Reedpaw (bark) (lol I had Reedreed at first-) Role: App Pelt Length: Super long/fluffy Pelt color: Light gray Torbie markings (dilute) Her Story: Reedpaw was always adventurous, opposed to her wary sister, Swamp-paw, and grumpy brother, Claypaw. She enjoyed hunting and running, and she came from RiverClan. Although she was a good swimmer she sometimes wished that she had been born in WindClan. Her friend, Bankpaw, thought she was crazy, while the two newest Warriors, Grass-sand, and Snowtumble mocked her. Many cats would look at her in distaste, but her mother always comforted her, telling her that she belonged in RiverClan. Although it never really helped, because Reedpaw knew that wasn’t true and that the other cats thought she was crazy. One day while Reedpaw was hunting alone near the WindClan border she was following a water vole, when without realizing, she crossed into WindClan territory. Reedpaw caught the vole and sat up proudly, but surrounded by hills everywhere. She turned to see the stream behind her, and was about to run back across the border when she heard a growl behind her. Reedpaw jumped and turned to see a tall, slender tom standing in front of her with a scowl on his face. She stared at him with fear, he was much larger and taller than her. “What are you doing on WindClan territory?” the young tom growled, thrusting his muzzle in her face as he spoke. “I-I,” Reedpaw stammered, at a loss for words. The toms pelt fluffed up in anger and Reedpaw gulped. “It was an accident!” she blurted out. “Oh, so you accidentally crossed into our territory and stole our prey?” the tom scoffed in disbelief. “Likely story, Apprentice.” “My name is not Apprentice,” she growled, feeling anger bubbling up inside of her, “I’m Reedpaw.” The tom stared at her. “Reedpaw the thief,” he mutteredunder his breath. “I heard that!” she hissed. “And I am not a thief, I was following this vole and it crossed into WindClan territory, and I didn’t realize.” “You’re too lazy to focus on anything but your prey are you?” the tom mocked. “Typical RiverClan, always thinking with their stomachs, not their brains.” “Hey!” Reedpaw hissed indignantly. The tom shrugged and sat down. “You’re a lot skinnier than normal RiverClan cats,” he muttered, “especially considering it’s Greenleaf.” Reedpaw looked down, her long fur clung to her skinny frame, and suddenly she felt self conscious, and nervous. What if he thinks RiverClan can’t feed themselves and launches an attack on our Clan? She thought nervously. “Honestly, you look more like you belong in WindClan than RiverClan.” The tom growled. “Maybe it is where I belong,” Reedpaw whispered, “sometimes I wish I was there instead of RiverClan.” “What?” The tom gasped. Reedpaw looked sheepishly up at him, a small, embarrassed smile on her face. “If anyone asks, I didn’t say that,” she meowed awkwardly. The tom cocked his head. “I wish you were in WindClan too,” he growled, “you’re the funniest cat I’ve talked to in a while.” “What do you mean?” Reedpaw asked. “Well when I was an Apprentice I had a bunch of friends,” the tom explained, “but after I became a Warrior most of my friends remained Apprentices, and neither of my brothers will talk to me.” “When were you made a Warrior?” Reedpaw asked. “Just around half a moon ago,” he replied, “my name is now Smokevine!” The young tom puffed his chest out proudly,his short gray fur blown flat in the wind, making him look even skinnier than he already was. Reedpaw smiled at him warmly, for the first time in a while feeling like she could express her feelings towards another cat. But suddenly the breeze shifted towards them, and Smokevine looked around with a nervous hiss. “Quickly Reedpaw,” he urgently growled, “I smell one of my Clanmates coming, take your vole and get back across the river.” Reedpaw picked the vole up, but then paused, feeling hesitant. She dropped the vole and then bounded back over to him, nuzzling his chest with her head. “Will I see you again?” she purred. Smokevine went tense, but after a second relaxed and licked her fondly on the head. “Y-yes,” he growled, “we can talk at Gatherings, and if we see eachother on border patrols or while we’re hunting we can always talk then.” Reedpaw smiled, and let out a happy purr before grabbing her vole and racing back into RiverClan territory. Once she was safely across the border she cast one last rueful glance behind her to see a young she-cat and elderly tom bounding up to Smokevine. She saw him cast her one more quick glance and felt warmth flow through her body. Reedbark let out a low growl of anger as yet another carp managed to evade her claws. What am I doing wrong? She thought with frustration, lashing her tail as she flexed her claws. “Hey, what's got your pelt all in a twist?” Reedbark looked up with a smile at the familiar voice, and spotted a familiar gray pelt just over the river. She purred and plunged into the water, swimming swiftly - and a bit clumsily - across. She reached the opposite bank and pulled herself up, bounding over to Smokevine. “Hey Reedpaw!” Smokevine purred, licking her on the forehead. “Actually,” Reedbark corrected, “it’s Reedbark now!” She puffed her chest out proudly, and her friend let out a purr of delight. Smokevine laid his tail over her shoulders and nuzzled her. “Finally,” he growled, letting out an exasperated sigh. “It only took forever, I mean Swampreed, Claypebble, and Banksand all became Warriors two moons ago! I mean I know you don’t like RiverClan, but you can’t stay an Apprentice forever.” Reedbark cuffed him over the ear with a chuckle. “Stop teasing,” she growled, “I’m just no good at fishing, I feel much better out in open places, like the moor!” “W-well Reedbark, listen, I’ve been. . . well thinking recently. What if you come live in WindClan with me?” Reedbark glanced up at Smokevine. Her friend was smiling awkwardly down at her, and she noticed his claws working themselves in and out of the dirt nervously. “Will WindClan accept me? What will my family think?” she asked after a moment. Smokevine stared at her and then glanced ashamedly at the ground. “You’re right it was a stupid plan, I shouldn’t even have mentioned it.” “No, Smokevine, it was a brilliant plan, I’d give up anything to come be with you in WindClan, but it’s just. . . how would we explain it?” Reedbark replied quickly. Smokevine sighed and lowered his head sadly. “I. . . Reedbark I don’t know, but what I do know is that I want to be with you.” Reedbark purred and smiled. “I better get going, there’s a gathering tonight. See you there?” If this comment gets to 5 likes I’ll continue the story lol (if not I prolly will continue the story anyway)
Awakening of Dawn. Chapter 1: the beginning... DawnKit lays with her mother and her paws tucked under her fluff to keep warm. It's leafbare in Skyclan but... Also just 2 days after Dawn Kit's father and Barksong' S mate went to Starclan. BarkSong is Dawnkit's mother. BarkSong has not been the same since. All Dawnkit knows is that her father, RavenWing got trapped with a fox. Suddenly dust landed on Dawnkit's nose. "ACHOO!" Barksong's eyes shot open. "Are you ok dear?" " Yes mama." Replied Dawnkit. "Can I go get a mouse from the prey pile?" BarkSong stared at Dawnkit for a long second. "I promise I will come right back." "Alright." BarkSong mumbled burying her muzzle into her paws. Dawnkit stood up and stretched. Just then did she realize she had a cramp in her right hind leg. Dawnkit limped out of the Queens den and into the light. I will make a chapter 2 soon!!!!
Pelt lenght: long Pelt colour: cinnamon Markings: pseudo merle (the name and role are in the story) Story: Smokekit were a brave kit who was named "hero" by her friends (she-cat). When something bad happens to them, Smokekit always protect and console them. Her sis were named Shockpaw, and she was mean and unfair. All day, when Smokekit get home talking about her day, Shockpaw say, meanly: "Shut up, furr ball! We're from RiverClan, and i'll not accept a dumb kit that don't even know how to swim talking this way with me!" And then, Shockpaw turns around and bit Smokekit's face. It repeats all day. One day, when Smokekit were sleeping calmly, a male kit started patting her until she woke up. "Kit, i saw all that happened! No one deserve to have a sister this way! She bit your eye every single day... Wait... What's the colour of your eyes?" He asked. Smokekit looked confused, but then she realized... She was blind of one eye! Smokekit was afraid. "W-What i'm going to do?" She asked for the male. He thinked a bit and awnsered: "I know one place that you can go. It isn't too far away from here... It's named two-legs place." Smokekit look to her clan, her parents and to all the things she had. "No, thanks. I'll stay here. And what's your name?" Smokekit asked. "My name is Brownkit." "My name is Smokekit." "Oh, hi! But what are you gonna do about your sister?" "I'll become an apprentice, learn how to swim and win from her on a fight!" "You don't know how to swim?" "Nope." "Ok, so i'll teach you!" After that day, Smokekit spent all her time with Brownkit, learning how to swim. One day, in the middle of the swimming class, the leader entered the river and stopped them. - Are you ready? - He asked. - Ready for what? - The both kits asked at the same time. The leader smiled, and then the both realized that they would become apprentices! - But... leader, what about my eye? - Smokekit asked. He picked Smokekit and said: - If i didn't trusted you, i would never give you your apprentice name. "But i'm not a apprentice yet!" "I trust you and i believe in your strenth. A blind eye won't stop you, and this i know." Smokekit smiled and ran as fast as she could to the big rock, jumping away from the leader's back. "My little sis becoming an apprentice with a blind eye and a weak jaw? This is unacceptaple!" A young warrior screamed from the middle of the other cats. It was Shocktail, Smokekit's sister. "Shut up, your, your...." Smokekit said, angrily, but Brownkit calmed her. "I declare Smokekit and Brownkit as apprentices! After this moment, their names will be Smokepaw and Brownpaw!" All the cats clapped and meowed, except for Shocktail. "And i declare a duel with Smokekit!" She said. "Her name's Smokepaw!" Brownpaw said. "Ok, i wanna fight with Smokepaw." Shocktail said, mockingly. Whithout thinking much, Smokepaw jumped from the rock and started fighting Shocktail. Smokepaw scratched and bit Shocktail, but with only one kick, Smokepaw flew away. After a long fight, Shocktail jailed Smokepaw under her claws and meowed with pride. Smokepaw had any more energies, and had one movement left to do before losing completely her stenth. She bit Shocktail's neck and held straigh. After a while, Shocktail fell down in the cold grass. It was alredy night. Medicine cats ran over to pick Shocktail and to heal her. After some days, one medicine cat stepped to the apprentices den. "Smokepaw's here?" He asked to Brownpaw. "Yes, she's here." "Smokepaw, i need to talk to you." "What is?" "I know that you don't wanted to do this, but Shocktail's dead." (If this comment get to five likes i'll continue the story if i want to)
| Name : EmberPaw (Night when a warrior)(ngl EmberNight is a good name) | role : Apprentice | fur!! : super floofy!! | furcolors : Fawn / Spots + Light red coloring (To fit with the "Ember" in his name) His story? I'll be working on that
A beautiful elder cat named pale cloud, lol She's a smoky gray calico with long fluffy fur She has a relatively peaceful life, she has mental health issues though. A little cookoo but she's chill
Heheh I got a goofy lil guy named StoneSnap! He’s a hairless little bean with all around good vibes. Tbh, at first I got leader and refused it because I just really like the name StoneSnap and didn’t wanna upgrade him to “star” statues, so ima settle for deputy.
Tallbark is a medicine cat from Ellipseckan. Tallbark is a she-cat. Her pelt color is a diluted ginger calico. Her eyes are a bright aqua color. She is very sweet, gentle, kind, patient, shy, mysterious, sassy, and assertive, Her mentor was Lightcloud. Her parents are Misthop and Ashtalon. Her littermates are Rabbitflare, a pure red tom with yellow eyes, Flamestar, A pure ginger tabby she-cat with blue eyes, Smokefang: A black and white tom with gray eyes. Her best friend is Snowypelt, A pure white she-cat with silver eyes. Tallbark has two bullies, They are Rockclaw, A smoky gray tom with green eyes, and Talonflame, A dark ginger and white tom with amber eyes.
