Really good, make sure you keep clarity when you're speaking faster. Make sure you get the intentions of the character into the words so that if they stopped you early youd already got the intentions across. Watch when you cry. It's noticeable that you're not crying so either try to make it more naturalistic or find another way of approaching it. Make sure theres a definite feeling of that character arc so you're in the moment with new thoughts in every word. Not telling you what to do just notes. ^Just some notes on some of the more complex emotions you can work on. Otherwise its lovely :)
Really good, make sure you keep clarity when you're speaking faster. Make sure you get the intentions of the character into the words so that if they stopped you early youd already got the intentions across. Watch when you cry. It's noticeable that you're not crying so either try to make it more naturalistic or find another way of approaching it. Make sure theres a definite feeling of that character arc so you're in the moment with new thoughts in every word.
Not telling you what to do just notes.
^Just some notes on some of the more complex emotions you can work on. Otherwise its lovely :)
This monologue is amazing, well done man. What is it from??
Beatrice Eris Still It was written by one of my coursemates (I don't know which one yet!) for a secret monologue challenge hahaha. Thank you so much!
@@danjohnson2485Oh no way? Well they're obviously really talented!
Absolutely!!