I feel like this wasn't checked before it was uploaded - a lot of 'cut' left in and repeated sentences. I know this is up for free and thank you for doing it, but yeesh, just give it a listen through before you publish
Who edited this? Cut cut cut, I get the narrator will make mistakes and need to reread, that's understandable but it takes so much from the story when you keep hearing cut in one chapter.
I’m frankly baffled that, with the sheer number of people collaborating on this project, no one bothered to listen to the final edit all the way through and make sure there weren’t any mistakes with how it was cut before releasing it. There are *so many* bad cuts that leave a mistake in and then just repeat the sentence. Why did no one proof this before it was published.
He called her MugBlood She should of called that Pig Ferret I always thought Granger was stronger then this book makes her out to be he was Always Always A Coward Always he needed power over her to feel like a man HA he was never a man Never Ever a Coward Sleeve Looser he was a Sick Looser
I agree. The only time she cried in Harry Potter was when Ron was rude to her. Bc of her crush in him... So her being overly sensitive and crying as much as she does in this annoys me a bit more than it should
I’m sure you guys would be super put together after 6 years of war, everyone you know dying and the man you unknowingly love raping you for months on end 😑 book hermoine was an innocent child. Manacled hermoine is a tortured woman.
Honestly.... how could it be called rape. You obviously know he had no choice. He had no ability to inform you. Your stunt at susex caused this to have to happen.... god shes hard to understand. Oh and i dont know .. tell him you love him? Tell him you are so happy to see him? ..
Don’t forget, she’s still in that jumbled state of mind that she put herself into to protect him when she was captured. Her brain isn’t right, it’s intentionally disorganized and she can’t fix it. Not to mention that while he didn’t have a choice it still happened.
Please edit this for the love of God all the cuts and this is such a good chapter
OMG please!!!!! It’s so painful!!!
Yessss omg its so so so painful! Such a great chapter. It's so easy to edit
this definitely needed more editing. all the mess ups could have been taken out.
For me, this is one of the most heartbreaking chapters. You finally get to see all the pain Draco had to go through while keeping her hostage 💔
This is so accurate!!!
So unserious 💀
people are complaining too much... did it needed a bit of editing to cut pauses? sure but this was great, thank you
Thank you for narrating this. Amazing job!!!
I feel like this wasn't checked before it was uploaded - a lot of 'cut' left in and repeated sentences. I know this is up for free and thank you for doing it, but yeesh, just give it a listen through before you publish
Who edited this? Cut cut cut, I get the narrator will make mistakes and need to reread, that's understandable but it takes so much from the story when you keep hearing cut in one chapter.
can't wait to hear your book!
@whosthis704 It takes you out when there's so many mess ups. They're not being unreasonable.
I actually like the cuts and minor imperfections. It almost feels like a friend is here reading this to me.
Thanks so much for your reading
Amazing series I'm so hooked
The song "About you" by 1975 is my tune for this chapter. This chapter is heartbreaking 😢
This chapter has made me cry till no end lol 😢😅
This narrator is doing well. I am hooked to the Draco/Hermione fanfictiinnand goijg to a new story after this trilogy.
Man this girl really struggled through this chapter.
What’s the point of all the cuts and rereading if you weren’t going to edit it out
I can´t work, I´m amazed, I want to cry and scream. Jaaaaaaa omg
This is soooo good❤❤❤❤❤ thank u for posting ❤❤❤2
Best thing to wake up to 😁
I really like this one even though it is not happy
This poor narrator is struggling. And through one of the best chapters too 😭
Thank you!!!!
Thank you ❤
I’m frankly baffled that, with the sheer number of people collaborating on this project, no one bothered to listen to the final edit all the way through and make sure there weren’t any mistakes with how it was cut before releasing it. There are *so many* bad cuts that leave a mistake in and then just repeat the sentence. Why did no one proof this before it was published.
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He called her MugBlood She should of called that Pig Ferret I always thought Granger was stronger then this book makes her out to be he was Always Always A Coward Always he needed power over her to feel like a man HA he was never a man Never Ever a Coward Sleeve Looser he was a Sick Looser
I agree. The only time she cried in Harry Potter was when Ron was rude to her. Bc of her crush in him... So her being overly sensitive and crying as much as she does in this annoys me a bit more than it should
I’m sure you guys would be super put together after 6 years of war, everyone you know dying and the man you unknowingly love raping you for months on end 😑 book hermoine was an innocent child. Manacled hermoine is a tortured woman.
Yeah except imagine how you would be if you witnessed all of the horror she’s seen. She’s still a BAMF tho!
It’s should HAVE*. You might want to try reading the book instead of listening.
War can do that to a person
Honestly.... how could it be called rape. You obviously know he had no choice. He had no ability to inform you. Your stunt at susex caused this to have to happen.... god shes hard to understand. Oh and i dont know .. tell him you love him? Tell him you are so happy to see him? ..
Don’t forget, she’s still in that jumbled state of mind that she put herself into to protect him when she was captured. Her brain isn’t right, it’s intentionally disorganized and she can’t fix it. Not to mention that while he didn’t have a choice it still happened.