Hello! I'm certain your very busy, but I would have to at least ask if you are able to review my supplementals? I'm having trouble with the "community contribution" prompt. I don't know which single leadership role that I've held to emphasize. I currently have written about how the titles of positions I've held are less significant to me than the activism and accomplishments I'm able to attain through all the opportunities I've been offered. It concludes by explaining that though there are many things I'm interested in at Columbia and would take advantage of, my most tireless contribution to the university would be consistent determination and encouragement to everyone around me. When I summarize it here, it sounds pretty lame. I know there isn't much time left, but I feel that I may need to rewrite it entirely. Would you possibly have any feedback? Thank you so so much, I hope you are well.
@@cescastar7754 Hi, sounds like you have a stellar academic and extra curricular record which is great...so main thing I would say is to make sure you show the emblematic message of your essay. if it is - "
Hi thanks for watching. I don’t really have any Columbia grad school videos in the queue at the moment. Do you have a specific question you want to ask?
For the 'why major' essay should I mention all three choices or just my top choice? I am thinking about double majoring and either a minor or something. I have a story of why specifically neuroscience and how I took the initiative in that neuroscience club, but I'm having difficulty connecting it to my interest in human rights and public health.
You don’t have to mention all three. If it’s hard to make a connection I would save the others for another prompt. Like in this one perhaps Columbia students take an active role in improving their community, whether in their residence hall, classes, or throughout New York City. Their actions, small or large, work to positively impact the lives of others. Share one contribution that you have made to your family, school, friend group, or another community that surrounds you. (200 words)
Hi Jasmine. Awesome. Glad it was helpful!! I would do like a MLA light. so something like "title of article" title of book (year) common app is tricky sometimes it lets you italicize other times not...if you can italicize the title of the book great if not try to underline it.
Thanks for watching! I have a few videos coming out but when I switch back into college essays, I will look into a Colgate video. Are you applying this coming cycle?
@@doloresonthedottedline Really?!? Ok...good to hear you guys are interested in this video...I will put it on the list. Are you applying this coming cycle?
I'm applying for a graduate program. Which also has a what books influences you question, and I'm thinking of writing harry potter. What do you think? Is it too immature for a law graduate program?
HI, thanks for watching. The PS should structurally be different for a graduate program - just FYI. In the book list one book won't make a huge difference. So you can put in Harry Potter...what you want to make sure is that you have a nice balance of adult, more intellectual, cerebral texts along with YA fiction and maybe perhaps non fiction too. Any other questions let me know.
If they are taking a longer time to reply to your application, it means that you will definitely be rejected, or what are the odds to be accepted? Thank you.
Hi Bella, I can’t speak to your odds of getting in but i believe Columbia at least - decisions will all be notified by April 6th. So no news can be just no news until then.
Hi Pablo, this is a great question. After reviewing stats and feedback on ED 1, I think it is helpful if you have extenuating circumstances you can share but I don't think it'll be so dramatic of an influence. So if you had a parent lose a job, or health issues due to covid I would write it...but I would avoid writing a paragraph on how you had to move to online learning since that is typical across the board. Good luck!
Hey there, I had a last minute question on the 4th question where it asks to list movies, albums, shows...etc. that you enjoyed most during secondary/high school. Does this mean we can't list any movies that we watched outside of academic courses like the 2nd question? For example, films like Crazy Rich Asians or Parasite are some of my all-time favorites films that have influenced the stories I want to tell and direct (I want to major in film production/cinema studies). Since I watched these movies in my own free-time, do these not fulfil the requirements of the 4th question? Thanks.
Hi great question - since the question says during your high school years but not in HS I would absolutely include those films. Plus they speak to your major and intellectual/ artistic interests. Good luck!
hi that's very specific and not very well known. You should start looking at scholarship searches like Scholly and then a lot of the wrist based scholarships are coming from actual universities so see which ones even offer that type of support.
Not exactly - since the General Studies is much longer you want to combine the content...a lot of you, who you are, your experience in the discipline you are going to pursue through GS, your ambitions/ or what you want to learn within that subject...then transition into why GC at Columbia...not just why Columbia in general...but do within and beyond the classroom info. good luck!
@@WriteYourAcceptance okay, but I know the formula to writing an essay, the introduction and giving the reasons to support it. Would this be the same way?
