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Wow mad respect for you brother. I've heard nothing but dope beats and you take the feedback in the most positive way. It takes a real artist to take the feedback in a constructive way and build on it. Too many people are too cocky nowadays where you can't give them feedback without attacking you.
Can we just appreciate another human beings great work and talent, and stop criticizing him when we dont have the guts to create a instrumental "and a damb good one at that" and all get over the fear of the possibly having billions of people hear it. Keep doing your thing homeboy cuz it sounds melodically beautiful and worthy of the likes of Nas blessing it
every time i been writing bars to this beat. i fall asleep...astral projecting to my dreams....riding the waves so sweet....but this is how it seams.....i feel like i been teared at the seems....and now the patchwork isnt working so clean.....no more fixing me or my g's ....ive seen violence back in the nineties streets.....and now dont care about niceties...this is just life for me ....
Feeling so lovely, glad youre thinkin of me, stars in the sky is what I see, when the sun goes down, it still reflects me, as i reflect it, big dipper, big picture, get it? Just let it, let your heart grow, for real though, dope intstrumental for the mental, pineal gland of the wise one at the temple, east to west, oriental and occidental.
I wanna get lost in paradise, get lost in the night when the feeling right, get lost on a Paris flight, end up somewhere in paradise, where we always feeling good an the fruit always ripe, where there ain't no hoods an there ain't no fights, man then we really be living like, kings without the diamond rings, man if that's what really makes u smile mike.
blessed the attack on the soul. mind tingles and clears as a whole. its a basic ability to combat the dark, the last words I wrote were, my home will never be that far. it's to late for me, but the innocent have been choosen. help the hand and let them sleep. it's our duty as the jaded to guide the light for other to see. our apathy dies a little more when we ignore it's beautiful disease. so take sometime to gather your thoughts, for one day the noose will tighten and you will find yourself sleeping in a garden of rocks
Steven Hancock Breath in , leave sin it banks off. Strained thoughts of hind awareness train the lost from abandonment. Be Careful to be positive still, law of attraction , hand on the reel . Handle the real Banish the damned and bent wheel Peel the sheen threw abrasive resurfacing, facing this worthless being in mirror glances. Stance's near to advancement we adhere to a chance slip rather this than the fear of the clearer examined routes. Rip the shitty manual out pop the clutch and rain in this drought
Lyrics over beats, with the homies smokin weed You know im in your area you smell that sour d Yeah the girl that I love, always see her in my dreams But i know we aint together cause this shit aint meant to be Takin rips of the bong yeah theyre clean This the suppression to aggression that i burry cant you see I be smokin good weed cause it sets my mind free It helps distort illusions of you bein here with me Guess you dont give a fuck just like i do Keep runnin through my mind all of the time boo Its like a constant mother fuckin achin pain The only woman in my life go by the name of mary jane
+Michael McKinney Not a bad alternative. Been learning it's not all fun and games in a merge of vibrations. Certain time's wasted if it isn't worked to further dankness. Sure to board spaceships of swinging moods standing on the hammock in a dance with a thinning groove. Advancements of many are few to this new schools day and age I arrived but made it late , jaded dates stayed up late to take the bait my saving grace lay awake in this vaccuum of space. Rather vaccuum the haze til I wrapped around the raps that compact upon my brain. Fasten buckled chains that'll rattle like that of cups of change .. My fucking brain
check it yo if you ever wanted something badly go for it. Shoot for those stars twist those broken knobs. Be the man u wanted to be. I didn't let anybody stop me. Wishing these visions would just go away. It reminds me of my high school life
all i do is smile and let go all the hatin i feel from yo let me live let me laugh cuz i just had enough of the pain and the sorrow i wanna laugh like theres no tomorrow can i believe in me today to be so strong so ready that whatever happens tomorrow i'll move forward and pull through thank u for not being my side without u life could have been a joyous ride
Just waking up in the morning got ta thank god, lord know I couldn't make it without my squad, late nights early morning on the boulevard, just me, my team and a bag of hard, grind hard that's all that I know I'm in the sunshine state still playing with snow but I learned from the game u get it and go tba.....
im writing this to let you know it's hard for me to let you go. forgot to tell you how I felt cause I thought I had to let it show. gotchu some flowers in hopes I can get up in them draws. no rubbers u the type that let me hit it raw. BluntedBeats fat cigars and a shirt with my Cologne for you to hold. i hope your happy with your new life and I'm glad I got to see you grow...
Look I'm really sorry that I had to do this, but all those mixed emotions had me feeling clueless. One day you're all happy claiming you love me, but the next, I'd be on a cliff and you'd just shove me. I couldn't deal with you running back to him, and if you wanted to break my heart, you win. I chased you for damn near a year, but I just failed. Don't think this is me coming back into your life, that boat is sailed. But I'll let you know now, I still do love you. Had you ever chose me I'd never put no one above you. But deep down inside I really hate you. I see other girls and it's like they just ain't you. I gave you my all and you just played me. I thought you was put here just to save me. But you fucked me over and that I just can't forget. And as for forgiveness, I ain't done it yet. I ain't gonna lie, you really messed with my mind. And it took me this long to leave you behind. I can't understand why you took me for granted, and deep down inside I know that you planned it. But I'm good now, just mentally unprepared, and honestly if I saw you again, I'd be a little scared. I don't want them feelings back, they never went away, but I'm doing all I can to hide them day by day. Sitting here alone, all these thoughts in my mind, what did I to? Why am I in this bind? Take me out of this world, the pain is unbearable. The way you did me in the end was just fucking terrible.
