I recently went through a separation after finding out my fiance and girlfriend of 9 years was having an affair with my little brother. When it's quite and I'm alone at night your stories are the only thing that keeps my mind from wandering and trying to pull a Kurt Cobain. Thanks for keeping them consistent and lengthy it keeps my mind focused on the story long enough to fall asleep. Thanks man cause I really need it.
No one should EVER pull a Cobain. That bitch will realize the mistake she made! And your brother...well, I've come to learn that blood isn't always thicker than water. I wish you the best, truly.
That really sucks. But you now know that these are two very weak people who wanted to hurt you. They are void of empathy and integrity, they are morally corrupt. These kind of people are to be avoided at all costs.
If the writer is reading this, the way the woman is acting is COMPLETELY unbelievable. They are in obvious danger and she just doesn’t react to it. Insane and super frustrating
God I'm happy someone else said it too. Both of them flip flop the entire emotional and maturity spectrum like an open fucking door in a tornado. And that is to say nothing of the awful decision making, or the Olympic level jumps in logic and conclusions they achieve.
I'm glad there's a whole community that understands why I listen to Mr. Creeps before bed, even though none of my friends do. It makes me feel validated
If i could, i would rent out a hangar for the community to have a sleep over but have Mr. Creeps live reading horror stories to us via through surround sound speakers
Can't sleep without fantasizing about regular people (i.e. the depraved and repulsive) being put through overwhelming terror and pain. Daily, I'm forcibly reminded how they keep breathing and keep getting away with it, and I'd be wide awake grinding my teeth all night if I didn't have some outlet. These stories help with that. Fortunately, I may have something more satisfying to look forward to. They say that those in Heaven (i.e. the elect who still have the decency to hate the repulsive) will be able to perceive and enjoy the torment of the masses in Hell. I would assume so, anyhow, because I'm not sure how it could be Heaven without that.
The woman is shockingly unbelievable. Being trapped in a town with no one in it, blood on the walls, tires slashed and she’s completely nonplussed. You should try to make your characters more... human
Ok, sounds good. There a lot of people like that however. I used to go explore abandoned mental asylums for fun. Some people would love to find an abandoned town to explore, until their lives are threatened directly
@@jhsalem5480 imagine finding fresh blood at the asylum, hearing noises that you know are made by someone else who’s there and when you try to leave, the door is mysteriously locked. And then your friend is like “wow that’s weird, let’s go check out some more rooms!”. You would think your friend is insane. That’s how the woman acts in this story. Unbelievable
@@jhsalem5480 I know that a story needs a reason to go check out the danger, or else every scary story would end with the protagonists just leaving and going home, but it’s got to be a believable reason
I must be the only person who doesn’t use these stories to fall asleep… I actually listen to them. I listen when I’m doing my housework, on my way to work, sometimes at work, when I’m working out, while I’m cooking dinner, and with headphones at bedtime. (Cause my man doesn’t listen to them🤷♀️) If I’m not rocking out I’m listening to these. I love these stories… especially when Mr. Creeps is narrating!
I'm at a loss to figure out why you would think that you would be the ONLY one to actually listen to these stories, sad to say no you're not. That's like saying I must be the only one that listens to Metallica uhm no. It's very doubtful that out of all of his subscribers you would be the only one that actually listens to the stories.
No joke, listening to your vids helps me to fall asleep. I've been putting your readings on for quite a while now and I usually find myself falling asleep within just half an hour. Idk if it's your voice or what, but hearing you read these stories is soothing
Only 11 minutes in but I’m pretty sure this guys wife is a psychopath either that or the sudden weight loss indicates a fetal illness and she’s like yea ima die so I don’t really care about anything. Personally I would be searching that cop car and police station for any weapons I can find. Also I’m pretty sure you can drive a car for at least a few miles on all flats, a messed up car is better then being dead.
@@YokaiX depending on where I'm going and what route I can get trapped having to leave firearms at home. As a quick improvised weapon there's always a glass bottle, a rag; and gasoline. Probably work very well on undead
@@duanesamuelson2256 yea and didn’t they say the highway is like 5 miles away lol. Only mistake Freddy made was going 2 miles an hour when his car was perfectly fine giving the shooter( who we still don’t know who it was or what happened to him) a chance to shoot at him accurately.