SmokeHeart: A brown and white shecat she was named Smoke because she was always visible and easy to see, named heart because of her sweet nature and ability to calm others in a matter of seconds which comes very handy for a med cat! Sadly After only 2yrs old SmokeHeart died saving a kidnapped kit, replacing herself as the kidnapped one and died shortly after being kidnapped.
Skyheart is a swift and brave warrior from Fogclan. She has sleek, glossy short grey fur with dilute calico markings and blue eyes. She lives in Flogclan out of spite and she is a cold cat, not liking the attention she gets for being a halfclan cat
Smokefluff was always an adventurous cat. They had a long-haired fluffy long pelt with a blue gray colour and ginger spots, they were a torbie cat. They were born in The Tribe Of Rushing Water, they always climbed moutains in the territory and as a kit, they had free will. Smokefluff always snuck away from their mother, climbing rocks acting like there're tall moutains, playing with friends, and many more fun things. As an apprentice they had the best time of there life! One time while climbing moutains with their mentor, a rock was rolling right towards them! Smokepaw ran as fast as they could but the rock rolled over them. They lost there paw, but Smokepaw kept climbing moutains. Begging to see what was behind the moutains. They loved climbing moutains with there friends, the clan followed Smokepaw. The leader then gave Smokepaw a privilege to become a warrior, your new name was Smokefluff Due to your long fur and braveness, you also became deputy! Once you and your clan reached the top of the moutains, A Moutain lion attacked and pushed you off the edge of a cliff, you felt a sharp pain as you fell down to a bottomless abyss, you closed you eyes saying you last words, " I'm sorry I have to leave this world. Be safe and remember me, now fight me, Moutain lion!" Fun fact: Smokefluff's pronouns were they/them! They also got sent to a dark aybss for the afterlife!
Cloudfawn is a beautiful Dark brown she-cat with white dots on her flank and white paws. She has green eyes and short fur. At a senior warrior age, she had broken her back from falling off a cliff while fighting a warrior form another clan. Her leader wanted her to retire to the elders den, but she refused, she got another appretice but having a bad back, she had struggled. While her and her appretice was out, they were attacked. She tried protecting her appretice but fail due to her back injury. Her appretice was killed and she regretted staying as a warrior to be a mentor. So she joined the elders, Telling the kits stoys of all her adventures as a warrior and appretice. One night a storm came, and flooded a camp, with her last stangth she saved a kit, but before she could get her self to safety, she was swept down the flooding river, and was never seen again. She woke up in starclan, greeted by all her loved ones.
Palecloud is a deputy with long blue fur covered in darker blue and white spots, she was a rogue and after that she became a shadowclan member after a few moons of being a warrior she fell for a rogue cat she knew, and he tricked her into becoming a kittypet, after realizing that her life feels worthless she went to rejoin shadowclan but they didn't accept her but riverclan did, and after that she became a deputy of the clan (but she's still out for revenge on shadowclan and the rogue that tricked her so she's kinda starting a villain Arc😂). Someone reply or like so I can be reminded to right her story
Tall’Blaze/Star is a ginger she-cat with semi-long fur and tortie markings. She has bright amber eyes and a scar on her eye, and a tear in her left ear. She is the leader of ThunderClan. A little bit about her? Well, here! Tall’Blaze was given her nine lives at the Moonstone. Life 1 was the life of bravery; protect the clan even if you’re scared. Given by Fire’Flight (old deputy) Life 2 was the life of knowledge; share your knowledge with the clan. Given by Char’Paw (Tall’Blaze’s apprentice) Life 3 was the life of kindness; always help a cat when they’re lost, hurt, or in trouble. Given by Hawk’Sight (A queen) Life 4 was the life of trust; always trust your clan mates. Given by Constellation (A loner, and Tall’Blaze’s best friend) Life 5 was the life of forgiveness; it’s not in the past, but the future. Given by Ice’Claw (Tall’Blaze’s mentor) Life 6 was the life of strength; when you fall, you get back up. Given by Wisdom’Fang (Tall’Blaze’s mate) Life 7 was the life of love; you don’t have to love once. Given by Whoosh’Storm (Tall’Blaze’s second mate) Life 8 was the life of belief; trust StarClan will everything. Given by Comet’Tail (Old medicine cat) Life 9 was the life of guidance; let the stars guide you. You can ask for help. Given by Moon’Star (Old leader) Comment PT.2 for an update on Tall’Blaze’s story! 🎉
Stonefang/star Leader Long haired Gray Calico Story! Stonekit was born to Softfur and Ashstorm alongside his Two Sisters Coalkit and Graykit as well as his brother Ravenkit. More later!
STONEPALE/STAR is a Tom with curly fur and a black pelt with Smokey outlines for patterns and soft tortie colors. He’s always so grumpy, and never shows affection. But cares for his clanmates..
Featherbreeze, a fluffy/longhaired medicine cat apprentice with a fawn base with a smoke pattern of darker fawn, and bluish grey eyes, TC. Story: when featherbreeze was young they kept waking up wondering where she is before she snaps out of it ( she is actually connected to a twoleg, heheheh, its me ) and the medicine cats see that as a sign from starclan that she is chosen, as a medicine cat apprentice, her memories get stronger and before you know it, she remembers her twolrg life until sunhigh, whenever someone mentions starclan ahe says 'you mean erins?' unser her breath, she believes she herself is insane or something.
Name: DawnVine Role: apprentice Gender: female Eye color: dark green (the gamepass eye Furr color: Sand Markings: dilute torbie Specie: tortie fur length: Medium Stroy: DawnVine is a apprentice that is born in summer. She had a mother who loved her very much but her father killed her... she saw this scene and ran away into a den only to see her father die too... She comes from Riverclan and now that she is alone she has made friends with a kitten named "CougarPaw" they are good friends. In reality they have known each other since they were born. CougarPaw is from Windclan. they grew up together. they fell in love and had a puppy named "WolfVine". He is their first child. now he is an apprentice and a little sister. the latest arrival named "CougarVine". Now they are a happy family. She now have 3 kittens the other one is "DawnRose" the other girl. end Edit: i bet that this comment will have 0 likes like now.
Nightbreeze is a semi-longhaired black she-cat with orange eyes and a crooked front paw. she is a RiverClan medicine cat (formerly a warrior before she permanently injured her paw when it was caught under a fallen tree branch) Despite her injury (and old age) Nightbreeze is a legendary medicine cat, looked up to for advice from cats even from other clans. Nightbreeze died peacefully of old age, surrounded by her close friends and relatives. She went to StarClan, where her paw was at last healed. In personality, Nightbreeze was wise, patient, shy, great sense of humor, and gentle. Likes: kits, naptime, telling stories of her past, sleeping under the stars, flowers, kittypets. Dislikes: loud noises, twolegs, dogs, thunderpaths, monsters, spiders. Other facts: Nightbreeze’s childhood best friend was a kittypet named Charlie, when Nightbreeze was an apprentice, she used to sneak off to go play with him, and he’d be waiting at the edge of the forest. Nightbreeze also taught Charlie about StarClan and clan life, therefore, Charlie came to respect the clans and the Forest more, and he believed in StarClan. Charlie was present when Nightbreeze died, and during her burial as well. Nightbreeze is descended from Mistystar and Stonefur. Nightbreeze has a brother (Hawktalon) in ShadowClan. He joined ShadowClan to be with his mate: Mossfeather. Nightbreeze has arachnophobia. (Fear of spiders) Despite hating Twolegs, Nightbreeze gets along well with kittypets, since her best friend was a kittypet himself. Nightbreeze has three kits: Patch (black tom with white splotches and orange eyes) Raven (small black tom with pale green eyes) and Shade, (long furred black she-cat with dark reddish-orange eyes) who the kits’ father, Charlie took in so that no cat could find out that Nightbreeze had broken the code. All three of Nightbreeze’s kits had tragic lives, Raven died very young, Shade went insane and turned evil because of it, and Patch pretty much shut himself out from other cats. Shade, Patch, and Raven are OCs I’ve had for a few years now, I just didn’t have parents for them so this worked out perfectly, Shade was a major antagonist who nearly succeeded in destroying the clans, Raven didn’t live very long so I never really developed his character, but he was known to be playful and mischievous like his father, and Patch, who outlived both his littermates, was wise and patient just like his mother. I honestly love Patch too much to kill him off, so he has no death written yet lol, besides, Patch plays a huge hero role in my stories. And that’s it for my new OC! Edit: I changed Nightbreeze eyes to orange because I realized that Charlie had green eyes and therefore nobody could pass on orange eyes, also I changed Raven’s eyes to pale green like his father)
oooo! I love your story! your story with nightbreeze, Charlie, her clan, and her kits is really well planned out! thank you for watching/commenting. 🧡✨
@@k_kazooz You’re welcome! I had so much fun piecing this together (and finally giving three old OCs parents) Are you planning on making another of these?
@@Alystra17 I don’t really know! I’ve kind of given up on UA-cam for many reasons, including my well being and because I was lacking. creativity/inspiration/motivation. I really appreciate it though :) soon, I’ll try to make an updated version!
@@k_kazooz I understand that, I’ve never had a YT channel myself, but I still get it. It’s not easy to settle on the main content of your channel you really like to do. But I still hope to see a video of yours soon🙂 Remember, the biggest UA-camrs today all started out small too! Subbed😁
Tallvine is a med cat (I chose 11 and 12 bcus I couldn’t decide between those lucky numbers) He is super fluffy/long (btw he is nothing like goosefeather pls don’t compare them, he isn’t grumpy, he’s like featherwhisker, or even like barkface, he’s just a normal med cat, ok? Ok.) He is smoky gray, (I got tortie/tortiseshell, so he’s dilute) . I’m sorry but I don’t really wanna do the storytime thing bcus I’m lazy! At least you know this stuff. (:
Embervine is an elder with hairless blue-gray smoke fur and emerald eyes. Embervine was formerly a BloodClan warrior but got exiled after betraying them after falling in love with a ShadowClan warrior. After that, she joined ShadowClan and became a warrior. Moons later, she had kits with the ShadowClan warrior (called Dragonscreech) called: Firekit (talon), Volekit (tuft) and Enderkit (skin). She then retired when she saw her kits become warriors. Dragonscreech died a sunrise later. ----Story---- "You, you betrayed us!" Snarled Prickle, the BloodClan leader. "I'm tired of acting bad, acting ruthless. I know where i want to live now!" Ember curled her lips. "Oh yeah? Remember that we'll track you down, we'll watch you and stalk you." Prickle growled. "You won't scare me." Ember narrowed her eyes and with that, she left. She then clawed the collar off her neck. *Stupid collar.* she spat to herself, heading to the ShadowClan border. "Ember?" A voice made her jump. "Oh, hey Dragonscreech." Ember meowed. "What are you doing here?" Dragonscreech asked. "Oh, I left BloodClan." Ember meowed. "You did?" Dragonscreech asked in disbelief. Ember nodded. "Alright, then. You wanna join ShadowClan?" Dragonscreech licked his paw. "Yes, please." Ember nodded. "Follow me." Dragonscreech led the way to the camp entrance. "Stonestar." Dragonscreech dipped his head. "Greetings, Dragonscreech." Stonestar added, and then gazed at the newcomer. "Who's this?" She asked. "She's Ember, a friend. Can she join ShadowClan?" Dragonscreech introduced Ember. Ember nodded. "Very well." Stonestar added, and then yowled. "All cats old enough to catch their own prey, gather around the Clanrock for a Clan meeting!" Stonestar yowled. The ShadowClan cats gathered. Their eyes fixed on their leader, while some glanced curiously at the newcomer. "Today, a cat named Ember is joining our Clan. She left BloodClan and found her new place." Stonestar announced, her eyes fixed on Ember. "You're now called Embervine." Stonestar announced. "Embervine! Embervine!" The Clan cheered. "Meeting dismissed." Stonestar hopped off the rock. Embervine layed down with her kits Firekit, Volekit and Enderkit. She watched them play. "Beautiful, aren't they?" Dragonscreech purred. "Beautiful like you." Embervine purred back. They nuzzled one another. Many moons passed, and Embervine and Dragonscreech retired to the elder's den. Dragonscreech was turning weaker, and he layed in the moss. "Embervine, come here." Dragonscreech rasped, his eyes clouding. Embervine went to her mate, concerned. "Bring Firetalon, Voletuft and Enderskin." Dragonscreech said weakly. Embervine nodded, and headed to the warrior's den. "Kits, father wants to talk to you." Embervine meowed. Firetalon nudged the other two and headed to the elder's den. Embervine then layed near Dragonscreech, licking him. "You don’t know how much... how much I love you." Dragonscreech rasped. "We do, too." Enderskin purred, her purple eyes blinking. Firetalon and Voletuft nodded. "Well, kits, at some point, we die." The reddish-brown tom (Dragonscreech) meowed. Voletuft's amber eyes sorrowed. "I... I'll watch you over StarClan. I promise." Dragonscreech promised, then rested his head on the ground. His body was cold and lifeless.
