One of my cc English instructors taught us to try to make sentences terse and not verbose by eliminating unnecessary words and phrases. We were supposed to make sentences not choppy by combining shorter sentences into longer sentences. A video from a Stanford student said the same thing and to get rid of redundant information that's repeated in multiple sentences to try get under the 350 word limit on an admission essay. So, that's my wisdom for the essay.
With the UC deadline coming up, we’d work with you to have your essays reviewed ASAP to allow you enough time to make edits before submission! If you’re interested, fill out a Contact Us form on our website at shcollegeconsulting.com. Good luck! ☺️
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One of my cc English instructors taught us to try to make sentences terse and not verbose by eliminating unnecessary words and phrases. We were supposed to make sentences not choppy by combining shorter sentences into longer sentences. A video from a Stanford student said the same thing and to get rid of redundant information that's repeated in multiple sentences to try get under the 350 word limit on an admission essay. So, that's my wisdom for the essay.
That's good advice from your English prof, I agree!
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With the UC deadline coming up, we’d work with you to have your essays reviewed ASAP to allow you enough time to make edits before submission! If you’re interested, fill out a Contact Us form on our website at shcollegeconsulting.com. Good luck! ☺️