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КОМЕНТАРІ • 320

  • @jpmchausse
    @jpmchausse 2 роки тому +370

    Always been a fan of the complete story releases cause I always end up missing one of the partial bits. Cheers MCP thanks for the narration.

    • @BifrostMedia606
      @BifrostMedia606 2 роки тому +14

      Same. I like to listen to the complete stories while I work. I love the long stories.

    • @blazekinz94
      @blazekinz94 2 роки тому

      I like the completed ones as well. I listen to them while I work and I work with my hands so it’s hard to swap between every 25-30 minutes

    • @kellyalves756
      @kellyalves756 2 роки тому

      Hear, hear!

    • @gma_x4lucky91
      @gma_x4lucky91 2 роки тому

      I love the full stories too.I love to put one on and just relax and get into the story for a while.

    • @afralane4470
      @afralane4470 2 роки тому

      I like them to listen to while at work. Helps pass the time

  • @EvilRickQueenVita
    @EvilRickQueenVita 2 роки тому +224

    Ok, I think it's pretty obvious what happened here.
    For wathever reason the author decided to drastically change the story half-way trough. It is painfully obvious the whole twist of "this is a game" was never the original intention of the author (all the attention brought to the fake Wendy thing only for it to go nowhere and never be brought back in the end is the biggest give away).
    I don't know what happened or what lead the author to do this (perhaps he felt the story was dragging to much or he just didn't knew were to take it, perhaps he just wanted to end it & be done with it), in any case the last episodes ended up feeling so alienated & chessy when compared to the first ones and there's no real pay off in the end.
    A real shame, the whole setup & characters were really catching and intriguing, really had me hooked up trough the whole episodes but in the end it became just a huge let down & dissapointment.

    • @TerrifierTriceratops
      @TerrifierTriceratops 2 роки тому +42

      Yeah, glad to see the people in the comments share this sentiment. It's rare that a Creepypasta has characters that I actually start to feel an investment towards, so the twist left a bad taste in my mouth just irritates me the more that I think about it.

    • @BenSS3
      @BenSS3 2 роки тому +12

      I admit as well, the ending seemed very forced (especially leaving out the "fake Wendy" part), though I did still thoroughly enjoy it. I think it would've been more fitting if Anders and the protagonist ended up getting the old man who ran the show arrested (or killed, just any way that could've made it more concrete). Still though, great story, all in all.

    • @Kingdeathtrooper
      @Kingdeathtrooper 2 роки тому +6

      The fake Wendy subplot is a part of the game that doesn't need to be explored since it becomes irrelevant.

    • @13MoonGold
      @13MoonGold 2 роки тому +6

      It's practically a direct ripoff of Tales From The Gas Station Bedside Manor in terms of plot elements. Invitation to a creepy place, and then there were none style story, revealed to be all in their heads as they are under the control of something trying to harvest them.

    • @Kingdeathtrooper
      @Kingdeathtrooper 2 роки тому +6

      @@13MoonGold Well, with criteria that vague, you could say that gas station thing is a ripoff of silent hill.

  • @FatalisLOVER
    @FatalisLOVER 2 роки тому +88

    The ending as most seem to agree here felt really uninspired, almost as if the author hit a roadblock. BUT, I have to say, I absolutely loved hearing you narrate this. You are by far my favorite storyteller. The way you convey emotion and suspense in your narrations always has me visualizing the story as it plays out in my head like a film.

    • @FatalisLOVER
      @FatalisLOVER 2 роки тому +5

      @Lord Gray Nah, just reminds me of one of those "It was just a dream... or was it?" cliches (not sure if that's the appropriate word). I think I would have enjoyed it more if the story stuck to the original plotline rather than deviating.

    • @michaelh9649
      @michaelh9649 2 роки тому +3

      @Lord Gray There’s no ambiguity there, is there? Is anyone thinking that the ending meant something else?
      It seemed pretty clear to me that it was still part of the game when MC and Anders came across the dead bodies. Unless old Regis was a speedster or something, he’s not killing all those people alone like that.
      But as others have been saying, I was liking the story more before the first acting twist.

