honestly man I get that you are trying to make an argument here, the problem is that your video is so disjointed that its next to impossible to follow what you're saying. IMO it seems like your recording these snippets off the top of your head and slapping them together as fast as possible. You should write them all down into a full script first and make sure that it reads coherently out loud. Then do your final recordings and give more time between the cuts so it feels natural. Good luck.
honestly man I get that you are trying to make an argument here, the problem is that your video is so disjointed that its next to impossible to follow what you're saying. IMO it seems like your recording these snippets off the top of your head and slapping them together as fast as possible. You should write them all down into a full script first and make sure that it reads coherently out loud. Then do your final recordings and give more time between the cuts so it feels natural. Good luck.
Bad take