Love the enthusiasm, really wishing for "bad love" (as we call it in class)- Porphyria's Lover, Neutral Tones, When We Two Parted, The Farmer's Bride..! 😌😌❤
If the Farmer's bride is the given poem I can totally just re-write my mock answer as I (somehow) managed to compare it structurally and contextually to Singh Song. Pretty epic gamer moment.
i seem to be the only one who doesn't think that the marriage wasn't consummated - her trauma stemming from the wedding night caused her to turn afraid and into an animal... i cant see that fear being convincing otherwise
Hi sir i know your busy but I have a short paragraph i need your feedback on if you can. Extract lines 8-17: Brightly had a home. The river saw to that; not the Tavy, but the less romantic Taw. On the Western side of Cawsand are many gorges* in the great clefts* cut by the Taw between Belstone and Sticklepath. There narrow and deep clefts have been made by the persistent water draining down to the Taw from the bogs above. In the largest of these clefts Brightly was at home. The sides were completely hidden by willow-scrub, immense ferns, and clumps of whortleberries, as well as by overhanging masses of granite. The water could be heard dripping below like a chime of fairy bells. In winter the cleft appeared a white cascade of falling water, but Brightly's cave was fairly dry and quite sheltered. He had built up the entrance with shaped stones taken from the long-abandoned copper-mines below. The cleft was full of copper, which stained the water a delightful shade of green. How does the writer use language here to describe the setting? The writer uses the abstract simile 'like a chime of fairy bells' to describe the setting Brightly is in. To compare a place to a mythical creature i.e a fairy suggests the place is something of a myth; its beauty is indescribable and enchanted. Furthermore, the use of the complex sentences 'hidden by willow...masses if granite' creates a vivid detailed image of the setting. The use of complex sentences slows the reader down when reading so they can slowly take in the magnificence of this place. The frequent use of commas, unraveling into a list implys that there are uncountable reasons to why it is beautiful. We as readers are mesmerized by this sense of confusion around the place and uncertainty whether or not its real.
Sir is form and structure actually needed? My teacher gets around 70% of her top set getting a grade 9 but she says she wouldn't bother talking about form at all and only comment on structure if there is a perceptive point to be made, but in the mark scheme it mentions it, yet we see old papers purchased back from AQA where answers with just language analysis get full marks (in love and relation poetry)
Well, your teacher is right about only making relevant points. I can't comment on your teacher's experience, other than to say if they are getting 70% grade 9 she is probably the best teacher in the country.
@@chewypiano7194 My prediction videos show you how I do it. Yes, they can repeat a poem, but don't tend to do so until the course has been running for about 5 years.
@@MrSallesTeachesEnglish yes sir, ur analysis of the poem was amazing, I was looking on this website called genius that analyses the poems and I was bare confused with their analysis but urs was like the best so thank u
Love the enthusiasm, really wishing for "bad love" (as we call it in class)- Porphyria's Lover, Neutral Tones, When We Two Parted, The Farmer's Bride..! 😌😌❤
crossing my fingers for farmer's bride or porphyria's lover to come up 🤞
Imagine 😬
Hope so!!!!😊😊😊😊
Are u mad
Having a laugh.
Good quotes for porphyria lover?
THANK GOD I WAS PRAYING FOR THIS
THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU
it was winter swans!!! and romantic love
I reckon Neutral Tones or When We Two Parted
they never do old poems
Lmao 3:52 I anticipated “His [Mr Bruff’s] analysis is good ... but mine is better” 😂
winter swans came up :(
Quickly panicked when you said good luck tomorrow coz mine’s Thursday 😂
sorry how is locking her in a room caring and considerate?
TYSM! You absolute godsend
If the Farmer's bride is the given poem I can totally just re-write my mock answer as I (somehow) managed to compare it structurally and contextually to Singh Song. Pretty epic gamer moment.
Me too I compared romantic love in Singh song and framers bride and got 26 out of 30(grade 9)
BA21 woah kiddo dk what world you live in where that’s a grade 9
can you do all the basics from love and relationship poems please cos i am trying to teach myself from home
Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!
i seem to be the only one who doesn't think that the marriage wasn't consummated - her trauma stemming from the wedding night caused her to turn afraid and into an animal... i cant see that fear being convincing otherwise
You can interpret it that way
Hi sir i know your busy but I have a short paragraph i need your feedback on if you can.
