I hope this becomes a series, the characters are awesome and I'd like to hear more stories about them. Thank you for always putting the best stories on your channel ❤️
Jordan this is such a great story!! 🤩💜 I would love to hear more as a series! What great characters! Thanks Jordan, hope you’re having a great holiday, cheers!!!! 🎉🤗💯🥂🎄
It was so good it could be inspiration for a tv show or movie, hell I'd call it " my misadventures at the monster saloon " yes!!! That would be it.. Ry's opinion only but yes 100% yes follow up make more put it on screen, syfi or Netflix would pick this up in a heart beat!!
A Pest elf? I’m amazed at how great this story was. Thank you for a great dose of adventure/monster story to darken up the season. I’m here for that always. Looking forward to the next one!😊
I love these kind of stories and the characters, hopefully hear more from them.really glad I found your channel and really enjoy the stories and characters you have created. Especially the humour intertwined with the situations they find themselves in. Financially not in a place to become a patrion but in time hopefully I will. I shall support your work by liking commenting and sharing foe now take care
OP thinks on his feet! He handled it well and didn’t freak out. He is alive!!! Like vex the characters, hopefully we’ll meet in hem again soon. Thanks, have a nice evening. 🎉
🛑WARNING!⚠️ A small spoiler below.⬇️ . . . . . . . . I'm at 10:48 where a monster is trying to wheedle Wisp into handing over the human "meal," or at least share. I'm wondering if the young human man isn't so human after all, which was why the "don't look/come here" glamour of the speak-easy didn't work on him?.... OR it's as simple as what Wisp said about the bar guy setting a lure to trap a human meal? Either way, i'm loving this story and am here for it!!😂
🥰 Awh Wisp ❤a sweetheart I love him. ❤how sweet of him to care a human knowing that he’s not in the upper echelons of his monster world. I’m loving this so much. Monsters are hilarious. Wait I know who this is. He’s the wife from the other story. Omg Jake wanted the phone case. So cool. This must’ve been before he was able to get out of slavery. I like this. Wisp is cool. Yesterday I met a woman and her daughter who has Down syndrome and I have a daughter on the spectrum around her so. This little lady was so bold and sweet and kind and she doesn’t mix words. Her mom said “ why are you so nice to this woman and you treat me like crap?!” The baby said “BECAUSE SHE’S AWESOME SAUCE!” Look at her mom she’s gorgeous and she looks pretty 😢❤That girl just didn’t know what I was going through underneath the makeup and clothes. She made my day and now we’re buddies her and my daughter have a dinner date with tomorrow night and me and her mom are so excited because they have wine. And my baby girl has a drivers license so we can have a few glasses and feel like we’re cool again. I’m totally gassed up being called awesome sauce by someone who doesn’t lie at all, brutal honesty. She told my daughter “we’re not kids, we’re women too and if you know how to take busses we can be able to do everything with just us!” POV I love kids.
Jordan you always have a new, exciting, awesome story to narrate for us!! I subscribed to your channel from day one, when you 1st came out. Ik you were something special then. Now look at you, almost at 57K members & growing!! With ppl that love your channel & talent just as much as me💗💗
I loved this story. Jake was an ass, but that's what makes me like her. I like Wisp too. I'm happy his first instinct was to help the poor man instead of harming him. Which brings me to my question. What is Wisp? Can someone tell me please?
My giant, biker-looking dad does this often. All black bar in the 70s, gay bar, lesbian bar, etc, etc. He said the scariest and unfriendliest was the lesbian bar. 🤣🤣
I love all of your work Jordan, far and away my favorite narrator. But the main character in this story was so stoopid and annoying I just couldn't listen to it.
@marcfromearth I've been trying to reply to your comments but I keep getting an error 😭. I hope you see this 🙏🤞. Just wanted to say hi and that i hope you and your lady have a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year 🫶❤️🫂🙏🎄🎁🎊
I hope this becomes a series, the characters are awesome and I'd like to hear more stories about them. Thank you for always putting the best stories on your channel ❤️
Same. Sounds as if it in the silver king universe as well
I want to buy Jordan's books very soon 🙏🤞. He's a great writer too ❤
That sounds great and heck yea silver king is great
Definitely could be a awesome series
Yeah I'm with you on this. It would definitely make an awesome series!
