*UPSC Essay Paper 2024* - Complete Analysis by Mudit Jain Sir
Вставка
- Опубліковано 20 вер 2024
- Download Essay Analysis PDF here - muditjainblog....
Download Essay VAM: muditjainblog....
Live Batch-2 Ethics Course: www.sarrthiias...
Live Batch-2 Essay Course: www.sarrthiias...
Live Batch-2 Ethics + Essay Course: www.sarrthiias...
Poll Link: t.me/decodeciv...
Write Smart - www.sarrthiias...
MAP Plus Batch 4 - www.sarrthiias...
MAP Batch 4 - www.sarrthiias...
Telegram Links for Mentorship Programs -
Prelims 2024 - telegram.me/+D...
12 Month Mentorship Program for UPSC CSE 2025/26 - store.sarrthii...
Telegram Channel - t.me/decodeciv...
t.me/decodecivils_answer_writing
Website - muditjainblog....
#essay #upscessay #ethicsupsc #ethics #ethicspreparation #essaypreparation #upsc2024 #upsc #upscresult #ias #ips #irs #success #upscmains #ifs #upscaspirants #upscexam #upscmotivation #upscmains #civilservices #prelims #lbsnaa #india #iasmotivation #currentaffairs #ifs #upscdream #upscpreparation #upscsyllabus #upsctopper #upscmemes #iasofficer #upscquestions #ipsofficer #upscinterview #upsccse #iasexam #upscpreparation #irs #muditjain #prelims2024 #ethics #essay
Today was my first CSE mains and i am glad that i joined your guidance for essay as well as Ethics. You are like an elder brother, Sir🙏🏽
Thanks for kind words. ATB
Sir i attempt that "Empire" question with Chronological approach....as following:-
1. Individual:- Right Vs Right thing to do dilemma and social media+ paper leak issue examples.
2. Family:- Gender Equality and Scandinavian countries example + Quote as " Today's work will determine tomorrow"
3. Society:- Quote as "Society can create an intellect but can destroy the same too" + Haryana Sport Culture + Askoha and Samudragupta rule as Examples.
4. Nation:- India spending on Health and Education+ Khelo India mission+ USA and Europe as Value oriented education and super power in Supercomputer and IT field + One world- one family quote.
5. World:- USA- IT hub + India- ISRO and Chandrayaan, Gaganyaan mission as examples + China- Top 5 Economy , Industrial Development, Top5 medalist in Paris Olympics 2024.
Challenges:-
1. Arabian Rulers and trade issue of Europe.
2. AI and Cyber
3.Nuclear weapon development help to Iran by Russia and China.
Conclusion:-
1. Ostrich wala quote
2. Ashoka after Kalinga war and postive cooperative emperor
3. Lord krishna to arjun:- "Focus should be on Karma not in result".
Sir i have written the essay in home today and feels like i didn't answer as per the question. Please review once and give suggestions. Thankyou Mudit sir❤
Great. ATB
No one explained this type . Your very nice session sir. Thanks 😊
Welcome
सर हम हिंदी माध्यम के छात्र है और आपको लगातार फॉलो कर रही है 2025 में हमको पेपर लिखना है आपके द्वारा में बहुत कुछ सीखने का मिल रहा है आप बहुत शानदार कार्य ❤🎉🎉कर रहे हो मेरा आपसे रिक्वेस्ट है थोड़ा कंटेंट हमारे लिए हिंदी में भी बना दिया करो और बीच बीच में हिंदी भाषा का अधिक प्रयोग किया करो चीजों को समझने
Is video mei tamaam use ki hai hindi. Isse jyada nahi ho payegi. Content ka dekhte hain
Ok sir please 🙏 @@Muditjainupsc
@@Muditjainupsc Sir please content hindi me dijiye explanation hinglish me hmlog manage kr lenge but please humbly request for content hindi me de dijiye 🙏🙏🙏
@@Muditjainupsc अरे गुरुजी हमने इस वीडियो के लिए नहीं बोला हम तो आगे के लिए बोल रहे हैं कि अगर कोई भी वीडियो बना तो उसमें थोड़ा हिंदी वालों का विशेष ध्यान रखा जाए क्योंकि आपको हिंदी वाले भी सुन रहे हैं
@@vetset3085 i hope you realize that i am not bound to do it all. So relax.
Written on empire of future and mind using PESTEL, and used this forest quote and happiness quote in essay material itself, thanks for this advice sir😅.
Very good!
Thanks for such a nice explanation🙏✨
Welcome
Sir I have attempted the first topic related to forest and desert....I have taken the different meaning of forest (like different values) and desert (consequences of degradation of those values on different sections of society) ...now I am becoming anxious whether I have selected the right topic or not...
Brilliant interpretation. Focus on tmrw.
What a thought! Bravo!
@@Muditjainupsc but this essay sounds more like environmental topic even it is given in the ncert chapter - Ailing planet. So do we need to make every topic philosophical?? Isn't it a pure static topic related to environment
@@Manisha-mz3ni i took literal meaning. So, may or may not approach this topic philosophically
I would request mudit sir to share a model answer structure for those writing for 2025 so that we can compare our answers. Thank you
I will in due course
I write the essay on the topic of happiness in the context of bhgwat geeta and buddha's middle path. That the happiness is not a materialistic thing it's have an interensic value that human develop from itself. I think it was not so good as a topic was easy.