@@YokaiX yea always stay armed and also why would u leave your car alone to go explore on foot a town that was strangely abandoned suddenly. I’m noping the hell out of there so fast lmao
Couple: in a deserted town, no service Woman: this is fine Couple: finds rotten food and blood Woman: yup, totally fine Couple: finds their car with slashed tires, meaning something else is lurking around Woman: absolutely fine, let's get some wine and get drunk
I'm JUST SAYIN' 😅 if Mr. Creeps releases his vids on a PST schedule, and I'm on the EAST COAST, I'm listening and thumbs upping from the future... let that settle in😂...
Im still wondering how you haven’t made a series on “I work for a prison for monsters *I interview the most dangerous ones* ” It’s really good and pretty long so makes good for king term series
Driving on flat tires won't do a single thing to your rotors. Lmao. It MAY damage the lip of the rim if it comes unseated. And if driven too far it will eat the sidewall of the tire out from the inside. Making it very dangerous to reinflate. Since it can explode very violently. Lol. But absolutely No damage to your rotors. Lmao.
@@wwlightnin yeah I'm from south eastern Kentucky also, harlan, and we either pronounce it cudzoo ot cutzoo, most people I know pronounce their ds like zs so I just picked up on it lol
Hearing about the roanoke colony reminded me of the native settlement in Alaska that disappeared.. a trapper who frequently travelled there showed up one day to find lit fires, freshly cooked food and everything seemed as if everyone got up and just left but with no signs of leaving…
@@jasonsanders1183 I grew up in the Yukon Same there too..I’d always see strange color changing lights or a light that looked like a lantern..none the less you are welcome 😂 Im all for nightmare fuel
Reminds me of a post i saw where a dude had a dream where him and his gf were in an apocalypse and she kept almost getting killed cuz she wouldn't list
To make it clear, any channel that takes these stories, such as this one, or any other story I've written without asking me is committing a copyright violation. Every channel is supposed to contact the writer, though I have caught some people taking my work without asking. Never on a major channel though
Excellent narration, Creeps. The story's premise was interesting, and I could tell a lot of thought was put into the backstory and root cause for everything going on. But I swear... Betty was about as bright as a broken bulb in a bucket of water, especially when they first started encountering all the super creepy stuff. I can't blame Freddy for his initial trepidation, but I would have been highly peeved at almost being abandoned, nonetheless. Some parts I feel are still unanswered. Who or what was weilding the gun, and where did the one guy come from that got eaten? If he was the shooter, then what was his motive? Other than those bits, it was an enjoyable story. Even the ones less than great still manage to sound good when you narrate them.
Hi, I'm the writer. Kindred was the shooter and also the one doing the painting with blood. Who was the guy in the woods? Maybe a poacher or a hunter, it doesn't really matter. He got caught by them nonetheless. He wasn't a major character so he didn't need a backstop I hope that answers your questions
@@jhsalem5480 Thanks! That does help a lot. It was an excellent story overall, and that helps explain the parts I mentioned. I only wish there was more at the end about what happened to the two survivors, but I suppose at least they're safe now. Thank you for elaborating. Kindred was a 10/10 antagonist.
@@jhsalem5480Good story, liked it quite a bit. But what happens to Betty now? Is she trapped in Hell for eternity? Or is she able to die and ascend? Or what?
@@spencerthestupidsamurai7326 Who can say? According to the Iceberg Theory of Ernest Hemingway, most of the story's details should always be left "under the surface" and not made explicit. But I'd guess she's probably in Hell. Quite a sacrifice
And I thought I was having shitty day. And even though it was shitty.....it w wasn't nearly as bad as Dear Betty's. Kinda made me reevaluate my situation. My day was actually pretty good. Thank you my friend. You made my day !!!!! Lol
Theres a difference in being hard to scare and fake story telling of someone who gives two shts and jokes around after having their tires obviously cut. Ciaherp needs some more experience in behavioral knowledge, but they're good at world building.
If we come back to a car with slashed tires and the woman I'm with doesn't take that seriously then I'm done with her. I can't have a liability getting me killed in a horror movie. I'm black and will GTFO asap. In fact I would have immediately gone back to the car and driven out after seeing that diner with abandoned cell phones. Smokers are also easy to hunt done because of the smell so I can't have one with me if I'm trying to evade something.
