Yaaay, dysfunctioooon 8D Link to next episode: ua-cam.com/video/6QMAr9D_vqQ/v-deo.html Link to previous episode: ua-cam.com/video/tWfZTK3tqlI/v-deo.html Link to full playlist: ua-cam.com/play/PLKMzqZUiHWUjzZj0jfJym1CTORp4rdEDD.html LINK TO WRITTEN VERSION: archiveofourown.org/works/45445291?view_full_work=true
You do what you gotta do. We'll be waiting patiently. I've been here slightly after you started the SU:F rewrite and I've been loving the direction you took both of these series as a whole. It's honestly quite refreshing to see a more real approach to these series instead of trying to throw a pretty little bow on them and say they're perfect. I've adopted both of your rewrites at this point as a better canon, and nobody can tell me otherwise. At any rate, take care of your business and we'll be here, cookies and all. ^_^
I love thissss!!!! Questionsss :3 1. How exhausted is Gregory? 2. What was the argument that happened between monty and roxy? (General gist if it's heavily lore wise, e.x. friend falling out, work place incident, yadda yadda) 3. Is Vanessa... butt naked in the suit or...??? sorry if that's a weird question but I just noticed the hat she was wearing and I'm just.. girl tf- 4. Will Gregory at least try to sleep or rest whilst the others watch for Vanessa? Will moon perhaps lull him into sleep? 5. What is Freddy feeling/thinking after Gregory had another mental breakdown? (Parental responsibility? Anger?) 6. Will Mr MMMMMMUSIC MAN have a.... capsule... in his machinery? 7. Will the next few episodes be around the pair's point of views for like 30 minutes or so? Or will it be just one big episode? 8. Are the animatronics able to dilate their pupils? Or 'fake' emotion? That's all! Loving the new chapter, and I don't mind if you have a habitus because of studying and personal stuff! Don't mind at all. :]
I can try to answer this 1. From what I've seen (so to speak) so far, Gregory is heavily fatigued physically and emotionally from the adrenaline highs, the fear of being attacked, and the what I assume to be trauma of being raised in an abusive household. On multiple occasions it's been pointed out that if not for his situation, he would collapse out of exhaustion (if he hadn't already). 2. With the cast splitting into groups, it would be safe to say we'll get more in depth looks at character relations. We'll have to wait and find out. 3. Oh this one's easy, No. How do I know this? It's not the kind of story to have a character. . . revealed like that. There's also been no estblished reason for her to remove her clothes when putting the suit on. 4. We'll find out soon. It's a possibilty that Greogory may fall asleep although given the dynamic between him and moon, it's not likely. As far as Moon goes, he probably gonna be in a dazed/apologetic state. If he did try to lull Gregory to sleep, it might put more strain on the already fragile relationship. 5. He definitely knows something's up. Probably somewhat recognizing the signs of abuse if the Bonnie incident logs are anything to go off of. Being who he is, a sense of remorse and maybe deep anger may be stirring because of past events. 6. No need, he's massive as it is. If he needs to carry something he can just hold it or carry it in his mouth. 7. Can't answer sorry :/ 8. I would assume so. Maybe as like a zoom in feature? I could be entirely wrong but with the other hand, they're already stated to have fairly advanced tech when it comes to making facial features. Why wouldn't they have it right?
Hey, sorry for taking awhile to respond to this, I forgot whoops 😅 1: Gregory is really tired out, in case you couldn’t tell. He’s literally been running for his life all night. 2: You’ll have to wait and see :) 3: No, there’s no reason for her to take off her clothes. It’s not skin tight, it’s similar to spring-traps suit (but without spring locks being driven through her body, obviously) Think of it more of a ‘mech suit’ than a costume. 4: you’ll have to wait and see, but he’s probably not going to be able to sleep through this from everything that’s going on 5: Freddy is mostly just ashamed of himself. He pretty much thinks that the others are arguing because he’s not a good enough dad, and the fact that it was also affecting a kid made that guilt even worse 6: you’ll have to wait and see :) 7: you’ll have to wait and see :) 8: Since you specifically mentioned dilated pupils, I think you noticed how that was a visual signal of the chip’s influence. So no, ‘dilated pupils’ are not really in their control (kind of like how we can’t dilate our pupils intentionally either) They are dilated with the chip because they are in ‘hunting mode’, kind of like a cat Again, sorry for not responding sooner, I made a note to respond and then it got covered up by a bunch of other stuff, and I just forgot😅
Holy shit. 18:30. Chica, in what I can only assume to be a slip of the tongue, called Roxy "Annie". That... That's interesting... Very Very Interesting
So please correct me if I'm wrong, but Roxy has a new arm but not a new hand to go along with it. Along with one new left eye and a missing right one. Roxy is starting to look like Foxy again.
