The Secret To Writing Successful "Ivy League" College Essays
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- Опубліковано 28 чер 2024
- In this video, I'll read a real essay example from a student who was accepted into an Ivy League university. I'll also share what 5 qualities I think every essay should have (whether you're applying to an Ivy League school or not).
📍Chapters
00:00 Introduction
00:36 Ivy League essay example + analysis
07:28 Five qualities that make this essay stand out
10:37 Final thoughts
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What a beautiful essay! It avoids the immigrant story cliches while being emotional and poignant to many experiences.
Thanks for watching!
Great essay, but most importantly, great comments. Thanks for sharing Ethan!
Glad you enjoyed it!
My paper would have been totally different the whole paper would have been about what I would build first and why culture landscape location money the benefit of what I’ll build to the people the location the economy this is all over the place
Hello. Thank you for uploading such a video; it is useful to hear the thought processes behind the essay. In my view, you could improve the viewer experience by dropping the background music, which I find very distracting. Is there any way to contact you directly? I am about to embark on a career copy editing and proofreading college admission documents, and I would like some advice on how to help students with their essays.
Thanks for the suggestion. We'll keep this in mind as we move forward with new videos. :)
Additionally, you can reach out to help@collegeessayguy.com for more help/resources!
I’m tryna be a better writer so my problem is wondering why did she mention so much that has nothing to do with the question I think this is a D-