    • @Chronicler9
      @Chronicler9 2 роки тому +4

      that's sad... before i scrolled down to see the comments, i was so thrilled by the story and loved every moment of it. ... wow... so many people hate it... that really sucks.
      meh. I frickin' LOVED it XD so i guess whatever. Can't wait to hear another one. I need to go purchase some Sam Singer stuff. I'm in love with this author.

    • @Pippin2luv
      @Pippin2luv 2 роки тому +1

      @@Chronicler9 same!! I just finished it and I’m still sitting here all excited over the ending! My blood was pumping through the entire last bit!

    • @Chronicler9
      @Chronicler9 2 роки тому +1

      @@Pippin2luv Huzzah! :)

  • @Adrianzo
    @Adrianzo 2 роки тому +146

    I always wait to watch it complete cause I can't handle waiting for the next video but I always make sure to drop a like :D

  • @oby1shinobi
    @oby1shinobi 2 роки тому +24

    He said ..."safety in numbers" and I instantly pictured a gas station

  • @4-2222
    @4-2222 2 роки тому +146

    Man am I pissed. I was so into the old timey murder mystery stuff. But the reveal was LAME. I watched the ending out of spite.

    • @popoffrotmg981
      @popoffrotmg981 2 роки тому +35

      The murder mystery was so much more interesting than the twist. The twist felt forced, like it was "original for the sake of being original", rather than to make the story better

    • @4-2222
      @4-2222 2 роки тому +14

      @@popoffrotmg981 Exactly. And the second one that tried to bring everything together was on the level of the most basic cursed videogame creepypasta. And we know the author can write too... A real shame

    • @drakelambo821
      @drakelambo821 2 роки тому

      Ill make it up 2 you go watch murder by death. Super good ild timey murder comdy movie

    • @thecatspajamas1442
      @thecatspajamas1442 Місяць тому

      Dude! I know!! I was so excited by the Agatha Christie-esque storyline and then out of nowhere- it was just gone. I felt cheated.
      And then it just seemed like either someone else wrote the rest all together OR the person just has really bad ADHD & couldn’t focus on the mystery aspect (or even character development) anymore

  • @arctik2928
    @arctik2928 Рік тому +5

    Never have I been so invested in something that just gets dropped so jarringly. Damn.

  • @mcfreaky671
    @mcfreaky671 2 роки тому +122

    As soon as they said it was fake I was like damn they just ruined the story… and I was kinda right. It wasn’t a bad ending but definitely could have been better if they didn’t do the “fake game” thing

    • @princeOpalite3650
      @princeOpalite3650 2 роки тому +2

      Hobestly i agree i love that this was a murder mystery...however my biggest compliant is that it almost feels like the fake game thing was an after thought as the story had intresting stuff seemed like they would have bigger payoffs but get thrown out since it was just a act.

    • @theSemiChrist
      @theSemiChrist Рік тому +9

      Well fuck, I'm glad I'm near the end before I started browsing the comments. Have you people never heard of spoilers?

    • @justcommoncurt
      @justcommoncurt Рік тому

      Wow, thanks guy...

    • @AnomalyINC
      @AnomalyINC Рік тому +5

      @@theSemiChrist Why read the comments before watching the video if you're worried about spoilers?

    • @theSemiChrist
      @theSemiChrist Рік тому

      @AnomalyINC like people don't scroll through and comment during the video? I'll be sure that every hour:minute:second has passed before typing out all the comments I thought to post during said video from now on

  • @Seoko117
    @Seoko117 2 роки тому +56

    MrCreepyPasta has been a HUGE part of my youth, I'm so glad that you haven't changed a bit :)

    • @coreyharrison8850
      @coreyharrison8850 2 роки тому +2

      It's so true. Iv been listening for 6 years and I still can't wait for the next video.