All this and I can't help but think: "Wait a minute- there are still 30 chapters left-?" (Ok but this is seriously good?? Chapter 3 had me crying and quaking in my boots and I just feel really sad for everyone rn. Thank you for this experience Kiwi- qwq)
I'm sorry. Did you say BABY'S CIRCUS!?! If so. I got a BAAAD feeling about that place! WAY A GO FREDDY! THE MAN IS PUTTING HIS FOOT DOWN! My god, Bonne is earing Disciplined points left and right. Leave the bunny boy alone! He's trying his best.
19:16 I'm gonna track down whoever hurt this poor child and kill them, guys are lucky they're fictional or I'd throw hands immediately (also this scene is really good nice job on the voice acting)
Dear God I love this episode just hearing how all the animatronics are now interacting now that they're able to talk to each other this is interesting The way you're portraying their relationship is absolutely interesting fantastic and beautiful I love it
God I love how dysfunctional they are that sounds weird but I love the fact that they feel like a broken family that's trying to stay together and trying to stay whole God the vibe was they give off are so cool and also chica calling Roxy Annie is so beautiful
Damn they really cracked down on Bonnie a little bit too rough also I hate the fact that you can see the disconnect they start using it instead of he that is so disgusting
The inclusion of map bot made me irrationally happy. Also, I noticed that Chica called Roxane ‘Annie’, and I just think that’s a cute little detail,, loved this episode!
Ok dudes there was no way treating Bonnie that harsh plus the kids were the ones who started it but yet Bonnie gets disciplined I swear we as a society will never evolve
Honestly? Yeah, with how stressful their situation it, a fight of somekind was bound to happen. They've all been going through it for real, and not still not being able to see, then having to rely on someone she hates must be extra hard on Roxy. Ignore my question if it's a spoiler, but why exactly are Roxy and Monty smaller than Freddy and Chica? Also that report on Bonnie...Oh man that HURT. Oh I hated hearing how he was 'disciplined' for mistakes and clear signs of distress. And then they started calling him an 'it'! I genuinely gasped when they started doing that. WOW, absolutely horrid, we hate to see it. Very good story telling, I'm in tears.
I can answer that question, it's not involving any spoilers :) The in-universe people that designed the animatronics made them different sizes for their intended purpose: Roxy is the smallest because she's usually playing roughly with kids in the laser tag arena, so she needs to be able to move fast and not take up as much space so she doesn't accidentally whack them on the head while she passes by Monty is also small because in the Raceway, he's kind of just an obstacle for the kids, so they also didn't want him to have extra mass that may cause him to accidentally hit a kid while getting in the way of the cart Chica is kind of medium-big because of the amount of food that she needs to move throughout the day, mostly with serving it to the kids and making it and stuff. Alongside that, having a bigger body means that she can fit more food into her stomach for the sort of “guest dining” feature where she's eating with the kids for their birthday Freddy is big mostly because then there's more room for the kid inside the riding compartment. And also, design-wise, he's the main guy who’s literally built to be a bear, so they made him the largest intentionally :) And I’m really glad that you’re liking the rewrite, it really lights up my day to see someone so excited about each episode :D
@@kiwiqueen138 I see! That makes perfect sense. Thank you for the response, and thank you for the awesome story! It's so good that I actively have to hold myself back from listening; I don't want to catch up too quickly!
Wow what an a hole the managers are to bonnie everything single small harmless mistake he made gets him the electric shock button or even big one that are on accident still the electric button just why we need to get information soon about why not only Jeremy but also the why the other managers are a holes and also abuse him and doesn't even see bonnie as a person even if he's a robot and that goes for the others who never got treatment like chica eating problem and everyone as well just why
Yaaay, dysfunctioooon 8D
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You do what you gotta do. We'll be waiting patiently. I've been here slightly after you started the SU:F rewrite and I've been loving the direction you took both of these series as a whole. It's honestly quite refreshing to see a more real approach to these series instead of trying to throw a pretty little bow on them and say they're perfect. I've adopted both of your rewrites at this point as a better canon, and nobody can tell me otherwise. At any rate, take care of your business and we'll be here, cookies and all. ^_^
freddy gives off “exhausted single dad” vibes, give my man a break ‼️
I love thissss!!!!
Questionsss :3
1. How exhausted is Gregory?
2. What was the argument that happened between monty and roxy? (General gist if it's heavily lore wise, e.x. friend falling out, work place incident, yadda yadda)
3. Is Vanessa... butt naked in the suit or...??? sorry if that's a weird question but I just noticed the hat she was wearing and I'm just.. girl tf-
4. Will Gregory at least try to sleep or rest whilst the others watch for Vanessa? Will moon perhaps lull him into sleep?
