Touched - Hawks x Female Listener Chapter 1 Fanfiction

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  • Опубліковано 19 вер 2024
  • On a routine shopping trip with your dad you come across someone in need of your quirk but your dad isn't too happy about you using it.
    Artwork can found at: www.quora.com/...
    Touched - Hawks x Female Listener (Chapter 1)
    All credit for the character Keigo Takami (Hawks) goes to Kohei Horikoshi and his amazing work - Boku No Hero Academia.

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  • @NotRae28
    @NotRae28 7 місяців тому +9

    "A certain Beyonce loving male threatens to snap the heads off somebody else's daisy flowers. To those who have read touched you are probably smirking rn"
    OMG YES HAHAHAHAH 😭😭😭😭
    But seriously tho.. I've been a fan of yours for so long. After I took a long break I wanted to read one of your stories again but I was heartbroken when I couldn't find your acc from wattpad anymore.. so I js gave up and forgot about it. Till last year I wanted to read your stories again cuz I remembered how amazing they were so I did a lot of searching LIKE A LOT cuz I was in denial that they're gone till i finally found ur new acc from wattpad. It kinda is suspicious bc yknow the stories, followers and such. Then I found this channel AND the website. I was so happy LIKE SO SO HAPPY bc I finally found you and your stories. I really thought they were gone-gone forever. I literally cried when I found you again 🥹. Thank you so much for making these amazing stories and for being a wonderful person... Girl I love you so much your stories saved me a lot from my depression years ago. You are amazing. I really love you and your creations. Keep it up. I'm forever your biggest no. 1 fan.
    🐔❤️

    • @MLB224
      @MLB224  7 місяців тому +2

      Oh my god! 🥺 wait… wait hold up I need a second 😭❤️❤️❤️ my sweet I cannot thank you enough for your tenacity in searching for me I’m so glad you didn’t give up and just kept looking for me 🥺 I’m so sorry that wattpad decided to do the thanos click on me. So many people lost touch with me and it’s been a bit of a journey but I’m glad you’ve found me again now 😌 I am so beyond plus ultra happy to hear that my books have been there through a difficult time for you. All I ever wanted for my stories was for them to give people a reason to smile or laugh 🥹❤️ so to hear that I’ve been able to help you in some way is massive for me. Thank you so so much for your very sweet and generous donation too! I really am blown away 🥺❤️ you’re an absolute gem ❤️❤️❤️ thank you always for your support 🥺❤️

  • @DevyyBoots
    @DevyyBoots 2 роки тому +13

    Omg Im so in love with this one, Ive read it like twice and its still my favorite fan fic of all time (:

    • @MLB224
      @MLB224  2 роки тому +1

      🥺🥺 you’ve made my day with this comment, I’m glad you like it so much 😁

    • @kristinspjell572
      @kristinspjell572 2 роки тому +1

      Same

  • @NineKATLives
    @NineKATLives 10 місяців тому +5

    MLB I’m still obsessed with this book I BEG YOU pLEASE make more hawks content PLEASE 🙌👏🙏🙏🙏

    • @MLB224
      @MLB224  10 місяців тому

      This is so lovely 🥹 even though this is the second book I loaded onto here you still like it (even though my acting skills in this book are 👎🏽 😂)

    • @NineKATLives
      @NineKATLives 10 місяців тому +1

      @@MLB224 SO I STILL LOVE IT 😍

    • @MLB224
      @MLB224  10 місяців тому

      @@NineKATLives I’m so glad you like it that much 🥹❤️

  • @meihoshi1798
    @meihoshi1798 3 роки тому +12

    Me: *Hears your voice*
    Also me: FINALLY AN ADULT!

