They Killed Every Human, But Then Earth's Arctic Chamber Super Soldiers Awoke | HFY Sci‐Fi Story

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КОМЕНТАРІ • 24

  • @igoddard1
    @igoddard1 24 дні тому +12

    I think AI not only reads this, it writes it too. The story repeats within itself, it rips off names and terms from a variety of other books and texts, Sci-fi and others. Like the Trill for example. It can only be a matter of time before these get removed on copyright grounds. The first couiple I listened to seemed ok but they are repetitive and actually get worse.

  • @marysmith-ps7uj
    @marysmith-ps7uj 24 дні тому +9

    What planet's people would let all of their people be obliterated? Good grief, guys, look up and watch the Stargate series. Learn to write essays which will help you with structure. This thing was all over the place! 😮

  • @armandovanhaaren9823
    @armandovanhaaren9823 24 дні тому +18

    This story makes no sense 😕

  • @marysmith-ps7uj
    @marysmith-ps7uj 24 дні тому +8

    Please stop with the sleeping giant phrase. That's only for 12/7/41.

  • @elessar60
    @elessar60 24 дні тому +9

    This story makes no sense and it keeps repeating phrases. I thought the super soldiers were the super weapon.

    • @dserrao7188
      @dserrao7188 23 дні тому +2

      Not only that, but why would the krill soldiers NOT fire as soon as they started coming out? Why not just shoot them all even before they opened?
      I couldn’t agree more, this story doesn’t make sense

  • @soldierscotty1959
    @soldierscotty1959 24 дні тому +6

    You had a great plot, and ruined it! Piss poor story!

  • @marysmith-ps7uj
    @marysmith-ps7uj 24 дні тому +1

    At some point, the humans needed to post their side of the narrative to the galaxy. And then send a message to all. F**k around and find out. Either come on peace to make friends, or leave in pieces!😮😮

  • @Fallenone8128
    @Fallenone8128 24 дні тому +1

    Next part please

  • @garryhopkins5454
    @garryhopkins5454 23 дні тому +7

    I swear these stories are getting worse all the time. Like someone already said, I think AI wrote this story.

    • @patofficial5077
      @patofficial5077 22 дні тому +1

      honestly i think theyve been written by AI for some time. there's a bunch of (albeit more coherent) older stories from this channel that all share common themes and ideas, much like you'd get different but similar images from putting the same prompt into dall-e, stable diffusion and midjourney.

    • @donalddouds6033
      @donalddouds6033 15 днів тому

      100% AI written.

  • @dianatuttle5879
    @dianatuttle5879 23 дні тому +2

    Valkyries were women. Do you have trouble with the concept that it was women who were the "Ultimat" warriors?

  • @dennispearson
    @dennispearson 13 днів тому

    A.I. story. No human authors.

  • @thaphreak
    @thaphreak 23 дні тому

    I don't have a dog for you to take :P

  • @guyvalentine7258
    @guyvalentine7258 23 дні тому +1

    Believe it or not i thought this was if not the best, one of the best stories from this channel i've seen yet. Stories from this channel normally bounce all over the place repeat entire sections Word for Word and bring dead people back to life. Recently i haven't not even been trying to listen to these stories from this channel. I just pull up not interested and hit that. But i thought i'd give it a try. Not the greatest story i've ever listened to but certainly not the worst. Quite often the stories from this channel the i try to listen to i don't even make halfway through before i get so disgusted with them i can't stand it anymore and give it a thumbs down and go to something else.

  • @ameliaraevert611
    @ameliaraevert611 19 днів тому

    Slow down the text, it outpaces the narrator.

  • @Angie254M
    @Angie254M 23 дні тому +1

    everything hanging in the balance.
    It is possible to give the AI some rules beforehand.

  • @ronniearroyo6563
    @ronniearroyo6563 22 дні тому

    I agree

  • @PinkowskiIngo
    @PinkowskiIngo 24 дні тому +1

    What kind of crippled AI from Fiver has written this story?? I can write a better story, sitting on the toilet singing. Waste of my time

  • @castropanopanopalis
    @castropanopanopalis 10 днів тому

    I get how AI can be a powerful tool for an aspiring author but this is just bad. At least edit your content to make sense...
    I won't just blame the AI because sometimes ai hits right and in the end, the author is still responsible for the finished product...

  • @tk-fn8ml
    @tk-fn8ml 19 днів тому

    Stupid story, also it was far too long. 10 minutes story they stretched to 30. Make your AI smarter!