Oh wow wow wow !! Such a great story and great cliffhanger. Just make sure you really get to all the juicy part 2 in so many of your stories. So good, so good. Also have you consider missionary position for your characters coz they seemed to get “turn over” all the time ( except the truck driver). Anyway thank you. Most impressive work. ❤❤❤
Thank you my friend, I'm glad you liked it🥰, the "turn" is a way to clarify the act without being explicit, I'm still adapting it so it doesn't get too repetitive, I'll be grateful for your feedback later, it helps me improve more and more, kiss 😙
A story of choice for Eric. Very interesting to see what can he do for happiness. I like to see what is next for him. 👍❤️
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Oh wow wow wow !! Such a great story and great cliffhanger. Just make sure you really get to all the juicy part 2 in so many of your stories. So good, so good. Also have you consider missionary position for your characters coz they seemed to get “turn over” all the time ( except the truck driver).
Anyway thank you. Most impressive work. ❤❤❤
Thank you my friend, I'm glad you liked it🥰, the "turn" is a way to clarify the act without being explicit, I'm still adapting it so it doesn't get too repetitive, I'll be grateful for your feedback later, it helps me improve more and more, kiss 😙
@ you are genuine with your work and that made a huge difference. When the writer put in his soul , the readers can feel it too.
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This is the best story line I have heard so far. Some of the others bore me with way too much dialog.
I'm glad you liked it! ❤️