Watching all these rewrite videos made me realize you should make your own original miraculous story with different characters and different miraculous us. I guarantee you’re gonna Megan a better original miracle story.
Chloe having a supportive twin brother is such a cute idea!! I love their relationship, specially the part of him hating the miraculous users while Chloe LOVES THEM!! Well, maybe not hating them, but he is totally worried for his sister's well-being because, are those myterious vigilantes really good people? Why isn´t the police doing anything about it (the akumas)? I also loveloveLOVE the new Queen Bee design! The old design was really cute, but this new one looks so... elegant! She is a Queen, indeed!! ;D The new abilities are so- WOWOWOW!!! I like that she has now more powers than just *paralyze* Your whole rewrite of Miraculous is my favorite!!! I personally can't wait for Nathaniel's redesign, he is my favorite MLB character and I'm really curious in how you would rewrite him!! :3
First off, you did a great job of fixing Chloe. She's definitely Isabela Madrigal, Amity Blight, and Regina George fusion, becoming Adrian's cousin is interesting, wants her mother's love and approval, and having a supportive twin brother is a great idea, I enjoy their relationship, especially the part of him hating the miraculous heroes while she loves them. Percival Bougriose, glad you added him so Chloe isn't alone. Being an heir to a rich legacy is never easy, also a school class president while being a gentleman major is hard too. He does support his sister's dreams and tries to attend her plays, despite having a busy schedule too. True he's charming, witty, and intelligent, but also stubborn, prideful, irritable, cunning, and close-minded to the miraculous heroes. He's the Harvey Bullock while Chloe's the James Gordon, classic Yin and Yang. Pollen becomes Abeille and takes the role of Alfred Pennyworth and Jiminy Cricket for Chloe. He trains, supports, guides, and encourages her to become a better person and hopefully for Percival too when he comes to his senses about heroes. And yes he's cute too. So Marinette had a crush on Percival, which caused her to be Chloe's favorite punching bag. Hopefully, the two become friends like Strawberry Shortcake and Raspberry Tart from Strawberry Shortcake: Berry in the Big City. By the way, what do think of Officially Lewis, Loves Art23, and The Artistic Aloubell's Miraculous Rewrite and redesigned, did you enjoy them?
“Chloe will never change, some people don't want to change” YOU HAVE LILA FOR THAT, SHE IS MORE EVIL THAN CHLOE. Chloe could have been a redeemed villain and Lila the one who remains evil until the end But nooo, let's redeem Andre and say that he is the poor victim of his wife and daughter, even more so, let's say that the guy does not take responsibility for his actions that motivated Chloe to become like this and abandon her and adopt Zoe better If I already hate what they did with Chloe, the ending was the worst part: her father abandons her without taking responsibility for his actions in making Chloe what she is, he adopts Zoe because she is a "better daughter", and leaves Chloe with her mother, which means that Chloe will spend the next several years being verbally and psychologically abused by Audrey. Which is a completely miserable ending
@@ladysknightthefamiliarIf it's any consolation, her bio on the official website has been changed now. Instead of "a brat and lost cause" it is now much more complex and positive Chloe.
I really love your ideas for this miraculous rewrite! I could like to see Lukas or Alya next. To my understanding, Nataniel is Marinete best friend so I really want to see what you will do if Alya (pls make her a really friend and not whatever the show do), and Lukas can play in the same band was Andren/Felix, maybe Nino can join to? Can wait to see the next video, love your art, bye :D
Something I really despise is how most costumes are spandex suits. Gabriel, Marinette, Adrien, and Chloe have been surrounded by fashion, and THIS is the form their alter egos took? Plus all the kids are exposed to superhero media I'm sure, and there are SO MANY heroes who were more detailed clothes than that in comics (Wonder Woman, several mutants, etc.)
@@OpticalSorcerer Exactly!! It's high time that they upgrade all of their outfits, Their hero forms, the civilian outfits, bed outfits, formal outfits, you name it.
Percival is truly a great addition to your Miraculous Rewrite. You should definitely create more original characters in your rewrite, let your imagination and creation come to life.
Something I want to show chloe's change from brat to badass is I'd have a silent scene where she is infront of a mirror and seems to grab a few items like hair dye, scissors and some certain types of make up. This is to show that chloe is willing to change.. both heart and appearance. Using suddel elements makes a show much more interesting. As a physical tell when she calls back to her past she would play with her hair. Whether it's brushing her hair or just using her fingers.
Watching all these rewrite videos made me realize you should make your own original miraculous story with different characters and different miraculous us. I guarantee you’re gonna Megan a better original miracle story.
Chloe having a supportive twin brother is such a cute idea!! I love their relationship, specially the part of him hating the miraculous users while Chloe LOVES THEM!!
Well, maybe not hating them, but he is totally worried for his sister's well-being because, are those myterious vigilantes really good people? Why isn´t the police doing anything about it (the akumas)?
I also loveloveLOVE the new Queen Bee design! The old design was really cute, but this new one looks so... elegant!
