Hello MrMat! You had me at WhiteBladeZero! Don't have a lot of negatives on this actually. Because it's essentially a Fire Within Shadow remake, the still moments in the fight work! The camerawork is probably the biggest flaw here. It's not bad overall. But you do move it during certain parts, which could be problematic. My only other notes are minor, but could still prove to be important. Firstly, the character icons. The ones during the fight are good. But the story ones have inconsistent sizes and placements. Second, I would've committed to either using all voice clips or none with the text. These are suggestions that could help keep things more consistent. Other than that, I think this is a solid first machinima! It reminds me a lot of Fire Within Shadow. But it's also got a hair of Nolan's Smasherz series! It's also rare to see a new Brawl machinima these days. So I commend your efforts! I wish you the best of luck with this project and hope to see it more in the future!
Thanks alot! For my defense about the camera, I used a Nintendo Switch classic controller which drifts alot sometimes, so sorry if that happens, next time I'll try to play with Keyboard instead, and sure I'll make sure that the icons remains the same size aswell.
Not bad, looking forward to future parts.
Hello MrMat! You had me at WhiteBladeZero!
Don't have a lot of negatives on this actually. Because it's essentially a Fire Within Shadow remake, the still moments in the fight work! The camerawork is probably the biggest flaw here. It's not bad overall. But you do move it during certain parts, which could be problematic. My only other notes are minor, but could still prove to be important. Firstly, the character icons. The ones during the fight are good. But the story ones have inconsistent sizes and placements. Second, I would've committed to either using all voice clips or none with the text. These are suggestions that could help keep things more consistent.
Other than that, I think this is a solid first machinima! It reminds me a lot of Fire Within Shadow. But it's also got a hair of Nolan's Smasherz series! It's also rare to see a new Brawl machinima these days. So I commend your efforts! I wish you the best of luck with this project and hope to see it more in the future!
Thanks alot! For my defense about the camera, I used a Nintendo Switch classic controller which drifts alot sometimes, so sorry if that happens, next time I'll try to play with Keyboard instead, and sure I'll make sure that the icons remains the same size aswell.