Sick!!! Just sick mang. Finish it. Wtf.. leave me hanging like a midnight show. Wtf u doin. It's like getting half blown. Ok. I guess u see wats happening now. Don't tell me u a full devout. Cus bout this time? U would've questioned ma rhymes, n if u did u betta reply. I'm waitin on the continuance of that flow. Not to hold .e by da throat, cus I almost felt like I couldn't breath... And all I wanted was a breather cus I swear that was me.. now .... Living ... Sitting waiting for u to finish dat beat
seems like I'm spacing out. everything's distant, can't you see me here? damn. feelin like I'm slipping away my mind is living in the yesterdays they always say that everything's okay but I can't seem to accept that. there's gotta be more no more waiting by the door hoping you would walk through like the days before. your gone and I never got to say goodbye so when you come back don't wonder why I cry.
The old me is gone I hear out my ear and look in the mirror As I say "So long" I'm a man now with so many things I've come to understand now As the old me sheds the new me appears As all the heavens cheer All along I've told myself "once I find me everything will come to place" And as I'm finding myself I'm establishing my own pace All my life I've been up & down Happy because that's what made me who I am now No need to follow the crowd nor get loud Achieving Inner peace while laying on a cloud I know who I am and I'm glad I had to face it all by me Because I'de probably be a weak-willed/simple minded individual if I always had someone stand beside me I'm glad I've changed for the better Seems all my life's been an internal endeavor Cleansed like oil and Planted in Soil No more turmoil No more pains Now I see as a man I can't keep things in my brain Time to vent and express I'm one intelligent individual and my ideas are nothing less
Funny, but quiet Ironic as a fat man on a diet And subsequently we both are losing Only his losing is great to be doing When I decided to open up people love me But, when I decided to stay trapped behind that mask I'm the only one who disgust me I used to think why are people trying to talk to me and why don't they go But, I see they sensed my aura of gold I thought I was right and I thought I was strong Turns out everyone knew I was nice and just something was wrong Mean doesn't fit me too well And turns out I haven't been true to myself and that's why my grief's been unparalleled
These verses are amazing , except I can't find the flow that your in, maybe try to organize your sentences so it will be less off beat? Would love to hear more from you
I really appreciate it bro.. I really do.. I make really nice lyrics and I don't get alot of recognition because I post them on really old vidz; but your comment is really refreshing 👌🏾🙂.
Bro! What are you up too because this was 2 years ago and I'm just curious how your journey has been. On another note, I'm about to melt this track! Thank you for providing a place to pay for it.
Distractions coming from my attractions we slowly breaking down, taking shots i gotta make em count, cause im not living like others, im living how i really want to, i wanna live it how i really wanna do, on a move never slowing down, never holding back cause im zoning out
I'm lost in paradise as I'm looking through a new set of eyes. I look to the sky and want to cry its beautiful and blue, but not even I can see the sun to know what's true. this land is devoid of emotion. no way to see the tide on the ocean. so I'm coasting keeping it real I want to know if I'm alive, then can I really feel? my heart is content even without a sun, more then half my day is spent. I focus on the moon given by the stars I keep my mind centered as I travel far. so paradise is lost I have no worries, life is lived without a cost. even with these new eyes everything is blurry.
one day here and the next gone what didn't you do what did you do wrong emotions flow as I do to the beat and make a song so long my young friend I shall see you again when my time ends till then, its love I send remember when I got in your face and called you out? I was frustrated and disappointed and thats how it came out have fun and watch over us were going to miss you especially at Christmas travel on but stay near man I wish you were here just so I could hear the sound of your voice and have a few beers almost shed some tears but it doesn't seem real enough
The old me is gone I hear out my ear and look in the mirror As I say "So long" I'm a man now with so many things I've come to understand now As the old me sheds the new me appears As all the heavens cheer All along I've told myself "once I find me everything will come to place" And as I'm finding myself I'm establishing my own pace All my life I've been up & down Happy because that's what made me who I am now No need to follow the crowd nor get loud Achieving Inner peace while laying on a cloud I know who I am and I'm glad I had to face it all by me Because I'de probably be a weak-willed/simple minded individual if I always had someone stand beside me I'm glad I've changed for the better Seems all my life's been an internal endeavor Cleansed like oil and Planted in Soil No more turmoil No more pains Now I see as a man I can't keep things in my brain Time to vent and express I'm one intelligent individual and my ideas are nothing less
+Javon Antoine Funny, but quiet Ironic as a fat man on a diet And subsequently we both are losing Only his losing is great to be doing When I decided to open up people love me But, when I decided to stay trapped behind that mask I'm the only one who disgust me I used to think why are people trying to talk to me and why don't they go But, I see they sensed my aura of gold I thought I was right and I thought I was strong Turns out everyone knew I was nice and just something was wrong Mean doesn't fit me too well And turns out I haven't been true to myself and that's why my grief's been unparalleled
Javon Antoine yo, should I move on to the unknown? or just stay close to home and do what I've always known? mind is blown of dank weed drove a full tank a gas at a steady fast speed tryna get things done I got no time, so don't ask me light bulbs in my mind continuously flashing universal sound like people laughing you got to understand this the may thai preying mantis forever lost in thoughts like the city of Atlantis deep like that Atlantic heart is gigantic
What’s the vision I’m trying to be hitting ask myself about my life decision little me would Think so hard I call it precision Looking back not a way to live but It was hope I was given Cause even now I admit in life Things were never the same when I grabbed a mic for the depression I fight Start venting to beats An cause some hype
I want to be safe like I hold what you value/ I want to be great like my bros know thank you/ What would I do if God was one of us/ Would I change all my views start expressing my trust/ Going deeper the meaning is untouchable/ Focus on breathing this evening is ours to do/ What it do when it do what it does/ Only you that I trust/ Multiply to a million/ What if he said I'm leaving and your filling in/ Would I be ready for a million souls feeling them.