Thumbnail Image- The UFO hovering over the abandoned town is lonely, it doesn't let anyone leave the town. There was another story with a similar title about three or four guys who found an abandoned town in the mountain. I'm shocked that Betty wasn't involved in what was happening. She took things way too casually at the start. Story would benefit from a sequel.
Why are modern, adults often idiots in these stories? Oh, look... we are in a highly suspect survival situation. Quick, let's get cigarettes, booze and soda. Food? Water? Survival stuff? What's that? Oh, look... we need weapons because of crazy Phsycos... let's ignore the Police Station, nothing useful there. Instead, let's go into this church with no defenses and grab some knives while we are at it. Sorry, it just ruins the immersion of an otherwise, engaging story.
I dunno how you lot manage to sleep to the stories, i end up so engaged and invested in the stories what was a one and bed bexomes hours of smashing similar theme stories and wanting to see how they differ or if they connect 😂😂
This is, without a doubt, one of the worst serious creepypastas i have ever had the displeasure of listening to. Like, the wife had more emotional flip flops than a door opens and closes in its life time, the judgement of everyone is stupid as shit, the wife is a red herring and ultimately her weird behavior means nothing despite not being how any human being acts at all, and so much more. This is damn near close to the top 10 ive suffered through.
Predictions for the vid: The wife is going to pressure him to go inside, but something followed them outside. And the only thing keeping them safe is the abandoned house. So the identity inside the house is actually trying to protect them.
No way I would be walking around a dead town I would have been out as soon as i was the bad food. The wife Betty was crazy we would be driving a flat tire truck.
in my eyes indisposed in disguises no one knows hides tge face lies the face and the sun in my disgrace boiling heat summer stench neath the black the sky looks dead call my name through the cream and I'll hear you scream again .... ( Everybody sing ) Black Hole Sun Wont You Come And Wash Away the Rain Black Hole Sun Won't You Come (×3)
Im an adult 33 year old man who needs another adult man to read to him bedtime stories so I can fall asleep.
It becomes a type of conditioning if you listen enough
39 and same my friend
I'm a 44 year old therapist and he helps me sleep! 😂
At least they are manly scary stories.
Me too, this stuff helps at bedtime.
I recently went through a separation after finding out my fiance and girlfriend of 9 years was having an affair with my little brother. When it's quite and I'm alone at night your stories are the only thing that keeps my mind from wandering and trying to pull a Kurt Cobain. Thanks for keeping them consistent and lengthy it keeps my mind focused on the story long enough to fall asleep. Thanks man cause I really need it.
No one should EVER pull a Cobain. That bitch will realize the mistake she made! And your brother...well, I've come to learn that blood isn't always thicker than water. I wish you the best, truly.
That really sucks. But you now know that these are two very weak people who wanted to hurt you. They are void of empathy and integrity, they are morally corrupt. These kind of people are to be avoided at all costs.
You stay strong , dont let their weakness destroy you, sending prayers to you .
don’t let them win man. they’re not worth dying over. you’re worth living for though
Bro it’s go get better growth is the best revenge
If the writer is reading this, the way the woman is acting is COMPLETELY unbelievable. They are in obvious danger and she just doesn’t react to it. Insane and super frustrating
Unless she is somehow involved
~Wow..!!♥... sending love 💕..You seem like a virtuous person🌸. I wish to be friends with you...are you single? ...🌹🌹
women ☕
God I'm happy someone else said it too. Both of them flip flop the entire emotional and maturity spectrum like an open fucking door in a tornado. And that is to say nothing of the awful decision making, or the Olympic level jumps in logic and conclusions they achieve.
I act the exact same way so……
I'm glad there's a whole community that understands why I listen to Mr. Creeps before bed, even though none of my friends do. It makes me feel validated
We have your back, we understand 😊😊😊
Sometimes it's a double-edged sword for me. Because I get interested in the story. And then I don't fall asleep.
Xd then obviously they've never heard of scary campfire stories
If i could, i would rent out a hangar for the community to have a sleep over but have Mr. Creeps live reading horror stories to us via through surround sound speakers
Can't sleep without fantasizing about regular people (i.e. the depraved and repulsive) being put through overwhelming terror and pain. Daily, I'm forcibly reminded how they keep breathing and keep getting away with it, and I'd be wide awake grinding my teeth all night if I didn't have some outlet. These stories help with that.
