(2021 May) How to get an A for your TOK Essay in 4 hours?

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  • @rosiya189
    @rosiya189 3 роки тому +240

    I love how we are all collectively (and eternally) confused over wth TOK is and what we are supposed to be doing 😂

    • @benivory3761
      @benivory3761 3 роки тому +6

      for real like i literally talked to my classmates and we all agreed we did and learned nothing except that i think therfore i am stuff we did at the beginning of y11

  • @fyasserr
    @fyasserr 3 роки тому +177

    2:53 Rubric
    5:18 Structure of the essay
    8:34 Introduction
    12:05 AOK 1
    12:58 Knowledge claim 1
    15:18 Example
    18:29 Counterclaim 1
    19:42 Example
    21:46 Mini conclusion
    22:44 AOK 2
    23:25 Knowledge claim 2
    25:06 Example
    27:44 Counterclaim 2
    30:21 Example
    32:27 Mini conclusion
    33:05 Conclusion

    • @daniellee.8344
      @daniellee.8344 3 роки тому +2

      thank you for this!!

    • @Ghost-hy1tl
      @Ghost-hy1tl 3 роки тому +6

      You sir just did what my stupid TOK teacher couldn’t...... thank you!!!!!

    • @fyasserr
      @fyasserr 3 роки тому

      @@Ghost-hy1tl HAHAHAHA my pleasure

    • @fyasserr
      @fyasserr 3 роки тому

      @@daniellee.8344 no need

    • @claudiacha2536
      @claudiacha2536 3 роки тому

      i love and appreciate you

  • @cankucuk1850
    @cankucuk1850 4 роки тому +194

    Guys appreciate what he is doing, and stop complaining. He is putting his effort and time for all of you, so you can evantually be satisfied with your results.

    • @kadabrar
      @kadabrar 4 роки тому +26

      exactly. chinese jesus deserves our utmost respect

    • @Hustler628
      @Hustler628 3 роки тому +6

      plus, he didnt even monetize it

    • @Manima108
      @Manima108 3 роки тому +15

      whos complaining?

    • @gyuro7988
      @gyuro7988 Рік тому +1

      uh who complained (no one in the comments)??

  • @ariisair
    @ariisair 3 роки тому +47

    as someone with no clue where to start with any TOK essay, I'd like to say thank you for making such a detailed, concise video. So helpful.

  • @jackmoffatt8647
    @jackmoffatt8647 3 роки тому +87

    My Tok essay is due in 4 and a half hours- time to start.

    • @randomguy8115
      @randomguy8115 3 роки тому +2

      Yo did u do it in tine?

    • @jackmoffatt8647
      @jackmoffatt8647 3 роки тому +16

      @@randomguy8115 somehow yes. It actually seemed pretty decent too

    • @NA-lu5wr
      @NA-lu5wr 3 роки тому

      Wow 😀😀😀😀

    • @micahaas
      @micahaas 2 роки тому

      @@jackmoffatt8647 how much did you get?

    • @micahaas
      @micahaas 2 роки тому +2

      mine is due in 3 hours 😍

  • @maksxperia02
    @maksxperia02 3 роки тому +11

    man... i can not paraphrase how much i appreciate this guy!

  • @Parmie_03
    @Parmie_03 3 роки тому +116

    i'm so close to paying someone to write it for me

    • @kim-qr6ek
      @kim-qr6ek 3 роки тому +4

      BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA MOOD

    • @krishkumar4081
      @krishkumar4081 3 роки тому +25

      The essays are easy if you follow this dude's method. I would rather write three of these instead of the EE :(

    • @Parmie_03
      @Parmie_03 3 роки тому +2

      @@krishkumar4081 fr

    • @veronicaadellan4037
      @veronicaadellan4037 3 роки тому +6

      Same, i have to send my final work in like 1 week so im dying

    • @noellebuttgereit228
      @noellebuttgereit228 3 роки тому +6

      @@veronicaadellan4037 I have to submit mine in 12 hours and I'm not even half way done. Lmao I'm dying 😂