I love supernatural and human interaction story's hope we get a part 2
This is part of the silver king universe. It's a one shot but there's a ton more stories.
I want a wisp!❤ Thank you Jordan for another fantasti-magical story!😊
This is from the silver king universe theres a bunch more stories if anyones interested
Yes where do I find them
(17:45) What an amazing plot twist! Your storytelling skills are out of this world. 🚀
What I took from this is that if I keep a three wicked candle in my home, a small smoke monster will clean for me. I'm heading to Wal-Mart!
Loved it, but now I want to hear what happens next - I have a feeling there’s way more to be told 😛❤️❤️❤️
i LOVE when characters reappear in new stories
I know this is Silver King but which characters reappeared?
Still like the sheriff and deputy stories from Hollows End but these characters could come close 2nd if follow up stories are made
Great story- really hope it becomes a regular series. Love the characters ❤️
Jordan this is such a great story!! 🤩💜 I would love to hear more as a series! What great characters! Thanks Jordan, hope you’re having a great holiday, cheers!!!! 🎉🤗💯🥂🎄
Best story I've heard in a very long time!!!! Bravo!! Loved it!
It was so good it could be inspiration for a tv show or movie, hell I'd call it " my misadventures at the monster saloon " yes!!! That would be it.. Ry's opinion only but yes 100% yes follow up make more put it on screen, syfi or Netflix would pick this up in a heart beat!!
This has to be Jake from the woods that saved the kids with all the posters on the trees
I believe it is
Whats the vids name?
love love loved this story. I hope there's more.. 🎉
Thank you Jordan! Have a Great Day Everybody
A Pest elf? I’m amazed at how great this story was. Thank you for a great dose of adventure/monster story to darken up the season. I’m here for that always. Looking forward to the next one!😊
I love these kind of stories and the characters, hopefully hear more from them.really glad I found your channel and really enjoy the stories and characters you have created. Especially the humour intertwined with the situations they find themselves in.
Financially not in a place to become a patrion but in time hopefully I will. I shall support your work by liking commenting and sharing foe now take care
Here’s the comment to boost the algorithm- cool story, too!
Love these types of story’s. Hope you continue more of this story line.
OP thinks on his feet! He handled it well and didn’t freak out. He is alive!!! Like vex the characters, hopefully we’ll meet in hem again soon.
Thanks, have a nice evening. 🎉
Under my electric blanket for this one ❤
That was a cute story and it sounds like there will be more coming with these characters 😊 Thanks Jordan
Awesome!! Feels like it could be a series!! ❤😊 thankyou JG
Much appreciated Jordan. 👍🏻
I want another story of them, this was a great story❤❤❤ Im on love with them
What a freakin bro! ❤ and what an ending! 😊 👏👏👏
I can't wait to hear the evolution of this story!!
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I'm at 10:48 where a monster is trying to wheedle Wisp into handing over the human "meal," or at least share.
I'm wondering if the young human man isn't so human after all, which was why the "don't look/come here" glamour of the speak-easy didn't work on him?.... OR it's as simple as what Wisp said about the bar guy setting a lure to trap a human meal?
Either way, i'm loving this story and am here for it!!😂
This story was so fun! I really I hope this becomes a series. I love these kinds of worlds! 🥰
Excellent story Jordan! Thank you
Huge thanks to the author u/02321 for writing this one!
That's one human that can roll. He'd be great back up in over under situations.
🥰 Awh Wisp ❤a sweetheart I love him. ❤how sweet of him to care a human knowing that he’s not in the upper echelons of his monster world. I’m loving this so much. Monsters are hilarious. Wait I know who this is. He’s the wife from the other story. Omg Jake wanted the phone case. So cool. This must’ve been before he was able to get out of slavery. I like this. Wisp is cool.
Yesterday I met a woman and her daughter who has Down syndrome and I have a daughter on the spectrum around her so. This little lady was so bold and sweet and kind and she doesn’t mix words. Her mom said “ why are you so nice to this woman and you treat me like crap?!”