    • @MLB224
      @MLB224  3 роки тому +2

      I didn’t realize we were so far and few between 😂

    • @meihoshi1798
      @meihoshi1798 3 роки тому +1

      @@MLB224 yes it’s mainly minors I so happy to finally find an adult! Who also makes the fiction themselves

    • @MLB224
      @MLB224  3 роки тому +1

      @@meihoshi1798 I may have left my run in the fanfiction game a little late age-wise but at least I have life experience to back my stories 😅

  • @Call_me_bebe
    @Call_me_bebe 5 місяців тому +7

    At this point your basically my 2 mom💀🤚🏽

    • @MLB224
      @MLB224  5 місяців тому +3

      HAPPY TO STEP IN A SECOND MOMMA 😌❤️❤️

    • @Call_me_bebe
      @Call_me_bebe 5 місяців тому +2

      @@MLB224 YUP 😍💅🏽

  • @tiny_teddys2191
    @tiny_teddys2191 Рік тому +6

    am i watching another hawks x listener fanfic yes...yes i am i cannot get enough of him now

    • @MLB224
      @MLB224  Рік тому +1

      You’re all over the Hawks content 😂

    • @tiny_teddys2191
      @tiny_teddys2191 Рік тому +1

      @@MLB224 yesssssss heheheee 😃

    • @Melberry-mn9cp
      @Melberry-mn9cp Рік тому +1

      I'm so obsessed that he's the only one a cosplay

  • @Just_Ezra_
    @Just_Ezra_ Рік тому +2

    can't believe it's been two years since I listened to this I love you channel so much and theses are my comfort video lol

    • @MLB224
      @MLB224  Рік тому +2

      Awww you’ve been with me for so long 🥹❤️ thank you for all your support over the years I feel so loved rn 🥹

  • @Mushrooms_King
    @Mushrooms_King Місяць тому +1

    Going to fall asleep to this 😴🌙

    • @MLB224
      @MLB224  Місяць тому +1

      Sleep well king 😌✨❤️

  • @cerulean8115
    @cerulean8115 10 місяців тому +1

    I think this is my favorite of your series since now I’ll be listening to this for the 3rd time lmao

    • @MLB224
      @MLB224  10 місяців тому +1

      Really?! 🥺❤️❤️ I’m so glad you like it that much 🥹

  • @amandawaldolol
    @amandawaldolol Рік тому +2

    WAIT A MINUTE
    1. Is their quirk able to manipulate the chemicals in another person’s brain to make them feel certain emotions?
    2. Does her dad have the same quirk?
    3. Does he use it on her to make her feel guilty?
    4. I don’t like Mr father

    • @MLB224
      @MLB224  Рік тому

      Yes, please I would like to select D) all of the above 😂 yes to all of them 😉

  • @cyphrii7531
    @cyphrii7531 3 роки тому +5

    YAAAY THIS ONE IS MY FAVORITE STORY FROM YOU 🤍🤍
    THANKS MUM

    • @MLB224
      @MLB224  3 роки тому +3

      🥺 that makes me so happy! Im looking forward to reading this one out loud ☺️

    • @cyphrii7531
      @cyphrii7531 3 роки тому +4

      @@MLB224
      Me too! 🤍

  • @Tequiero_.
    @Tequiero_. 13 днів тому +2

    Honestly im mad at my self since i watched alot of this but like didnt finish it and i forgot the chapter i was on so like im extra mad at myself 😭 and i also forgot the whole story😭😭

    • @MLB224
      @MLB224  12 днів тому

      But that’s fine because now you can listen to it all over again, if you want, and you won’t get bored 😝

  • @Pidgincoop
    @Pidgincoop 3 роки тому +2

    im so happy to find this these were my favorite stories!!

    • @MLB224
      @MLB224  3 роки тому

      I’m stoked you enjoyed them 🥰 in time I’ll be posting all of my stories here as audio ☺️

  • @I.L0v3.ME._.10
    @I.L0v3.ME._.10 4 місяці тому +1

    I have been a fan for 1-3 years. HOW DID I NEVER FIND THIS MASTERPIECE?!?!!

    • @MLB224
      @MLB224  4 місяці тому +1

      WAIT REALLY?! 🥺 you’ve been with me for that long?! 😭❤️ thank you so much!

