I can't believe you actually redid the words on the page! That abridged version of the manga was fantastic! I was really hoping you would get to the point where she started riding him! Would have been so good with this abridging script!
Wow the changes made just reinvigorated the whole story. I loved it, yeah Female MC still kind of says so will sussy things. I loved your take on it and will be reading the manga.
Name: The Strange Adventure of a Broke Mercenary
I can't believe you actually redid the words on the page! That abridged version of the manga was fantastic! I was really hoping you would get to the point where she started riding him! Would have been so good with this abridging script!
Wow the changes made just reinvigorated the whole story. I loved it, yeah Female MC still kind of says so will sussy things.
I loved your take on it and will be reading the manga.