5. What is Freddy feeling/thinking after Gregory had another mental breakdown? (Parental responsibility? Anger?)
6. Will Mr MMMMMMUSIC MAN have a.... capsule... in his machinery?
7. Will the next few episodes be around the pair's point of views for like 30 minutes or so? Or will it be just one big episode?
8. Are the animatronics able to dilate their pupils? Or 'fake' emotion?
That's all! Loving the new chapter, and I don't mind if you have a habitus because of studying and personal stuff! Don't mind at all. :]
I can try to answer this
1. From what I've seen (so to speak) so far, Gregory is heavily fatigued physically and emotionally from the adrenaline highs, the fear of being attacked, and the what I assume to be trauma of being raised in an abusive household. On multiple occasions it's been pointed out that if not for his situation, he would collapse out of exhaustion (if he hadn't already).
2. With the cast splitting into groups, it would be safe to say we'll get more in depth looks at character relations. We'll have to wait and find out.
3. Oh this one's easy, No. How do I know this? It's not the kind of story to have a character. . . revealed like that. There's also been no estblished reason for her to remove her clothes when putting the suit on.
4. We'll find out soon. It's a possibilty that Greogory may fall asleep although given the dynamic between him and moon, it's not likely. As far as Moon goes, he probably gonna be in a dazed/apologetic state. If he did try to lull Gregory to sleep, it might put more strain on the already fragile relationship.
5. He definitely knows something's up. Probably somewhat recognizing the signs of abuse if the Bonnie incident logs are anything to go off of. Being who he is, a sense of remorse and maybe deep anger may be stirring because of past events.
6. No need, he's massive as it is. If he needs to carry something he can just hold it or carry it in his mouth.
7. Can't answer sorry :/
8. I would assume so. Maybe as like a zoom in feature? I could be entirely wrong but with the other hand, they're already stated to have fairly advanced tech when it comes to making facial features. Why wouldn't they have it right?
Hey, sorry for taking awhile to respond to this, I forgot whoops 😅
1: Gregory is really tired out, in case you couldn’t tell. He’s literally been running for his life all night.
2: You’ll have to wait and see :)
3: No, there’s no reason for her to take off her clothes. It’s not skin tight, it’s similar to spring-traps suit (but without spring locks being driven through her body, obviously) Think of it more of a ‘mech suit’ than a costume.
4: you’ll have to wait and see, but he’s probably not going to be able to sleep through this from everything that’s going on
5: Freddy is mostly just ashamed of himself. He pretty much thinks that the others are arguing because he’s not a good enough dad, and the fact that it was also affecting a kid made that guilt even worse
6: you’ll have to wait and see :)
7: you’ll have to wait and see :)
8: Since you specifically mentioned dilated pupils, I think you noticed how that was a visual signal of the chip’s influence. So no, ‘dilated pupils’ are not really in their control (kind of like how we can’t dilate our pupils intentionally either) They are dilated with the chip because they are in ‘hunting mode’, kind of like a cat
Again, sorry for not responding sooner, I made a note to respond and then it got covered up by a bunch of other stuff, and I just forgot😅
@@kiwiqueen138 It's totally fine! Thanks for answering my questions cool whip! (That is my gender neutral dude 😔)
@@CassetteTapestry I might steal cool whip as a way of referring to ppl
the wait for each episode is worth it in my opinion, I'm hooked on this series
AAAAH CHICA CALLED ROXY ANNIE! That’s adorable!!!!!
Holy shit. 18:30. Chica, in what I can only assume to be a slip of the tongue, called Roxy "Annie". That... That's interesting...
Very
Very
Interesting
So please correct me if I'm wrong, but Roxy has a new arm but not a new hand to go along with it. Along with one new left eye and a missing right one.
Roxy is starting to look like Foxy again.
All this and I can't help but think:
"Wait a minute- there are still 30 chapters left-?"
(Ok but this is seriously good?? Chapter 3 had me crying and quaking in my boots and I just feel really sad for everyone rn. Thank you for this experience Kiwi- qwq)
"It wasn't your fault, it was his." Oh DAMN. "He" could be a few different characters in this case, but they're clearly talking about Bonnie, right?
I'm sorry. Did you say BABY'S CIRCUS!?! If so. I got a BAAAD feeling about that place!
WAY A GO FREDDY! THE MAN IS PUTTING HIS FOOT DOWN!
My god, Bonne is earing Disciplined points left and right. Leave the bunny boy alone! He's trying his best.