    • @I.L0v3.ME._.10
      @I.L0v3.ME._.10 4 місяці тому +1

      @@MLB224 YOUR WELCOMEEEE! I love your voice sm bro, if you were my parent no matter what age I am I would make you sing small little songs for me to sleep 😭😭🫶🫶🫶

    • @MLB224
      @MLB224  4 місяці тому +1

      @@I.L0v3.ME._.10 wait this is the sweetest 🥺❤️ I dunno about my singing voice but id give it my best shot 😝

    • @I.L0v3.ME._.10
      @I.L0v3.ME._.10 4 місяці тому +1

      @@MLB224 well become my online mother and give it a shot 🙏🙏🙏

    • @MLB224
      @MLB224  4 місяці тому +1

      @@I.L0v3.ME._.10 YOU HAVE JUST BEEN ADOPTED YOU ARE NOW MY ONLINE CHILD 😌❤️ now lie down so I can sing to you *starts yelling ‘peace sign’ MHA season 1 intro* 😂

  • @gradyrobertson6647
    @gradyrobertson6647 10 місяців тому +1

    I’m watching this again and all I can think of is screaming at the Dad!!!!also praying with Brian! 😊 I also made a friend make a TikTok praying to Beyoncé😅😘
    By the way, mlb you have made me smile so much like it felt like I was there like I did the shoulder, shaking thing to my friend, at the discussed look
    part do you know what I’m talking about? She almost fell 😅❤😘

    • @MLB224
      @MLB224  9 місяців тому

      LOL!!! No, really?! You made her make a prayer to Beyoncé? 😂😂 that’s too funny 😂 and I’m so glad you enjoyed this story 🥹 LOL yes I do know the part 😜😜 this was lowkey one of my most favourite books to work on 😌 I still remember most of it 😉

  • @lineeskildsen2036
    @lineeskildsen2036 Місяць тому +1

    This is the first of your videos im watchimg, and i was curious to know if these fanfics are of your own creation or if you just read them aloud from somewhere online?

    • @MLB224
      @MLB224  Місяць тому +1

      Hey hey!! Welcome to absolutely chaos 😂 I hope you enjoy the story ☺️ I can proudly say that all of the stories here on UA-cam are written and read by myself ☺️
      I keep all of my written versions of my stories on my personal book site: quirkyfanfics 😌

  • @connysafterlife1050
    @connysafterlife1050 3 роки тому +5

    *Me a trans man*
    Also me: AHAHA YES IM GIRL JUST FOR THIS SERIES 😃👍
    Time to watch this whole series In one setting 😫

    • @MLB224
      @MLB224  3 роки тому +1

      I’ll have to do some male insert stories for the boys! 😉

  • @Dora_2k
    @Dora_2k Рік тому +1

    Got this from an amazing wattpadder that said I should come here so HERE I AM!!

    • @MLB224
      @MLB224  Рік тому

      Wait did you read my wattpad desc and click the link?! 😱 or did an actual amazing wattpader send you here because if they did tell them I love them so much 🥰🥰🥰

    • @Dora_2k
      @Dora_2k Рік тому +1

      @@MLB224 I will!! 🥰

  • @ThefanficDayDreamer
    @ThefanficDayDreamer 6 місяців тому +1

    Ok this is my 5 or 6th time watching thisand I'm just waiting for the next chapter of gangs to come out lol

    • @MLB224
      @MLB224  6 місяців тому

      I’m so glad you enjoy this story 🥹 and good thinking on your part lol to listen to this while you wait for next Gains episode 😉

    • @ThefanficDayDreamer
      @ThefanficDayDreamer 6 місяців тому +1

      @@MLB224 ik right I'm so samrt 😁 and I just can't get enough of this book

    • @MLB224
      @MLB224  6 місяців тому

      @@ThefanficDayDreamer lol you’re very smart 😉 and I’m so glad you enjoy it 🥰🥰

  • @jodiephoenixlolbit7215
    @jodiephoenixlolbit7215 2 роки тому +2

    Beautiful 😍

  • @smollbean0981
    @smollbean0981 3 роки тому +4

    I seriously did not just make another gmail acc just for this(BEDBNABDWU also shuki(Shukeig0) if you will see this,i'm just gonna throw you in a well for not telling me that the queen made a YT channel!)