Fortunately, I may have something more satisfying to look forward to. They say that those in Heaven (i.e. the elect who still have the decency to hate the repulsive) will be able to perceive and enjoy the torment of the masses in Hell. I would assume so, anyhow, because I'm not sure how it could be Heaven without that.
Just when i thought my day was going to start getting slow, Mr creeps comes out with a new BANGER to pick it back up
Thanks for doing another one of my stories. This one was probably one of my favorites out of any story I ever wrote
Good job!😊
The woman is shockingly unbelievable. Being trapped in a town with no one in it, blood on the walls, tires slashed and she’s completely nonplussed. You should try to make your characters more... human
Ok, sounds good. There a lot of people like that however. I used to go explore abandoned mental asylums for fun. Some people would love to find an abandoned town to explore, until their lives are threatened directly
@@jhsalem5480 imagine finding fresh blood at the asylum, hearing noises that you know are made by someone else who’s there and when you try to leave, the door is mysteriously locked. And then your friend is like “wow that’s weird, let’s go check out some more rooms!”. You would think your friend is insane. That’s how the woman acts in this story. Unbelievable
@@jhsalem5480 I know that a story needs a reason to go check out the danger, or else every scary story would end with the protagonists just leaving and going home, but it’s got to be a believable reason
I really hope this one has a part 2 in the works, this is a really good one.
I must be the only person who doesn’t use these stories to fall asleep… I actually listen to them. I listen when I’m doing my housework, on my way to work, sometimes at work, when I’m working out, while I’m cooking dinner, and with headphones at bedtime. (Cause my man doesn’t listen to them🤷♀️)
If I’m not rocking out I’m listening to these. I love these stories… especially when Mr. Creeps is narrating!
Me too, love to do my housework to Mr Creeps - only way.
@@PeppiePyup Mr Creeps and a few other narrators are my company while I do housework, really the only way I can stay on task 😅
Mr Creeps, enjoying the stories. Listening , brings the story alive. It's soothing but also terrifying.
I like listening to these while staring at my plants or drawing. I like actually paying attention to the stories
I'm at a loss to figure out why you would think that you would be the ONLY one to actually listen to these stories, sad to say no you're not. That's like saying I must be the only one that listens to Metallica uhm no. It's very doubtful that out of all of his subscribers you would be the only one that actually listens to the stories.
No joke, listening to your vids helps me to fall asleep. I've been putting your readings on for quite a while now and I usually find myself falling asleep within just half an hour.
Idk if it's your voice or what, but hearing you read these stories is soothing
So the stories are boring.
Only 11 minutes in but I’m pretty sure this guys wife is a psychopath either that or the sudden weight loss indicates a fetal illness and she’s like yea ima die so I don’t really care about anything. Personally I would be searching that cop car and police station for any weapons I can find. Also I’m pretty sure you can drive a car for at least a few miles on all flats, a messed up car is better then being dead.
You can drive for a lot of miles slowly..and definitely places to find weapons in a lot of places. To start with Chef knives at the diner
Not being armed in the first place is a classic mistake
@@YokaiX depending on where I'm going and what route I can get trapped having to leave firearms at home.
As a quick improvised weapon there's always a glass bottle, a rag; and gasoline. Probably work very well on undead
@@duanesamuelson2256 yea and didn’t they say the highway is like 5 miles away lol. Only mistake Freddy made was going 2 miles an hour when his car was perfectly fine giving the shooter( who we still don’t know who it was or what happened to him) a chance to shoot at him accurately.
@@YokaiX yea always stay armed and also why would u leave your car alone to go explore on foot a town that was strangely abandoned suddenly. I’m noping the hell out of there so fast lmao
I've said this before, but your voice is so soothing ❤
Mr. Creeps just makes my day EVERY time ❤
Agreed
Couple: in a deserted town, no service
Woman: this is fine
Couple: finds rotten food and blood
Woman: yup, totally fine
Couple: finds their car with slashed tires, meaning something else is lurking around
Woman: absolutely fine, let's get some wine and get drunk
Woman, throwing the sharp implement: Damn it Gerald! This is our vacation, we're not leaving!
That’s my kind of woman, someone who doesn’t complain 😆
😂😂😂😂
Women ☕
I was thinking the same thing. Survival instinct set to 0 and priorities for smokes and alcohol ontop of the list of things to be worried about.