Name: SmokeBear lol Role: Medicine cat Pelt length: medium Pelt: tawny SmokeBear was given his unusual name from his father, RedStar. Redstar named him after his mate, SmokeBear’s mother who died giving birth to him. Her name was FawnBear. SmokeBear severed as the WindClan med cat
I got the best one- he's a leader bu i'm ot going to chane his suffix just because. Your sight is blurred out by the rain, the storm has been going for days, you lost your friends, and.... is that a camp? You limp toward what looks like an entrance. You were right! Guess this isn't the best thing.... as you are a loner, but maybe these cats will help you at least for tonight! Your vision is blocked, but you think you see a cat sitting on a very tall rock, could it be the leader? Is that what they are called? You try to remember but clan life always was hard to remember. "Hello," -the cat on the rock said, though it seemed more like yelling. You take a step forward and wipe your eyes to see the cat. He was a large, fluffy, sand colored , tom. "Who are you?" The cat smiles and jumps down, you can now see more of his fur. He has little white spots on his pelt that look like stars on sand. He has dark blue eyes that look like a ocean at night. The cat circles you for a moment then sits infront of you. "You must be Y/N, Welcome." The cat smiles warmly and does a small bow with his head. "I am Rain'Water, are you interested in joining stormclan?" Say maybe Say no Say yes
AAAA I love it! thank you for watching/commenting. Haille (the rogue, a random oc I made off of the top of my head) sighs and looks at RainWater with wide, desperate eyes, full of dismay. “Yes, please- I don’t have anywhere to stay! I’ll prove myself, train as-…whatever you do in clan life, please just give me somewhere to stay…” Haille’s once-shiny, smoky gray fur was dull and soaked by the rain that pelted down from the clouds. Her sharp amber eyes were filled with exhaustion and pain, wincing as she limped up to the tall rock. Her eyes and ears were flooded with rain that deafened the poor she-cat. ( rainwater seems like a real chill dude! I really like it, and I’m sorry I had to make a little excerpt from what could have happened. Thanks for watching!)
Lichen stared at the strange Leader of StormClan for a moment, but then nodded. "Yes, thank you for the invitation, I would love to join your Clan. I will prove myself to be loyal, and worthy of your gift. I will train and learn your Clan ways until I can repay this great debt." Rain'water dipped his head in acknowledgement. "For now just rest," he murmured, "and I'll tell my guard to keep a better eye out. . . not all rogues are as friendly as you." Lichen smiled, watching the Leader as he padded off towards the camp entrance. She turned and looked for a den, but there were very many around. "Hi," Lichen jumped as she heard a young voice behind her. She turned to see a young tortoiseshell and white she-cat standing behind her. "Erm. . . Hi?" she mewed in a stunned reply. "My name is Seedfawn, are you looking for the warriors den?" Lichen nodded and then followed the she-cat through the sheltered camp, excited to start her new life.
When Dawnfluff was 2 moons old her father died. After that she was stolen by a Thunderclan warrior. 1 moon after half of Skyclan came to rescue her. And even though Dawnfluff is a warrior/Deputy she has a special connection with Starclan.
SeedVine Role: Med cat Pelt length: Medium Pelt Color: Chocolate Markings: Calico Backstory: Seedvine was always very helpful even as kit, she loved the river but one day she was collecting herbs for her mentor SnowNose and suddenly a Thunderclan warrior pushed her in the streaming river and she fell against a rock. The thunderclan warrior thought she was dead so he left. SandRope, her brother, ran a few seconds later to her and got her out. SandRope helped her to go back to the Riverclan and she was treated by SnowNose. The unfortunate news was that SeedPaw went blind. *Time skip to 5 moons later* SeedPaw, now SeedVine, was treating MouseFur his paws, but she had alot more warriors to treat since they had been in battle with the thunderclan over the sunrocks. She looked up to the stars. A few months ago SnowNose had gone to the Starclan. And her brothers partner RiverFlow was expecting kits. It was all too much for SeedVine, and she thought she was gonna collapse, but she went going, treating every warrior. 1 moon later RiverFlow had greencough. SeedVine tried everything to help RiverFlow, but when RiverFlow got her kits the queen still had the greencough. Riverflow died while giving birth and 3 of the 4 kits also died. SeedVine her brother was very sad. 3 moons later (The kit who survived is called PollyKit) SeedVine had an argument with SandRope about that SandRope should pay more attention to PollyKit since he never goes to the poor kit. SandRope: "PollyKit has LionFall and her kits!" SeedVine: "I know you are griefing but you got to pay attention to PollyKit. She has never even seen you!" SandRope: "Maybe it would be better if you disapeared!" SeedVine then said to SandRope that she was gonna have a walk around the territorium. But little did SandRope know that SeedVine was never gonna return. SandRope was on patrol around the thunderclan border and there he saw SeedVine her body dead.
Meet dawnstar the leader of my pelt is long the main color of my pelt Is chocolate btw leader of riverclan OC STORY TIME FEEL FREE TO READ CWS BLOOD DEATH BETRAIL AND IT IS VERY LONG dawnwhisker stared down at her dead leader she suddenly felt like she couldn’t breathe dawnwhisker carried her leaders body to the camp she explained how a shadowclan patrol had came into their camp and killed seastar littlekit padded over to seastars body and licked it gently littlekis mother fluffyclaw joined in all of the clan laid around seastar dawnwhisker wanted to rip those warriors fur off but she knew they were long gone and there was no use getting herself killed she jumped up onto the Highrock we will always remember seastar but I must announce something I think shadow clan is planning to attack I heard their patrol before they attacked us they had said that after they killed seastar and me they would kill the rest of riverclan the cats below gasped how did you survive? Moonshine asked worry in her kind voice I had tried to fight for seastar but they overpowered me I had ran until I had reached the camp they retreated after I entered the camp the claw mark on her side stringed like a bee and her paws ached moonshine chanted dawnwhiskers new name dawnstar! Dawnstar! Dawnstar! All the cats below joined in except for one seastars daughter darkfang after the chanting stopped she called out I must appoint a deputy and I have decided that the deputy will be mountainsage mountainsage looked at her in surprise and also I think that it is time for Kaipaw to become a warrior he has been training for a while and his courage and determination will make him an amazing warrior mountainsage jumped up onto the rock and licked dawnstar behind her ear I promise you I will be the best deputy I can dawnstar smiled I know you will she whispered in her ear kindly Kaipaw looked at dawnstar with surprised eyes who will be my mentor? he asked I think darkfang would make a good mentor dawnstar whispered in mountainsages ear she nodded darkfang you will mentor Kaipaw I must take my journey to the moon pool the cats below nodded I will go now shall I come with you mountainsage asked worry for her new leader in her eyes s no I think I must take this journey alone dawnstar had arrived at the moon pool she walked down the ancient stairs and walked up to the glimmering pool she lapped up 3 licks of water and she was now in a shiny cave 9 different cats standing around her seastar the last riverclan leader before her twigbranch the apprentice she had mentored he had died when he had accidentally chased a mouse onto a thunder path he was struck by a monster before she could help him sitting next to twigbranch was yellowwhisker her mother she had died when a group of rouges attacked her potrol the rest of the cats she didn’t recognize seastar walked up to her first she whispered before I give you your first life I have a message before a great leader can rule betrayal will rise and shake the forest killing love dawnstars eyes widened then she saw a huge light it hit her and she felt strong seastar had given her all 9 lives at the same time when she woke up the moon was at its peak how long was I asleep Dawnstar asked in her head when she had returned to the camp everyone was sleeping she passed the warriors den frowning that she would never sleep there again she went into her den and laid on a bundle of fresh moss she couldn’t sleep seastars prophecy was making her head spin before a great leader can rule betrayal will rise and shake the forest killing love what did that mean? Would someone in the clan betray her? She finally fell asleep when she woke up she heard screams of terror from the nursery she got up and ran to the screams immediately she saw blood and the dead body of shadowpelt moonshines mate she spotted a bunch a rouges attacking moonshine and her kits dawnstar attacked one of the rouge he pinnned her down and swiped a massive paw at her the claws sliced her face open she screamed in pain and kicked him off she jumped on his back and bit his neck he yowweld and ran out of the camp she saw dark fang behind her attacking her apprentice Kaipaw dawnstar jumped at darkfang she snarled and pinned dawnstar down she looked at her in the eyes and then dawnstar was dead what happened I had 9 lives! She yellled at starclan we are sorry I only had time to give you one seastar looked at her I’m sorry
I got Bramblefawn/star. She is a muted white with doe colored tortie with deep blue eyes and white spots all over her pelt. She is the leader of Skyclan. The deputy is Nightstalker and the medicine cat is Silverberry. She has an apprentice named Brightpaw. Her mates’ name is Dusklight. She has 3 kits. Their names are Swiftkit, Shadowkit, and Featherkit. Her mothers’ name is Silentflight. Her fathers’ name is Doeflame. Her brothers names are Hopfoot and Applestep. Her sisters’ name is Ivyfrost.
@@redstar4452 owltwig is an elderly deputy of Creekclan. he’s super grumpy, and stand-offish. He is a very good leader however and is skilled with organizing and hunting. Both parents, Meltwink (father) and Daisyfoot (mother) are dead. Never wanted a mate, and his sister Wrensong, is completely opposite personality wise. He’s had 3 apprentices, and is almost ready to test his most recent apprentice Vinepaw (to be named Vinetangle.) But yas
Dawnreed Role: med cat Pelt length: hairless Pelt color: cinnamon Pseudo merle Dawnreed was born without one of her forepaws so from the beginning everyone told her she couldn't be a warrior. She didn't feel much passion for being a future medicine cat, so she ran away. Thinking she could be a warrior in a different clan. It was difficult but she eventually made it to four trees and wandered into ShadowClan territory. Where she hastily hid behind a bush because she could smell a cat. "Hey," cried the cat. "I can smell Thunderclan come out!" Dawnreed gingerly stepped out to face this cat. The cat was a brown tabby tom and appeared to be growing old. "Oh, you poor thing you've traveled so far," The tom meowed. "Why have you come here?" Dawnreed soon spilled all her troubles to the patient cat. "I am Dearleap," the tom said. "I am a medicine cat, and it is a noble path to follow." He told her all about his troubles when he was little. Like how his mentor died when he was only an apprentice and had to learn by himself. "Starclan guided me threw that time." Deerleap meowed. The nice tom helped her get back home. After that encounter Dawnreed became more inclined to become a medicine cat.