  • @Jokobub
    @Jokobub 2 роки тому +3

    "okay, this seems interesting..."
    "My name is Samuel Singer--"
    "LET'S GOOOOOOOOOOOOOO"

  • @shriekinggoblin3021
    @shriekinggoblin3021 2 роки тому +29

    Spoilers if you haven't finished the video:
    I really enjoyed hearing you narrate this story, but was disappointed to find out that the whole murder mystery thing was fake. I really wanted to see the whole thing play out even if it was revealed as just an act at the end. And then the whole rescue situation ending up being fake too was just kinda meh. It was written well enough and I don't think it was a bad story, I'm just a bit disappointed that it broke too soon. I would have loved to hear all of the stories behind why everyone was there even if it was just acting. It's kinda like a game you get really into that just suddenly breaks the immersion out of nowhere and just never reaches the same enjoyment as before.
    Oh well though. I won't absolutely love every story I read/hear. There's something for everyone and I'm sure plenty of people are obsessed with it. I still enjoyed it even if the end was a bit disappointing.

  • @funkyfunkobunko
    @funkyfunkobunko 2 роки тому +12

    Great narration on your part as always, but that big twist just ain’t sitting right.

    • @alecallred2300
      @alecallred2300 2 роки тому +6

      Author got burnt out or had a block and got frustrated. That's my guess. Which such a shame, because it was coming out to be awesome.

  • @Pippin2luv
    @Pippin2luv 2 роки тому +49

    Dang, why do I feel like one of the few people in the comments who actually enjoyed the story the whole way through. It was interesting and had me on my toes the entire time. I felt like I was right with Sam, getting invested and forming a connection with these characters then right with him in his confusion and fear after the reveal. My blood was pumping through the last bit and at the final reveal I almost yelled WHAT in disbelief! (But like, in a good way lol) it was fun and I loved trying to figure out the mysteries along with Sam. Who knows, maybe I’m willfully not looking at it with a critical eye cause I just wanna enjoy a fun, exciting, and creepy story without thinking too hard about it.

    • @rexstephens9423
      @rexstephens9423 Рік тому +2

      I might be late to this party. But even if this wasn't his best it was still worth listening to. If not for the story for the narration. Which is on another level as always. Thanks mcp.

    • @PataPannu
      @PataPannu Рік тому +7

      For most of the people here, this story was like if While watching Titanic you come into the iceberg crash scene and as the ship starts sinking, a sudden bell start ringing and everything freezes still except Rose, lights are turned back on, and some random guy comes in like "So sorry, we have to cut the simulation here, we've had unexpected problem back in the control room" And everything fades into a white room, where they reveal everything was just a simulation where Rose was in.

    • @rhettcampbell45
      @rhettcampbell45 Рік тому +4

      @@PataPannu wait but that sounds cool asf😂

    • @HessGallows_T
      @HessGallows_T Рік тому

      I liked the story. 😀

    • @michelelandman3567
      @michelelandman3567 9 місяців тому

      I really enjoyed the story. 😊

  • @chaoswolf2903
    @chaoswolf2903 2 роки тому +10

    This is the best voice acting for any of the creepy pasta channels I've found. I love the longer form for when I'm working. Thanks for all the hard work and keep it up!

    • @michaelh9649
      @michaelh9649 2 роки тому +1

      Check out Lighthouse Horror. He’s quite a bit newer and smaller than MCP, but he uploads daily and his voice acting is ridiculously good.

    • @odinandre
      @odinandre 2 роки тому +2

      Then u need to listen to anything from the dark somnium.
      Mr creepypasta is by far number two but honestly. He doesn't even come close to the dark somnium in terms of emotions.
      (edit) Salt in the dark river and what happens when the stars go out, made me cry at work.

  • @mykodibear17
    @mykodibear17 2 роки тому +20

    The habitsville series is one of my recent favorites! I'm so excited that there was more!

    • @LadyCorvia
      @LadyCorvia 2 роки тому +2

      Oh there's other stuff tying into this ?

    • @serenarose3822
      @serenarose3822 2 роки тому

      MrCreepyPasta actually has several stories that tie in with Habitsville on this channel.