aye,the world getting cold,got me feeling like humanity chasing greed on the chase of losing soul,tell me somebody where did the love for each other go,god I need it back,come across a lot of good people,but more people bad,filled with evil,greed,animosity,and malicious behavior,every night I pray to my savior,save me from the times I'm facin,hard times I'm going through,but I'm still positive with God's hope I attain,no doubt I'll make it through,sipping brews,getting throwed,tryna forget on the daily in the world what unfolds,
This one's for her I didn't know how to intercept her heart but your life with me is covered by armor you don't know it till you loose it so don't forget somethings you can't recover life becomes forgetful when we move onto something like progression I'm not saying we shouldn't this a bold statement things ain't never gone be like it was that's why I left our memorial in the pavement you failed to trust but at the end you came across you was a clever girl I value it being real thoughtful we both focused just a little fragment feeling hopeless remember when I told you the key to a women heart is deeper than the ocean and it would take more than a diamond key to open it I really meant this because a treasure chest can't be yanked open like a house vault
Rly feelin this. Try not to be too unique of your drum rhythms though. They can disassociate the instruments from the whole ensemble. I'm talking generally and constructively. I love this beat. plus, I can hear the progression over time through song after song. Good stuff. Def' on for more.
Well, I've found that syncopating rhythms often lead to improvisation (yet improv performance is hit or miss((mostly miss)) unless still rehearsed). Too much might lead to and oversaturation of rhythmic beats in the final product. Thus, breaking the beat from the melody and losing feel of the chorus or melody. (unless you're just being "fonky" on purpose.) I speak from a drummers perspective, and the truth of it is, sometimes less is more. It's all about control. From each note played, to the progression of the melody, to the mode of the song. Know what I mean? Love your stuff, I grew up on these types of beats. Production is solid too. Never stop.
Chriz Zaborowski Yes I understand! I really want to thank u for this kind of productive feedback ! we re always trying to improve our work and it is good to get some detailed awnser :) We will try too use ur advice!
BluntedBeatz that's what's up. Just don't think that I know what you want out of your sound. Lol, that's your job. Use the technique at your discretion, of course. Such is the beauty of music. You can do what you want with it.
Chriz Zaborowski That was one of the best things I've seen anyone comment on a youtube video. Great job being constructive and positive. I love the hell out of these beats and it makes me happy to see there's people out there who know how to give good constructive criticism and not just be an ass. Rad:)
lost everything illusions of grandeur blossoming delusions of longed desires dystopian state of mind, tried to sell my soul to an old friend of mine, purloined soul per lie sold i was lost to the paradise when you live for today tomorrow dies.
He hung himself from a pale rose of scars reflecting on the cracks of her heart compromising times reflections for two roads in a mirror or for wasted artwork there her toes briefly left with; slouched over a murals broken hourglass pathos hangs pouring sands from our pain flowing like love made under sad rainbows painting our hands as rain falls soft slow like roses unfold stained cloths close bear foreign flesh opened like a fish in the fresh waters webs fully lept with wings crept open in a broken vase of hope soaked tears to be blessed with more depth than a shallow breath report kinder than hindering woes slow like autumn leaves blowing in the wind flow to the floor a bird soaring through the sky blindfolded to a stop sign wrote this poem on a deaf note to a chest or better yet worn charm in a black dress warm against her amour flew past her gray clouds into his nest near her true wealth’s silent raindrops Origami in plain art form left the frame once to make it as plain as day as if change staid the same stains in heart came and remained like Arthur drowned in whine clean cut display plague like blank teardrops in a fogged mirror neutral towards a funeral he’s the flowers in the fleurals planted in dirt lips drinking a dry kiss sticks out if you’re imagination like philosophic bliss is a gift to it saturated filth is what wonders truth is what something to ponder where was beyond for something that Constance times complements to aquiescence where itself lays apart from within like a sinner holding pigeon wings that flap slowly breaking day by day to write these pages but life’s nothing more than a gift to them like questioning an unfulfilled wish they grin at me through these pale teeth of mine as I scream from the inside breathless again in winters skin
from the hood to the burbs hear my words i slur i never wanted this but a kid got a curse and a kid gotta curse to express how he feels cuase the pain too real bodies droppin, court appeals see my friends on the news summer days turn blue see my friends in heaven saying i see you soon...brotha
Strange days, feels imaginary, I squeeze the blunt to a cherry, recollect, adversaries got my mind feeling younger, a hunger for the struggle, doin time, cities troubled but I'm humbled when I stumble. A little weed make me numb and I can't hear theses rappers spit when mfs only mumble. My number, been laid out on the table. I tell my story like a fable. Suspended in the air til I disconnect the cable, see my wings keep me stable,I was taught since the cradle that a dollar never made a man greater than he's able. Now that's a hard fact of life. keep my family by side it's only right in this fight. This ain't America, the dream, cuz the only scenes on the screen got us divided down the seam. We too political. They say my music hypocritical but my third eye like a reticle.
