this one was an absolute gem. As usual, great job on the editing, I especially liked the flooding room scene with the clever cuts! I can easily see that you had taken my advice to heart, the voices sound a lot less forced and more natural. Props to the disembodied voice, he did his job very well for all that it sounded creepy and apathetic towards the happenings. the voice of Benjamin could use a small bit of serious tones when talking about jumping off of a building, but other than that, great voices all around! keep up the practice! the birds chirping was getting a little tedious to me, that could easily be softened a little bit through volume adjustment, or balanced out through the addition of insect buzzing. otherwise, I did like the use of background sounds such as the grass moving. maybe, if you are going to bring attention to the sounds such as that, add the sound of walking on wooden floors as soft and subtle, it adds to the creepy factor if the audience gets used to the sound of the characters walking/breathing softly, but then gets taken away during intense moments, or increased in volume during jump scares. its similar to the sound of the heater running in your house when you are alone, and then it suddenly turns off and it feels like you lost a bit of comforting protection. I liked your use of light during the night scene, but I think it could have benefited more from more dynamic lighting. Just, simply, from an artistic standpoint, you do not have to utilize it because you did execute the proper mood, and it was sufficiently creepy. Good job with that, I would do some experimentation with dynamic lighting, especially if you ever use shaders again, but if not, you are doing very well with the careful thoughts concerning mood and atmosphere! I did enjoy it when you used shaders back in the day, but I can definitely understand that it causes a lot of problems, and I am NOT pushing you for that option, it is one of many, and you do well with it as you do without. so that decision is entirely up to you. keep up the good work! cannot wait to see the next one, as I assume it will be full of action and mystery as per the various foreshadowing in this one! As usual, these comments are meant to be seen as helpful critiques based on my work in video production, and you do not have to take any of this to heart! Can't wait to see part 3!!!
Since part 3 will be the last, I say you make it like an hour long. Because I feel like 16 minutes wouldn't be enough. But so far, nice part. Can't wait to see how this series will end already.
One of the voice actors sounds like Fredrick Briggs from Origins Untold in the Origins Universe by Elite Productions not sure if that’s actually him but it does really sound like him I think it was the voice actor for Benjamin
I can’t believe this... it’s all amazing... how do u make this stufff ... ima make this kinda stufff when ima youtuber because you are my inspiration! AMAMAMAMAMAMAAMAMAMAMAMAZZZZZZZZZZIING
So what’s the whole series timeline? Does it include everything that u have released on the channel? Including: -Forgotten -Herobrine Lake -Herobrine Lake the prequel -The Unknown -Something that I think was called Herobrine Lake Origins or something like that -Herobrine Lake the sequel -Herobrine Lake Returns All of those, and maybe others I’ve missed (dunno), what’s the order of events? Would be helpful to know so I can rewatch the entire series in chronological order
Heya! You can find the complete timeline here. Keep in mind that there could be some minor confusion along the way as back then, we basically had no clue as to what we were doing lmao. ua-cam.com/play/PLAmFEHM3LlrmCQwuVvlwzFFu4hL5k-4SL.html
Thanks a lot, since the first series I have grown up watching the series. I love the characters, concepts and how the series gets more mature and professional as u make more Thanks again man
Omg the nostalgia!!!!!!!! My childhood is returning! My 6 or 7 year old self is screaming!!
It’s great how this sorta goes back to the old sets in Herobrine Lake, it’s like reliving it again, but from a whole new perspective, it’s awesome!
Roses are red violets are blue Jack is back, you’re happy he is too
Only OG’s remember his old channel name it’s dylan
nucky Mations nah fam only og fans remember kdproductions
@@ojees true true
only OG's remember it as DillieBoy008 (sorry)
@@Atzana_ you got us there
@@ojees yah i think he was kdproduction but i dont even remember if i was in his channel when it was kdproduction
I spent so much time agonizing about how to do that final line only for it to be practically inaudible. XD
this one was an absolute gem. As usual, great job on the editing, I especially liked the flooding room scene with the clever cuts! I can easily see that you had taken my advice to heart, the voices sound a lot less forced and more natural. Props to the disembodied voice, he did his job very well for all that it sounded creepy and apathetic towards the happenings. the voice of Benjamin could use a small bit of serious tones when talking about jumping off of a building, but other than that, great voices all around! keep up the practice!