Two married people definitely seemed married 😂 arguing over stupid shit
Im amazed that he didn't magdump the kid as soon as he turned around
I'm JUST SAYIN' 😅 if Mr. Creeps releases his vids on a PST schedule, and I'm on the EAST COAST, I'm listening and thumbs upping from the future... let that settle in😂...
Same here….Richmond, VA checking in from the future
I grew up hiking in the White Mountains 😬 so this just hit super spine tingly!! Thanks again Mr. Creeps!!
~Wow..!!♥... sending love 💕..You seem like a virtuous person🌸. I wish to be friends with you...are you single? ...🌹🌹
feels like there's going to be a part 2 for this one. if there will be, looking forward for it author!
I probably could do a part 2, but I didn't really plan on it. I'm doing some series based in Russia, North Korea and a couple other places right now
@@jhsalem5480do u plan on connecting this story to those or will they stay in separate universes
@@jhsalem5480If you’re doing a story in North Korea please make it unbiased and not some kind of bullshit about Nort Koreans being crazy.
Bugs writhing in his hair? I thought Freddie didn't have hair....lol
By three they come.
Kudos to the narrator and author 🎉
My favorite person to tell me my bed time stories so I can sleep 😴 thanks for all you do Mr Creeps
Mr. Creeps best Storyteller ever I've been watching you since you started and you get better every time
Im still wondering how you haven’t made a series on
“I work for a prison for monsters *I interview the most dangerous ones* ”
It’s really good and pretty long so makes good for king term series
Betty sounds like my kind of girl. Cigarettes, Jack Daniels, and no fear.
Driving on flat tires won't do a single thing to your rotors. Lmao. It MAY damage the lip of the rim if it comes unseated. And if driven too far it will eat the sidewall of the tire out from the inside. Making it very dangerous to reinflate. Since it can explode very violently. Lol. But absolutely No damage to your rotors. Lmao.
People Like Betty Pissed Me Off
Such a great narration channel.
It's so weird hearing somebody not from around here talk about kudzu vines, also we pronounce it "cut-zoo" in the south lol
Yeah, he pronounced it strangely, like "kood-zoo". I'm in southeastern KY and we pronounce it like it's spelled, "cud-zoo".
@@wwlightnin yeah I'm from south eastern Kentucky also, harlan, and we either pronounce it cudzoo ot cutzoo, most people I know pronounce their ds like zs so I just picked up on it lol
Ok the wife actually pisses me off in this story. I’m only twelve and a half minutes in but Jesus Christ woman
Why does this sound like a mix between Silent Hill and TWD?
Hearing about the roanoke colony reminded me of the native settlement in Alaska that disappeared.. a trapper who frequently travelled there showed up one day to find lit fires, freshly cooked food and everything seemed as if everyone got up and just left but with no signs of leaving…
As someone who lives in Alaska and has heard and seen strange things during the night and wintertime..... thanks for the nightmare fuel.
@@jasonsanders1183 I grew up in the Yukon Same there too..I’d always see strange color changing lights or a light that looked like a lantern..none the less you are welcome 😂 Im all for nightmare fuel
@@tahltanhavoc1706 I am as well, I've also heard strange things in the woods at night. Have to love the wilderness.
Someone probably dealt a nasty fart and everybody decided they could stomach it anymore
Tune in next week for "I Woke Up To Something Crawling Around In My Butt. It Had Many Legs."
Bruh… that’s like a nightmare😂💀💀💀
This one is kicking as*. Well done. Im looking at the mother here.. ❤
ER I mean the wife. My bad
I would definitely explore that place.. curiosity killed the cat.. Thank You Mr. Creeps ❤
You can, it’s called Silent Hill.
@@harmonetheanimationaddict4419 I've watched the movie and played the game.. I don't have plans to travel to the US any time soon..
Curiosity also made the cat. Heyo!😂
@@jessemartin2685 😁 I think Curiosity hates cats, trying to purposefully put them in danger.. 🤔
The urge to suddenly jump when standing on a cliff is not one that I'm familiar with.
It's from vertigo. Most people at some time will experience it. It's also not so much to jump but to let yourself fall.
@@duanesamuelson2256 the video had a better explanation than that one!
@@justinTime077 but it's the actual condition/cause.