@@howlingmedia4354 since it is longer the sections may be longer...I would consider a creative / story like beginning of you doing something related to the field you are applying into...then paragraph 2 directly discussing your connections/ ambitions within the field...then a couple paragraphs on what you have done thus far and then 1-2 paragraphs on why GS...does that sound like the structure you are thinking about
What would you recommend if I apply to school of general studies there I have to write like 2000 words most about my life and want to form it beautifully but I have no idea
HI Kamila! You first want to think about what you want to say about your life...do you want to go chronologically? are there key moments that stand out that feel like foundational experiences? then describe them in images, as if you are watching a movie of your life...you want to bring in descriptive narrative throughout...not the entire way but some storytelling...then see if there is a unifying theme or a lesson that connects most of the experiences. hope this helps! good luck!!
Hey I'll be entering junior year of high school in August. Could you give me any suggestions for extra curriculars or community service that would boost my application?
Hi Famia, thanks for watching. So I can't really tell you what to get involved in because I don't know your interests, but what I can tell you is that ideally you find something you truly connect with, that means something to you so when you write about it, it's 'authentic' and shows your personal and social connection to the cause. Also, if you can assume a leadership position in at least one of the student orgs you are in that would be great. Good luck!
@@famiahumayun7251 you’re welcome! That’s awesome - once you join journalism...maybe think about how you can assume a leadership role and even maybe pitch a story to a local newspaper or do a cool interview for you to show passion. Good luck
Thanks for your help! I have a doubt regarding the first 2 prompts: Should I add a brief description on why I enjoyed each book/reading or it won't really help? Something like: "Forrest Gump", by Winston Groom: *creative story, touching ending.*
Although I hear you, that would be my instinct, I would stick closely to the letter of the prompt and just list...if a supplement says list and describe then you can say a little more...not for these though. The work you set out for yourself is finding breadth and commonality between the texts so they can speak for you. Good luck!
yes you can list it. this is from their site - For the three list questions that follow, please refer to the below guidance when answering these questions: undergrad.admissions.columbia.edu/apply/writing-supplement
I don't but I keep getting asked about that so it may be coming for next season. That may not work for you though if you are asking about it now. The fundamental difference is that since most times departments/ professors in your chosen degree on an admissions committee will be reading your essay you want to do less why the school and more why the program. Also perhaps start with how you have engaged in the field already...perhaps in classes but also a projects beyond the classroom in undergrad. If you share your prompt maybe I can give you a couple more tips.
@@WriteYourAcceptance Columbia MSBA program: The purpose of the Personal Statement is for you to share more about your past experiences and to discuss how these experiences have contributed to your personal and professional growth. It allows the applicant the opportunity to explain to the admission committee the distinct qualities and commitment they can bring to the Columbia Engineering community. A few topics that you may want to address in your Personal Statement include: Describe the reasons you are interested in this program and discuss any relevant past experience. If you have relevant work or research experience, please indicate how it helped you decide on your career path. What are your post-graduation plans or career goals? What do you hope to gain from this program? What about this program excites you? If there are any special circumstances that need to be brought to the attention of the Admission Committee, please include that information. -------End Prompt------ If you could provide me with like a percentage ratio, how much should be personal information to professional experience? 10%personal 90% experience? I am 5 years deep in my career and I'm not sure if I'm not including enough personality traits. I fear I sound like a robot on paper lol.
@@albertohuerta so I would say personal like 20-25%, professional exp that factor into your decision to pursue the MBA (and aspirational plans for future) 35-40% then why MBA at Columbia the rest...here you write about the specific courses, profs, resources, opportunities that make this program unique for you. Ideally you can start with a personal story that combines personality traits with business in some way.
I wouldn’t do that. You could mention a couple subjects you are interested in and how you’d pursue them but one of them should me the major you put in your app. Just my opinion though. I like for student apps to have a sense of synergy throughout
@@WriteYourAcceptance the comment wasnt directed at you in a hateful way... I'm quite literally j vocalizing my internal dread bc i cant re write my whole essay b4 Nov 1st so pls don't... feel attacked.
I was accepted today, May the 5th!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Congrats, are u attending?
Did they give you a care package like sweaters and note books?
Clicked on this so fast! Columbia is my dream school. Thanks for making this:)
Yay!!! Good luck...never too early to prep and strategize. When do you apply?
@@WriteYourAcceptance I'm almost done with my application for RD just want to make sure everything is perfect! Hopefully I get into class of 2025:)
@@h4ppyc8mp3r2 awesome!! Good luck
@@h4ppyc8mp3r2 awww good luck! Stay positive and what is for you will be yours💖I hope you get in :))
@@h4ppyc8mp3r2 did you get in?