Aye aye aye Babe are you okay Hit you twice in one day Missed ya call it was 8 Said ya already ate Yeah I missed ya call like 3 times I’m sorry I didn’t have the time
heaven paradise is heaven paradise for us yes it is I saw so many family members go under ground but never shade a tear I only did when I walked away when i put that rose on my Tia casket I knew my whole world would of change from the moment when my mother went away out my life for good even my Tia so I'm trap in this lost world tryna get to heaven paradise with y'all I'm Talkin bout my hoimes n famila thats up in heaven looking down smiling lookin at me everywhere i go every step n breath I take I take em for y'all I look in tha mirrors all I see is a demon inside of but from the out side I see a angel but I lost a daughter so I won't ever know what a angel looks like anymore just wished she was alive I would have been out of the shitty town I'm at now while I'm writing down these sad words or what ever u wanna call it I ain't tryna be the next spm but that vato needs to be out already ha he can do way better than me but what can I say I ain't gunna stop til I go to prison or dead in heaven paradise looking down at my future kids smiling n praying for them too so lord plz know that I'm tryna change my ways thank u lord amen
Lost in paradise , so many faces with no light , till the end I will fight , warrior from ancient times call me Sirius or alshira in Egyptian , not a Buddhist nor a Christian but I am chasing Christ conciouneness , where all gods and goddesses , don't believe the lies they tell you , I'm blessed way past the grave and so are you , rude on the mike , teachin so listen to the one speaking , god of the sea Poseidon , even behind them bars I was spartan , leonitis ... leonitis
hi.. im an x rnb singer thinking of a return to musiq.. could i possibly use 1min 6sec of this track on my facebook to see what my people think?i could also link it all back here!!if all goes well.. id definitely be in touch for more!!GREAT track...
I've never written before I've only heard the lore but my dreams are high and so am I I'm just kidding on that cuz I'm not high I am just thirteen but that dont make me clean out of all the things music will be all I need to succeed to proceed onto the next phase of life to get me through it with a rhyme that is all for now
Relax kick back while I spit some sick raps sick facts Before I hit the track pass me a bottle and sip that I don't trip when I catch that wiff it as if it's Crack once an extra packs has passed for me there's no coming back The rap life is addicting Fights conflicting people profiting right off this non fitting Got cops coming with their full clips and I'm packing up my Rhymes when they slide by Beside my ride they try to find a crime but not this time I focused to own this track Cause once I go in there's no going back homies know this Slowly thought I could be a pro Although momma won't let me go So I have to mask my flow Spit wack rap trash so my bro won't know Qick show me the nearest flight Imma come Paris tonight But as this goes in one ear goes out the right Living lavish and right this might be what you compare Paradise
THIS BEAT IS AMAZING, THE MELODY TELLS A TRUE STORY!
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BluntedBeatz hey bro website is a bit hard to navigate... How can you chose between the licensing for this song?
Wow mad respect for you brother. I've heard nothing but dope beats and you take the feedback in the most positive way. It takes a real artist to take the feedback in a constructive way and build on it. Too many people are too cocky nowadays where you can't give them feedback without attacking you.
Can we just appreciate another human beings great work and talent, and stop criticizing him when we dont have the guts to create a instrumental "and a damb good one at that" and all get over the fear of the possibly having billions of people hear it. Keep doing your thing homeboy cuz it sounds melodically beautiful and worthy of the likes of Nas blessing it
every time i been writing bars to this beat. i fall asleep...astral projecting to my dreams....riding the waves so sweet....but this is how it seams.....i feel like i been teared at the seems....and now the patchwork isnt working so clean.....no more fixing me or my g's ....ive seen violence back in the nineties streets.....and now dont care about niceties...this is just life for me ....
For some reason this beat really relaxes
my mind...
Feeling so lovely, glad youre thinkin of me, stars in the sky is what I see, when the sun goes down, it still reflects me, as i reflect it, big dipper, big picture, get it? Just let it, let your heart grow, for real though, dope intstrumental for the mental, pineal gland of the wise one at the temple, east to west, oriental and occidental.
Nice bro check mines out
They're all fire bro. Hats off.
I wanna get lost in paradise,
get lost in the night when the feeling right,
get lost on a Paris flight,
end up somewhere in paradise,
where we always feeling good an the fruit always ripe,
where there ain't no hoods an there ain't no fights,
man then we really be living like,
kings without the diamond rings,
man if that's what really makes u smile mike.
All of your beats are amazing. Keep up the good work fam
i love the piano in this
Hard AF! Freestyling right now
This is FIYAHHHHHH!!!!!!
THIS ONE IS A HIT 4 SHO!