    • @Whomping
      @Whomping 2 роки тому

      This is “habitsville?” What are the other ones

    • @serenarose3822
      @serenarose3822 2 роки тому

      @@Whomping Of you go under his Playlist, he has a whole folder with stories about Habbitville and some other really good ones.

  • @CosmicErrata
    @CosmicErrata 2 роки тому +53

    Spoilers:
    Really engaging story. I liked the staged reveal, but the second reveal was... A little cliche.

    • @fisty539
      @fisty539 3 місяці тому

      what about the 3rd one?

  • @carolinemckee7009
    @carolinemckee7009 2 роки тому +7

    I've never been so mad at a fake out in a creepy pasta before. I really liked where the author was going in the first half because it felt like a fun, locked room, supernatural mystery; it was like "And Then There Were None" with a vengeful spirit twist. And honestly, I was making theories about the main character's tie into everything. I was thinking that the grandfather's sin was that he did something horror to the main character's family that he didn't even know about and this was his way for atoning for that "sin", and it would all end in the main character having to choose to take all the inheritance for himself or saving the rest of the family after having just been revealed their greatest atrocities.

  • @BotherRed
    @BotherRed 2 роки тому +12

    This is what I needed, the full story with no intruptions

  • @williamemerson3249
    @williamemerson3249 2 роки тому +11

    Can't wait to listen to this over the weekend!

  • @TheKrisstapherQloi
    @TheKrisstapherQloi 2 роки тому +9

    I've been waiting for the completed version to drop to finally get into this story. Super excited to finally start!!!!

  • @Yusuf-br8vz
    @Yusuf-br8vz 2 роки тому +6

    Danganronpa V4 lookin kinda cool tho

  • @oliviam7226
    @oliviam7226 2 роки тому +14

    This story reminded me of a 1997 movie called "The Game" starring Michael Douglas.

    • @makingchangery9267
      @makingchangery9267 2 роки тому +1

      I remember that movie!!

    • @dillonohlemiller9027
      @dillonohlemiller9027 2 роки тому

      It reminded me of the previous Bedside Manor creepypasta. Think about it: a bunch of people trapped in a mansion trying to escape

  • @cloverassassinscreed
    @cloverassassinscreed 2 роки тому +14

    This is just what I needed to help me wind my self up...(sips caffeine drink)

  • @cyraxcyanide
    @cyraxcyanide 2 роки тому +11

    Damn, I wish this was time stamped because I've listened to a few parts already but missed some, so I came here to get it all in at once

  • @TerrifierTriceratops
    @TerrifierTriceratops 2 роки тому +44

    SPOILERS IN THE REVIEW AHEAD!!!
    Man, normally I'd never comment on a Creepypasta I listen to, in fact I tend to stick to ones that average around 30 minutes as they seem to perfectly fit within my attention span to these types of things, but this one left me really disappointed.
    Usually with the Creepypastas I've read or listened to, I'll forget about them after just a day or two unless they're really well written and interesting like Borrasca and a few others I've stumbled upon over the years.
    This was one of those exceptions. I started to take actual, genuine investment into the characters and everything that was happening to them, and the twist that it was all just an act completely ruined any interest I had for the rest of the story.
    Had the whole element of it being scripted been dropped much earlier into the story, I wouldn't feel so irritated, but instead I was given the time to think about all of the little plot details and what their answers were, only for all of that to be pointless.
    Maybe I missed details building up to it, but it genuinely felt like the twist wasn't earned at all.
    Overall the story was an 8/10 in Creepypasta standards until the twist, it really ruined it for me. 3/10 is the best I can give it.
    Good narration from Mr. CreepyPasta as always, only reason that I stuck through it. Had I been reading the story on my own terms without the narration, I'd had dropped it as soon as the twist happened. Keep up the good work!
    EDIT: I kinda zoned out in the last bit, but I noticed now that Sam didn't help Greta for literally no reason. Just makes the story worse tbh
    Edit 2: There was also the fake girl subplot that went nowhere, further adding to the possibility the twist was never planned.

