I love this so much! I apologize if this is unsolicited but I think there's a few improvements that could be done with this chart First off, at 0:50 I think the touch taps should be changed with slides since that many amount of touch taps for this pattern yield a lot of achievement scoring and also quite loud for the sound notes compared to the song. Moreover the ending part of this part on A8 with the break, I think this part should have another slide -- or a set of touch notes if you insist. Although I think it's worth considering to reduce the amount of touch notes to like 4-6 instead of 7 On 0:55 with the tap-slide starting on A8 it seems to me that it should start with left hand and continue up until A3. And then there's a gap to A5. I think this part shouldn't have a gap and just continue on A4 since joining a right hand on this pattern of suddenly moving your left hand faster to catch up with the tap notes would feel a bit awkward Now on 1:00 I feel like this is the part that should have a gap since it's not obvious enough that you should do the tap-slide with right hand followed by left hand instead of just your right hand (since if you only use the right hand you would need to do the breaks with your arms twisted). Perhaps make the first two tap notes start from A3 so that there's a gap on A1? 1:25 - 1:30 This part is perhaps undercharted with just a slide here? Could have a pattern following the drums 1:57 I think this part could be combined with something more intense like putting a slide-tap pattern before you need to do the slide since it has a strong drop here That's all! I still this is overall a well done chart with lots of originality put into it. I love it
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I love this so much! I apologize if this is unsolicited but I think there's a few improvements that could be done with this chart
First off, at 0:50 I think the touch taps should be changed with slides since that many amount of touch taps for this pattern yield a lot of achievement scoring and also quite loud for the sound notes compared to the song. Moreover the ending part of this part on A8 with the break, I think this part should have another slide -- or a set of touch notes if you insist. Although I think it's worth considering to reduce the amount of touch notes to like 4-6 instead of 7
On 0:55 with the tap-slide starting on A8 it seems to me that it should start with left hand and continue up until A3. And then there's a gap to A5. I think this part shouldn't have a gap and just continue on A4 since joining a right hand on this pattern of suddenly moving your left hand faster to catch up with the tap notes would feel a bit awkward
Now on 1:00 I feel like this is the part that should have a gap since it's not obvious enough that you should do the tap-slide with right hand followed by left hand instead of just your right hand (since if you only use the right hand you would need to do the breaks with your arms twisted). Perhaps make the first two tap notes start from A3 so that there's a gap on A1?
1:25 - 1:30 This part is perhaps undercharted with just a slide here? Could have a pattern following the drums
1:57 I think this part could be combined with something more intense like putting a slide-tap pattern before you need to do the slide since it has a strong drop here
That's all! I still this is overall a well done chart with lots of originality put into it. I love it