but cant stomach this garbage. For those enjoying a mothership dancing and evading fighters.. gluck.. i can recommend wheels on the bus go round for your next story.
Dont do that either do it at the end or the beginning dint jump in the middle of the story begging for subs and likes it makes me not want to sub and not watch any of your content plz dont do this in the future
You must really hate tv
The silly voices are an evil distraction. Was thinking if this was for children, but then he screamed at the microfon again. My main attention is on the volume button. Could've put the time to a better use.
Honestly, the interruption asking me to subscribe only makes me want to unsubscribe.
Are you sure it’s having a statistically positive effect on your channel’s growth?
Setiously, it interrupts the immersion.
My lord, this is the worst story so far. Was this written by a thirteen-year old?
Lame story with weak characters and misleading title. Looks like Ai written
Keeps on rambling on…
I will not be watching any more of your stories as the ammount of adds ruins it for me, it is a pity as they are good.
Again with the something "born of" something. It has become irritatingly repetitive and predictable.
Why are you popping up with your hands in my face in the middle of the action? Unliked. Unsubscribed.
oh crying out loud yet another atrocious story badly written with plot holes the size of Jupiter unsubscibed.
utter garbage