    • @MLB224
      @MLB224  3 роки тому +1

      Lol should I make funeral arrangements for Shuki? 😂 and tysm for the love 🥺 I hope you enjoy the stories here 😁

    • @shukitakami4277
      @shukitakami4277 3 роки тому +1

      If your going to throw me in a well make sure hawks is going to my funeral😌✨

  • @staratheanimationwitch2761
    @staratheanimationwitch2761 3 роки тому +2

    Oh my god more pleaseeeee, if it’s possible if you can, could you maybe add in some background noises please, if you can, if not all is good either way! Can’t wait for chapter 2

    • @MLB224
      @MLB224  3 роки тому +1

      Yes sure I can add in something in the background ☺️☺️ I’ll see if I can have it done for the next chapter but if not it will definitely be there in the background of Chapter 3 ❤️ I’m glad you’re looking forward to the next chap 🥰

    • @staratheanimationwitch2761
      @staratheanimationwitch2761 3 роки тому +1

      @@MLB224 thank you so much, I I use to read your books on Wattpad, and I’ve been reading books on quirky fics since you’ve been blocked from Wattpad.

    • @MLB224
      @MLB224  3 роки тому +1

      @@staratheanimationwitch2761 thank you for your support on UA-cam! 😍 yes unfortunately none of my books exists on wattpad anymore but I feel much safer writing on quirkyfanfics… that way wattpad can’t touch any of my work! Ive managed to get my MLB224 username back on wattpad so I’m there at a new account but I won’t be writing there anymore ☺️

  • @dadsarehot
    @dadsarehot Рік тому +2

    MLBBBBB ❤ i’m sorry i didn’t finish the bakugou “why you why me?” book i just didn’t click with it 😭 BUT I HOPE I CLICK FAST WITH THIS ONE!🫶🏻

    • @MLB224
      @MLB224  Рік тому +1

      That’s completely fair 😌 I understand that, some books you just gel with and others you don’t 😇 i hope you like Touched ☺️

    • @dadsarehot
      @dadsarehot Рік тому +1

      @@MLB224 i am i’m loving it 🤭

    • @MLB224
      @MLB224  Рік тому +1

      @@dadsarehot oh good! 🥰🥰

  • @tiannacovers6455
    @tiannacovers6455 2 роки тому +1

    ok I keep reading this I might have to get it framed in my room XD

    • @MLB224
      @MLB224  2 роки тому

      I think I would flip out (in a good way) if I walked into someone’s room and lines from my book were up on their wall 😍😍😍

  • @moonie._XOX00
    @moonie._XOX00 Рік тому +1

    Hi MLB I just wanted to listen to this again but I promise I will listen to your other ones that you made

    • @MLB224
      @MLB224  Рік тому

      As long as you’re enjoying one of my stories I honestly don’t mind ☺️ just the fact that you’ve lost to this more than once is enough to make my heart happy 🥹🥰

  • @jessigibbens3578
    @jessigibbens3578 Рік тому +1

    I love you all

  • @doublem8888
    @doublem8888 Рік тому +1

    It’s honestly sad looking back at this seeing how well yin and her dad get along and then thinking to everything that happens in the future. It makes me hate him more

    • @MLB224
      @MLB224  Рік тому +1

      Yeaaaah it’s one of those books that you can only listen to once because the ending makes you sad to listen to the beginning again 😅😅

    • @Demi_Sukimata
      @Demi_Sukimata Рік тому

      Oh, any possible spoilers? I'm new to this series!

