This Alien Girl Seems To be in a Scenario Where Her Development Can Still Be Shaped Based on how She is Treated Even More So With Her Have Powers That She Seems Like She Never Wanted and Alex Has The Chance to be a Father Figure To Someone Who Needs One
They landed on a desolate moon, and it was like they start walking to a hidden planet. The whole story so far up through 27:00 sounds like they are walking through a desolate landscape but are searching for a hidden planet. Does not make sense to me. Good story even with all the wholes.
Great story, just discovered the channel.
nice story
This Alien Girl Seems To be in a Scenario Where Her Development Can Still Be Shaped Based on how She is Treated Even More So With Her Have Powers That She Seems Like She Never Wanted and Alex Has The Chance to be a Father Figure To Someone Who Needs One
They landed on a desolate moon, and it was like they start walking to a hidden planet. The whole story so far up through 27:00 sounds like they are walking through a desolate landscape but are searching for a hidden planet. Does not make sense to me. Good story even with all the wholes.
are they in a ship or on the ground?
The story has way too many glaring errors. This book would be better as a novel.
Proof Reader Anyone?
Lots of mistakes...