Improving the Worldbuilding of my old comic (or at least I try) | Reboot Ramble #3

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  • Опубліковано 25 жов 2024

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  • @SoftSeaside
    @SoftSeaside  Рік тому +2

    Thank you for watching ❤
    I forgot to mention this but the idea of Snow being bad at creating steam comes from a friend of mine who i am not in contact anymore. Just wanted to mention this, don't wanna claim someone's idea as my own!

  • @anokartist2352
    @anokartist2352 Рік тому +6

    I binged this series and didn't realise you were so small, i expected at least a couple thousand subs. This is really great and I'll be following on to see how this turns out ^^

    • @SoftSeaside
      @SoftSeaside  Рік тому +2

      Thank you so much for watching my little comic making adventure! 😊😊😊

  • @ambubb
    @ambubb Рік тому +3

    another great video!
    I love the glowing eyes, especially that they glow while having intense emotions.
    and I also really like the idea of having those growing/changing tatoos. maybe it would be an option, that those tattoos look at a young age more like birthmarks, where only the senshis can differentiate them from normal birthmarks. they start to change more intensly at some point of the development like at the end of puberty. also I personally love the idea of the tatoos showing, who the people are close to. and if they are growing/ ever changing tatoos, the tattoos could change into more similar tattoos or develop certain signs that stand for the clostest people to that person. you could even have Tattoo interpreters that work similar to dream interpreters :D

    • @SoftSeaside
      @SoftSeaside  Рік тому +2

      omg your ideas are so good??? Thank you so much for the suggestions!! Maybe YOU should start a comic, I would totally read it :D

    • @ambubb
      @ambubb Рік тому +2

      ​@@SoftSeaside I'm happy you liked them! I play around with it from time to time. but I'm kinda scared of it, because of the work load and the writing of conversations ;D people that write and draw longer comics are super impressive to me :D

  • @blachatter
    @blachatter Рік тому +7

    Loving the "seedling"/"sprout" concept, although it implies that powers could grow from non-powered individuals

    • @SoftSeaside
      @SoftSeaside  Рік тому +2

      well, well, who knows if the powers could grow from non-powered individuals? 👀 (definitely not me because nothing is set in stone yet LMAO) Thanks for your remark, I will keep the implication in mind! 😊

  • @AdeIineLaRue
    @AdeIineLaRue Рік тому +7

    for books where there is a magical society in the real world, you could try the Akata Witch series. It's set in Nigeria and in the book (not going to spoil too much) magic is a global practice kept secret from normal people. I feel like it's a good example of a story that can still cover real world issues while having fantasy elements. Also it's just a really good series.

    • @SoftSeaside
      @SoftSeaside  Рік тому +2

      OHHHHH, that sounds really cool! 👀 Will definitely check it out at some point! :D Thanks for the suggestion! 🤗

  • @ruikamo
    @ruikamo Рік тому +2

    omg I am FINALLY getting around to watching this! I am glad we can all agree that glowing eyes are amazing 😌

    • @SoftSeaside
      @SoftSeaside  Рік тому +1

      Thanks for watching! ❤ Hehe, yeah the video got pretty long, I cam totally understand that one does not have the time or motivation to watch it immediately XD
      Also
      You 🤝 me
      glowing eyes

  • @ANewShadeOfBlue
    @ANewShadeOfBlue Рік тому +5

    Sorry to say this, but I think reading some X-Men comics are your best bet. Espeacially, the ones where the debate between Magneto and Xavier's idea'ls are at the fore-front. "God Loves, Man Kills" and "Mutant Genesis" are good ones. It's not a one to one comparison, but I believe they have the themes you're looking for. Hey, look up the show X-Men: Evolution. The first few seasons took place before society at large knew mutants existed, so it's mostly about these kids picking sides and preparing for a future war, either against humans, each other, or both.

    • @SoftSeaside
      @SoftSeaside  Рік тому +1

      Yes, I already had an eye on X-Men for quite a while but I never managed to watch it 😂 Thanks for the recommendation, I really should check it out!

  • @Koispeck
    @Koispeck Рік тому +4

    Ah yes world-building. The bane of my existence when trying to figure out my stories.
    Ik a lot of comics with really cool world-building, and I cant wait to see how your comics world play out!

    • @SoftSeaside
      @SoftSeaside  Рік тому +2

      Why is worldbuilding soooo haaaard?! 😭and thanks, hope you will enjoy it :D (please don't expect too much LMAO)

  • @sadpatheticshrimp
    @sadpatheticshrimp Рік тому +7

    for alternative names to senshis maybe something like,, roselins? florans? floridians? tbh i don't know im brainstorming lmao

    • @SoftSeaside
      @SoftSeaside  Рік тому +3

      Ohhh, these are some great names, thanks for your suggestions! 💖 Somehow completely forgot that you can also use some fantasy names instead of real words XD I will think about some more names later! Thank you so much!

    • @ANewShadeOfBlue
      @ANewShadeOfBlue Рік тому +3

      @@SoftSeaside How about "Thorns?" Since thorns are there to protect the flower? What ever the metephorical "flower" is would be up to you.

    • @SoftSeaside
      @SoftSeaside  Рік тому +2

      ​@@ANewShadeOfBlueThorns did acrually come to my mind in the past! :D not sure about it tho because I associate it with pain and not sure if I wanna go for that vibe 🤔 but thanks for the suggestion!

  • @TaylorJohnstersen
    @TaylorJohnstersen 6 місяців тому

    Had to turn off the video because of the constant *bwoop* noise but i bet you explain world building pretty well