That is really chillout beat...Good job, BB ;)
blessed the attack on the soul. mind tingles and clears as a whole. its a basic ability to combat the dark, the last words I wrote were, my home will never be that far. it's to late for me, but the innocent have been choosen. help the hand and let them sleep. it's our duty as the jaded to guide the light for other to see. our apathy dies a little more when we ignore it's beautiful disease. so take sometime to gather your thoughts, for one day the noose will tighten and you will find yourself sleeping in a garden of rocks
Steven Hancock
Breath in , leave sin it banks off.
Strained thoughts of hind awareness train the lost from abandonment.
Be Careful to be positive still, law of attraction , hand on the reel .
Handle the real
Banish the damned and bent wheel
Peel the sheen threw abrasive resurfacing, facing this worthless being in mirror glances. Stance's near to advancement we adhere to a chance slip rather this than the fear of the clearer examined routes.
Rip the shitty manual out pop the clutch and rain in this drought
comepletely changed my life
Who's the genius behind bluntedbeatz? For real
Lyrics over beats, with the homies smokin weed
You know im in your area you smell that sour d
Yeah the girl that I love, always see her in my dreams
But i know we aint together cause this shit aint meant to be
Takin rips of the bong yeah theyre clean
This the suppression to aggression that i burry cant you see
I be smokin good weed cause it sets my mind free
It helps distort illusions of you bein here with me
Guess you dont give a fuck just like i do
Keep runnin through my mind all of the time boo
Its like a constant mother fuckin achin pain
The only woman in my life go by the name of mary jane
+Michael McKinney
Not a bad alternative. Been learning it's not all fun and games in a merge of vibrations. Certain time's wasted if it isn't worked to further dankness.
Sure to board spaceships of swinging moods standing on the hammock in a dance with a thinning groove.
Advancements of many are few to this new schools day and age
I arrived but made it late , jaded dates stayed up late to take the bait my saving grace lay awake in this vaccuum of space.
Rather vaccuum the haze til I wrapped around the raps that compact upon my brain. Fasten buckled chains that'll rattle like that of cups of change ..
My fucking brain
Mike McKinney
This is great man.
I like the style of this beat ! ;)
check it yo if you ever wanted something badly go for it. Shoot for those stars twist those broken knobs. Be the man u wanted to be. I didn't let anybody stop me. Wishing these visions would just go away. It reminds me of my high school life
really enjoyed this. thank you!
all i do is smile and let go
all the hatin i feel from yo
let me live let me laugh
cuz i just had enough
of the pain and the sorrow
i wanna laugh like theres no tomorrow
can i believe in me today
to be so strong so ready
that whatever happens tomorrow
i'll move forward and pull through
thank u for not being my side
without u life could have been a joyous ride
I love your beats smooth...
Best I ever heard...👌
Beautiful beat, wow
Just waking up in the morning got ta thank god, lord know I couldn't make it without my squad, late nights early morning on the boulevard, just me, my team and a bag of hard, grind hard that's all that I know I'm in the sunshine state still playing with snow but I learned from the game u get it and go tba.....
Talib Kweli would kill on this beat!
I say stay unique with the drums this shit is hot and unique is a good thing
Mad heavy
I feel good on it ✌️✌️✌️
Dame this is one is nice also wow crazy
oh this is nice bro, reminds me of a dilla song...
im writing this to let you know
it's hard for me to let you go.
forgot to tell you how I felt cause I thought I had to let it show.
gotchu some flowers in hopes I can get up in them draws.
no rubbers u the type that let me hit it raw.
BluntedBeats fat cigars and a shirt with my Cologne for you to hold. i hope your happy with your new life and I'm glad I got to see you grow...
wow dude!! you're really good!
hunter weinman thank you man go check out my verse on Check out this track on BattleMe bttl.me/h/yJTjQqg
lmk ur feed back bro. I would appreciate it
Sehr geil !
Look I'm really sorry that I had to do this, but all those mixed emotions had me feeling clueless. One day you're all happy claiming you love me, but the next, I'd be on a cliff and you'd just shove me. I couldn't deal with you running back to him, and if you wanted to break my heart, you win. I chased you for damn near a year, but I just failed. Don't think this is me coming back into your life, that boat is sailed. But I'll let you know now, I still do love you. Had you ever chose me I'd never put no one above you. But deep down inside I really hate you. I see other girls and it's like they just ain't you. I gave you my all and you just played me. I thought you was put here just to save me. But you fucked me over and that I just can't forget. And as for forgiveness, I ain't done it yet. I ain't gonna lie, you really messed with my mind. And it took me this long to leave you behind. I can't understand why you took me for granted, and deep down inside I know that you planned it. But I'm good now, just mentally unprepared, and honestly if I saw you again, I'd be a little scared. I don't want them feelings back, they never went away, but I'm doing all I can to hide them day by day. Sitting here alone, all these thoughts in my mind, what did I to? Why am I in this bind? Take me out of this world, the pain is unbearable. The way you did me in the end was just fucking terrible.
the real ky bass man 🔥
Sick!!! Just sick mang. Finish it. Wtf.. leave me hanging like a midnight show. Wtf u doin. It's like getting half blown. Ok. I guess u see wats happening now. Don't tell me u a full devout. Cus bout this time? U would've questioned ma rhymes, n if u did u betta reply. I'm waitin on the continuance of that flow. Not to hold .e by da throat, cus I almost felt like I couldn't breath... And all I wanted was a breather cus I swear that was me.. now .... Living ... Sitting waiting for u to finish dat beat
Good beat great job
seems like I'm spacing out. everything's distant, can't you see me here? damn. feelin like I'm slipping away
my mind is living in the yesterdays they always say that everything's okay but I can't seem to accept that. there's gotta be more no more waiting by the door hoping you would walk through like the days before. your gone and I never got to say goodbye so when you come back don't wonder why I cry.