[ OC INFO + NINE LIVES LIST ] : Name - Fluffytwig/star Role - Leader Pelt Length - Super Long/Fluffy Description - a fawn she-cat with a lighter underbelly with darker spots - Life 1: Leafflight ( Former Medicine Cat AND Later revealed to be Fluffystar's Mother - Life of Justice - Lost by being killed by a badger ) Life 2: Cricketkit ( Fluffystar's Deceased Best Friend - Life of Freedom - Lost by being killed by Kalimbaclaw, a prisoner ) Life 3: Sweetglow ( Fluffystar's Mentor - Life of Balance - Lost by falling into The Gorge ) Life 4: Reedfur ( Fluffystar's Adoptive Mother - Life of Carefulness - Lost by accidentally being killed by Goldfinchpaw/feather ) Life 5: Lightpaw ( One of the founders of Fluffystar's Clan - Life of Perspective - Lost by overheating ) Life 6: Songsmoke ( Fluffystar's Daughter - Life of Creativity - Lost by being punctured by a sharp rock ) Life 7: Rufflefawn ( Deputy who died and was succeeded by Fluffystar - Life of Truthfulness - Lost by freezing to death ) Life 8: Paleheart ( The cat Fluffystar saved from having his murder case unsolved - Life of Well-Being - Lost by being killed while sleeping ) Life 9: Crystalstar ( Fluffystar's predecessor - Life of Leadership - Lost by being fed meadow saffron by Umbrellabirdstar )
i got poppy"cloud (uncommon):as a kit her sidlings always trick her into a fight. as she got older tho the less they did it intill one day a warrior killed her mother in front of her then blamed her for it and so she ran away and now she's a rogue. past role:app palt length:fuffy pelt color:sandy with mud brown gander: she'cat
Name: Rainfawn Rank: Elder Pelt length: semi-long main color: Cinnamon Pattern: Spotted tabby Rainfawn was a powerful warrior from ScorchClan. No cat could beat him in battle. But one day in a battle with FreezeClan, Rainfawn accidentally killed Featherpaw. This horrified and devastated him, so he retired to the elder’s den and vowed never to fight again. Rainfawn is enjoying his retirement for the most part, but has frequently nightmares about Featherpaw’s death and being dragged to the dark forest for what he’s done. His mate, Dustwhisker, a tom from ScorchClan, and the current deputy, tries to support and console him, but Rainfawn is still wracked with guilt.
Dawnpaw (feather) is a fluffy cream she-cat with small white spots she is the med app of Riverclan she loves to explore with her littermates she and a Windclan app. meet up at night Dawnpaw really likes Hailpaw (one of my ocs) idk wat else to write 😢
Awakening of Dawn Chapter 2: No return until sun Dawnkit limped of of the queens den and into the light. Only two cats were in the cat and they were acting very strange. Their heads were down their tails and ears were drooping and they looked terrified. Dawnkit limped over to the prey pile keeping her eyes exactly on the one medicine cat in the clan. Her name is... ( I start thinking up a name.) .... Blossompelt. She was acting the strangest. She was walking around strangly like the warrior. Sorry i will continue chapter 2 tomorrow.
Rainpaw, later Rainlily Apprentice Pelt length: medium Color: lilac? (I think that's what it was) Dilute calico And uhhhh.... I don't have a backstory yet 😅
Stone paw was kind and strong apprentice and she loved adventures opposed to her sister who hardly left camp she is good at running and fighting she came from sky clan her best friend often called her a warrior already because she helped fight a fox her mother was a peaceful she cat named wet flower her father died when she was born she " stone paw said vine tail her mentor fallow whisper Time to hunt " well all right she mewed she was a dust brown with white spots and. Orange eyes playfull She thought of cloud paw her only friend she later went back to c amp she passed black clover up the Raven " what is it ? She asked ruffly " wet flower and cloud paw are dead! Bt us her name was stone fluff
Glimmerlight (Actually lol) _________ - Medicine cat - Fluffy pelt - Main color, Fawn - Dilute tortie markings -- Too lazy to write a story but theyre riverclan.
Name:elderflight Role:elder Pelt lengh:curly Main couler:dusty brown Pattern:white spots Story Elderflight grew up in the dark forest and had a special connection to starclan when he was young he always wanted to see thunderclan but his mother said no one day he was exploreing and saw a she cat all alone they started to bond and soon had forbidden love which he was soon banished for he had there kittens who were all killed and one day while he was alone a young warrior named forestfire ripped open his stomach and organs
Cloudpale, medicine cat apprentice, long, black, idk what u talkin bout so imma put stripes. Anyway heres gurls story. . . . . Im to bored to write maybe next time.
Name: Splashstar(fur) Role: Leader Fur length: Short Main fur color: Black Markings: Tabby Gender: Tom Clan: Skyclan Appearence: Large, Sturdy build with short, Black fur with darker tabby stripes. He has a white glowing star on his forehead due to being a leader, And he has amber eyes. He has curled ears and he has a horrific long scar, Going from above his right eye blinding his right eye, To his neck, His side, And his knee. Personality: Quick-thinking, Hardworking, Forgetive, Guilty, And artistic. Siblings: He has two siblings: A sarcastic younger sister named Ivypaw who is a medicine cat apprentice, And a lovable little sister named Haykit. Kits: 8 Kits who he loves very dearly. Mate: A determined she-cat named Lakesight. They both care about eachother deeply. Mother: A (neglective) she-cat named Darklight. Father: A (missing) tom named Brightsong. Story: (COMING SOON!)
Meet sky'cloud a ginger tabby cat and the medicine she-cat of windclan, when she was an apprentice she used to be a warrior apprentice but then she choose the path of a medicine cat and the leader of her clan give her permission, she's really nice and kind she loves to help other cats when they were in danger, one day she go to collect some herbs for the clan supplie, in the middle of the walk the bush next to her is moving, she was shocked and see the bush, from the bush a cat jumped!, sky'cloud quickly got away from the cat, "who are you!" asked sky'cloud with a loud voice, "me?, my name's max!" Said the tom-cat named max, "why are you here?, and why are you treespass our territory!" Said sky'cloud, "i just come here to hunt, give me your food or else.." said max with a mad face, "NO WAY! I'm not giving you the food that's fully ours, find your food by yourself!", hearing about that max get so angry, she quickly attacked sky'cloud, but sky'cloud managed to free herself from his attack, sky'cloud unsheathed her claw and scratch max right on her cheek, "you had scratched me, if i get a scar then you'll get a scar too!" max scratched her back on her nose, they two attacked each other until daisy'whisker (deputy of windclan) found out that they both were fighting each other, "STOP BOTH OF YOU!" Scream daisy'whisker, They both stop and looked at her, "d-daisy'whisker? Is that you?" Asked max, "yes it's me max" Answer daisy'whisker, "wait, you guys know each other?" Said sky'cloud confused, "he's my long lost brother that i told you about, my brother actually didn't lost, but runaway from windclan and live as a loner" said daisy'whisker with a deep voice, "so max is your brother?" Asked sky'cloud again, "yeah.., daisy'whisker is my little sister, i love her so much more than anything" said max, "then why did you leave her?" Sky'cloud said, "it all started when she just been a apprentice, when she started being an apprentice i feel that she get more attention than me, every cat loves her but not me.." said max, "why would you think that?" Daisy'whisker asked, "because every time i wanted to talk with them they always get away from me like i'm a scary monster, they always talked with you no one wanted to talk with me everyone hates me!" said max, max started crying because of that, sky'cloud looked at daisy'whisker and whisper something "i feel bad for your brother, why don't we let him have another chance to live with us again?" Said sky'cloud, "but did he want to..?" Asked daisy'whisker, "just asked him, i'm sure he want to" said sky'cloud, "uhm hey max, uhh would you like to live with us again..?, i actually miss you" Daisy'whisker asked with a sad face, "really..?, but i runaway from our clan, i don't want they all will talked bad things about me because i leave our clan since we're an apprentice" said max worried, "hey it's okay, we'll start from the beginning" said sky'cloud, "no need to be scared" continue sky'cloud, "if that's what you guys said then i'll live with you again, is it okay sister..?" Asked max, "really?!, it's more than just okay!" Said daisy'whisker happily, "let's go back to our camp, i'm happy that you guys can live together again!" Said sky'cloud, they get back to the windclan camp and max making lots of new friends, max new name become blaze'claw, the prefix is from his prefix before he ran away and the suffix is gotten from his ability to fight really well, blaze'claw is now happy because he can live again in windclan that's his original home..
Hello! So sorry I forgot to tell you i finished the intro part! So you can use it or not, i kinda got lazy with the redo sorry ua-cam.com/video/GpA4hFZ6rlY/v-deo.html
Reedpaw (bark) (lol I had Reedreed at first-)
Role: App
Pelt Length: Super long/fluffy
Pelt color: Light gray
Torbie markings (dilute)
Her Story:
Reedpaw was always adventurous, opposed to her wary sister, Swamp-paw, and grumpy brother, Claypaw. She enjoyed hunting and running, and she came from RiverClan. Although she was a good swimmer she sometimes wished that she had been born in WindClan. Her friend, Bankpaw, thought she was crazy, while the two newest Warriors, Grass-sand, and Snowtumble mocked her.
Many cats would look at her in distaste, but her mother always comforted her, telling her that she belonged in RiverClan. Although it never really helped, because Reedpaw knew that wasn’t true and that the other cats thought she was crazy. One day while Reedpaw was hunting alone near the WindClan border she was following a water vole, when without realizing, she crossed into WindClan territory.
Reedpaw caught the vole and sat up proudly, but surrounded by hills everywhere. She turned to see the stream behind her, and was about to run back across the border when she heard a growl behind her.
Reedpaw jumped and turned to see a tall, slender tom standing in front of her with a scowl on his face. She stared at him with fear, he was much larger and taller than her.
“What are you doing on WindClan territory?” the young tom growled, thrusting his muzzle in her face as he spoke.
“I-I,” Reedpaw stammered, at a loss for words. The toms pelt fluffed up in anger and Reedpaw gulped. “It was an accident!” she blurted out.
“Oh, so you accidentally crossed into our territory and stole our prey?” the tom scoffed in disbelief. “Likely story, Apprentice.”
“My name is not Apprentice,” she growled, feeling anger bubbling up inside of her, “I’m Reedpaw.”
The tom stared at her. “Reedpaw the thief,” he mutteredunder his breath.
“I heard that!” she hissed. “And I am not a thief, I was following this vole and it crossed into WindClan territory, and I didn’t realize.”
“You’re too lazy to focus on anything but your prey are you?” the tom mocked. “Typical RiverClan, always thinking with their stomachs, not their brains.”
“Hey!” Reedpaw hissed indignantly.
The tom shrugged and sat down. “You’re a lot skinnier than normal RiverClan cats,” he muttered, “especially considering it’s Greenleaf.”
Reedpaw looked down, her long fur clung to her skinny frame, and suddenly she felt self conscious, and nervous. What if he thinks RiverClan can’t feed themselves and launches an attack on our Clan? She thought nervously.
“Honestly, you look more like you belong in WindClan than RiverClan.” The tom growled.
“Maybe it is where I belong,” Reedpaw whispered, “sometimes I wish I was there instead of RiverClan.”
“What?” The tom gasped.
Reedpaw looked sheepishly up at him, a small, embarrassed smile on her face.
“If anyone asks, I didn’t say that,” she meowed awkwardly.