    • @jellybeanfactory21
      @jellybeanfactory21 2 роки тому +2

      Yo maybe add a spoiler alert??

    • @rosedragon1200
      @rosedragon1200 2 роки тому +6

      Yeah maybe I’m just oblivious, but I didn’t catch on to any clues that this was fake. I was really interested in how everyone was going to face their punishments/escape. I think it would’ve been better if there were more hints that it was all an act. It feels like all the fun was taken out of the story for me.

    • @sunnipurcell7060
      @sunnipurcell7060 2 роки тому +2

      @@jellybeanfactory21 That's what I'm saying. I mean Jesus, I now don't even want to look at the story.

    • @v.crowley
      @v.crowley 2 роки тому +3

      @@jellybeanfactory21 spoilers warnings are necessary.. maybe don't read comments before finishing the story

    • @TerrifierTriceratops
      @TerrifierTriceratops 2 роки тому +6

      I added a spoiler warning against my better judgement, I kind of wanted to save people's time as to not invest themselves into something that'll get ruined in the final ten minutes.

  • @brianlanaghan3063
    @brianlanaghan3063 2 роки тому +17

    Love how you put so much energy into every one of the stories you read. Are there going to be anymore tales from the gas station, gotta love that jerry

  • @CezaMVO
    @CezaMVO 2 роки тому +3

    Finally took down this beast of a story and wow this one is a good one. Loved the different layers of mystery. And the big reveal was unique. These are the kind of stories I love, MCP killed it!

  • @LordJudgement1818
    @LordJudgement1818 2 роки тому +8

    Upvote for using mummy movie visual

  • @JackTheVulture
    @JackTheVulture 2 роки тому +30

    Dang Im glad I waited until this full version! that was like listening to a movie. I love your narrations so much. This was rad, thank you for bringing it to us!

  • @hiromitsumoonblossom8682
    @hiromitsumoonblossom8682 2 роки тому +10

    hell yeah, I'm excited for october! I can't wait for what you have instore for us with the halloween and october specials! last year you did the bedside manor, which was AMAZING maybe this year you can finish the searching for Vanessa storyline which you kind of left us on a cliff hanger on?

  • @bryceharris6110
    @bryceharris6110 Рік тому

    Always love seeing your videos in my feed, been listening for years. Your voice is the perfect background commentary for solo gaming, cleaning house, or at work. Hope you keep making videos for a long time.

  • @bazdog4464
    @bazdog4464 2 роки тому +9

    Loved this series

  • @TheSwiftAssassin7113
    @TheSwiftAssassin7113 2 роки тому +4

    1:23:12 Hi!

  • @m.degroot6837
    @m.degroot6837 2 роки тому +3

    Me: Enjoying njoying the murder mystery
    Writer: so that was all fake!
    Me: so, not murderer?
    Writer: no there still is a murderer.
    Me: ok, so why the twis-
    Writer: Ha! Still fake! Got you again didn't I
    Me: pls stop

  • @Diedeux
    @Diedeux 2 роки тому +2

    Too bad about the lukewarm ending.
    I choose to believe that this is the same mansion where the burglar broke in for the all seeing eye.

  • @felixcosm
    @felixcosm Рік тому

    Samuel Singer NEVER disappoints! So happy to hear a longer story from him and thank you for narrating it!

  • @andreigeorgescu872
    @andreigeorgescu872 2 роки тому +10

    Finally, couldnt wait for the full story, keep up the good work🤙🤙

  • @slipknotenthusiast6541
    @slipknotenthusiast6541 2 роки тому +10

    At first I thought the author decided to change everything at one point. But then the subtle inconsistencies made sense. But then I had questions. Then I made coffee.
    So many twists. Fantastic!

  • @war.helmets9636
    @war.helmets9636 2 роки тому +2

    Loved this story thx for posting it man

  • @dizolvedecay6420
    @dizolvedecay6420 2 роки тому +1

    Been waiting for this one thx for the complete!

  • @DiscipleOfHeavyMeta1
    @DiscipleOfHeavyMeta1 2 роки тому +19

    Feels a bit like an Agatha Christie or Edgar Allan Poe story written in modern times, yes?