You must have done well going by the limited context you have provided. Dont worry. ATB
Focus on tmrw.
@@Muditjainupsc A good mentor always encourages their students. You're such a gem for aspirants sir. I am your student in MMP+ 2 Batch. You've made Essay and Ethics so easy for us. Love and Respect. 👏
@@Kunal-Nluj thanks
Thank you so much sir for your great explanation of ESSAY PAPER , NO ONE DOING LIKE THAT OF EXPLANATIONS😇😊🤩
Thanks and welcome
Sir please provide content in hindi its huge request sir
Will try
mudit sir you are a gem teacher ! In the examination hall my mind simply went to the approaches and automatically the dimensions points etc were generated in no time , thank you sir seriously thank you
Great. ATB
⚪🟠 Great initiative of conducting Essay 2024 mains analysis ⚪🟠
Thank you sir 🙏🤍🧡
Welcome
Can happiness question be written unsing individual, society, national, international dimensions?
Yes.
You made my day sir.......thanks for wonderful lectures on essay ❤❤❤......just bcoz of ur lectures I wrote 2 essays today decently well......loads of health , happiness and love to you sir ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Thanks. ATB
Sir one small request…I’m following your all updates daily but inbetween Iam stuck because of I don’t know hindi. Your notes and explanations are very neat and understand easily especially ethics thank you for that sir ..
I have to cater to hindi medium as well. U hv to make do with how it is
@@Muditjainupsc sure sir
Thankyou so much sir! ✨
Welcome
Sir आज essay का पेपर था मेरा मने section B का answer section B से 4 पेज पहले लिख दिया लिखने से पहले पेज पर section B ओर question नम्बर लिखा था
क्या मेरा answer delete होगा या सही मान लिया जाएगा 🙏🙏🙏
I replied to ur prev comment. It will be allowed.
Sir, can we interprete forests as the general atmosphere and deserts as something which is a bad consequence resulted by human actions like global warming, sea level rise, irregular rainfall, climate change etc, thereby linking it to the contemporary issues?
But on doing so we will be slightly deviating from the literal meaning of the statement. What do you suggest sir?
Yes but it will be tough to write essay with this view. Essay will be repetitive. May try few pages.
May try. Might be tough to write beyond 2-3 pages
@@Muditjainupsc OK sir, thank you.
Sir I have written just three examples in first essay and kept it more in the line of analytical. My topic was second essay.
No I have fear, did I mess up 😢
Focus on tomorrow for now.
If in the social media question...only three dimensions are written....how fomo created..how it leads to depression and isolation and what is remedy....with 3 4 examples...will that suffice in actual exam scenario?
More is needed. I have only shown direction for all essay topics.
I think empire of mind is about wisdom, knowledge economy and decolonisation of mind aspect
May take variety of views
What is needed is that u r able to justify ur view with examples
Thank u sir
Welcome
All ideas having large consequences mein Apple ka intro likh sakte hein..
Yes
Tq sir
👍👍
How to join your essay and ethics classes¿
Link in description.
I could not clear prelims this time but after looking at today’s paper……I think I can easily score good in essay . Thanks to your essay course
ATB
@@Muditjainupsc waiting for ethics paper …….I will head fake it and see how much I can score
Paper ke bahar sbko Aisa hi lgta hein
@@Jackatclub95 ha to isme galat kya hai……. Bahar itni baar paper likh lo ki examination hall me bhi aisa lage.
@@UPSC.simplifiedtu thoda pagal wagal hai kya? Exam hall ka pressure bahar baithke jitne marzi paper likhle bhai, tu replicate nahi kar paega
Sir mane second essay ke 4th topic pr pestle approch pr essay likha h. Kya ye likhna thik hoga.
Yes
Sir, what would be the difference between an anspirant writing essay on a weekly basis for say a year or so and other aspirant writing just between pre and mains?
Cant say. These many essays are not required. If strategy is right, 5-6 essays are enuf.
1st comment..big fan of sir
👍🙏
Sir please provide content in hindi
No commitment but will try
Sir you are an excellent teacher but I thought unlike others you will not fall in race and discuss paper today considering that it will impact students psyche. 🙃🙃 Sorry sir! But please don’t do this on ethics day atleast. Wait for all papers to be completed.
I actually didnt consider that mains-24 aspirants would also watch the analysis as I never used to do the same.
Sir glathi 5 min yt kya khole pura vo hi hai! Every one is well with in their rights to do but this isn’t right thing to do. Extremely sorry for commenting -ve on your video sir. I managed not to see any video lekin aap ka video dekhke mai bhi khol diya! 🙃
Sir isko mppsc me bhi follow kr sakte hai kya ?
Sir how to contemplate on which template should be used for which topic? @@Muditjainupsc
@@vinitashukla9346 that can come with practice and also isnt hard and fast..
Plz sir
Isko mppsc me follow kr sakte hai
Yes