This is so insanely helpful! Absolutely adore your advice! You're a gold mine of knowledge! :)
Awesome. Thank you so much!!
Are you stuck on your supps? Comment below.
hello drjosie, can I get your feedback on my essays? I would really apreciate that cause I really need you valuable comments, pleae let me know
@@younesshiha6648 Hi Thanks for watching! This week I am booked...if you have any general questions you want to ask here I would be happy to respond.
Hello! I'm certain your very busy, but I would have to at least ask if you are able to review my supplementals? I'm having trouble with the "community contribution" prompt. I don't know which single leadership role that I've held to emphasize. I currently have written about how the titles of positions I've held are less significant to me than the activism and accomplishments I'm able to attain through all the opportunities I've been offered. It concludes by explaining that though there are many things I'm interested in at Columbia and would take advantage of, my most tireless contribution to the university would be consistent determination and encouragement to everyone around me. When I summarize it here, it sounds pretty lame. I know there isn't much time left, but I feel that I may need to rewrite it entirely. Would you possibly have any feedback? Thank you so so much, I hope you are well.
@@cescastar7754 Hi, sounds like you have a stellar academic and extra curricular record which is great...so main thing I would say is to make sure you show the emblematic message of your essay. if it is - "
hi! i dont know how to answer why are you interested in attending Columbia university?
I got in!!!! Thank you so much for all your help ❤
That's amazing. Congrats!!
Thank you so much for your help! I have only 9 days left and I haven't even started haha.
Ha! Well get going. You can do it!!
thankyou so much! i’m an incoming high school sophomore & i already know Columbia is my dream school
That's awesome! Keep working hard. Good luck!!
I got in!!!
Amazing!! Congratulations. That's awesome.
Thank you so much!! This was incredibly helpful and I can’t wait to submit my application!!
That’s awesome!! You’re welcome. Good luck!!
Now I know better...Thanks for sharing this
Thanks for stopping by!
This is so helpful! Thank you for your advice. Columbia is my dream university :)
Amazing! How exciting!! Good luck! When do you apply?
@@WriteYourAcceptance I will be applying by Regular decision! Fingers crossed 🤞🏻
@@adelavela6714 good luck!
Not me watching this after writing about how I like the school colors as the reason why 😔😔🤚🤚
hope you were able to make some tweaks. good luck!
Hello! Would you be able to make a video for Columbia grad school application too?
Hi thanks for watching. I don’t really have any Columbia grad school videos in the queue at the moment. Do you have a specific question you want to ask?
For the 'why major' essay should I mention all three choices or just my top choice? I am thinking about double majoring and either a minor or something. I have a story of why specifically neuroscience and how I took the initiative in that neuroscience club, but I'm having difficulty connecting it to my interest in human rights and public health.
You don’t have to mention all three. If it’s hard to make a connection I would save the others for another prompt. Like in this one perhaps
Columbia students take an active role in improving their community, whether in their residence hall, classes, or throughout New York City. Their actions, small or large, work to positively impact the lives of others. Share one contribution that you have made to your family, school, friend group, or another community that surrounds you. (200 words)
Thanks a lot for this video. Also, do you edit college essays?
Hi thanks for watching! I do - please email thedrjosie@gmail.com for pricing and availability.
I am going apply over the weekend. I am so happy, I found this video.
Yup== My Text book for Physics was my fav ! Shakespeare not so much ! Great Info. Dr. Josie !
Ha! I hear you. Fair! Hope you’re doing well. Thanks for watching.
1:22 we don’t have required readings in India. How do I go about this question ?
You don't have a reading list for classes? no books you read for a literature class or a philosophy or history class?
For the books, should I list the author as well? Like "The Catcher in the Rye", J.D. Salinger for each book
I would do author title and year of publication
thank you so much for this helpful video
Awesome! Thanks for watching. Good luck!!
Hi, this is very helpful, thanks a lot!
Awesome! You’re welcome!!
This soooo helpful. How would you list an article or what if it’s like an excerpt from a book that was in my textbook how would you list that?
And what do they mean by essays for the second question? does that also mean news articles
Hi Jasmine. Awesome. Glad it was helpful!! I would do like a MLA light. so something like
"title of article" title of book (year)
common app is tricky sometimes it lets you italicize other times not...if you can italicize the title of the book great if not try to underline it.
@@WriteYourAcceptance okay thank so much!!!!!
@@yasmine9013 you're welcome. good luck!
Hi! Can you please do Colgate next
OMG YES!!! I’m thinking about applying to Colgate and this would help sm!!!
