Excellent. They did a great job at building up the main characters. The story was well told without overkilling it with word salads. Had a good pace to it and kept my interest. Well done.
Max's story line seriously could be a series. 😊part 2 wast a lovely experience .nobody's toxicity should hang around. Max's strength is amazing 👏. Nice work again LLC 😊
It's easier to imagine, how in the 1920's and 30's, A large portion of North America, would gather around a radio..as a family and listen to such tales. Not that big a reach for me. Boomer here...😅
Hello again. I enjoyed part one very much, however. It seems that if you could have summarized, most or all of what repeated from part 1, the video would be half as long. Nevertheless, it was enjoyable, and I look forward to part 3. Good luck.
Love the characters and looking forward to the next installment. Having said that, this episode was too repetitive. So much of what I just listened to was verbatim from the first chapter.
I don't want to come across as complaining because I loved part 1, but I was kinda disappointed in part 2. It seemed to be just a recap of all the events that took place in Max's "coma dream". It felt like I was just listening to the highlights of part 1. Still, I loved the story, but I was just hoping for more of a continuation.
Besides part 1 and two of this story, this the third story with Dr A and the second with the boot camp. This looks like the start of a series based on Max. With the other two series, it looks like there will be a lot of crossovers in this amazing universe the author/authors are creating.
LLC did you just create a Nemesis playlist? It shows on your channel now, I made that comment yesterday I think, saying it'd be neat to see If you're open to categorizing by playlist, do Detective Greene too please, even though all the Greenes have different first names, I like to think it's the same guy lol
this is better then what,s on tv great stuff
Loads of love for you
Awesome story! Anxious to hear MUCH MORE about Adressia (spelling?), Max, Eli, Amos and Dani Jones. Helluva' cast of characters.
More to come!
Keep this story going, we need more of Max and the goddess of war🤘😁
I am so invested in these stories now.
Me too😂😂😂
Agreed
Part 3 and 4 please. 😊😊😊
Heĺl yes
Excellent. They did a great job at building up the main characters. The story was well told without overkilling it with word salads. Had a good pace to it and kept my interest. Well done.
Very good part 2 of the story & looking forward for more max stories.👍
More to come!
Me too!
I'm thrilled this is going to be a series. Looking forward to the next one.
I like the Angel of vengeance title.
I been waiting forever for part 2 lol. Much appreciated.
Did we ever had an option to leave you waiting?
@LostLoveChronicles can you add the link for Part 1
@@michaelmurray3800 ua-cam.com/video/LaNh-M5aL-s/v-deo.html
@@LostLoveChronicles thanks
love this story... looking forward to the next episode...
Thank you, thank you, thank you! Eagerly looking forward to the next installment. This channel is the best.
Loads of love for you
Thanks for this part 2.. hoping and waiting for more stories like this😊❤❤❤
Loved it, can’t wait forth next one! Amazing storyline!👍👍👍
Thank you! 😄
Great Story! ❤❤Love more MAX stories. I also love Buddy Ralph stories, detective stories and Hitmen stories.
Nice conclusion. With a hook for future stories
Need more with same characters! Love it. It's hard reading books now but I sure enjoyed listing to this story. Thank you!!😊
Will do that. 🙌
Max's story line seriously could be a series. 😊part 2 wast a lovely experience .nobody's toxicity should hang around. Max's strength is amazing 👏. Nice work again LLC 😊
Very captivating I enjoyed both parts. The surreal aspect works very well in this story. Hope that there are more like it.
Thanks for part two.
Please keep them coming!! Great story line!!😊
More to come!
Well I truly hope you keep this story going
This was what I was waiting for!
Thanks for part 2
Hoping to hear Max and Adressia finally get together in the next story with them, a little disappointed it didn't happen in part 2.
It doesn't. She does the same thing with another guy. Her love for Max is just a spiel.
Great story looking forward to more Max stories. Justice stories are great.😊
Would love to hear more with this woman of justice
Beautiful and imaginative story. After the coma and the dream.... reality
Enjoyed it immensely.
Thanks, loads of love for you
@@LostLoveChronicles I appreciate a well-told story.
Looks like an interesting series. Best of luck.
Can't wait for more it is so good
😎👍
Big thumbs up for the channel...
Like number 234...
Such a wonderful way to vent..go Dr A go..rock'm Max
Hope they have more Max stories
It's easier to imagine, how in the 1920's and 30's,
A large portion of North America, would gather around a radio..as a family and listen to such tales. Not that big a reach for me. Boomer here...😅
Is it bad i want more stories like this? Its good stuff to listen to
And The saga goes on …….❤️😎
Now, gotta listen to 1st part.
It's the preacher. He has the word of god! Lol
I was hoping there was a part 2
There is a part 2
Cool story
Hello again.
I enjoyed part one very much, however. It seems that if you could have summarized, most or all of what repeated from part 1, the video would be half as long.
Nevertheless, it was enjoyable, and I look forward to part 3.
Good luck.
Love the characters and looking forward to the next installment.
Having said that, this episode was too repetitive. So much of what I just listened to was verbatim from the first chapter.
The Max stories you need to put them in their own Playlist so they're easily found.
There is a playlist called Nemesis.
Kinda wish the lady of revenges showed up at the end
Sounds like we're getting some spinoffs in the future.
Absolutely correct
I don't want to come across as complaining because I loved part 1, but I was kinda disappointed in part 2. It seemed to be just a recap of all the events that took place in Max's "coma dream". It felt like I was just listening to the highlights of part 1.
Still, I loved the story, but I was just hoping for more of a continuation.
There will be more
Where is part one?
ua-cam.com/video/LaNh-M5aL-s/v-deo.html
Thanks much enjoyed both stories
This is a great story. Will it continue? Maybe through his life and when he passes and meets with A?
It will continue. More stories with some characters making appearances
@LostLoveChronicles awesome. I'm looking forward to it!
We need more nemesis episodes!
Oh yes I do now 😅😂😅
Besides part 1 and two of this story, this the third story with Dr A and the second with the boot camp. This looks like the start of a series based on Max. With the other two series, it looks like there will be a lot of crossovers in this amazing universe the author/authors are creating.
I don't remember part one
LLC did you just create a Nemesis playlist? It shows on your channel now, I made that comment yesterday I think, saying it'd be neat to see
If you're open to categorizing by playlist, do Detective Greene too please, even though all the Greenes have different first names, I like to think it's the same guy lol
Will be done
Okay, is this the same story of the marine who found his wife cheating and eneded upworking on an empowerment camp for men?
you mean ropeyarn sunday
Where’s part 3
In works
Soo i was happy for part 2 but it only added about 10 minutes of new info with the rest being recap, a little dissapointing if you ask me
A little disappointing.😏
I know most of the stories are fake but this is just ridiculous 👎
You'll live
@@WeaponXSigma i know
Dude, ALL these stories are fake. This channel is all about written stories from authors. Or at least from fan fiction type writers.
@@blacksunday4231 i was holding on to the belief that a few were based on real stories. How naive eh !
There's these things called other channels......