First timer, and I LOVE ur voice, I haven’t even heard the story yet, but WOW, I subbed, liked, and I haven’t even watched the whole thing yet, have an AMAZING DAY, OR NIGHT... I HAVE NO IDEA WHAT TO SAY!!!! BAIIIIII
Again awesome story!!! A part 2 would be great. I'm happy that Marinette is getting support and Chat is so sweet! It would have been funny though if he got protective as Adrien and Marinette confronting him afterwards. ;) But I guess that's already done often ... Maybe a part on Marinette getting stronger and more confident? (could also be in a completely different story but you know girl power ;) )
This is quite rushed and needs some refinement for sure. Its a good concept and a good write. It's more like a rough draft though. Keep it up and don't give up! Though one little nitpick, Kagami it's cannonly Mari's friend so seeing her be mean is heart breaking to me. Id love to see what itll turn into with all the advice you get! Please come back to this one day!
Thank you. I do rush my videos a lot. I can Wright well but I try and post very frequently. When I combine that with school work and my own relax time it’s a tight schedule. Hopefully I’ll get better.
I don’t think I’ll do drafts since there are still many assessments at this point in time. Hopefully when school goes back to normal I’ll get to give you better stories.
Makes sense. I stick to my advice of taking things slow though. That doesn't mean do drafts and drafts and drafts before uploading, just means take your time and let things come to you. My ideas typically come from my in-school daydreaming XD
Same. It’s so annoying, the worst times possible is when I get my ideas. For example I’m in the middle of a math test and I get an idea. 🤦🏻♀️🤦🏻♀️🤦🏻♀️
Well don’t be alone anymore, I need to say this more but this channel, I started it hoping we could be a friend group here. So please comment a lot and I’ll try and respond.
My power would be super speed too cause of the same reasons! The only down side is you could mess up time and turn into dust if you go to fast. But I just posted a video about the flash on my channel!
I LOVE YOUR VIDEOS !! DON"T GET ME WRONG!!! but .... This was... too muuccchhhhh!!! I didn't like how dependent Marinette was this time it kinda went too far with the depression... She seems like a completely different person! I would've liked her to be more confident in herself. Adrien's protectiveness was also realistic but....... whatever happened to the fact of ladybug?... And I would've wanted to know how they got closer... just a bit more info.... Maybe a part 2 where Marinette gains her strength. Like #girlpower instead of her depending on Adrien/chat's influence. I still loved it though! don't get me wrong!! I love giving constructive comments! And I LOOOVVE getting them on my channel too! It helps me get better! I'll always love and watch your videos!! # NUMBER 1 FAN
Good story but after not eatong at all person shouldn't be eating any kind of food and not lot of food it's long proces so the problem wouldn't be solved over night.....not hating just sugesting
Thanks for watching!!!
I think part 2 would be great. Another great story
Thank you!!!
First timer, and I LOVE ur voice, I haven’t even heard the story yet, but WOW, I subbed, liked, and I haven’t even watched the whole thing yet, have an AMAZING DAY, OR NIGHT... I HAVE NO IDEA WHAT TO SAY!!!! BAIIIIII
Thanks, welcome to the friend group known as my channel. Normally I’d respond faster but I’m on a bit of a break
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Again awesome story!!!
A part 2 would be great.
I'm happy that Marinette is getting support and Chat is so sweet! It would have been funny though if he got protective as Adrien and Marinette confronting him afterwards. ;) But I guess that's already done often ...
Maybe a part on Marinette getting stronger and more confident? (could also be in a completely different story but you know girl power ;) )
Pls part 2 I love this
Surely
Amazing as always 👏👏👏👏
Thank you
This is quite rushed and needs some refinement for sure. Its a good concept and a good write. It's more like a rough draft though. Keep it up and don't give up! Though one little nitpick, Kagami it's cannonly Mari's friend so seeing her be mean is heart breaking to me. Id love to see what itll turn into with all the advice you get! Please come back to this one day!
Thank you. I do rush my videos a lot. I can Wright well but I try and post very frequently. When I combine that with school work and my own relax time it’s a tight schedule. Hopefully I’ll get better.
Just take things slow. No need to rush, okay?
I don’t think I’ll do drafts since there are still many assessments at this point in time. Hopefully when school goes back to normal I’ll get to give you better stories.
Makes sense. I stick to my advice of taking things slow though. That doesn't mean do drafts and drafts and drafts before uploading, just means take your time and let things come to you. My ideas typically come from my in-school daydreaming XD
Same. It’s so annoying, the worst times possible is when I get my ideas. For example I’m in the middle of a math test and I get an idea. 🤦🏻♀️🤦🏻♀️🤦🏻♀️
Love it
Thank you
yooo this is awesome this is so good and not to mantion my ship sailed niceee
6:16 he'll (u said hell)
4:22 ugly (u said unglued)
And did u misspell protects in the decription?
Anyhow i like this, good boy cat ♥️♥️♥️
Thanks, I need to start checking my spelling. I just rush and forget all the time
It's ok
Cool story it touched me i can relate to the story about cool story
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Thaxs great story
My power would be super speed too cause of the same reasons! The only down side is you could mess up time and turn into dust if you go to fast. But I just posted a video about the flash on my channel!
Cool, the other thing I didn’t mention is you could travel through time and do so many more cool stuff.
I know! Super speed is like the ultimate power
Can you make another chapter it's really good
Ok
What is your favorite series (something else than the flash)mine is riverdale
The good doctor, do you know it?
Omg of course I know it l just started last week I am in season 2 now I love it :)
My power would be to have any power because then I could Have unlimited power
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i think this fic is only half done and would like a 2. part of this.
Sure
I feel bad for Marinette but
MY SHIP HAS SAILED!!!!!!
Our ship
@@haadiyausmanfanfics2358 that is really really cute
Pleas I need a part 2
Ok then
Thank you
I LOVE YOUR VIDEOS !! DON"T GET ME WRONG!!! but .... This was... too muuccchhhhh!!! I didn't like how dependent Marinette was this time it kinda went too far with the depression... She seems like a completely different person! I would've liked her to be more confident in herself. Adrien's protectiveness was also realistic but....... whatever happened to the fact of ladybug?... And I would've wanted to know how they got closer... just a bit more info.... Maybe a part 2 where Marinette gains her strength. Like #girlpower instead of her depending on Adrien/chat's influence. I still loved it though! don't get me wrong!! I love giving constructive comments! And I LOOOVVE getting them on my channel too! It helps me get better! I'll always love and watch your videos!! # NUMBER 1 FAN
Good story but after not eatong at all person shouldn't be eating any kind of food and not lot of food it's long proces so the problem wouldn't be solved over night.....not hating just sugesting
Yeah. I know but I didn’t feel like putting in a long story of how her health got better
@@haadiyausmanfanfics2358 understandable
Love it
Thank you
Love it
Thanks