    • @candancecarmean770
      @candancecarmean770 2 роки тому +2

      Absolutely, I agree. Written from the observations description and intellectual phrasing of the writer(like Mrs Marple) with the gruesome punishments involving traditions from ancient times(so very Poe).That was a brilliant observation. If Poe and Christie had a child it would have been this Author.

    • @allannapier3124
      @allannapier3124 2 роки тому +2

      Exactly what I was felling from the story well said bravo

  • @Medmexican
    @Medmexican 2 роки тому +3

    thanks for this because I've been listening to this on spotify

  • @blizzardkhaos
    @blizzardkhaos 2 роки тому +1

    About time! I've been waiting for this. Thank you so much

  • @auburn_g_art
    @auburn_g_art 2 роки тому +2

    This reminds me of "Tales From Bedside Manor" so many good twists throughout the story

  • @Wowthatsabighat
    @Wowthatsabighat 2 роки тому

    The bass in the background reminded me I have change in my car door lmao. Love your uploads. Listen to them daily while I'm driving.

  • @duarte9653
    @duarte9653 2 роки тому +7

    Can't tell if this was a triple or quadruple plot twist

  • @dillonohlemiller9027
    @dillonohlemiller9027 2 роки тому +1

    This feels like a semi sequel to Bedside Manor: a bunch of people, trapped in a large manor trying to escape

  • @Aberyyyy
    @Aberyyyy 2 роки тому +5

    When Abner said the line about it being a prop I was like "what....." and then when it was revealed that everything that OP and the others went through was just a fake I was sitting on my milk crate at work like "what the fuck?" Not gonna lie the twist really brought me out of It and disappointed me to no end. Everything before the twist was done beautifully and really made me think that Regis really was some sort of shapeshifter or possessing someone with the whole "fake emily" thing since he said that he'll be with everyone in the game to fit in with the whole "Egyptian God" setting but after that whole shit went downhill it just amounted to nothing and didn't have a satisfying pay-off. Really enjoyed the Narration as always MCP, you always know how to well even the strangest and convoluted stories into something truly unique and special that separates you from everyone else.

  • @markfranklin7258
    @markfranklin7258 2 роки тому +4

    Sleep tonight..perfect

  • @devouredurcreepypasta
    @devouredurcreepypasta 2 роки тому +1

    THAT. WAS. AWESOME. !!!!
    I'm so so glad you shared this one. I absolutely loved it.

  • @ShiningPulls
    @ShiningPulls 2 роки тому +3

    Awwwwwww........ I just finished watching them all individually lol

  • @cupcakehips9236
    @cupcakehips9236 2 роки тому +3

    Thank u!!!

  • @coreyharrison8850
    @coreyharrison8850 2 роки тому +2

    I have been holding out till the hole thing was done. And now that it is I know what my work day will look like tomorrow.

  • @smithwesson1896
    @smithwesson1896 2 роки тому +9

    "Anck-su-namun?"

  • @maycipher4161
    @maycipher4161 2 роки тому +2

    Loved that u put Imhotep from 'The Mummy' (1999) in the thumbnail 💙💙💙💙💙💙💙

  • @rope435
    @rope435 2 роки тому +3

    Great concept, good execution (up until reveal), downhill toward the middle, weak ending

  • @MijaCoyote
    @MijaCoyote 2 роки тому +3

    Spoilers...
    I think the story was better before the twist. Bad people getting their comeuppance is more interesting than just a crazy guy doing crazy things for the sake of crazy. Then the second twist ...meh? So it was a reverse twist? It was still a game?? Inception version of it was all a dream plot devise. Should have just stuck to the original story. 👎

  • @jeffdishong4853
    @jeffdishong4853 Рік тому

    I guessed the 4 words on the last envelope!!!! I can’t believe it!!!! Great story, fantastic narration bro!!! Thank you!!! I still can’t believe I guessed it!!!

  • @LightNovelRemuruTempest
    @LightNovelRemuruTempest Рік тому

    i've been listening to this for quite a while now and it only gets better!