The tom cocked his head. “I wish you were in WindClan too,” he growled, “you’re the funniest cat I’ve talked to in a while.”
“What do you mean?” Reedpaw asked.
“Well when I was an Apprentice I had a bunch of friends,” the tom explained, “but after I became a Warrior most of my friends remained Apprentices, and neither of my brothers will talk to me.”
“When were you made a Warrior?” Reedpaw asked.
“Just around half a moon ago,” he replied, “my name is now Smokevine!”
The young tom puffed his chest out proudly,his short gray fur blown flat in the wind, making him look even skinnier than he already was. Reedpaw smiled at him warmly, for the first time in a while feeling like she could express her feelings towards another cat. But suddenly the breeze shifted towards them, and Smokevine looked around with a nervous hiss.
“Quickly Reedpaw,” he urgently growled, “I smell one of my Clanmates coming, take your vole and get back across the river.”
Reedpaw picked the vole up, but then paused, feeling hesitant. She dropped the vole and then bounded back over to him, nuzzling his chest with her head.
“Will I see you again?” she purred.
Smokevine went tense, but after a second relaxed and licked her fondly on the head. “Y-yes,” he growled, “we can talk at Gatherings, and if we see eachother on border patrols or while we’re hunting we can always talk then.”
Reedpaw smiled, and let out a happy purr before grabbing her vole and racing back into RiverClan territory. Once she was safely across the border she cast one last rueful glance behind her to see a young she-cat and elderly tom bounding up to Smokevine. She saw him cast her one more quick glance and felt warmth flow through her body.
Reedbark let out a low growl of anger as yet another carp managed to evade her claws. What am I doing wrong? She thought with frustration, lashing her tail as she flexed her claws.
“Hey, what's got your pelt all in a twist?”
Reedbark looked up with a smile at the familiar voice, and spotted a familiar gray pelt just over the river. She purred and plunged into the water, swimming swiftly - and a bit clumsily - across. She reached the opposite bank and pulled herself up, bounding over to Smokevine.
“Hey Reedpaw!” Smokevine purred, licking her on the forehead.
“Actually,” Reedbark corrected, “it’s Reedbark now!”
She puffed her chest out proudly, and her friend let out a purr of delight. Smokevine laid his tail over her shoulders and nuzzled her.
“Finally,” he growled, letting out an exasperated sigh. “It only took forever, I mean Swampreed, Claypebble, and Banksand all became Warriors two moons ago! I mean I know you don’t like RiverClan, but you can’t stay an Apprentice forever.”
Reedbark cuffed him over the ear with a chuckle. “Stop teasing,” she growled, “I’m just no good at fishing, I feel much better out in open places, like the moor!”
“W-well Reedbark, listen, I’ve been. . . well thinking recently. What if you come live in WindClan with me?”
Reedbark glanced up at Smokevine. Her friend was smiling awkwardly down at her, and she noticed his claws working themselves in and out of the dirt nervously.
“Will WindClan accept me? What will my family think?” she asked after a moment.
Smokevine stared at her and then glanced ashamedly at the ground. “You’re right it was a stupid plan, I shouldn’t even have mentioned it.”
“No, Smokevine, it was a brilliant plan, I’d give up anything to come be with you in WindClan, but it’s just. . . how would we explain it?” Reedbark replied quickly.
Smokevine sighed and lowered his head sadly. “I. . . Reedbark I don’t know, but what I do know is that I want to be with you.”
Reedbark purred and smiled. “I better get going, there’s a gathering tonight. See you there?”
If this comment gets to 5 likes I’ll continue the story lol (if not I prolly will continue the story anyway)
omg that is great! ty for watching and commenting, I’d love to hear more about reedbark! great job 👏
@@k_kazooz tysm! I really liked your oc generator! It was one of the better ones I’ve seen.
omg this is so good i love forb. romance
Awakening of Dawn.
Chapter 1: the beginning...
DawnKit lays with her mother and her paws tucked under her fluff to keep warm. It's leafbare in Skyclan but... Also just 2 days after Dawn Kit's father and Barksong' S mate went to Starclan. BarkSong is Dawnkit's mother. BarkSong has not been the same since. All Dawnkit knows is that her father, RavenWing got trapped with a fox.
Suddenly dust landed on Dawnkit's nose. "ACHOO!" Barksong's eyes shot open. "Are you ok dear?" " Yes mama." Replied Dawnkit. "Can I go get a mouse from the prey pile?" BarkSong stared at Dawnkit for a long second. "I promise I will come right back." "Alright." BarkSong mumbled burying her muzzle into her paws. Dawnkit stood up and stretched. Just then did she realize she had a cramp in her right hind leg. Dawnkit limped out of the Queens den and into the light.
I will make a chapter 2 soon!!!!
😊
oh no! I hope dawnkit’s leg feels better soon! looking forward to chap 2 ^^
Pelt lenght: long
Pelt colour: cinnamon
Markings: pseudo merle
(the name and role are in the story)
Story:
Smokekit were a brave kit who was named "hero" by her friends (she-cat). When something bad happens to them, Smokekit always protect and console them. Her sis were named Shockpaw, and she was mean and unfair. All day, when Smokekit get home talking about her day, Shockpaw say, meanly: "Shut up, furr ball! We're from RiverClan, and i'll not accept a dumb kit that don't even know how to swim talking this way with me!" And then, Shockpaw turns around and bit Smokekit's face. It repeats all day.
One day, when Smokekit were sleeping calmly, a male kit started patting her until she woke up. "Kit, i saw all that happened! No one deserve to have a sister this way! She bit your eye every single day... Wait... What's the colour of your eyes?" He asked. Smokekit looked confused, but then she realized... She was blind of one eye! Smokekit was afraid. "W-What i'm going to do?" She asked for the male. He thinked a bit and awnsered: "I know one place that you can go. It isn't too far away from here... It's named two-legs place." Smokekit look to her clan, her parents and to all the things she had. "No, thanks. I'll stay here. And what's your name?" Smokekit asked. "My name is Brownkit."
"My name is Smokekit."
"Oh, hi! But what are you gonna do about your sister?"
"I'll become an apprentice, learn how to swim and win from her on a fight!"
"You don't know how to swim?"
"Nope."
"Ok, so i'll teach you!"
After that day, Smokekit spent all her time with Brownkit, learning how to swim. One day, in the middle of the swimming class, the leader entered the river and stopped them. - Are you ready? - He asked. - Ready for what? - The both kits asked at the same time. The leader smiled, and then the both realized that they would become apprentices! - But... leader, what about my eye? - Smokekit asked. He picked Smokekit and said: - If i didn't trusted you, i would never give you your apprentice name.
"But i'm not a apprentice yet!"
"I trust you and i believe in your strenth. A blind eye won't stop you, and this i know."
Smokekit smiled and ran as fast as she could to the big rock, jumping away from the leader's back. "My little sis becoming an apprentice with a blind eye and a weak jaw? This is unacceptaple!" A young warrior screamed from the middle of the other cats. It was Shocktail, Smokekit's sister. "Shut up, your, your...." Smokekit said, angrily, but Brownkit calmed her. "I declare Smokekit and Brownkit as apprentices! After this moment, their names will be Smokepaw and Brownpaw!" All the cats clapped and meowed, except for Shocktail. "And i declare a duel with Smokekit!" She said. "Her name's Smokepaw!" Brownpaw said. "Ok, i wanna fight with Smokepaw." Shocktail said, mockingly. Whithout thinking much, Smokepaw jumped from the rock and started fighting Shocktail. Smokepaw scratched and bit Shocktail, but with only one kick, Smokepaw flew away.
After a long fight, Shocktail jailed Smokepaw under her claws and meowed with pride. Smokepaw had any more energies, and had one movement left to do before losing completely her stenth. She bit Shocktail's neck and held straigh. After a while, Shocktail fell down in the cold grass. It was alredy night. Medicine cats ran over to pick Shocktail and to heal her.
After some days, one medicine cat stepped to the apprentices den. "Smokepaw's here?" He asked to Brownpaw. "Yes, she's here."
"Smokepaw, i need to talk to you."
"What is?"
"I know that you don't wanted to do this, but Shocktail's dead."
(If this comment get to five likes i'll continue the story if i want to)
| Name : EmberPaw (Night when a warrior)(ngl EmberNight is a good name)
| role : Apprentice
| fur!! : super floofy!!
| furcolors : Fawn / Spots + Light red coloring (To fit with the "Ember" in his name)
His story?
I'll be working on that
A beautiful elder cat named pale cloud, lol
She's a smoky gray calico with long fluffy fur
She has a relatively peaceful life, she has mental health issues though. A little cookoo but she's chill
hey dw we all are a lil cookoo. palecloud seems like a pretty cool she cat :) ty for watching and commenting !
I got palecloud too
Rumblebright is a warrior, with medium, solid ginger, fur. She is a half clan cat, and has a child called Alpacapaw.
awww, love that name!
Heheh I got a goofy lil guy named StoneSnap! He’s a hairless little bean with all around good vibes. Tbh, at first I got leader and refused it because I just really like the name StoneSnap and didn’t wanna upgrade him to “star” statues, so ima settle for deputy.
that is such a cute little dude! thank you for watching/commenting :) stonesnap sounds like a very responsible guy. love it!
Tallbark is a medicine cat from Ellipseckan. Tallbark is a she-cat. Her pelt color is a diluted ginger calico. Her eyes are a bright aqua color. She is very sweet, gentle, kind, patient, shy, mysterious, sassy, and assertive, Her mentor was Lightcloud. Her parents are Misthop and Ashtalon. Her littermates are Rabbitflare, a pure red tom with yellow eyes, Flamestar, A pure ginger tabby she-cat with blue eyes, Smokefang: A black and white tom with gray eyes. Her best friend is Snowypelt, A pure white she-cat with silver eyes. Tallbark has two bullies, They are Rockclaw, A smoky gray tom with green eyes, and Talonflame, A dark ginger and white tom with amber eyes.
tallbark seems like a cool she cat! I hope rockclaw and talonflame don’t get on her nerves too much hehe
SmokeHeart:
A brown and white shecat she was named Smoke because she was always visible and easy to see, named heart because of her sweet nature and ability to calm others in a matter of seconds which comes very handy for a med cat! Sadly After only 2yrs old SmokeHeart died saving a kidnapped kit, replacing herself as the kidnapped one and died shortly after being kidnapped.
Skyheart is a swift and brave warrior from Fogclan. She has sleek, glossy short grey fur with dilute calico markings and blue eyes. She lives in Flogclan out of spite and she is a cold cat, not liking the attention she gets for being a halfclan cat
Smokefluff was always an adventurous cat. They had a long-haired fluffy long pelt with a blue gray colour and ginger spots, they were a torbie cat. They were born in The Tribe Of Rushing Water, they always climbed moutains in the territory and as a kit, they had free will. Smokefluff always snuck away from their mother, climbing rocks acting like there're tall moutains, playing with friends, and many more fun things. As an apprentice they had the best time of there life! One time while climbing moutains with their mentor, a rock was rolling right towards them! Smokepaw ran as fast as they could but the rock rolled over them. They lost there paw, but Smokepaw kept climbing moutains. Begging to see what was behind the moutains. They loved climbing moutains with there friends, the clan followed Smokepaw. The leader then gave Smokepaw a privilege to become a warrior, your new name was Smokefluff Due to your long fur and braveness, you also became deputy! Once you and your clan reached the top of the moutains, A Moutain lion attacked and pushed you off the edge of a cliff, you felt a sharp pain as you fell down to a bottomless abyss, you closed you eyes saying you last words, " I'm sorry I have to leave this world. Be safe and remember me, now fight me, Moutain lion!"