Thanks for watching! I have a few videos coming out but when I switch back into college essays, I will look into a Colgate video. Are you applying this coming cycle?
@@doloresonthedottedline Really?!? Ok...good to hear you guys are interested in this video...I will put it on the list. Are you applying this coming cycle?
@@WriteYourAcceptance Hi! Yes I am applying this coming cycle
@@Abby-bx9qh ok gotcha
I'm applying for a graduate program. Which also has a what books influences you question, and I'm thinking of writing harry potter. What do you think? Is it too immature for a law graduate program?
HI, thanks for watching. The PS should structurally be different for a graduate program - just FYI.
In the book list one book won't make a huge difference. So you can put in Harry Potter...what you want to make sure is that you have a nice balance of adult, more intellectual, cerebral texts along with YA fiction and maybe perhaps non fiction too. Any other questions let me know.
If they are taking a longer time to reply to your application, it means that you will definitely be rejected, or what are the odds to be accepted? Thank you.
Hi Bella, I can’t speak to your odds of getting in but i believe Columbia at least - decisions will all be notified by April 6th. So no news can be just no news until then.
@@WriteYourAcceptance Even I have everything against me, I believe things can happen...Thank you for your prompt response.
@@bellaruiz8991 you’re welcome. Stay positive you never know!!
@@WriteYourAcceptance I was accepted!!!!!!!!!!!!!
@@bellaruiz8991 HELLO AMAZING!!!! Congratulations! I am so so happy for you. You will do great. Woo hoo!!
Do you think that writing the optional short essay about COVID available in Common App could improve my application?
Hi Pablo, this is a great question. After reviewing stats and feedback on ED 1, I think it is helpful if you have extenuating circumstances you can share but I don't think it'll be so dramatic of an influence. So if you had a parent lose a job, or health issues due to covid I would write it...but I would avoid writing a paragraph on how you had to move to online learning since that is typical across the board. Good luck!
@@WriteYourAcceptance Thank you so much!
@@pablogomez7213 You're welcome! Good luck.
Hey there, I had a last minute question on the 4th question where it asks to list movies, albums, shows...etc. that you enjoyed most during secondary/high school. Does this mean we can't list any movies that we watched outside of academic courses like the 2nd question? For example, films like Crazy Rich Asians or Parasite are some of my all-time favorites films that have influenced the stories I want to tell and direct (I want to major in film production/cinema studies). Since I watched these movies in my own free-time, do these not fulfil the requirements of the 4th question? Thanks.
Hi great question - since the question says during your high school years but not in HS I would absolutely include those films. Plus they speak to your major and intellectual/ artistic interests. Good luck!
Thanks 🥺, just sent my application😣
Awesome good luck!!
how to apply for fully funded scholarship in ba in south asian studies in columbia university ?
hi that's very specific and not very well known. You should start looking at scholarship searches like Scholly and then a lot of the wrist based scholarships are coming from actual universities so see which ones even offer that type of support.
Is the 'General studies' the same way? That essay is 1500-2500 words.
Not exactly - since the General Studies is much longer you want to combine the content...a lot of you, who you are, your experience in the discipline you are going to pursue through GS, your ambitions/ or what you want to learn within that subject...then transition into why GC at Columbia...not just why Columbia in general...but do within and beyond the classroom info. good luck!
@@WriteYourAcceptance okay, but I know the formula to writing an essay, the introduction and giving the reasons to support it. Would this be the same way?
@@howlingmedia4354 since it is longer the sections may be longer...I would consider a creative / story like beginning of you doing something related to the field you are applying into...then paragraph 2 directly discussing your connections/ ambitions within the field...then a couple paragraphs on what you have done thus far and then 1-2 paragraphs on why GS...does that sound like the structure you are thinking about
What would you recommend if I apply to school of general studies there
I have to write like 2000 words most about my life and want to form it beautifully but I have no idea
HI Kamila! You first want to think about what you want to say about your life...do you want to go chronologically? are there key moments that stand out that feel like foundational experiences? then describe them in images, as if you are watching a movie of your life...you want to bring in descriptive narrative throughout...not the entire way but some storytelling...then see if there is a unifying theme or a lesson that connects most of the experiences. hope this helps! good luck!!
Write Your Acceptance thank you😘
@@kamilakavallini6305 You're welcome. Good luck!!
Hey I'll be entering junior year of high school in August. Could you give me any suggestions for extra curriculars or community service that would boost my application?