  • @virginiavarble7818
    @virginiavarble7818 2 роки тому +1

    Amazing story and amazing narration! Had me hooked from the very beginning!

  • @thatsnodildo1974
    @thatsnodildo1974 2 роки тому +5

    Definitely gonna be something I listen to at work this weekend lesss gooooo

  • @Urza26
    @Urza26 2 роки тому +4

    I don't really get the story's second part at all. What actually happened?

  • @toxicstrain7484
    @toxicstrain7484 2 роки тому +1

    I've been waiting to listen till this came out!

  • @stixsquad
    @stixsquad 2 місяці тому

    absolutely loved this story

  • @flamewolf6579
    @flamewolf6579 2 роки тому

    Man I love this channel, I especially love the super long ones because I listen to them when I sleep, when I study, and any time I don't feel like looking for a video every 20 minutes

  • @ivylynnwinchester9311
    @ivylynnwinchester9311 2 роки тому

    And ANOTHER twist ! Brilliant

  • @artemisarrow179
    @artemisarrow179 2 роки тому +2

    Wow these are badass. I knew I’d love them :)
    Takes me back to “The Eye of Ra.”

  • @to_bewilder5851
    @to_bewilder5851 2 роки тому +1

    Ugh this story was such a tease. It was sooo good

  • @imrgrimmi1659
    @imrgrimmi1659 2 роки тому +3

    I've been listening to every episode as it's come out, and now you release the full series in one video at the very start of my work shift?
    Why, don't mind if I do!

  • @dexmods8055
    @dexmods8055 Рік тому

    really love this! reminds me a lot of Agatha Christie's "And Then There Were None"

  • @CameronHero32581
    @CameronHero32581 2 роки тому

    I LOVE clue-born stories and this one is NAILING the creepy with it. Always love your work MCP.

  • @galliumgames3962
    @galliumgames3962 2 роки тому +3

    The tuna casserole story had better twists than this one.

  • @P4T5H4RPify
    @P4T5H4RPify 2 роки тому +1

    Ohhhh wowowowowwwww what a twist and turn and oh me oh my fantastic!

  • @evazauner
    @evazauner 2 роки тому

    holy moly! that was exciting! my poor nerves.........
    the best story i heard for months!!

  • @odinandre
    @odinandre 2 роки тому +5

    This story really just peeves me off!
    Not because of horrible and out of place twist but because of how damn good every thing else was.
    I was so invested in the characters. Why was the mc there? Was is supernatural or was someone pulling the strings? And so on. But to destroy all of that buildt up suspense just to put on that horrible peace of rushed twist to wrap up the ending as quick as possible. What a shame. Honestly.
    Anyway amazingly narration as always. Im just so peeved due to the ending.

  • @jerrymiller8650
    @jerrymiller8650 2 роки тому

    Wow. This was a really engrossing story. Thank you for sharing! This was awesome.

  • @tnjrcfl1
    @tnjrcfl1 Рік тому

    Outstanding. Love it

  • @gma_x4lucky91
    @gma_x4lucky91 2 роки тому

    Another great story told in a fantastic way once again. You are my favorite narrator hand's down . Two thumbs up as always.

  • @eldritchchaos2663
    @eldritchchaos2663 2 роки тому +1

    Ooooo multi-layered fiction, I like it

  • @scarletautumn9826
    @scarletautumn9826 2 роки тому +7

    I’m sorry we are just not gonna talk about how Greta saved him only for him to leave her? Like they both coulda fucked that old man up. Just sayin

    • @leerex
      @leerex 2 роки тому +3

      Exactly!! R.I.P Greta😭

    • @NEO_MusicProductions
      @NEO_MusicProductions 2 роки тому +2

      it was all part of the game, see the red envelope he got at the end from the hospital nurse. Everything was just part of the show

    • @michaelh9649
      @michaelh9649 2 роки тому

      @Daniel Stefureac Yeah, but he didn’t know that. He bent over backwards to save Anders and immediately abandoned Greta without batting an eye, right after she saved him too lol

  • @godfamilymichaeljackson50
    @godfamilymichaeljackson50 2 роки тому

    I thoroughly enjoyed this story. May I have another please sir!!!!!!