Chorus: I'm lost in your lust// let's make this a must // start off with wants and and then come the needs//.move on to wishes and finish with dream's
Sorry about the extra and
The old me is gone
I hear out my ear and look in the mirror
As I say "So long"
I'm a man now with so many things I've come to understand now
As the old me sheds the new me appears
As all the heavens cheer
All along I've told myself "once I find me everything will come to place"
And as I'm finding myself I'm establishing my own pace
All my life I've been up & down
Happy because that's what made me who I am now
No need to follow the crowd nor get loud
Achieving Inner peace while laying on a cloud
I know who I am and I'm glad I had to face it all by me
Because I'de probably be a weak-willed/simple minded individual if I always had someone stand beside me
I'm glad I've changed for the better
Seems all my life's been an internal endeavor
Cleansed like oil and Planted in Soil
No more turmoil
No more pains
Now I see as a man I can't keep things in my brain
Time to vent and express
I'm one intelligent individual and my ideas are nothing less
Funny, but quiet
Ironic as a fat man on a diet
And subsequently we both are losing
Only his losing is great to be doing
When I decided to open up people love me
But, when I decided to stay trapped behind that mask I'm the only one who disgust me
I used to think why are people trying to talk to me and why don't they go
But, I see they sensed my aura of gold
I thought I was right and I thought I was strong
Turns out everyone knew I was nice and just something was wrong
Mean doesn't fit me too well
And turns out I haven't been true to myself and that's why my grief's been unparalleled
These verses are amazing , except I can't find the flow that your in, maybe try to organize your sentences so it will be less off beat? Would love to hear more from you
I really appreciate it bro.. I really do.. I make really nice lyrics and I don't get alot of recognition because I post them on really old vidz; but your comment is really refreshing 👌🏾🙂.
I personally like the original version, the one with vocals
sick beats ....
Bro! What are you up too because this was 2 years ago and I'm just curious how your journey has been. On another note, I'm about to melt this track! Thank you for providing a place to pay for it.
Distractions coming from my attractions we slowly breaking down, taking shots i gotta make em count, cause im not living like others, im living how i really want to, i wanna live it how i really wanna do, on a move never slowing down, never holding back cause im zoning out
So dope
sera la mejor que utilizare
Beat so good I wanna make a song using it.
I'm lost in paradise as I'm looking through a new set of eyes.
I look to the sky and want to cry its beautiful and blue, but not even I can see the sun to know what's true. this land is devoid of emotion. no way to see the tide on the ocean. so I'm coasting keeping it real I want to know if I'm alive, then can I really feel?
my heart is content even without a sun, more then half my day is spent. I focus on the moon given by the stars I keep my mind centered as I travel far.
so paradise is lost I have no worries, life is lived without a cost. even with these new eyes everything is blurry.
one day here and the next gone
what didn't you do
what did you do wrong
emotions flow as I do
to the beat and make a song
so long my young friend
I shall see you again
when my time ends
till then, its love I send
remember when
I got in your face
and called you out?
I was frustrated and disappointed
and thats how it came out
have fun and watch over us
were going to miss you
especially at Christmas
travel on but stay near
man I wish you were here
just so I could hear
the sound of your voice
and have a few beers
almost shed some tears
but it doesn't seem real enough
😭 That was beautiful bro.. I've seen you comment on some other instrumentals
The old me is gone
I hear out my ear and look in the mirror
As I say "So long"
I'm a man now with so many things I've come to understand now
As the old me sheds the new me appears
As all the heavens cheer
All along I've told myself "once I find me everything will come to place"
And as I'm finding myself I'm establishing my own pace
All my life I've been up & down
Happy because that's what made me who I am now
No need to follow the crowd nor get loud
Achieving Inner peace while laying on a cloud
I know who I am and I'm glad I had to face it all by me
Because I'de probably be a weak-willed/simple minded individual if I always had someone stand beside me
I'm glad I've changed for the better
Seems all my life's been an internal endeavor
Cleansed like oil and Planted in Soil
No more turmoil
No more pains
Now I see as a man I can't keep things in my brain
Time to vent and express
I'm one intelligent individual and my ideas are nothing less
+Javon Antoine
Funny, but quiet
Ironic as a fat man on a diet
And subsequently we both are losing
Only his losing is great to be doing
When I decided to open up people love me
But, when I decided to stay trapped behind that mask I'm the only one who disgust me
I used to think why are people trying to talk to me and why don't they go
But, I see they sensed my aura of gold
I thought I was right and I thought I was strong
Turns out everyone knew I was nice and just something was wrong
Mean doesn't fit me too well
And turns out I haven't been true to myself and that's why my grief's been unparalleled
Javon Antoine Thanks. I lost a good friend on Wednesday. Achieving inner peace while laying on a cloud haha. Thats dope stuff.