@@duanesamuelson2256 you must be fun to talk to
10 minutes in and I would have left her.
Reminds me of a post i saw where a dude had a dream where him and his gf were in an apocalypse and she kept almost getting killed cuz she wouldn't list
Hey Mr. Creeps, I was wondering if you ask the people who write these stories for permission to narrate them? Love the stories keep up the great work.
To make it clear, any channel that takes these stories, such as this one, or any other story I've written without asking me is committing a copyright violation. Every channel is supposed to contact the writer, though I have caught some people taking my work without asking. Never on a major channel though
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@jhsalem5480 Thanks man, I have narrated several stories now and I have gotten permission from them all. I appreciate the help.
Excellent narration, Creeps. The story's premise was interesting, and I could tell a lot of thought was put into the backstory and root cause for everything going on. But I swear... Betty was about as bright as a broken bulb in a bucket of water, especially when they first started encountering all the super creepy stuff. I can't blame Freddy for his initial trepidation, but I would have been highly peeved at almost being abandoned, nonetheless. Some parts I feel are still unanswered. Who or what was weilding the gun, and where did the one guy come from that got eaten? If he was the shooter, then what was his motive? Other than those bits, it was an enjoyable story. Even the ones less than great still manage to sound good when you narrate them.
Hi, I'm the writer.
Kindred was the shooter and also the one doing the painting with blood.
Who was the guy in the woods? Maybe a poacher or a hunter, it doesn't really matter. He got caught by them nonetheless. He wasn't a major character so he didn't need a backstop
I hope that answers your questions
Sorry, back story, not backstop. Autocorrect changed it
@@jhsalem5480 Thanks! That does help a lot. It was an excellent story overall, and that helps explain the parts I mentioned. I only wish there was more at the end about what happened to the two survivors, but I suppose at least they're safe now. Thank you for elaborating. Kindred was a 10/10 antagonist.
@@jhsalem5480Good story, liked it quite a bit. But what happens to Betty now? Is she trapped in Hell for eternity? Or is she able to die and ascend? Or what?
@@spencerthestupidsamurai7326 Who can say? According to the Iceberg Theory of Ernest Hemingway, most of the story's details should always be left "under the surface" and not made explicit.
But I'd guess she's probably in Hell. Quite a sacrifice
I wonder which creepypasta out of all the ones mr creeps has talked about would be the worst to experience yourself.
And I thought I was having shitty day. And even though it was shitty.....it w wasn't nearly as bad as Dear Betty's. Kinda made me reevaluate my situation. My day was actually pretty good. Thank you my friend. You made my day !!!!! Lol
Perfect story, waiting for the second part
I listen while I am driving to keep me focused. How could anyone listen to go to sleep? No way!!
I'm calling it right now-the wife is involved somehow
That's what im thinking
You know she did 😮
I blame the neighbor
Right... she too calm
You came to that conclusion like the rest of us 5 seconds into the video when he mentioned her…. Maybe just me
Don’t sleep the same without my stories thank you for posting so much
Had whiplash hearing Burzum mentioned lmao
How to divorce in 300 words or less.
Theres a difference in being hard to scare and fake story telling of someone who gives two shts and jokes around after having their tires obviously cut. Ciaherp needs some more experience in behavioral knowledge, but they're good at world building.
When a story mentions black metal, it immediately gets my attention 😂
2 dogs whistles I caught. Black Sun and Burzum.
Anyone else thinking why is Betty trying so hard to get killed lol
I’m 17 and have rlly been listening to this mans voice at night since 6th grade 😅
Oh I love this. I live in a close enough proximity to the white mountains to vacation there every year!
Blud dropped another BANGER!!! DAYUWM!!!
Got to hear the rest of that someday! Awesome story though.❤❤
I'm getting silent Hill vibes out of this story. Really good 🎉.
Same
Creeps never fails ❤
If we come back to a car with slashed tires and the woman I'm with doesn't take that seriously then I'm done with her. I can't have a liability getting me killed in a horror movie. I'm black and will GTFO asap. In fact I would have immediately gone back to the car and driven out after seeing that diner with abandoned cell phones. Smokers are also easy to hunt done because of the smell so I can't have one with me if I'm trying to evade something.
Cool new Creepypasta Story and I like this.
Thumbnail Image- The UFO hovering over the abandoned town is lonely, it doesn't let anyone leave the town.