  • @jamesb1856
    @jamesb1856 2 роки тому +3

    Great writing, even if the ending was a bit predictable. Reminded me of a more serious and "scarier" version of bedside manor

  • @pennilesswriter1556
    @pennilesswriter1556 2 роки тому +1

    It's a different version of The Game from the 90's. I like it.

  • @byungbunny8553
    @byungbunny8553 Рік тому

    It was a wonderful story! I loved it

  • @LK-px8iu
    @LK-px8iu 2 роки тому +2

    This is like an Agatha Christie novel

  • @magicpyroninja
    @magicpyroninja 2 роки тому +1

    Your reporter who got invited to a wealthy persons funeral and after hearing that there is a game being played forcing them to reveal deep horrible secrets you still don't know why you're there.
    Let me tell you your intended to be the scribe your supposed to tell everybody about this

  • @noahhecker6672
    @noahhecker6672 2 роки тому

    This is the best game of clue I’ve ever heard of

  • @thumperpaul155
    @thumperpaul155 8 місяців тому

    This would make such an awesome movie.

  • @TheRuneTail
    @TheRuneTail 2 роки тому +1

    Good thing Sam was a coward and didn't beat Regus to death

  • @scathercrow1221
    @scathercrow1221 2 роки тому +2

    Lol you hear a "Hey There" at 1:23:13

  • @tiffanyabell9070
    @tiffanyabell9070 2 роки тому

    Awesome!

  • @littlepip4014
    @littlepip4014 2 роки тому +1

    I’m a simple girl, I see a picture of Imhotep, I click. Bonus that it was a mrcreepypasta video!

  • @MetlKen87
    @MetlKen87 2 роки тому +5

    I was really into this until the swerve... then I lost interest. 😕

  • @ivylynnwinchester9311
    @ivylynnwinchester9311 2 роки тому

    The flag from the revolver was AWESOME. Epic story

  • @Sc00psTr00p
    @Sc00psTr00p 2 роки тому +3

    Very interesting story, I really grew to enjoy these characters (Especially Sam and Anders) so the ending was.. Something. I don't mind the first twist it was alright, but the second twist.. Ehhh.. Kinda hurts the overall story for me. Still an enjoyable time though!

  • @phoenixpowell1010
    @phoenixpowell1010 2 роки тому

    Listening to this at work. Hell of a story.

  • @coolestreviews5315
    @coolestreviews5315 2 роки тому +1

    That was a good story, but I still have some questions. Guess I won't ask cuz it would definitely spoil the things...

  • @Sienisota
    @Sienisota 2 роки тому +1

    Well... This was a ride👍😁

  • @SmashFetus
    @SmashFetus 2 роки тому +3

    Great narration of a story that was clearly closed out early or rushed.... really feels like the author got sick of writing and rushed a random ending...imo

    • @alecallred2300
      @alecallred2300 2 роки тому +1

      Yeah seriously. The twist really killed the fuckin vibe.

    • @SmashFetus
      @SmashFetus 2 роки тому +1

      @@alecallred2300 yeah 100% I went from emotionally invested to "wtf is this shit" in literally 2 sentences lol

    • @popoffrotmg981
      @popoffrotmg981 2 роки тому +1

      @@SmashFetus Yea... I was really liking the story prior to the twist, truly a shame. I thought the old murder mystery vibe was both cool and very well executed by the author, before the cliche twist into the "aha they never expect the double twist!" Like, I think if he kept the story going straight would have been a strong 8/10, but the ending made it so much less enjoyable. I'd probably still give it a 6 for the first 2/3, but man is it a shame.

    • @SmashFetus
      @SmashFetus 2 роки тому

      @@popoffrotmg981 fully agree

  • @tonietteh2015
    @tonietteh2015 Рік тому

    I Loved this whole story 💯👍💜