Fun fact: Smokefluff's pronouns were they/them! They also got sent to a dark aybss for the afterlife!
I love smokefluff! awesome that they keep on going even after losing a paw. they seem to be a really brave warrior.
Cloudfawn is a beautiful Dark brown she-cat with white dots on her flank and white paws. She has green eyes and short fur. At a senior warrior age, she had broken her back from falling off a cliff while fighting a warrior form another clan. Her leader wanted her to retire to the elders den, but she refused, she got another appretice but having a bad back, she had struggled. While her and her appretice was out, they were attacked. She tried protecting her appretice but fail due to her back injury. Her appretice was killed and she regretted staying as a warrior to be a mentor. So she joined the elders, Telling the kits stoys of all her adventures as a warrior and appretice. One night a storm came, and flooded a camp, with her last stangth she saved a kit, but before she could get her self to safety, she was swept down the flooding river, and was never seen again. She woke up in starclan, greeted by all her loved ones.
Palecloud is a deputy with long blue fur covered in darker blue and white spots, she was a rogue and after that she became a shadowclan member after a few moons of being a warrior she fell for a rogue cat she knew, and he tricked her into becoming a kittypet, after realizing that her life feels worthless she went to rejoin shadowclan but they didn't accept her but riverclan did, and after that she became a deputy of the clan (but she's still out for revenge on shadowclan and the rogue that tricked her so she's kinda starting a villain Arc😂).
Someone reply or like so I can be reminded to right her story
Tall’Blaze/Star is a ginger she-cat with semi-long fur and tortie markings. She has bright amber eyes and a scar on her eye, and a tear in her left ear. She is the leader of ThunderClan. A little bit about her? Well, here!
Tall’Blaze was given her nine lives at the Moonstone.
Life 1 was the life of bravery; protect the clan even if you’re scared. Given by Fire’Flight (old deputy)
Life 2 was the life of knowledge; share your knowledge with the clan. Given by Char’Paw (Tall’Blaze’s apprentice)
Life 3 was the life of kindness; always help a cat when they’re lost, hurt, or in trouble. Given by Hawk’Sight (A queen)
Life 4 was the life of trust; always trust your clan mates. Given by Constellation (A loner, and Tall’Blaze’s best friend)
Life 5 was the life of forgiveness; it’s not in the past, but the future. Given by Ice’Claw (Tall’Blaze’s mentor)
Life 6 was the life of strength; when you fall, you get back up. Given by Wisdom’Fang (Tall’Blaze’s mate)
Life 7 was the life of love; you don’t have to love once. Given by Whoosh’Storm (Tall’Blaze’s second mate)
Life 8 was the life of belief; trust StarClan will everything. Given by Comet’Tail (Old medicine cat)
Life 9 was the life of guidance; let the stars guide you. You can ask for help. Given by Moon’Star (Old leader)
Comment PT.2 for an update on Tall’Blaze’s story! 🎉
AAAA! love it! thanks for watching, and I would love for an update on Tallstar’s story. ✨
The next Tallstar in line!!!
Stonefang/star
Leader
Long haired
Gray
Calico
Story!
Stonekit was born to Softfur and Ashstorm alongside his Two Sisters Coalkit and Graykit as well as his brother Ravenkit. More later!
STONEPALE/STAR is a Tom with curly fur and a black pelt with Smokey outlines for patterns and soft tortie colors. He’s always so grumpy, and never shows affection. But cares for his clanmates..
love it! very cute, thank you for watching :)
Featherbreeze, a fluffy/longhaired medicine cat apprentice with a fawn base with a smoke pattern of darker fawn, and bluish grey eyes,
TC. Story: when featherbreeze was young they kept waking up wondering where she is before she snaps out of it ( she is actually connected to a twoleg, heheheh, its me ) and the medicine cats see that as a sign from starclan that she is chosen, as a medicine cat apprentice, her memories get stronger and before you know it, she remembers her twolrg life until sunhigh, whenever someone mentions starclan ahe says 'you mean erins?' unser her breath, she believes she herself is insane or something.
Name: DawnVine
Role: apprentice
Gender: female
Eye color: dark green (the gamepass eye
Furr color: Sand
Markings: dilute torbie
Specie: tortie
fur length: Medium
Stroy: DawnVine is a apprentice that is born in summer. She had a mother who loved her very much but her father killed her... she saw this scene and ran away into a den only to see her father die too... She comes from Riverclan and now that she is alone she has made friends with a kitten named "CougarPaw" they are good friends. In reality they have known each other since they were born. CougarPaw is from Windclan. they grew up together. they fell in love and had a puppy named "WolfVine". He is their first child. now he is an apprentice and a little sister. the latest arrival named "CougarVine". Now they are a happy family. She now have 3 kittens the other one is "DawnRose" the other girl. end
Edit: i bet that this comment will have 0 likes like now.
aww. dawnvine seems happy with cougar. thank you for sharing! :)
Nightbreeze is a semi-longhaired black she-cat with orange eyes and a crooked front paw. she is a RiverClan medicine cat (formerly a warrior before she permanently injured her paw when it was caught under a fallen tree branch)
Despite her injury (and old age)
Nightbreeze is a legendary medicine cat, looked up to for advice from cats even from other clans.
Nightbreeze died peacefully of old age, surrounded by her close friends and relatives. She went to StarClan, where her paw was at last healed.
In personality,
Nightbreeze was wise, patient, shy, great sense of humor, and gentle.
Likes: kits, naptime, telling stories of her past, sleeping under the stars, flowers, kittypets.
Dislikes: loud noises, twolegs, dogs, thunderpaths, monsters, spiders.
Other facts:
Nightbreeze’s childhood best friend was a kittypet named Charlie, when Nightbreeze was an apprentice, she used to sneak off to go play with him, and he’d be waiting at the edge of the forest. Nightbreeze also taught Charlie about StarClan and clan life, therefore, Charlie came to respect the clans and the Forest more, and he believed in StarClan.
Charlie was present when Nightbreeze died, and during her burial as well.
Nightbreeze is descended from Mistystar and Stonefur.
Nightbreeze has a brother (Hawktalon) in ShadowClan. He joined ShadowClan to be with his mate: Mossfeather.
Nightbreeze has arachnophobia. (Fear of spiders)
Despite hating Twolegs, Nightbreeze gets along well with kittypets, since her best friend was a kittypet himself.
Nightbreeze has three kits: Patch (black tom with white splotches and orange eyes) Raven (small black tom with pale green eyes) and Shade, (long furred black she-cat with dark reddish-orange eyes) who the kits’ father, Charlie took in so that no cat could find out that Nightbreeze had broken the code.
All three of Nightbreeze’s kits had tragic lives, Raven died very young,
Shade went insane and turned evil because of it, and Patch pretty much shut himself out from other cats.
Shade, Patch, and Raven are OCs I’ve had for a few years now, I just didn’t have parents for them so this worked out perfectly, Shade was a major antagonist who nearly succeeded in destroying the clans, Raven didn’t live very long so I never really developed his character, but he was known to be playful and mischievous like his father, and Patch, who outlived both his littermates, was wise and patient just like his mother. I honestly love Patch too much to kill him off, so he has no death written yet lol, besides, Patch plays a huge hero role in my stories.
And that’s it for my new OC!
Edit: I changed Nightbreeze eyes to orange because I realized that Charlie had green eyes and therefore nobody could pass on orange eyes, also I changed Raven’s eyes to pale green like his father)
oooo! I love your story! your story with nightbreeze, Charlie, her clan, and her kits is really well planned out! thank you for watching/commenting. 🧡✨
@@k_kazooz You’re welcome! I had so much fun piecing this together (and finally giving three old OCs parents)
Are you planning on making another of these?
@@Alystra17 I don’t really know! I’ve kind of given up on UA-cam for many reasons, including my well being and because I was lacking. creativity/inspiration/motivation. I really appreciate it though :) soon, I’ll try to make an updated version!
@@k_kazooz I understand that, I’ve never had a YT channel myself, but I still get it. It’s not easy to settle on the main content of your channel you really like to do. But I still hope to see a video of yours soon🙂
Remember, the biggest UA-camrs today all started out small too! Subbed😁
Tallvine is a med cat (I chose 11 and 12 bcus I couldn’t decide between those lucky numbers)
He is super fluffy/long (btw he is nothing like goosefeather pls don’t compare them, he isn’t grumpy, he’s like featherwhisker, or even like barkface, he’s just a normal med cat, ok? Ok.)
He is smoky gray, (I got tortie/tortiseshell, so he’s dilute) .
I’m sorry but I don’t really wanna do the storytime thing bcus I’m lazy! At least you know this stuff. (:
Embervine is an elder with hairless blue-gray smoke fur and emerald eyes. Embervine was formerly a BloodClan warrior but got exiled after betraying them after falling in love with a ShadowClan warrior. After that, she joined ShadowClan and became a warrior. Moons later, she had kits with the ShadowClan warrior (called Dragonscreech) called: Firekit (talon), Volekit (tuft) and Enderkit (skin). She then retired when she saw her kits become warriors. Dragonscreech died a sunrise later.
----Story----
"You, you betrayed us!" Snarled Prickle, the BloodClan leader. "I'm tired of acting bad, acting ruthless. I know where i want to live now!" Ember curled her lips. "Oh yeah? Remember that we'll track you down, we'll watch you and stalk you." Prickle growled. "You won't scare me." Ember narrowed her eyes and with that, she left. She then clawed the collar off her neck. *Stupid collar.* she spat to herself, heading to the ShadowClan border. "Ember?" A voice made her jump. "Oh, hey Dragonscreech." Ember meowed. "What are you doing here?" Dragonscreech asked. "Oh, I left BloodClan." Ember meowed. "You did?" Dragonscreech asked in disbelief. Ember nodded. "Alright, then. You wanna join ShadowClan?" Dragonscreech licked his paw. "Yes, please." Ember nodded. "Follow me." Dragonscreech led the way to the camp entrance. "Stonestar." Dragonscreech dipped his head. "Greetings, Dragonscreech." Stonestar added, and then gazed at the newcomer. "Who's this?" She asked. "She's Ember, a friend. Can she join ShadowClan?" Dragonscreech introduced Ember. Ember nodded. "Very well." Stonestar added, and then yowled. "All cats old enough to catch their own prey, gather around the Clanrock for a Clan meeting!" Stonestar yowled. The ShadowClan cats gathered. Their eyes fixed on their leader, while some glanced curiously at the newcomer. "Today, a cat named Ember is joining our Clan. She left BloodClan and found her new place." Stonestar announced, her eyes fixed on Ember. "You're now called Embervine." Stonestar announced. "Embervine! Embervine!" The Clan cheered. "Meeting dismissed." Stonestar hopped off the rock.
Embervine layed down with her kits Firekit, Volekit and Enderkit. She watched them play. "Beautiful, aren't they?" Dragonscreech purred. "Beautiful like you." Embervine purred back. They nuzzled one another.
Many moons passed, and Embervine and Dragonscreech retired to the elder's den. Dragonscreech was turning weaker, and he layed in the moss. "Embervine, come here." Dragonscreech rasped, his eyes clouding. Embervine went to her mate, concerned. "Bring Firetalon, Voletuft and Enderskin." Dragonscreech said weakly. Embervine nodded, and headed to the warrior's den. "Kits, father wants to talk to you." Embervine meowed. Firetalon nudged the other two and headed to the elder's den. Embervine then layed near Dragonscreech, licking him. "You don’t know how much... how much I love you." Dragonscreech rasped. "We do, too." Enderskin purred, her purple eyes blinking. Firetalon and Voletuft nodded. "Well, kits, at some point, we die." The reddish-brown tom (Dragonscreech) meowed. Voletuft's amber eyes sorrowed. "I... I'll watch you over StarClan. I promise." Dragonscreech promised, then rested his head on the ground. His body was cold and lifeless.