Javon Antoine yo, should I move on to the unknown?
or just stay close to home
and do what I've always known?
mind is blown of dank weed
drove a full tank a gas
at a steady fast speed
tryna get things done
I got no time, so don't ask me
light bulbs in my mind
continuously flashing
universal sound
like people laughing
you got to understand this
the may thai preying mantis
forever lost in thoughts
like the city of Atlantis
deep like that Atlantic
heart is gigantic
What’s the vision I’m trying to be hitting ask myself about my life decision little me would
Think so hard I call it precision
Looking back not a way to live but
It was hope I was given
Cause even now I admit in life
Things were never the same when I grabbed a mic for the depression I fight
Start venting to beats
An cause some hype
Good shit my boy powerful words.
G.O.M.
Dope!
I want to be safe like I hold what you value/
I want to be great like my bros know thank you/
What would I do if God was one of us/
Would I change all my views start expressing my trust/
Going deeper the meaning is untouchable/
Focus on breathing this evening is ours to do/
What it do when it do what it does/
Only you that I trust/
Multiply to a million/
What if he said I'm leaving and your filling in/
Would I be ready for a million souls feeling them.
aye,the world getting cold,got me feeling like humanity chasing greed on the chase of losing soul,tell me somebody where did the love for each other go,god I need it back,come across a lot of good people,but more people bad,filled with evil,greed,animosity,and malicious behavior,every night I pray to my savior,save me from the times I'm facin,hard times I'm going through,but I'm still positive with God's hope I attain,no doubt I'll make it through,sipping brews,getting throwed,tryna forget on the daily in the world what unfolds,
Nice one.
Yea
Tripnotic
nice beat! is it still for sale?
This one's for her
I didn't know how to intercept her heart
but your life with me is covered by armor
you don't know it till you loose it
so don't forget somethings you can't recover
life becomes forgetful
when we move onto something like progression
I'm not saying we shouldn't this a bold statement
things ain't never gone be like it was
that's why I left our memorial in the pavement
you failed to trust but at the end you came across
you was a clever girl I value it being real thoughtful
we both focused just a little fragment feeling hopeless
remember when I told you the key to a women heart
is deeper than the ocean and it would take
more than a diamond key to open it
I really meant this because a treasure chest
can't be yanked open like a house vault
these beeeetz is bananaz..
word...
Simplemente perfecta.....
Saludos....
Ache Ramírez
Rly feelin this. Try not to be too unique of your drum rhythms though. They can disassociate the instruments from the whole ensemble.
I'm talking generally and constructively. I love this beat. plus, I can hear the progression over time through song after song.
Good stuff. Def' on for more.
hey brother thanks so much what do you mean with too unique on the drums?
Well, I've found that syncopating rhythms often lead to improvisation (yet improv performance is hit or miss((mostly miss)) unless still rehearsed). Too much might lead to and oversaturation of rhythmic beats in the final product. Thus, breaking the beat from the melody and losing feel of the chorus or melody. (unless you're just being "fonky" on purpose.)
I speak from a drummers perspective, and the truth of it is, sometimes less is more. It's all about control. From each note played, to the progression of the melody, to the mode of the song. Know what I mean?
Love your stuff, I grew up on these types of beats. Production is solid too.
Never stop.
Chriz Zaborowski
Yes I understand! I really want to thank u for this kind of productive feedback ! we re always trying to improve our work and it is good to get some detailed awnser :) We will try too use ur advice!
BluntedBeatz that's what's up. Just don't think that I know what you want out of your sound. Lol, that's your job. Use the technique at your discretion, of course. Such is the beauty of music. You can do what you want with it.
Chriz Zaborowski That was one of the best things I've seen anyone comment on a youtube video. Great job being constructive and positive. I love the hell out of these beats and it makes me happy to see there's people out there who know how to give good constructive criticism and not just be an ass.
Rad:)
Hey, I would like to lease this beat...what do I need to do?
Did u?
Hey man - you can grab a Lease here:
bluntedbeatz.beatstars.com/beat/lost-in-paradise-270943
What software do you use to make your beats?
I Like it "voice effect" Life
can I use this for nonprofit usage?
너와나 함께했던 밤을 난 잊지 못해 그 밤을 넌 립밤 을 바른
입술에 색인 자국 들이 리듬을 타듯 난 비트위에 너랑 나 초콜릿과 우유처럼 석기듯
lost everything
illusions of grandeur blossoming
delusions of longed desires
dystopian state of mind,
tried to sell my soul to an old friend of mine,
purloined soul per lie sold i was
lost to the paradise
when you live for today tomorrow dies.
Anyone know what time (0:00) the hook starts?
+Tanell Anderson 1:24
+Rash MC thank youuu I guess I'm tone deaf smh
Lost in a paradise theses three lions about to bring it home
can I use this for a drone video for realty property....I'll give credit.
Hey, how much is exclusive rights ?
awesome
are these free for non-profit use?
YO IS THIS BEAT FOR SALE ????????
