24:50- honestly, i love that part, i think it's way more iconic and less cliché than in the original. "No, it was on YOUR hands and you put it in mine". I think it's a realy good rewirte.
14:59 i think maybe the diary should be changed a bit, i like that way of doing the expksition about the dragons eggs, but i think maybe combining the montage and this or doing a flashback scene during it... maybe that was already the plan but i wanted to point it out - good rewrite though! I thought this movie felt like a missed opportunity and like it couldve been much better than it was and i think you've addressed a lot of the issues the movie had!
@KAB2991Studios its...complicated. The story was decent and it built a compelling mystery but the ending....well lets just say it gives Stephen Kings endings a run for their money
24:50- honestly, i love that part, i think it's way more iconic and less cliché than in the original. "No, it was on YOUR hands and you put it in mine". I think it's a realy good rewirte.
Thank you 😄 Glad you liked it 👍
14:59 i think maybe the diary should be changed a bit, i like that way of doing the expksition about the dragons eggs, but i think maybe combining the montage and this or doing a flashback scene during it... maybe that was already the plan but i wanted to point it out - good rewrite though! I thought this movie felt like a missed opportunity and like it couldve been much better than it was and i think you've addressed a lot of the issues the movie had!
You're right. Playing the film over the diary was what I had envisioned, but I wanted to avoid showing as much of the film, due to ©. I probably would have been safe, but YT likes to prove me wrong. 😅 Glad you liked the video.
I found the book the movie was based on and hoped it would be better in a written form.....
Ive never been so disappointed by a books ending
Was it at the very least better than the film?
@KAB2991Studios its...complicated. The story was decent and it built a compelling mystery but the ending....well lets just say it gives Stephen Kings endings a run for their money