the birds chirping was getting a little tedious to me, that could easily be softened a little bit through volume adjustment, or balanced out through the addition of insect buzzing. otherwise, I did like the use of background sounds such as the grass moving. maybe, if you are going to bring attention to the sounds such as that, add the sound of walking on wooden floors as soft and subtle, it adds to the creepy factor if the audience gets used to the sound of the characters walking/breathing softly, but then gets taken away during intense moments, or increased in volume during jump scares. its similar to the sound of the heater running in your house when you are alone, and then it suddenly turns off and it feels like you lost a bit of comforting protection.
I liked your use of light during the night scene, but I think it could have benefited more from more dynamic lighting. Just, simply, from an artistic standpoint, you do not have to utilize it because you did execute the proper mood, and it was sufficiently creepy. Good job with that, I would do some experimentation with dynamic lighting, especially if you ever use shaders again, but if not, you are doing very well with the careful thoughts concerning mood and atmosphere! I did enjoy it when you used shaders back in the day, but I can definitely understand that it causes a lot of problems, and I am NOT pushing you for that option, it is one of many, and you do well with it as you do without. so that decision is entirely up to you.
keep up the good work! cannot wait to see the next one, as I assume it will be full of action and mystery as per the various foreshadowing in this one! As usual, these comments are meant to be seen as helpful critiques based on my work in video production, and you do not have to take any of this to heart! Can't wait to see part 3!!!
Appreciate it man!
Always happy to receive your feedback. Taking notes!
Omg the old map 😆yesss
YES FINALLY WE GET TO SEE WHAT JACK LOOKS LIKE FOR THE VERY FIRST TIME
Can't wait for the next trials~
Best wishes
-Dr. Konrad
When you struggle between keeping your sanity and completing that essay 11:54
so much Nostalgia Dylan. THis is great! cant wait for part 3!!!
My heart just freaking dropped.
Since part 3 will be the last, I say you make it like an hour long. Because I feel like 16 minutes wouldn't be enough. But so far, nice part. Can't wait to see how this series will end already.
Yesss! This was so worth the wait Dylan!
Who watched the premiere? :D
"Where am I now?"
A survival games map apparently
16:07 the squid in the water disappears on que with the music
waiting for the subtitles to publish. thank you dylan for this amazing part! cant wait for part 3!
Wait a minute, 7 Year old me is screaming "DID HE JUST SAY BEN!"
OOOOHHHH SHIT! THE OLD CITY MAP!!!! *AAAAAHHHHH!!!!!!!*
F+L=E (old meme)
10/10
I came.
I saw.
I liked.
One of the voice actors sounds like Fredrick Briggs from Origins Untold in the Origins Universe by Elite Productions not sure if that’s actually him but it does really sound like him I think it was the voice actor for Benjamin
epiC
I can’t believe this... it’s all amazing... how do u make this stufff ... ima make this kinda stufff when ima youtuber because you are my inspiration! AMAMAMAMAMAMAAMAMAMAMAMAZZZZZZZZZZIING
Lol that city map is from hunger games
coke really? Got a map download lol
Where did you get that 808 sound effect at 15:54
Oh my God it's the same map as the Herobrine movie
It takes place in the exact same time as well
So what’s the whole series timeline? Does it include everything that u have released on the channel? Including:
-Forgotten
-Herobrine Lake
-Herobrine Lake the prequel
-The Unknown
-Something that I think was called Herobrine Lake Origins or something like that
-Herobrine Lake the sequel
-Herobrine Lake Returns
All of those, and maybe others I’ve missed (dunno), what’s the order of events? Would be helpful to know so I can rewatch the entire series in chronological order
Heya! You can find the complete timeline here. Keep in mind that there could be some minor confusion along the way as back then, we basically had no clue as to what we were doing lmao. ua-cam.com/play/PLAmFEHM3LlrmCQwuVvlwzFFu4hL5k-4SL.html
Thanks a lot, since the first series I have grown up watching the series. I love the characters, concepts and how the series gets more mature and professional as u make more
Thanks again man
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