Hi Famia, thanks for watching. So I can't really tell you what to get involved in because I don't know your interests, but what I can tell you is that ideally you find something you truly connect with, that means something to you so when you write about it, it's 'authentic' and shows your personal and social connection to the cause. Also, if you can assume a leadership position in at least one of the student orgs you are in that would be great. Good luck!
@@WriteYourAcceptance Ohh thankyou so much! Will do. I'm really into journalism btw!
@@famiahumayun7251 you’re welcome! That’s awesome - once you join journalism...maybe think about how you can assume a leadership role and even maybe pitch a story to a local newspaper or do a cool interview for you to show passion. Good luck
@@WriteYourAcceptance Thankyouu! Super excited to watch all your videos and learn from you
@@famiahumayun7251 Thank you! Great to have you in our community!!
Thanks for your help! I have a doubt regarding the first 2 prompts:
Should I add a brief description on why I enjoyed each book/reading or it won't really help?
Something like: "Forrest Gump", by Winston Groom: *creative story, touching ending.*
Although I hear you, that would be my instinct, I would stick closely to the letter of the prompt and just list...if a supplement says list and describe then you can say a little more...not for these though. The work you set out for yourself is finding breadth and commonality between the texts so they can speak for you. Good luck!
Hello, How are you?
I have a question, Do I just need to write the names of the books or do I need to write the names and talk a little about it?
yes you can list it. this is from their site - For the three list questions that follow, please refer to the below guidance when answering these questions:
undergrad.admissions.columbia.edu/apply/writing-supplement
@@WriteYourAcceptance thank you so much
Can we have assistance to fall 2022 to Columbia university for my son
in essay
Hi for rates and details on how I work with students please email me at thedrjosie@gmail.com
I currently have a list going for this coming cycle.
Do you have a vid like this for grad school? Thanks!
I don't but I keep getting asked about that so it may be coming for next season. That may not work for you though if you are asking about it now. The fundamental difference is that since most times departments/ professors in your chosen degree on an admissions committee will be reading your essay you want to do less why the school and more why the program. Also perhaps start with how you have engaged in the field already...perhaps in classes but also a projects beyond the classroom in undergrad. If you share your prompt maybe I can give you a couple more tips.
@@WriteYourAcceptance Columbia MSBA program: The purpose of the Personal Statement is for you to share more about your past experiences and to discuss how these experiences have contributed to your personal and professional growth. It allows the applicant the opportunity to explain to the admission committee the distinct qualities and commitment they can bring to the Columbia Engineering community.
A few topics that you may want to address in your Personal Statement include:
Describe the reasons you are interested in this program and discuss any relevant past experience.
If you have relevant work or research experience, please indicate how it helped you decide on your career path.
What are your post-graduation plans or career goals?
What do you hope to gain from this program?
What about this program excites you?
If there are any special circumstances that need to be brought to the attention of the Admission Committee, please include that information.
-------End Prompt------
If you could provide me with like a percentage ratio, how much should be personal information to professional experience? 10%personal 90% experience?
I am 5 years deep in my career and I'm not sure if I'm not including enough personality traits. I fear I sound like a robot on paper lol.
@@albertohuerta so I would say personal like 20-25%, professional exp that factor into your decision to pursue the MBA (and aspirational plans for future) 35-40% then why MBA at Columbia the rest...here you write about the specific courses, profs, resources, opportunities that make this program unique for you.
Ideally you can start with a personal story that combines personality traits with business in some way.
@@WriteYourAcceptance great advice per usual! I hope grad students find this in your next video, awesome stuff!
@@albertohuerta Thanks so much!! Good luck!
hey, do you have any bookings this week? If not then can you review my essays?
Hi I don’t have anything available this week. For rates and availability please email thedrjosie@gmail.com
Do I need to put authors for books?
You don't have to but the more info you give the better. For me, I would put
Last name, First name. Title of book (year of publication)
Is it okay to declare a different major than the one you intended to take in your college app?
I wouldn’t do that. You could mention a couple subjects you are interested in and how you’d pursue them but one of them should me the major you put in your app. Just my opinion though. I like for student apps to have a sense of synergy throughout
i... read to be esoteric wtf do i do my interest is being esoteric bruh
Tough bruh :)
@@WriteYourAcceptance the comment wasnt directed at you in a hateful way... I'm quite literally j vocalizing my internal dread bc i cant re write my whole essay b4 Nov 1st so pls don't... feel attacked.
@@gracedlm I don’t feel attacked at all! I thought it was funny. Good luck
@@WriteYourAcceptance LOL okay I'm glad and thank you!
You're beautiful.