  • @aleenaasohail418
    @aleenaasohail418 2 роки тому +4

    This dude single handedly carrying my EE, TOK and Econ grade

  • @shafimishtiaq3587
    @shafimishtiaq3587 4 роки тому +18

    Ryan thank you so much for this video!!! it has given me the outline and what to look for in your essay!! ill read the guide once more and start my essay soon!! i feel like this title was hard but since i understood this i can easily do it on other titles! thnx lov u

  • @soooslaaal8204
    @soooslaaal8204 3 роки тому +3

    oh yes, it's about 24 hours before my deadline and I'm watching this

  • @s.gmoney6983
    @s.gmoney6983 3 роки тому +28

    Thank you for your videos! My essay is due this friday, wish me luck!

    • @AgentCharles522002
      @AgentCharles522002 3 роки тому +3

      why so early

    • @rigdby
      @rigdby 3 роки тому +2

      @@AgentCharles522002 probably to make sure they have it done

    • @claudiacha2536
      @claudiacha2536 3 роки тому

      good luck girly !! hope all is well

    • @rigdby
      @rigdby 3 роки тому

      @@claudiacha2536 thank you!!!

  • @shereenbatra3317
    @shereenbatra3317 4 роки тому +21

    Hi could you also please do the other tok titles too? Please do QUESTION 3 FIRSTTT

  • @lsk4091
    @lsk4091 3 роки тому +1

    Its basically writting tok with 4hours and 33mins in lncluding your video length and youtube ads

  • @Neovrtuos
    @Neovrtuos 3 роки тому +4

    Amazing video, thank you so much for the help!

  • @tylerspovv
    @tylerspovv 3 роки тому +5

    my essay is due tonight at 11:59 lets see if i can do this😌

    • @fluffyunicorn9688
      @fluffyunicorn9688 3 роки тому +1

      did u finish yours? mine is due today at 11:59 as well lol

    • @tylerspovv
      @tylerspovv 3 роки тому

      @@fluffyunicorn9688 yea i did, waiting for my teacher to give feedback.

  • @cmoh437
    @cmoh437 2 роки тому +2

    Is there a video that is for the current curriculum in TOK? Alas, this is no longer valid.

  • @janetlekoba6890
    @janetlekoba6890 4 роки тому +10

    Man I wish I saw this earlier

  • @MingKeatSng
    @MingKeatSng 4 роки тому +5

    Thank you so much. This video has been really helpful. Appreciate your effort. Could I also ask if you do have something Biology-related? Thank you so much.

  • @milagroschirinos4492
    @milagroschirinos4492 4 роки тому +45

    Could you create videos about TOK titles?

  • @user-hf6bi3ml3i
    @user-hf6bi3ml3i 3 роки тому +7

    can you do this with the rest of the titles please as its very helpful

  • @smartrabbitvideos9384
    @smartrabbitvideos9384 2 роки тому

    Your videos have helped me a lot!! Do you have a video for November 2022?

  • @rebaljerdi1122
    @rebaljerdi1122 4 роки тому +5

    very helpful video thank you, but the link to the TOK sample essay link is not working where enter my email and everything and it says that it sends the essay but it doesn't, I tried this a few times too, and with different emails. Please help!

  • @legeo3504
    @legeo3504 4 роки тому +9

    i oficially have a new god, thank you

  • @Qjdb23l_kjv
    @Qjdb23l_kjv 3 роки тому

    School teachers are always same lol 😸😸 not just your school teacher. 고마워요~

  • @Maria-rw7ek
    @Maria-rw7ek 4 роки тому +12

    Hello this video is very helpfull but will you do the other questions?

  • @XanaChihiro
    @XanaChihiro 4 роки тому +1

    The link to the math questionbank is not working. Gives a 404 error. Also the emails do not have the links to the free resources especially the chemistry questionbank one.

  • @QM027
    @QM027 3 роки тому +1

    Is there a “complete essay” for the example?

  • @namanagrawal6110
    @namanagrawal6110 3 роки тому +6

    Hey! Where does your research team gets these real-life examples from.

    • @amingaybulloev5853
      @amingaybulloev5853 3 роки тому

      Can u pls help me to come with a RLS for the same topic? :)

    • @eem.vtim21
      @eem.vtim21 3 роки тому

      They probably just do some research on things being connected to the AOK.