The baby said “BECAUSE SHE’S AWESOME SAUCE!” Look at her mom she’s gorgeous and she looks pretty 😢❤That girl just didn’t know what I was going through underneath the makeup and clothes. She made my day and now we’re buddies her and my daughter have a dinner date with tomorrow night and me and her mom are so excited because they have wine. And my baby girl has a drivers license so we can have a few glasses and feel like we’re cool again. I’m totally gassed up being called awesome sauce by someone who doesn’t lie at all, brutal honesty. She told my daughter “we’re not kids, we’re women too and if you know how to take busses we can be able to do everything with just us!” POV I love kids.
Bedtime story! Yay! Thank you Jordan!!
This reminds me of the mailman story universe.
I’m here for it.
Well that was fun!
That was supernaturally fun!
That was a cool one. You’ll be able to build on the story line , too.
You suck
I LOVE this one! Yes! Next chapter???
Looking forward to see where this might go, well I hope there's a follow up story with these characters.
Definitely need this to be a huge series the potential is endless
Loved this!
Bang ❗️ Bang ‼️ Boys❤. Thanks for the epic stories 🎉
Jordan you always have a new, exciting, awesome story to narrate for us!! I subscribed to your channel from day one, when you 1st came out. Ik you were something special then. Now look at you, almost at 57K members & growing!! With ppl that love your channel & talent just as much as me💗💗
Thank you so much for supporting the channel since the very beginning!
Very first line is my life in a nutshell 👌🏻
We've all wandered into a fae bar once amirite
True fact. There used to be a cartoon in the UK years ago called "Willow The Wisp."
Echoing previous comments this would make a great series. Love to hear more about Supernatural society. Here's to more Joey and Wisp!
Thank you Jordan 🫶
This was so gooooood! You amaze me! Thank you
If this is a start of a series, it would be great. The dude get a place to live out of all this after all. Nice story.
Monster is a subjective term.
I mean what most of us flush after waking up every morning could be called monsters .
Thank you very much, Jordan❤❤❤❤❤❤
I love this writer! Thankyou Jordan ❤
Love it!!! Need more of this storyline!!
This was really good. I also hope that it becomes a series.
Thanks Grupe! A bar series sounds promising 💜😎👍
Always love 02321 💕💕💕
This was great
Thanks Jordan!
Loved it!❤
This was a hidden gem! ❤
I want this to be a series
Those flowers I want 😊
I loved this!!! When the next instalment?😊
This could totally happen in Portland
I loved this story. Jake was an ass, but that's what makes me like her. I like Wisp too. I'm happy his first instinct was to help the poor man instead of harming him. Which brings me to my question. What is Wisp? Can someone tell me please?
Probably some type of fae with a name like wisp and floating
Unexpected. ❤❤❤
Hope to hear more of this
My giant, biker-looking dad does this often. All black bar in the 70s, gay bar, lesbian bar, etc, etc. He said the scariest and unfriendliest was the lesbian bar. 🤣🤣
Hold on... is he talking about the things from the pest control company stories??
I hope this is the same Jake that saved those kids in the woods
Invite Jake she seems fun haha
Yeah. Love Jake.
Can’t wait! I always love “I walked into the wrong bar…”
Interesting story nothing personal to the people that live there but this wouldn't surprise me in New York LoL
yeah, been there, done that
@@strange-universe you had homosexual encounters in New York City?
@@bryanclark5529 encountered, but not participated. And years ago, bars weren't very clear about what was on the inside.
Great story, new series? I hope.
Well , this was amusing . Kind of a Douglas Adams thing going on .
Very nice, and kinda cute too.
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Oooh, i ship it!😂
So ya loved it but gotta drop a comment sooooo ... here it is... cOMMent
Jake!✨
Is this the same Jake from the story with the brothers?
Yes I believe so
Was the bar in hollows end?😅
Different author but I could definitely see a bar like this existing in HE
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I love all of your work Jordan, far and away my favorite narrator. But the main character in this story was so stoopid and annoying I just couldn't listen to it.
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