19:16 I'm gonna track down whoever hurt this poor child and kill them, guys are lucky they're fictional or I'd throw hands immediately (also this scene is really good nice job on the voice acting)
Count me in!
literally that entire fighting scene was just bc roxy wanted to be an asshole
WOOO WOOO!! LETS GO NEW CHAPTER! Man am I excited for this one, especially after that last one
Dear God I love this episode just hearing how all the animatronics are now interacting now that they're able to talk to each other this is interesting The way you're portraying their relationship is absolutely interesting fantastic and beautiful I love it
FINALLY ONE OF THE BEST CHARACTERS IN ALL OF SECURITY BREACH HAS MADE AN APPEARANCE MAP BOT 13:07
God I love how dysfunctional they are that sounds weird but I love the fact that they feel like a broken family that's trying to stay together and trying to stay whole God the vibe was they give off are so cool and also chica calling Roxy Annie is so beautiful
Damn they really cracked down on Bonnie a little bit too rough also I hate the fact that you can see the disconnect they start using it instead of he that is so disgusting
Chica is such a sweetheart
Poor Gregory. I just wanna say that everyone (but Freddy) are being huge a holes to moon(and sun).
the way the workers change from using him to it for bonnie
This is the only exception where team planned murder is allowed…. This man’s getting the Cesar’s execution
Wait wait wait, BABY'S CIRCUS?!? Hol' up, WHAT?!?
The inclusion of map bot made me irrationally happy. Also, I noticed that Chica called Roxane ‘Annie’, and I just think that’s a cute little detail,, loved this episode!
Strange Bonnie's pronouns change from he to it strange...
I think the workers started to get sick of Bonnie's constant mistakes, and started seeing him as a thing, not as an individual.
He never thought about it again….
19:17 AGH POOR BABY NONONONO STOP CRYING
i love that god darn pfp
AHHH I CAN'T RN DAM IT
Love this
Wait,are we going to see the animatronics get spooked too? I wonder what else is in the pizza Plex...
ITS HERE
i am so stressed
Monty is my BOY why TF is roxy so mean to him
oh my god gregory please you have some much trauma can i just give you a hug holy shot
the switch from “him” to “it” when talking about bonnie is terrifying im gonna maul jeremy
Omg, how am I so early?!! Beautiful!
he...it....dehumanization!!!
Moon is not okay 😅
Ok dudes there was no way treating Bonnie that harsh plus the kids were the ones who started it but yet Bonnie gets disciplined I swear we as a society will never evolve
Damn last time i saw you was those steve saga vids lol
Honestly? Yeah, with how stressful their situation it, a fight of somekind was bound to happen. They've all been going through it for real, and not still not being able to see, then having to rely on someone she hates must be extra hard on Roxy. Ignore my question if it's a spoiler, but why exactly are Roxy and Monty smaller than Freddy and Chica?
Also that report on Bonnie...Oh man that HURT. Oh I hated hearing how he was 'disciplined' for mistakes and clear signs of distress. And then they started calling him an 'it'! I genuinely gasped when they started doing that. WOW, absolutely horrid, we hate to see it. Very good story telling, I'm in tears.
I can answer that question, it's not involving any spoilers :)
The in-universe people that designed the animatronics made them different sizes for their intended purpose:
Roxy is the smallest because she's usually playing roughly with kids in the laser tag arena, so she needs to be able to move fast and not take up as much space so she doesn't accidentally whack them on the head while she passes by
Monty is also small because in the Raceway, he's kind of just an obstacle for the kids, so they also didn't want him to have extra mass that may cause him to accidentally hit a kid while getting in the way of the cart
Chica is kind of medium-big because of the amount of food that she needs to move throughout the day, mostly with serving it to the kids and making it and stuff. Alongside that, having a bigger body means that she can fit more food into her stomach for the sort of “guest dining” feature where she's eating with the kids for their birthday
Freddy is big mostly because then there's more room for the kid inside the riding compartment. And also, design-wise, he's the main guy who’s literally built to be a bear, so they made him the largest intentionally :)
And I’m really glad that you’re liking the rewrite, it really lights up my day to see someone so excited about each episode :D
@@kiwiqueen138 I see! That makes perfect sense. Thank you for the response, and thank you for the awesome story! It's so good that I actively have to hold myself back from listening; I don't want to catch up too quickly!
Wow what an a hole the managers are to bonnie everything single small harmless mistake he made gets him the electric shock button or even big one that are on accident still the electric button just why we need to get information soon about why not only Jeremy but also the why the other managers are a holes and also abuse him and doesn't even see bonnie as a person even if he's a robot and that goes for the others who never got treatment like chica eating problem and everyone as well just why
The time chapter 14 released 14 minutes ago
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18:33 did I mishear or did Chica call Roxy "annie"?
You did not mishear
Do anybody see something behind Vanni/Vanessa
the switch from "he" to "it" during the incident report is just..... OUGH. ow