Mine is Ruffle pale (or Seed Ruffle) the Leader of the Shadow Clan. He's a short haired smoke-grey colored cat (dilute calico) with Hazel green eyes.
Name: SmokeBear lol
Role: Medicine cat
Pelt length: medium
Pelt: tawny
SmokeBear was given his unusual name from his father, RedStar. Redstar named him after his mate, SmokeBear’s mother who died giving birth to him. Her name was FawnBear. SmokeBear severed as the WindClan med cat
aww, cute! love the name. thanks for watching + commenting!
By character is a female chocolate brown cat named Dawnfluff. She is the deputy Skyclan.
I got the best one- he's a leader bu i'm ot going to chane his suffix just because.
Your sight is blurred out by the rain, the storm has been going for days, you lost your friends, and.... is that a camp? You limp toward what looks like an entrance. You were right! Guess this isn't the best thing.... as you are a loner, but maybe these cats will help you at least for tonight! Your vision is blocked, but you think you see a cat sitting on a very tall rock, could it be the leader? Is that what they are called? You try to remember but clan life always was hard to remember.
"Hello," -the cat on the rock said, though it seemed more like yelling. You take a step forward and wipe your eyes to see the cat. He was a large, fluffy, sand colored , tom.
"Who are you?" The cat smiles and jumps down, you can now see more of his fur. He has little white spots on his pelt that look like stars on sand. He has dark blue eyes that look like a ocean at night. The cat circles you for a moment then sits infront of you.
"You must be Y/N, Welcome." The cat smiles warmly and does a small bow with his head. "I am Rain'Water, are you interested in joining stormclan?"
Say maybe
Say no
Say yes
AAAA I love it! thank you for watching/commenting.
Haille (the rogue, a random oc I made off of the top of my head) sighs and looks at RainWater with wide, desperate eyes, full of dismay. “Yes, please- I don’t have anywhere to stay! I’ll prove myself, train as-…whatever you do in clan life, please just give me somewhere to stay…” Haille’s once-shiny, smoky gray fur was dull and soaked by the rain that pelted down from the clouds. Her sharp amber eyes were filled with exhaustion and pain, wincing as she limped up to the tall rock. Her eyes and ears were flooded with rain that deafened the poor she-cat.
( rainwater seems like a real chill dude! I really like it, and I’m sorry I had to make a little excerpt from what could have happened. Thanks for watching!)
Lichen stared at the strange Leader of StormClan for a moment, but then nodded. "Yes, thank you for the invitation, I would love to join your Clan. I will prove myself to be loyal, and worthy of your gift. I will train and learn your Clan ways until I can repay this great debt."
Rain'water dipped his head in acknowledgement. "For now just rest," he murmured, "and I'll tell my guard to keep a better eye out. . . not all rogues are as friendly as you."
Lichen smiled, watching the Leader as he padded off towards the camp entrance. She turned and looked for a den, but there were very many around.
"Hi," Lichen jumped as she heard a young voice behind her.
She turned to see a young tortoiseshell and white she-cat standing behind her. "Erm. . . Hi?" she mewed in a stunned reply.
"My name is Seedfawn, are you looking for the warriors den?"
Lichen nodded and then followed the she-cat through the sheltered camp, excited to start her new life.
yes, i will like to your clan, please.
When Dawnfluff was 2 moons old her father died. After that she was stolen by a Thunderclan warrior. 1 moon after half of Skyclan came to rescue her. And even though Dawnfluff is a warrior/Deputy she has a special connection with Starclan.
OMG A THERIAN
SeedVine
Role: Med cat
Pelt length: Medium
Pelt Color: Chocolate
Markings: Calico
Backstory:
Seedvine was always very helpful even as kit, she loved the river but one day she was collecting herbs for her mentor SnowNose and suddenly a Thunderclan warrior pushed her in the streaming river and she fell against a rock. The thunderclan warrior thought she was dead so he left. SandRope, her brother, ran a few seconds later to her and got her out. SandRope helped her to go back to the Riverclan and she was treated by SnowNose. The unfortunate news was that SeedPaw went blind.
*Time skip to 5 moons later*
SeedPaw, now SeedVine, was treating MouseFur his paws, but she had alot more warriors to treat since they had been in battle with the thunderclan over the sunrocks. She looked up to the stars. A few months ago SnowNose had gone to the Starclan. And her brothers partner RiverFlow was expecting kits. It was all too much for SeedVine, and she thought she was gonna collapse, but she went going, treating every warrior. 1 moon later RiverFlow had greencough. SeedVine tried everything to help RiverFlow, but when RiverFlow got her kits the queen still had the greencough. Riverflow died while giving birth and 3 of the 4 kits also died. SeedVine her brother was very sad. 3 moons later (The kit who survived is called PollyKit) SeedVine had an argument with SandRope about that SandRope should pay more attention to PollyKit since he never goes to the poor kit. SandRope: "PollyKit has LionFall and her kits!" SeedVine: "I know you are griefing but you got to pay attention to PollyKit. She has never even seen you!" SandRope: "Maybe it would be better if you disapeared!" SeedVine then said to SandRope that she was gonna have a walk around the territorium. But little did SandRope know that SeedVine was never gonna return. SandRope was on patrol around the thunderclan border and there he saw SeedVine her body dead.
Meet dawnstar the leader of my pelt is long the main color of my pelt Is chocolate btw leader of riverclan OC STORY TIME FEEL FREE TO READ CWS BLOOD DEATH BETRAIL AND IT IS VERY LONG dawnwhisker stared down at her dead leader she suddenly felt like she couldn’t breathe dawnwhisker carried her leaders body to the camp she explained how a shadowclan patrol had came into their camp and killed seastar littlekit padded over to seastars body and licked it gently littlekis mother fluffyclaw joined in all of the clan laid around seastar dawnwhisker wanted to rip those warriors fur off but she knew they were long gone and there was no use getting herself killed she jumped up onto the Highrock we will always remember seastar but I must announce something I think shadow clan is planning to attack I heard their patrol before they attacked us they had said that after they killed seastar and me they would kill the rest of riverclan the cats below gasped how did you survive? Moonshine asked worry in her kind voice I had tried to fight for seastar but they overpowered me I had ran until I had reached the camp they retreated after I entered the camp the claw mark on her side stringed like a bee and her paws ached moonshine chanted dawnwhiskers new name dawnstar! Dawnstar! Dawnstar! All the cats below joined in except for one seastars daughter darkfang after the chanting stopped she called out I must appoint a deputy and I have decided that the deputy will be mountainsage mountainsage looked at her in surprise and also I think that it is time for Kaipaw to become a warrior he has been training for a while and his courage and determination will make him an amazing warrior mountainsage jumped up onto the rock and licked dawnstar behind her ear I promise you I will be the best deputy I can dawnstar smiled I know you will she whispered in her ear kindly Kaipaw looked at dawnstar with surprised eyes who will be my mentor? he asked I think darkfang would make a good mentor dawnstar whispered in mountainsages ear she nodded darkfang you will mentor Kaipaw I must take my journey to the moon pool the cats below nodded I will go now shall I come with you mountainsage asked worry for her new leader in her eyes s no I think I must take this journey alone dawnstar had arrived at the moon pool she walked down the ancient stairs and walked up to the glimmering pool she lapped up 3 licks of water and she was now in a shiny cave 9 different cats standing around her seastar the last riverclan leader before her twigbranch the apprentice she had mentored he had died when he had accidentally chased a mouse onto a thunder path he was struck by a monster before she could help him sitting next to twigbranch was yellowwhisker her mother she had died when a group of rouges attacked her potrol the rest of the cats she didn’t recognize seastar walked up to her first she whispered before I give you your first life I have a message before a great leader can rule betrayal will rise and shake the forest killing love dawnstars eyes widened then she saw a huge light it hit her and she felt strong seastar had given her all 9 lives at the same time when she woke up the moon was at its peak how long was I asleep Dawnstar asked in her head when she had returned to the camp everyone was sleeping she passed the warriors den frowning that she would never sleep there again she went into her den and laid on a bundle of fresh moss she couldn’t sleep seastars prophecy was making her head spin before a great leader can rule betrayal will rise and shake the forest killing love what did that mean? Would someone in the clan betray her? She finally fell asleep when she woke up she heard screams of terror from the nursery she got up and ran to the screams immediately she saw blood and the dead body of shadowpelt moonshines mate she spotted a bunch a rouges attacking moonshine and her kits dawnstar attacked one of the rouge he pinnned her down and swiped a massive paw at her the claws sliced her face open she screamed in pain and kicked him off she jumped on his back and bit his neck he yowweld and ran out of the camp she saw dark fang behind her attacking her apprentice Kaipaw dawnstar jumped at darkfang she snarled and pinned dawnstar down she looked at her in the eyes and then dawnstar was dead what happened I had 9 lives! She yellled at starclan we are sorry I only had time to give you one seastar looked at her I’m sorry
Wow AND NOBODY DIDNT EVEN LIKE OR COMMENT-
DAS CRAZY
@@macimears8994awwwww thanks so much I’m glad you liked it!
@@Thedragonmusiclub yw
nice job! the only thing is usually the medicine cat chooses the Leader, or if the deputy is alive they will become leader and appoint a deputy!
mine: Rumble'Snake (Elder)(Fur length:Medium)(Pelt colour:light gray)(Marking:smoke)
My friends:rainpelt/paw (med app) (fur length: curly) (pelt colour: lilac) (markings: black spots)
Cloudnight, a solid chocolate-coloured, long-furred she-cat, deputy in Ivyclan. (I made the clan name by myself)
Sapvine
10-13 = Medicine Cat
Fur - Short
Pelt : Ginger
Markings : Tabby
( This will be a eye colour of my own decision. )
Eye Colour : Blue
I got Bramblefawn/star. She is a muted white with doe colored tortie with deep blue eyes and white spots all over her pelt. She is the leader of Skyclan. The deputy is Nightstalker and the medicine cat is Silverberry. She has an apprentice named Brightpaw. Her mates’ name is Dusklight. She has 3 kits. Their names are Swiftkit, Shadowkit, and Featherkit. Her mothers’ name is Silentflight. Her fathers’ name is Doeflame. Her brothers names are Hopfoot and Applestep. Her sisters’ name is Ivyfrost.
w.o.w. that’s really good! awesome job!
@@k_kazooz thanks! What’s the story ab Owltwig? Clan? Mate? Role? Kits? Siblings? Mother? Father?
@@redstar4452 owltwig is an elderly deputy of Creekclan. he’s super grumpy, and stand-offish. He is a very good leader however and is skilled with organizing and hunting. Both parents, Meltwink (father) and Daisyfoot (mother) are dead. Never wanted a mate, and his sister Wrensong, is completely opposite personality wise. He’s had 3 apprentices, and is almost ready to test his most recent apprentice Vinepaw (to be named Vinetangle.) But yas
Cool! Who’s the leader and med cat?
Lynxstar (female, formerly Lynxfade) and Lilyfawn (female) yes this is part of Dapplespark’s story :D
Dawnreed
Role: med cat
Pelt length: hairless
Pelt color: cinnamon
Pseudo merle
Dawnreed was born without one of her forepaws so from the beginning everyone told her she couldn't be a warrior. She didn't feel much passion for being a future medicine cat, so she ran away. Thinking she could be a warrior in a different clan. It was difficult but she eventually made it to four trees and wandered into ShadowClan territory. Where she hastily hid behind a bush because she could smell a cat. "Hey," cried the cat. "I can smell Thunderclan come out!" Dawnreed gingerly stepped out to face this cat. The cat was a brown tabby tom and appeared to be growing old. "Oh, you poor thing you've traveled so far," The tom meowed. "Why have you come here?" Dawnreed soon spilled all her troubles to the patient cat. "I am Dearleap," the tom said. "I am a medicine cat, and it is a noble path to follow." He told her all about his troubles when he was little. Like how his mentor died when he was only an apprentice and had to learn by himself. "Starclan guided me threw that time." Deerleap meowed. The nice tom helped her get back home. After that encounter Dawnreed became more inclined to become a medicine cat.