There was another story with a similar title about three or four guys who found an abandoned town in the mountain.
I'm shocked that Betty wasn't involved in what was happening. She took things way too casually at the start.
Story would benefit from a sequel.
Why are modern, adults often idiots in these stories? Oh, look... we are in a highly suspect survival situation. Quick, let's get cigarettes, booze and soda. Food? Water? Survival stuff? What's that?
Oh, look... we need weapons because of crazy Phsycos... let's ignore the Police Station, nothing useful there. Instead, let's go into this church with no defenses and grab some knives while we are at it.
Sorry, it just ruins the immersion of an otherwise, engaging story.
I dunno how you lot manage to sleep to the stories, i end up so engaged and invested in the stories what was a one and bed bexomes hours of smashing similar theme stories and wanting to see how they differ or if they connect 😂😂
I didn't even finished the story (13:07) I'm getting stressed out of that woman damn.
The casual shout out to Norwegian black metal 👌🏼😂 aaahh I love this channel sm
This is, without a doubt, one of the worst serious creepypastas i have ever had the displeasure of listening to. Like, the wife had more emotional flip flops than a door opens and closes in its life time, the judgement of everyone is stupid as shit, the wife is a red herring and ultimately her weird behavior means nothing despite not being how any human being acts at all, and so much more. This is damn near close to the top 10 ive suffered through.
Mr. Creeps just always helps me sleep or study or pass the time. Mr. Creeps is a lifesaver!
Predictions for the vid: The wife is going to pressure him to go inside, but something followed them outside. And the only thing keeping them safe is the abandoned house. So the identity inside the house is actually trying to protect them.
Your voice is so soothing 😌
~Wow..!!♥... sending love 💕..You seem like a virtuous person🌸. I wish to be friends with you...are you single? ...🌹🌹
Oh yeah I almost forgot,we love you M,R, Creeps
Man got the most points for knocking out grown men. Keep up the great work u know it a good story when u have nightmares after🎉
Im a twenty-five-year-old grown man who needs another grown man to read me bedtime story so I can fall asleep
Damn me too
All your vids are amazing! More rules vids please :D
Please let there be a part 2
Great story 👏
Great opening
Just some info.. "black sun" "sort sol" is a danish band
We need pt 2
Sooo they ended up in Silent Hill? Lol
EXACTLY what i was thinking.
This was pretty good
KEEP IT UP💪🏿💪🏿
Why do people in these stories always have anxiety issues?
Betty was insufferable. Ggwp for the ending.
Cheers 😊
i get so happy for bed when i see your post notifications 🤣
~Wow..!!♥... sending love 💕..You seem like a virtuous person🌸. I wish to be friends with you...are you single? ...🌹🌹
Reminds me of Goosebump’s Welcome to Dead House. Kinda.
Groovy Story Mr Creeps👍✌️💚😎🌺
In New Hampshire you only have State Liquor Stores. You can’t steal liquor and cigarettes at the same time. 😅. Come on now
Not everyone knows the Canadian type rules of an insignificant State
Who shot Freddy’s car and slashed their tires
fun listen tho
Wife sees obviously slashed car tires...."this is fine."
No way I would be walking around a dead town I would have been out as soon as i was the bad food. The wife Betty was crazy we would be driving a flat tire truck.
This is like silent hill meets the omen. I dont know who was even more stupid here the husband or the wife?
Requesting stories about the beholders❤
NGL I'd have driven out of there on the rims.
I listen during the day so no bed story
Booze and cigarettes. That's all you need! Screw food, water, or a weapon!😂
Is that a metal band? 😂😂😂
Yes. Probably.
But not this time....
Probably...
in my eyes
indisposed
in disguises no one knows
hides tge face
lies the face
and the sun in my disgrace
boiling heat
summer stench
neath the black the sky looks dead
call my name
through the cream
and I'll hear you scream again ....
( Everybody sing )
Black Hole Sun
Wont You Come
And Wash Away the Rain
Black Hole Sun
Won't You Come (×3)
This orb is it part of the one orb from pine haven or psrt of the orb from devils due
Stuff like this is exactly why you never leave your house without a gun and plenty of ammo lmao
I know im a few days late to the party, but my crappy little town doesn't seem so bad compared to this dump
Ditch the wife she sounds unbearable