I Came Home And Found Our Kids Sitting On The Porch, Crying. "What Happened?" I Asked. "Mom

[@Ivy-jx2jy]

Story is from Literotica titled "Sudden Shock" by curious2c.

[@johnhollis921]

Thank you

[@ZeroBorder]

What voice over does he use ?

[@Truckerwife85]

It repeats the same with the wife leaving Midway

[@GoldsNarrations]

Very Good

[@BikersDoItSittingDown]

did a gust of wind blow the pages back?
The reader repeats alot of this story

[@nooneofimportance2110]

This story is very rambly.

[@gailmorrison337]

Am I hate when a story stops then repeats. It also has inconsistencies in info given. THUMBS DOWN!!!!!

[@danevans5458]

Well done Nigel, pip pip and tally ho😊

[@SmithAndy24]

Too much repeating yourself