  • @taloola-mayblencowe2963
    @taloola-mayblencowe2963 Рік тому +1

    I’m on this one now dost finish aizawa 4… and on this my second favourite … ❤

    • @MLB224
      @MLB224  Рік тому

      This makes me so happy 🥹❤️❤️

  • @1Listener1
    @1Listener1 4 місяці тому

    That’s it I HAVE to re listen 😔

    • @MLB224
      @MLB224  4 місяці тому +1

      It’s a legal obligation 😌✌🏽😂

  • @fallenangel8039
    @fallenangel8039 Рік тому +1

    Not me watching this for the 9th time now🤗

    • @MLB224
      @MLB224  Рік тому +1

      🥺❤️❤️❤️ ILYSM Jane 🥰🥰

    • @fallenangel8039
      @fallenangel8039 Рік тому +1

      @@MLB224 ILYM I NOW REALISE HOW MUCH YOUR VOICE CHANGED you were just a baby🥰

    • @MLB224
      @MLB224  Рік тому

      @@fallenangel8039 I LITERALLY SOUND LIKE IM 10 😂😂😂 omgggg the embarrassment 😂

    • @fallenangel8039
      @fallenangel8039 Рік тому +1

      @@MLB224 ITS ADOREBLE BABESS😘😂

    • @MLB224
      @MLB224  Рік тому +1

      @@fallenangel8039 pls I want to die 😭 why do I sound like a toddler 😂

  • @Silv3rYT
    @Silv3rYT 5 місяців тому

    108??? Guess im binging this

    • @MLB224
      @MLB224  5 місяців тому

      I hope you enjoy the binge 😏

  • @erisRED_05
    @erisRED_05 3 роки тому +1

    hi!!!!!!!!! It me, SasusakuUchihaLove and ErenToshinori05 if you don't remember me.... I seriously cried when I saw your books are no longer in my reading lists.... But I'm glad that I tried again to seacrh your account again and found your new wattpad account.... *tears of joy* And it led me to your youtube account....

    • @MLB224
      @MLB224  3 роки тому

      HI LOVELY!! Yes I remember you as sasusakuUchihaLove! Thank you so much for looking for me again! Wattpad can delete me and my books but they can’t stop me writing and sharing my stories on other platforms ☺️ thank you so much for coming across here- it’s lovely to see a familiar name again ☺️☺️

    • @erisRED_05
      @erisRED_05 3 роки тому +1

      @@MLB224 of course!!!!! I really really love your bnha books especially "Touched"!!!!!!!!!!! It was my first Hawksxreader book.... I was really devastated when I couldn't find your wattpad account.... but I am so glad you made a audio book out of it too.... This way it won't be deleted too easily.... And I'll also visit your website "quirkyfanfics" right???? Btw, I like your voice....❤❤❤❤❤

    • @MLB224
      @MLB224  3 роки тому

      @@erisRED_05 I’m planning on making all of my books into audio books so that they can be enjoying by all ☺️ and yes! Quirkyfanfics is correct- I’ve got all of my books (completed and ongoing) on the site ☺️
      Also- I’m really stoked you like my BNHA stories and I’m glad my voice doesn’t scare you off haha 😂

    • @erisRED_05
      @erisRED_05 3 роки тому +1

      @@MLB224 you have a nice voice.... I like it.... ❤❤❤❤❤ I wonder if you're also voicing Hawks or someone else.... And I am so looking forward for the smut chap.... *smirks* *nosebleed*
      oh and if possible and with your permission, I would like to ask for copies of your fanfics.... "Touched" is really really my favourite.... I mean all of your books are great but "Touched" really gave me the tingling feeling like Hawks is really interested in me.... I regretted I didn't find some ways to have a copy of it.... Of course, ONLY IF you allow.... I would understand if you don't.... 👍👍👍👍👍

    • @MLB224
      @MLB224  3 роки тому

      @@erisRED_05 it’s me voicing Hawks lol sorry to disappoint 😉 and I’ve had to cut out the adult scenes unfortunately (sorry to disappoint again 😩) to abide by UA-cam’s laws of free viewing but all the chapters are still up on quirkyfanfics ☺️

  • @tiagoebel9002
    @tiagoebel9002 2 роки тому +1

    is this on Ao3? if not you should really consider it😊👍

  • @Vixloli
    @Vixloli 3 роки тому +2

    Omg I love this so much can’t wait for more!! ❤️ (kittystealer) by the way! (⊃。•́‿•̀。)⊃