He hung himself from a pale rose of scars reflecting on the cracks of her heart compromising times reflections for two roads in a mirror or for wasted artwork there her toes briefly left with; slouched over a murals broken hourglass pathos hangs pouring sands from our pain flowing like love made under sad rainbows painting our hands as rain falls soft slow like roses unfold stained cloths close bear foreign flesh opened like a fish in the fresh waters webs fully lept with wings crept open in a broken vase of hope soaked tears to be blessed with more depth than a shallow breath report kinder than hindering woes slow like autumn leaves blowing in the wind flow to the floor a bird soaring through the sky blindfolded to a stop sign wrote this poem on a deaf note to a chest or better yet worn charm in a black dress warm against her amour flew past her gray clouds into his nest near her true wealth’s silent raindrops Origami in plain art form left the frame once to make it as plain as day as if change staid the same stains in heart came and remained like Arthur drowned in whine clean cut display plague like blank teardrops in a fogged mirror neutral towards a funeral he’s the flowers in the fleurals planted in dirt lips drinking a dry kiss sticks out if you’re imagination like philosophic bliss is a gift to it saturated filth is what wonders truth is what something to ponder where was beyond for something that Constance times complements to aquiescence where itself lays apart from within like a sinner holding pigeon wings that flap slowly breaking day by day to write these pages but life’s nothing more than a gift to them like questioning an unfulfilled wish they grin at me through these pale teeth of mine as I scream from the inside breathless again in winters skin
love
from the hood to the burbs
hear my words i slur
i never wanted this
but a kid got a curse
and a kid gotta curse
to express how he feels
cuase the pain too real
bodies droppin, court appeals
see my friends on the news
summer days turn blue
see my friends in heaven
saying i see you soon...brotha
dope channel
May I use this beat for a track of mine? I'll give a big shout out man!
Strange days, feels imaginary, I squeeze the blunt to a cherry, recollect, adversaries got my mind feeling younger, a hunger for the struggle, doin time, cities troubled but I'm humbled when I stumble. A little weed make me numb and I can't hear theses rappers spit when mfs only mumble. My number, been laid out on the table. I tell my story like a fable. Suspended in the air til I disconnect the cable, see my wings keep me stable,I was taught since the cradle that a dollar never made a man greater than he's able. Now that's a hard fact of life. keep my family by side it's only right in this fight. This ain't America, the dream, cuz the only scenes on the screen got us divided down the seam. We too political. They say my music hypocritical but my third eye like a reticle.
Aye aye aye
Babe are you okay
Hit you twice in one day
Missed ya call it was 8
Said ya already ate
Yeah
I missed ya call like 3 times
I’m sorry I didn’t have the time
Can I buy this?
Aunque no me cuentes la verdad del cuento
Aunque de tus dientes salga algún no miento
Aún no me digas lo que llevas por dentro.
I like
heaven paradise
is heaven paradise for us yes it is I saw so many family members go under ground but never shade a tear I only did when I walked away when i put that rose on my Tia casket I knew my whole world would of change from the moment when my mother went away out my life for good even my Tia so I'm trap in this lost world tryna get to heaven paradise with y'all I'm Talkin bout my hoimes n famila thats up in heaven looking down smiling lookin at me everywhere i go every step n breath I take I take em for y'all I look in tha mirrors all I see is a demon inside of but from the out side I see a angel but I lost a daughter so I won't ever know what a angel looks like anymore just wished she was alive I would have been out of the shitty town I'm at now while I'm writing down these sad words or what ever u wanna call it I ain't tryna be the next spm but that vato needs to be out already ha he can do way better than me but what can I say I ain't gunna stop til I go to prison or dead in heaven paradise looking down at my future kids smiling n praying for them too so lord plz know that I'm tryna change my ways thank u lord amen
Can i use this as non profit?
Dude, you got an email? I'd like to work with you cause im very impressed by the sounds I hear on your channel its my kinda style. Hmu
How can i use this beat
i LOVE this beat. but is it just me or does anybody else hear somebody whisperin in the background.
Uso Free?
how much for this beat
free?
Lost in paradise , so many faces with no light , till the end I will fight , warrior from ancient times call me Sirius or alshira in Egyptian , not a Buddhist nor a Christian but I am chasing Christ conciouneness , where all gods and goddesses , don't believe the lies they tell you , I'm blessed way past the grave and so are you , rude on the mike , teachin so listen to the one speaking , god of the sea Poseidon , even behind them bars I was spartan , leonitis ... leonitis
This entire comment section can be described as "I'm 14 and this is deep."
hi.. im an x rnb singer thinking of a return to musiq.. could i possibly use 1min 6sec of this track on my facebook to see what my people think?i could also link it all back here!!if all goes well.. id definitely be in touch for more!!GREAT track...
I've never written before I've only heard the lore but my dreams are high and so am I
I'm just kidding on that cuz I'm not high
I am just thirteen but that dont make me clean
out of all the things music will be all I need to succeed to proceed onto the next phase of life to get me through it with a rhyme
that is all for now
buen beat saludos
Relax kick back while I spit some sick raps sick facts Before I hit the track pass me a bottle and sip that I don't trip when I catch that wiff it as if it's Crack once an extra packs has passed for me there's no coming back
The rap life is addicting
Fights conflicting people profiting right off this non fitting Got cops coming with their full clips and I'm packing up my Rhymes when they slide by Beside my ride they try to find a crime but not this time I focused to own this track Cause once I go in there's no going back homies know this Slowly thought I could be a pro Although momma won't let me go So I have to mask my flow
Spit wack rap trash so my bro won't know
Qick show me the nearest flight Imma come Paris tonight But as this goes in one ear goes out the right Living lavish and right this might be what you compare
Paradise