Extract lines 8-17:
Brightly had a home. The river saw to that; not the Tavy, but the less romantic Taw. On the
Western side of Cawsand are many gorges* in the great clefts* cut by the Taw between
Belstone and Sticklepath. There narrow and deep clefts have been made by the persistent
water draining down to the Taw from the bogs above. In the largest of these clefts Brightly
was at home. The sides were completely hidden by willow-scrub, immense ferns, and clumps
of whortleberries, as well as by overhanging masses of granite. The water could be heard
dripping below like a chime of fairy bells. In winter the cleft appeared a white cascade of
falling water, but Brightly's cave was fairly dry and quite sheltered. He had built up the
entrance with shaped stones taken from the long-abandoned copper-mines below. The cleft
was full of copper, which stained the water a delightful shade of green.
How does the writer use language here to describe the setting?
The writer uses the abstract simile 'like a chime of fairy bells' to describe the setting Brightly is in. To compare a place to a mythical creature i.e a fairy suggests the place is something of a myth; its beauty is indescribable and enchanted. Furthermore, the use of the complex sentences 'hidden by willow...masses if granite' creates a vivid detailed image of the setting. The use of complex sentences slows the reader down when reading so they can slowly take in the magnificence of this place. The frequent use of commas, unraveling into a list implys that there are uncountable reasons to why it is beautiful. We as readers are mesmerized by this sense of confusion around the place and uncertainty whether or not its real.
Yes, it is pretty good
Can u plz predict inspector calls
He already did lmao
@@avtaras what was it
And it ended up being about romantic love in Winter Swans...
Which you could answer with both The Farmer's Bride and Porphyria's lover!
@@MrSallesTeachesEnglish how about Singh song
Mr Salles Teaches English what points could you make comparing Winter Swans to Porphyrias Lover or the Farmers Bride?
Sir is form and structure actually needed? My teacher gets around 70% of her top set getting a grade 9 but she says she wouldn't bother talking about form at all and only comment on structure if there is a perceptive point to be made, but in the mark scheme it mentions it, yet we see old papers purchased back from AQA where answers with just language analysis get full marks (in love and relation poetry)
Well, your teacher is right about only making relevant points. I can't comment on your teacher's experience, other than to say if they are getting 70% grade 9 she is probably the best teacher in the country.
Mr Salles Teaches English So could a response without form and structure get full marks?
Not according to the mark scheme, but if your teacher has some that did, then the answer is yes.
Mr Salles Teaches English Also how do you make your predictions? Can AQA repeat the same poem ?
@@chewypiano7194 My prediction videos show you how I do it. Yes, they can repeat a poem, but don't tend to do so until the course has been running for about 5 years.
I hope its neutral tones
Prediction : Farmers Bride 👰
I think it could be Eden rock
Whoah really? No one's talking about "good love"..
Why?
My 2 weakest poems 😢😢😢
hopefully it’s sonnet 29 and nature
OMG EVEN MY TEACHER PREDICTED THIS
Let's hope we are right
@@MrSallesTeachesEnglish literallt praying - hopefully
is it always long poems that come up?
No
Mr Salles Teaches English simple enough answer😂
what kind of question would farmers bride and porphyria lover link to ?
Lauren Evans female representation and possession
I think Mr Bruff has deleted his whole analysis on Farmer's bride .I could only find the exemplar 😐
Compared with Singh song is that good, relevant
I lowkey hope this comes up🤷♀️😭
can u do this for animal farm
he has.
pleeeeeease make a video on DNA
I really hope Farmers Bride doesn’t come up
Bruh it better not be porphyria lover or farmers bride
These are your comparison poems if they don't come up! Did you watch the video?
@@MrSallesTeachesEnglish yes sir, ur analysis of the poem was amazing, I was looking on this website called genius that analyses the poems and I was bare confused with their analysis but urs was like the best so thank u