    • @MLB224
      @MLB224  3 роки тому +1

      OMG HIIIIIII thank you for coming across 😉 there’s plenty more to come from me 😁

  • @WitchHunterXD
    @WitchHunterXD Рік тому +1

    Danm love this but no smut danm

  • @animegamer9375
    @animegamer9375 2 місяці тому

    Girl help I really wanna read your fanfics so I don't miss any parts even though they are a little "spicy" but I can't find it😭

    • @MLB224
      @MLB224  Місяць тому +1

      Oh! Here! I gotchu 😉 my site is called quirkyfanfics. If you have safe search on it won’t come up because it’s registered as an over 18 site 😅 if it doesn’t come up on Google then the link can be found on my Patreon site: MLB224 FANFICS. It’s the very first post on patron so you’ll need to scroll to the bottom 😉 it’s free to access, no need to pay 😌

    • @animegamer9375
      @animegamer9375 Місяць тому +1

      @@MLB224 thanks girl🙏🙇‍♀️

    • @MLB224
      @MLB224  Місяць тому

      @@animegamer9375 you’re so welcome 🥰

  • @tobyoby7727
    @tobyoby7727 Рік тому +3

    I can't find it

    • @Call_me_bebe
      @Call_me_bebe 3 місяці тому +1

      Her account got banned I think ? (Or it was deleted)

  • @patriciajanerico3763
    @patriciajanerico3763 Рік тому +1

    Where can I read the book?

  • @Summer-pn7eq
    @Summer-pn7eq 2 місяці тому

    ADOPT MEee PLSSs

    • @MLB224
      @MLB224  Місяць тому

      You are now adopted 😌 sign here please ✍️ 😆

    • @Summer-pn7eq
      @Summer-pn7eq Місяць тому +1

      @@MLB224 YAYYYy

  • @itska._vidds
    @itska._vidds 5 місяців тому +1

    🌚

    • @MLB224
      @MLB224  5 місяців тому +1

      Itska 😂😂

    • @itska._vidds
      @itska._vidds 5 місяців тому +1

      @@MLB224 you already know what it is👀

    • @MLB224
      @MLB224  5 місяців тому +1

      @@itska._vidds 😂😂 ITS HAWKS TIME AYOO 😆😆

  • @chileanywaysso9599
    @chileanywaysso9599 2 роки тому +1

    R u gonna reupload them on wattpad?

    • @MLB224
      @MLB224  2 роки тому

      No sorry, I’m not going to re-upload on wattpad because it will just get deleted again 😞 it’s safe here on UA-cam (hopefully)

    • @unluckellie
      @unluckellie Рік тому +1

      @@MLB224 You're the author of that awesome book???
      I've been looking for it literally everywhere, I was wondering where it went! So glad to have found you again!

    • @MLB224
      @MLB224  Рік тому +1

      @@unluckellie yes that’s me! 😍 I’m really happy you found me again Ellie 🥰 and I’m stoked you enjoyed the story 🥰🥰

  • @Demi_Sukimata
    @Demi_Sukimata Рік тому +1

    How old are we in this series? I really hate the dad.

    • @MLB224
      @MLB224  Рік тому

      We’re old enough to be holding down a job so 21/22? 🤔
      The dad is NOT a nice person so continue to hate him 😌

  • @unknowing-sw2tb
    @unknowing-sw2tb 8 місяців тому +1

    Whats our quirk

    • @MLB224
      @MLB224  8 місяців тому

      You’ll just have to wait and see 😉

  • @van.nova.n
    @van.nova.n 3 місяці тому +1

    Teheheheh i am rereading all of your stuff i have been a fan of yours sense the middle of this book so i started reading them oldest to newest 🥲 i love what you do abd brian is a god for sure

    • @MLB224
      @MLB224  3 місяці тому

      Awww Van 🥺❤️❤️ thank you so much for all your support over the years it’s been a pleasure having you with me 🥹❤️