  • @pratikshanikam1463
    @pratikshanikam1463 3 роки тому

    Not received the mail from you for IAs,TOK essay and EE

  • @pahellalani6651
    @pahellalani6651 4 роки тому +2

    can you create a video for unpacking the essay titles and also make a video of a exemplar essay?

  • @sophiacho5149
    @sophiacho5149 3 роки тому +1

    does this count for M22 and M23 as welll?

  • @pineapple9732
    @pineapple9732 3 роки тому +11

    Guys do not plagiarise this!!! my friend just got caught in plagerizing this whole video in his document..... my friend's turnitin score went upto 88% and now his parents were called upon the school and his diploma is going away now!!!..... I just wanted to aware you guys that who ever plagiarises this, Will 100% GET CAUGHT

  • @hugoquetglas6143
    @hugoquetglas6143 2 роки тому

    do you have an example with this structure ?

  • @jennyzhang2810
    @jennyzhang2810 4 роки тому +3

    u r a legend

  • @gtucker5424
    @gtucker5424 4 роки тому

    Thanks. This does provide a good roadmap.

  • @zurella9962
    @zurella9962 3 роки тому

    Sorry can someone explain what does essay prompt means? English is not my first language ;-; Btw I would love to have this youtube professor help me with the essay he explains everything so well!

  • @salahkhayyat8173
    @salahkhayyat8173 Рік тому

    Thank you sooo much !!!

  • @aryanshah1938
    @aryanshah1938 2 роки тому

    Please make one for may 22

  • @klaeparchment2938
    @klaeparchment2938 Рік тому

    I feel like the hardest part is finding examples to support your points. Do you have any tips?

    • @tk006
      @tk006 Рік тому

      Hi firstly pick a question you feel you have a good idea on how you should approach. Then ask yourself questions under the main question like why is this necessary? Then, find an example where it was necessary. Basically, break down the main question with smaller questions, and then find examples that answer these "mini-questions". Hope that helps.

  • @urmudder8867
    @urmudder8867 3 роки тому

    can you do november 2021 please?

  • @analaura-bz8fy
    @analaura-bz8fy 3 роки тому

    what an amazing job

  • @megansim8727
    @megansim8727 3 роки тому +1

    will be trying this for Nov 2021 its due in 2 days wish me luck 😭

  • @sunneyjim6186
    @sunneyjim6186 3 роки тому

    PLEASE, TOK NOVEMBER TITLE 5!!! I NEED A GUIDEEEEEEEE ASAP

  • @EyehatePersona5
    @EyehatePersona5 4 роки тому +4

    Do you have any tok presentation tips

  • @vikisentainment8269
    @vikisentainment8269 3 роки тому +2

    This is very helpful but one of my friends copied 50 percent of this video and his presentation was banned. so just take the idea, the video helps a lot and gives a better outline.

    • @kim-qr6ek
      @kim-qr6ek 3 роки тому +1

      @@jaibachani hows life J. Are you safe now?

  • @tman160HTM
    @tman160HTM 4 роки тому

    where can I get this ppt?

  • @Abdurrahman1-i4y
    @Abdurrahman1-i4y 3 роки тому

    Can I use religion as an AOK for this title? I am a bit confused about it because I think bias will be mixed with faith and certainty. Any thoughts??

  • @Abdurrahman1-i4y
    @Abdurrahman1-i4y 3 роки тому

    Thank you very much

  • @devansshshah4537
    @devansshshah4537 3 роки тому

    can i get the tok essay file

  • @PETEKASHYAP
    @PETEKASHYAP 3 роки тому

    any french ab initio or French b sample I A to score 7

  • @jakublazar206
    @jakublazar206 3 роки тому +3

    Asian jesus saved my ass

    • @akarshanmishra2351
      @akarshanmishra2351 3 роки тому +2

      fr my essay was due 3 weeks ago bruh and i'm starting now😄
      Edit : I’m done with this shit now, AFTER 2 WEEKS

  • @alyssatanchai
    @alyssatanchai 2 роки тому

    Should you ever talk about your own personal real life experience in the TOK essay?

