Hey, Nice short. But, I have to levy some criticism towards the audio. It's hard to parce what some of the characters are saying because the Music overpowers the audio space. (Edit: when I wrote this I watch with my phone's Raw Speaker at full blast. Listening with headphones now improved it very slightly, but it's still a problem.) Perhaps you could equalize the music further or at least bring down the peaks and raise the voices. I'm not entirely privy to what your budget or production limitations are, but maybe you could try and catch the dialogue with other equipment if the boom mic isn't cutting it(at least what I assume you're using). It's really echoey which makes the audio problem stick out. They could've also tried to speak up more. The only other big issue I had with this short film is that the credits and title could've stayed on screen at least a little bit longer. The first time It felt like it went down as I was about halfway through it. Granted, I'm no film specialist, but I've been near those classes. What you have here is great, and what is there is fun, if a bit campy. Not a bad thing by any means.
@@sammy32000 I appreciate the feedback! This is my first project and I know for sure I have a lot to improve especially with the audio I found out after I had finished editing and I wasn’t able to fix it by the end so I did the best with what I could but definitely plan to improve on it for the future!!!
Hey, Nice short. But, I have to levy some criticism towards the audio. It's hard to parce what some of the characters are saying because the Music overpowers the audio space. (Edit: when I wrote this I watch with my phone's Raw Speaker at full blast. Listening with headphones now improved it very slightly, but it's still a problem.)
Perhaps you could equalize the music further or at least bring down the peaks and raise the voices. I'm not entirely privy to what your budget or production limitations are, but maybe you could try and catch the dialogue with other equipment if the boom mic isn't cutting it(at least what I assume you're using). It's really echoey which makes the audio problem stick out. They could've also tried to speak up more.
The only other big issue I had with this short film is that the credits and title could've stayed on screen at least a little bit longer. The first time It felt like it went down as I was about halfway through it. Granted, I'm no film specialist, but I've been near those classes. What you have here is great, and what is there is fun, if a bit campy. Not a bad thing by any means.
@@sammy32000 I appreciate the feedback! This is my first project and I know for sure I have a lot to improve especially with the audio I found out after I had finished editing and I wasn’t able to fix it by the end so I did the best with what I could but definitely plan to improve on it for the future!!!