She is a Queen, indeed!! ;D
The new abilities are so- WOWOWOW!!! I like that she has now more powers than just *paralyze*
Your whole rewrite of Miraculous is my favorite!!!
I personally can't wait for Nathaniel's redesign, he is my favorite MLB character and I'm really curious in how you would rewrite him!! :3
Ohhhhhhh thank you sooooo much ❤❤❤
I soooo happy you enjoy my content ❤
First off, you did a great job of fixing Chloe. She's definitely Isabela Madrigal, Amity Blight, and Regina George fusion, becoming Adrian's cousin is interesting, wants her mother's love and approval, and having a supportive twin brother is a great idea, I enjoy their relationship, especially the part of him hating the miraculous heroes while she loves them.
Percival Bougriose, glad you added him so Chloe isn't alone. Being an heir to a rich legacy is never easy, also a school class president while being a gentleman major is hard too. He does support his sister's dreams and tries to attend her plays, despite having a busy schedule too. True he's charming, witty, and intelligent, but also stubborn, prideful, irritable, cunning, and close-minded to the miraculous heroes. He's the Harvey Bullock while Chloe's the James Gordon, classic Yin and Yang.
Pollen becomes Abeille and takes the role of Alfred Pennyworth and Jiminy Cricket for Chloe. He trains, supports, guides, and encourages her to become a better person and hopefully for Percival too when he comes to his senses about heroes. And yes he's cute too.
So Marinette had a crush on Percival, which caused her to be Chloe's favorite punching bag. Hopefully, the two become friends like Strawberry Shortcake and Raspberry Tart from Strawberry Shortcake: Berry in the Big City.
By the way, what do think of Officially Lewis, Loves Art23, and The Artistic Aloubell's Miraculous Rewrite and redesigned, did you enjoy them?
“Chloe will never change, some people don't want to change” YOU HAVE LILA FOR THAT, SHE IS MORE EVIL THAN CHLOE. Chloe could have been a redeemed villain and Lila the one who remains evil until the end But nooo, let's redeem Andre and say that he is the poor victim of his wife and daughter, even more so, let's say that the guy does not take responsibility for his actions that motivated Chloe to become like this and abandon her and adopt Zoe better
If I already hate what they did with Chloe, the ending was the worst part: her father abandons her without taking responsibility for his actions in making Chloe what she is, he adopts Zoe because she is a "better daughter", and leaves Chloe with her mother, which means that Chloe will spend the next several years being verbally and psychologically abused by Audrey.
Which is a completely miserable ending
Agree you with 100%
@@ladysknightthefamiliar Is just… my God, that’s a miserable and horrible Fate For her
I agree with you to the fullest!! Her fate is worse than death.
@@ladysknightthefamiliarIf it's any consolation, her bio on the official website has been changed now. Instead of "a brat and lost cause" it is now much more complex and positive Chloe.
I really love your ideas for this miraculous rewrite!
I could like to see Lukas or Alya next. To my understanding, Nataniel is Marinete best friend so I really want to see what you will do if Alya (pls make her a really friend and not whatever the show do), and Lukas can play in the same band was Andren/Felix, maybe Nino can join to?
Can wait to see the next video, love your art, bye :D
Thank you for your feedback and thank you for the ideas i keep them in mind ❤
Something I really despise is how most costumes are spandex suits. Gabriel, Marinette, Adrien, and Chloe have been surrounded by fashion, and THIS is the form their alter egos took? Plus all the kids are exposed to superhero media I'm sure, and there are SO MANY heroes who were more detailed clothes than that in comics (Wonder Woman, several mutants, etc.)
I know!! Paris is the city of fashion, but the Creator gave them spandex suits?!
@@firerose4495 I get that it was cheaper at first, but with time the show got more money, so there's no excuse anymore.
@@OpticalSorcerer Exactly!! It's high time that they upgrade all of their outfits, Their hero forms, the civilian outfits, bed outfits, formal outfits, you name it.
Percival is truly a great addition to your Miraculous Rewrite. You should definitely create more original characters in your rewrite, let your imagination and creation come to life.
I like how you made Chloe the next Sharpay Evans.
Can you do Alya, Juleka, Nino, Sabrina, Lila, Luka, Kagami, and Rose in future videos?
9:01, Hamilton musical reference from The Schuyler Sisters. Clever.
Tbh i feel like the episode "Despair bear" is a legitimate reference to danganronpa.
Something I want to show chloe's change from brat to badass is I'd have a silent scene where she is infront of a mirror and seems to grab a few items like hair dye, scissors and some certain types of make up. This is to show that chloe is willing to change.. both heart and appearance. Using suddel elements makes a show much more interesting. As a physical tell when she calls back to her past she would play with her hair. Whether it's brushing her hair or just using her fingers.
Nice redesign!
I’m curious about how you would re do Felix since your original character maybe styled like Felix in the show
Please do Alya next.
I got to ask. Why did you make Montreal, Québec?
Oh how about agreon father and his agent Natalie
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