Ruffle’Heart
Role:Deputy
Marking:Tortie
Main pelt color:Black
Fur: Very fluffy
Sadly I have no back story for them yet😅
\\ name: Finchglow
\\ role: medicine cat
\\ pelt length: long
\\ pelt color: dark ginger
ill be working on her story!
[ OC INFO + NINE LIVES LIST ] :
Name - Fluffytwig/star
Role - Leader
Pelt Length - Super Long/Fluffy
Description - a fawn she-cat with a lighter underbelly with darker spots
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Life 1: Leafflight ( Former Medicine Cat AND Later revealed to be Fluffystar's Mother - Life of Justice - Lost by being killed by a badger )
Life 2: Cricketkit ( Fluffystar's Deceased Best Friend - Life of Freedom - Lost by being killed by Kalimbaclaw, a prisoner )
Life 3: Sweetglow ( Fluffystar's Mentor - Life of Balance - Lost by falling into The Gorge )
Life 4: Reedfur ( Fluffystar's Adoptive Mother - Life of Carefulness - Lost by accidentally being killed by Goldfinchpaw/feather )
Life 5: Lightpaw ( One of the founders of Fluffystar's Clan - Life of Perspective - Lost by overheating )
Life 6: Songsmoke ( Fluffystar's Daughter - Life of Creativity - Lost by being punctured by a sharp rock )
Life 7: Rufflefawn ( Deputy who died and was succeeded by Fluffystar - Life of Truthfulness - Lost by freezing to death )
Life 8: Paleheart ( The cat Fluffystar saved from having his murder case unsolved - Life of Well-Being - Lost by being killed while sleeping )
Life 9: Crystalstar ( Fluffystar's predecessor - Life of Leadership - Lost by being fed meadow saffron by Umbrellabirdstar )
i got poppy"cloud (uncommon):as a kit her sidlings always trick her into a fight. as she got older tho the less they did it intill one day a warrior killed her mother in front of her then blamed her for it and so she ran away and now she's a rogue. past role:app palt length:fuffy pelt color:sandy with mud brown gander: she'cat
oh no! poppycloud seems like a pretty tough she cat, though. thank you :)
Name: Rainfawn
Rank: Elder
Pelt length: semi-long
main color: Cinnamon
Pattern: Spotted tabby
Rainfawn was a powerful warrior from ScorchClan. No cat could beat him in battle. But one day in a battle with FreezeClan, Rainfawn accidentally killed Featherpaw. This horrified and devastated him, so he retired to the elder’s den and vowed never to fight again. Rainfawn is enjoying his retirement for the most part, but has frequently nightmares about Featherpaw’s death and being dragged to the dark forest for what he’s done. His mate, Dustwhisker, a tom from ScorchClan, and the current deputy, tries to support and console him, but Rainfawn is still wracked with guilt.
Wow! That’s really interesting and a sad backstory. I love it! ty for watching/commenting.
Name: Bark'bear
Rank: Medicine cat apprentice
Fur length: Short
Pelt colour: Smoky gray
Markings: dilute calico
Prefix:Fluffy
Suffix:Breeze
Role:Deputy
Pelt length:Curly
Pelt main:Black
Mark:Tortie
Name: Nightpaw (bark)
Rank:Apprentice
Fur length: Curly/Long
Pelt color: Black
Markings: Psuedo Tabby
rainbreeze
role:deputy
pelt length:medium
pelt color gray
markings:tortie
clan:thunderclan
Dawnpaw (feather) is a fluffy cream she-cat with small white spots she is the med app of Riverclan she loves to explore with her littermates she and a Windclan app. meet up at night Dawnpaw really likes Hailpaw (one of my ocs) idk wat else to write 😢
awww! I hope Dawnpaw and Hailpaw keep meeting each other and (hopefully) evade the medicine cat code lol. thank you :)
@@k_kazooz yesss i was inspiered by leafpool x crowfeather
Awakening of Dawn
Chapter 2: No return until sun
Dawnkit limped of of the queens den and into the light.
Only two cats were in the cat and they were acting very strange. Their heads were down their tails and ears were drooping and they looked terrified. Dawnkit limped over to the prey pile keeping her eyes exactly on the one medicine cat in the clan. Her name is... ( I start thinking up a name.) .... Blossompelt. She was acting the strangest. She was walking around strangly like the warrior. Sorry i will continue chapter 2 tomorrow.
Sooo I'm really busy with school and stuff so it is really hard to continue my story so I might not be able to finish it
Rainpaw, later Rainlily
Apprentice
Pelt length: medium
Color: lilac? (I think that's what it was)
Dilute calico
And uhhhh.... I don't have a backstory yet 😅
Stone paw was kind and strong apprentice and she loved adventures opposed to her sister who hardly left camp she is good at running and fighting she came from sky clan her best friend often called her a warrior already because she helped fight a fox her mother was a peaceful she cat named wet flower her father died when she was born she " stone paw said vine tail her mentor fallow whisper Time to hunt " well all right she mewed she was a dust brown with white spots and. Orange eyes playfull
She thought of cloud paw her only friend she later went back to c amp she passed black clover up the Raven " what is it ? She asked ruffly " wet flower and cloud paw are dead!
Bt us her name was stone fluff
Name:FireBark
Role:Deputy
Pelt Length:Fluffy
Pelt Color:Yellow
Pelt Pattern:Pseudo Merle (Red & Orange Mixed In With The Yellow)
I got DawnFawn😂😂😂
aw, love that name!
Glimmerlight (Actually lol)
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- Medicine cat
- Fluffy pelt
- Main color, Fawn
- Dilute tortie markings
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Too lazy to write a story but theyre riverclan.
-Smokebark
-Elder
-Curly fur
-Brown pelt
-Tortie (Dilute)
Name:elderflight
Role:elder
Pelt lengh:curly
Main couler:dusty brown
Pattern:white spots
Story
Elderflight grew up in the dark forest and had a special connection to starclan when he was young he always wanted to see thunderclan but his mother said no one day he was exploreing and saw a she cat all alone they started to bond and soon had forbidden love which he was soon banished for he had there kittens who were all killed and one day while he was alone a young warrior named forestfire ripped open his stomach and organs
Cloudpale, medicine cat apprentice, long, black, idk what u talkin bout so imma put stripes.
Anyway heres gurls story.
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Im to bored to write maybe next time.
Fluffy lily yellow Tabby she cat with beautiful silver eyes she has curly fur and is a warrior
Name: Splashstar(fur)
Role: Leader
Fur length: Short
Main fur color: Black
Markings: Tabby
Gender: Tom
Clan: Skyclan
Appearence: Large, Sturdy build with short, Black fur with darker tabby stripes. He has a white glowing star on his forehead due to being a leader, And he has amber eyes. He has curled ears and he has a horrific long scar, Going from above his right eye blinding his right eye, To his neck, His side, And his knee.
Personality: Quick-thinking, Hardworking, Forgetive, Guilty, And artistic.
Siblings: He has two siblings: A sarcastic younger sister named Ivypaw who is a medicine cat apprentice, And a lovable little sister named Haykit.
Kits: 8 Kits who he loves very dearly.
Mate: A determined she-cat named Lakesight. They both care about eachother deeply.
Mother: A (neglective) she-cat named Darklight.
Father: A (missing) tom named Brightsong.
Story: (COMING SOON!)
oooo! I love your lil bio for splashstar! Thank you for watching/commenting, and I can’t wait for the story!
Heatherruffle (she-cat)
Dark ginger tortie
Short fur
Blue eyes
Elder
Meet sky'cloud a ginger tabby cat and the medicine she-cat of windclan, when she was an apprentice she used to be a warrior apprentice but then she choose the path of a medicine cat and the leader of her clan give her permission, she's really nice and kind she loves to help other cats when they were in danger, one day she go to collect some herbs for the clan supplie, in the middle of the walk the bush next to her is moving, she was shocked and see the bush, from the bush a cat jumped!, sky'cloud quickly got away from the cat, "who are you!" asked sky'cloud with a loud voice, "me?, my name's max!" Said the tom-cat named max, "why are you here?, and why are you treespass our territory!" Said sky'cloud, "i just come here to hunt, give me your food or else.." said max with a mad face, "NO WAY! I'm not giving you the food that's fully ours, find your food by yourself!", hearing about that max get so angry, she quickly attacked sky'cloud, but sky'cloud managed to free herself from his attack, sky'cloud unsheathed her claw and scratch max right on her cheek, "you had scratched me, if i get a scar then you'll get a scar too!" max scratched her back on her nose, they two attacked each other until daisy'whisker (deputy of windclan) found out that they both were fighting each other, "STOP BOTH OF YOU!" Scream daisy'whisker, They both stop and looked at her, "d-daisy'whisker? Is that you?" Asked max, "yes it's me max"
Answer daisy'whisker, "wait, you guys know each other?" Said sky'cloud confused, "he's my long lost brother that i told you about, my brother actually didn't lost, but runaway from windclan and live as a loner" said daisy'whisker with a deep voice, "so max is your brother?" Asked sky'cloud again, "yeah.., daisy'whisker is my little sister, i love her so much more than anything" said max, "then why did you leave her?" Sky'cloud said, "it all started when she just been a apprentice, when she started being an apprentice i feel that she get more attention than me, every cat loves her but not me.." said max, "why would you think that?" Daisy'whisker asked, "because every time i wanted to talk with them they always get away from me like i'm a scary monster, they always talked with you no one wanted to talk with me everyone hates me!" said max, max started crying because of that, sky'cloud looked at daisy'whisker and whisper something "i feel bad for your brother, why don't we let him have another chance to live with us again?" Said sky'cloud, "but did he want to..?" Asked daisy'whisker, "just asked him, i'm sure he want to" said sky'cloud, "uhm hey max, uhh would you like to live with us again..?, i actually miss you" Daisy'whisker asked with a sad face, "really..?, but i runaway from our clan, i don't want they all will talked bad things about me because i leave our clan since we're an apprentice" said max worried, "hey it's okay, we'll start from the beginning" said sky'cloud, "no need to be scared" continue sky'cloud, "if that's what you guys said then i'll live with you again, is it okay sister..?" Asked max, "really?!, it's more than just okay!" Said daisy'whisker happily, "let's go back to our camp, i'm happy that you guys can live together again!" Said sky'cloud, they get back to the windclan camp and max making lots of new friends, max new name become blaze'claw, the prefix is from his prefix before he ran away and the suffix is gotten from his ability to fight really well, blaze'claw is now happy because he can live again in windclan that's his original home..
Ruffleglow; warrior
Colors: dusty brown, white, and grey (lighter grey)
I got owltwig, a dark brown, hairless spotted tabby :)
Holly breeze, The deputy of shadowclan a black she cat with semi long fur
Everyone got such good names… meanwhile I got… CROWWATER -
crowwater in their riverclan water contamination era
@@k_kazooz 😭😭
R-RUFFLEPALE!?
I got crowwater 😭
Fire breeze med cat long haired black she cat
Hello! So sorry I forgot to tell you i finished the intro part! So you can use it or not, i kinda got lazy with the redo sorry ua-cam.com/video/GpA4hFZ6rlY/v-deo.html