You need to put more thought into your stories. The story says that the son met and married 3 years ago but then says the grandson is 4 years old. Later you refer to the child as both a boy and a girl at different times. Your story has no consistency and make one wonder if you were completely sober when you wrote it.
I ran into the same deal a woman said her father died and left her an inheritance but,but said then her a d split and she moved in with her mom and dad. She said her parents treated her good everyday I thought how crazy is this story 😂
In the beginning, Liam was her grandson, now Liam is a granddaughter. Does this so-called writer know the difference in boys & girls? I am not seeing a writing style or a meaningful use of nouns & adverbs
These writer/writers are not editing their stories they are just taking others work and are screwing them up.need to be more careful i am relaxing and needed some me time and look what i came across.too many flaws i think if you try writing a story for your self you would definately do a good job .why don't you try it you might just be surprised. Much love🎉
Come on, you want to be kinder? That pronunciation means a child or a few in german. Do you mean more kind? Learn how to say it properly, for goodness sake. Tha AI people want us to rely on AI, but will not FIX it's glaring inaccuracies. How unintelligently is that business run, it's not the dark ages, but your AI sounds Like it is still, this is continuing to be infuriating. When will you businessmen get the hint? Will this channel just keep throwing money at them?
You need to put more thought into your stories. The story says that the son met and married 3 years ago but then says the grandson is 4 years old. Later you refer to the child as both a boy and a girl at different times. Your story has no consistency and make one wonder if you were completely sober when you wrote it.
I was going to comment similarly. Lol. The part where you said you wondered if the storyteller was sober was funny
Please folks, proofread! Liam is a boy, a grandson. Have care!
Title says granddaughter. These people that r writing need to proofread their words.
I’ve often thought that
This story is full of mistakes
I ran into the same deal a woman said her father died and left her an inheritance but,but said then her a d split and she moved in with her mom and dad. She said her parents treated her good everyday
I thought how crazy is this story 😂
Liam is a boys name not a girls. Grandma is calling him a granddaughter when packing the child’s room up.
Liam was gandson now he is a granddaughter? You need to seriously proofread!
My “cat” is looking at me!
Although Liam is normally given to boys, it is occasionally used as a girl's name. In this instance, the child is clearly a girl.
Or becomes one magically, partway through. How?
My “Cat” says really good story! Twists and turns!
First it's grandson now it's granddaughter. MAKE UP YOUR MIND!!!!!!!!!!!
Whether a girl or boy is important. Boy’s name, but a girl.
Boy or girl. Grandson then changed to grand daughter
She is teaching HIM ? martial Arts ? Hard to tell boy? Or Girl ? ….. never heard a girl names Liam ? But she talks of grandaughter?
Grandson not
Granddaughter. Not what subject
under picture
Is it a boy or a girl Liam is a boy's name but does he really have a ponytail or is it really a girl
In the beginning, Liam was her grandson, now Liam is a granddaughter. Does this so-called writer know the difference in boys & girls? I am not seeing a writing style or a meaningful use of nouns & adverbs
Definitely needs proofreading. It’s a short story. It would not take long to proofread. Plus all of these stories are spoken with no feeling.
These writer/writers are not editing their stories they are just taking others work and are screwing them up.need to be more careful i am relaxing and needed some me time and look what i came across.too many flaws i think if you try writing a story for your self you would definately do a good job .why don't you try it you might just be surprised. Much love🎉
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Is it grand son or grand daughter it's confusing.?
What’s going on thought Liam was a boy ???
Liam is a girl or boy? But she mentioned grandson when the story started
Liam is a boys name why call him a grand daughter
seems the details keep switching, grandson/granddaughter, timeline off too. Pay more attention & maybe I'll subscribe when you get your act together
This is a story from a different story group where the children were boys.....so it would be good to proof read and edit before posting
Proof read please!
Come on, you want to be kinder? That pronunciation means a child or a few in german. Do you mean more kind? Learn how to say it properly, for goodness sake. Tha AI people want us to rely on AI, but will not FIX it's glaring inaccuracies. How unintelligently is that business run, it's not the dark ages, but your AI sounds Like it is still, this is continuing to be infuriating. When will you businessmen get the hint? Will this channel just keep throwing money at them?
Seemed like a mix of 2 stories.
Slow reading.make it fast!
Liam has a ponytail?
You need to decide if the grandchild is a girl or boy. You use he and she
The writer was confused
Speed up the reading.