    • @tk006
      @tk006 Рік тому

      You can in your introduction use it as a reason as to why you chose that question. Then, with your examples, if you personally have an instance where the thing in your example happened to you, you can bring it up, but try not to use just your personal experience as an example for your AOK

  • @franek9558
    @franek9558 3 роки тому

    thanks

  • @gabrieljackson79
    @gabrieljackson79 4 роки тому

    ty!!

  • @CCSuperC
    @CCSuperC 4 роки тому +6

    7:44

  • @ronilkapopara1956
    @ronilkapopara1956 3 роки тому +6

    I just find tok useless 😂

  • @AgentCharles522002
    @AgentCharles522002 3 роки тому

    thanks sir

  • @lianghl2957
    @lianghl2957 4 роки тому +2

    老师你愿意教我tok吗?(期待)

  • @iiiexillieplayz3256
    @iiiexillieplayz3256 3 роки тому

    my teacher recommends we only use one WOK, what do you think?

    • @galexystarlight6285
      @galexystarlight6285 3 роки тому

      I know I'm not the channel and this might be too late: but limiting your WOK will definitely depend on the prompt and I would disagree with your teachers' recommendation. Of course, if a title states "address this statement with reference to two WOK," then obviously you MUST use two WOK (and no more than two) or you will lose marks. As for when the title does not require them, applicable WOKs vary greatly from AOK to AOK. For example, the AOK of natural sciences may depend on Sense Perception or Language and little on Faith; so limiting your argument to say "one WOK" like Faith would greatly limit how you may discuss the natural sciences under one title. Though discussing faith within the natural sciences would be an excellent exploration of WOK, we have to make sure these discussions align with the title you chose.

  • @OLPlalogi
    @OLPlalogi 3 роки тому +8

    It's due in 7 hours and it's 1:07 am😭

    • @skedos4498
      @skedos4498 3 роки тому

      shiit mine's due at 31/01 and its 26/01 - thats still hella time but i still feel a bit of anxiety

    • @rigdby
      @rigdby 3 роки тому

      how did it go dude

    • @kata7669
      @kata7669 3 роки тому +1

      Lol. 2:51 am rough draft due at midnight (3 hours ago)

  • @joshlee1305
    @joshlee1305 3 роки тому

    due in 3 days :D

  • @suryas6279
    @suryas6279 3 роки тому

    hi amaan

  • @leviperez6440
    @leviperez6440 4 роки тому +10

    Why are mostly all tok teachers bad😐😐

    • @tousifdewan659
      @tousifdewan659 4 роки тому +6

      Because they don't even know by themselves what are they going to teach us? Instead, they pretend like they are the god of TOK. Just because of bad luck, they didn't get a chance to be an official IB TOK examiner.

    • @feikemanting5258
      @feikemanting5258 3 роки тому +6

      cause who tf acc likes tok lol

    • @gregtheflyingwhale
      @gregtheflyingwhale 3 роки тому +2

      because for us, TOK was taught by physics/biology/english teachers and there is no such TOK teacher specialization

  • @riaarora1346
    @riaarora1346 3 роки тому

    I love you

  • @Abdurrahman1-i4y
    @Abdurrahman1-i4y 3 роки тому +2

    My submission is tomorrow 😭😂😂😂😂😂 and I still didn't even finish a draft

  • @rebaljerdi1122
    @rebaljerdi1122 4 роки тому

    what kind of degenerate disliked this video, may he go to hell.

  • @rigdby
    @rigdby 3 роки тому

    23:17

  • @anaulloa3282
    @anaulloa3282 2 роки тому

    Me at 4:32 am

  • @rigdby
    @rigdby 3 роки тому

    6:17 (don't mind me :-))

  • @kyliec5418
    @kyliec5418 3 роки тому +1

    Did anyone really use this method and got an A? Plsss replyyyyyyy would do great help🥲

  • @riaarora1346
    @riaarora1346 3 роки тому

    I love you

  • @riaarora1346
    @riaarora1346 3 роки тому +2

    I love you