revealing the essays that got me accepted to ucla, uci, and ucsd!

hi guys! i finally got around to editing my essay video. for a lot of high school students, especially seniors, i know that the idea of college applications and getting accepted carries a lot of weight. while I am unfortunately not attending UCLA, i wanted to share some of my success this college app season, and offer some ideas to seniors who may have trouble starting their own essays! even if you aren't applying to ucla, hopefully reading some of my successful essays will give you some ideas on how to write yours. mine are not perfect by ANY means, however, i hope they can prove useful regardless. please like, subscribe, and comment what other videos may be helpful to you.
also, be sure to check out my other ECs video if you are interested in hearing about other aspects of my application :)
timestamps:
essay 1 - 1:45
essay 2 - 5:35
essay 3 - 9:34
essay 4 - 14:23
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[@tarautube]

congrats!! i’m applying to many of the ucs as well (ucla being my top) and i’ve been working on my essays, thank you for this vid🥰

[@kimchibebop]

of course! im glad it was useful

[@user-bu1ip8ds4y]

You go girl here to support❤

[@kimchibebop]

thank you ❤❤❤ it means so much!!

[@madhavishah7621]

So helpful!! Thank you😍

[@kimchibebop]

glad it was helpful!

[@nicolemendoza2210]

Thank you so much 💕

[@kimchibebop]

ofc! hope it was helpful💗

[@chishark]

The background music is tooo loud. Thanks for insightful information