The end was nowhere near as good as the setup. One note moving forward is to focus more on fallout/consequences, and less on how the couples met/courted/etc. The meat of the stories should be the main problems, their resolution and the downstream consequences... not the background info.
Right, I really don't care all that much what these people look like, what school they went to, etc... I wanna hear what they did wrong and how they got some just desserts or over the top desserts
Good story but too rushed in the end. We needed to hear from the wife of her side of oh shit...I am pregnant who is the father and her crying of what she had done to her life.....part 2?
You cant take a minor child out of the country without written permission from both parents even if one parent has complete custody it still requires both signatures
Hi. Damn! That started out as such a good story but when it came time for the showdown and aftermath.....well, it left a lot to be desired. I guess not every story can be a home run.
I can't describe how frustrating it is to hear these dudes let their wives punk them so easily and kick them out of their own rooms. Grow an effing pair
Couldn't agree more. My least favorite part was after she kicked him out, he waits a month to figure out what Is going on. He talks about how unhappy he is😂😂😂. do something about it!
SKIP THIS ONE. NO SATISFYING ENDING. Husband just leaves and the story ends. You don’t find out why she cheats or worse, hear her side when she find out she is caught. The story just end. DONT WASTE TIME because it’s the listener that gets cheated.
What the heck, LLC? Arnie Becker (LA Law), Dan Fielding (Night Court), Jack McCoy (Law and Order), Ben Matlock (Matlock), and Don Johnson (Miami Vice)? How was I supposed to seriously listen when each time their names were mentioned I started giggling again. Good job cheering me up today.
Why so short?? I would have thought you would have made this a little more involved, and fleshed the story out more! Just disappointed that it was over and done with so quickly!!
Very disappointed LLC seems to be falling behind other channels. There are now channels with better story's and narration. You have always been my favourite channel. But I now find myself spending more time with other channels.
SKIPPPPPPP THIS ONE. NO SATISFYING CONCLUSION, NO WIFE’s point of view or even regret. Story ends mostly unfinished. He moves away with the kids and after 5 years wife ask to see them. The end??? WHY DID SHE CHEAT ? What was her response when she found out he knew? Absolutely no resolution.
What is it with you guys and dumb stories mixed with good stories lately? Once again, there is very little justice to conclude this story. The level of betrayal is grossly greater than any outcome in this narrative. And even with this very weak narrative, there is almost no description of consequential detail. It is highly generalized. Additionally, just a little more creativity could have made this story far better and far more satisfying. In this narrative, even in Michigan, the law firm could have been, and should have been absolutely demolished, with disbarrment a very plausible outcome. Hiding evil, immorality, and betrayal from any innocent spouse is simply NOT moral, right, or just. Yet hiding the immorality and betrayal from all innocent spouses involved seems to be the outcome in about 9 oit of 10 stories. *It may spund harsh to some, but Hiding or covering evil and betrayal makes the initial aggrieved amd betrayed spouse as guilty of covering up affair betrayal as any other woman in these stories who actively conspires to cover up gross adultery for their girl friends!* Such denial of the adulterous betraya also enables the offenders to continue with fewer and fewer moral boundaries. This would be just plain stupid and unrealistic to almost any person I know. ***** Within this narrative, there is almost no descriptive detail as to consequences for the family wrecking law partners, or for the unapologetic wife. Just a cruze, brief assumed outcome, and a 5 year gap. You can do far better!
They always give birth to twins.
If there ever was a story that could use the alternate ending treatment…..
so rushed.. all those details for 40 min.. then nothing..
Who cares how they met. Why do all these men remember the past. Keep you head in the now and where you are going
The end was nowhere near as good as the setup. One note moving forward is to focus more on fallout/consequences, and less on how the couples met/courted/etc. The meat of the stories should be the main problems, their resolution and the downstream consequences... not the background info.
Right, I really don't care all that much what these people look like, what school they went to, etc...
I wanna hear what they did wrong and how they got some just desserts or over the top desserts
Agreed.
That's why I like escape story more.
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I agree wholeheartedly with this suggestion!!!
Every husband is so soft
Yes, he should have began investigating hard the day he saw the 304 on the balcony, but he simped out and put up with month of her cheating!
It’s always twins.
This need a part 2
Funny to hear all the locations as the writer clearly lives in this area and knows it well. I live in the same area.
Could have done a bit more with that ending .. man that was hurried
That was a horrible story…. A waste of time!
Good story but too rushed in the end. We needed to hear from the wife of her side of oh shit...I am pregnant who is the father and her crying of what she had done to her life.....part 2?
I agree, why the rush to finish the story. A good story but...
Agree also
She's not relevant. She's left behind as the trash.
Yes, it needs a longer ending
Rushed ending and yet drawn out details of his erotic encounters with his slore wife.
So many holes and an incomplete ending. Almost nothing on the kids
That's how you deal with a cold-hearted witch, love to hear her side of this story when the roof fell in on her very enjoyable story. 👍👍
😮 feels like its a rushed out story but it's still not a bad one
You cant take a minor child out of the country without written permission from both parents even if one parent has complete custody it still requires both signatures
i think that's why they call this fiction. not great fiction at that.
Yes yes yes
Hi. Damn! That started out as such a good story but when it came time for the showdown and aftermath.....well, it left a lot to be desired. I guess not every story can be a home run.
You have to usually go to law school to take the bar
I can't describe how frustrating it is to hear these dudes let their wives punk them so easily and kick them out of their own rooms. Grow an effing pair
Couldn't agree more.
My least favorite part was after she kicked him out, he waits a month to figure out what Is going on. He talks about how unhappy he is😂😂😂. do something about it!
SKIP THIS ONE. NO SATISFYING ENDING. Husband just leaves and the story ends.
You don’t find out why she cheats or worse, hear her side when she find out she is caught. The story just end. DONT WASTE TIME because it’s the listener that gets cheated.
Horrible ending. All that build up for nothing!
What the heck, LLC? Arnie Becker (LA Law), Dan Fielding (Night Court), Jack McCoy (Law and Order), Ben Matlock (Matlock), and Don Johnson (Miami Vice)? How was I supposed to seriously listen when each time their names were mentioned I started giggling again. Good job cheering me up today.
Well... I'm sad. Perry Mason and Hamilton Burger weren't included! 🤣🤣
Lol, after readinf the comments, I skip to the end.
I like my revenge corn with large quantities of revenge please
The end seems very rushed.
3 Mins 4 the showdown is pretty sad
I’m with you. The ending could have used a lot more.
Why so short?? I would have thought you would have made this a little more involved, and fleshed the story out more! Just disappointed that it was over and done with so quickly!!
Very disappointed LLC seems to be falling behind other channels. There are now channels with better story's and narration. You have always been my favourite channel. But I now find myself spending more time with other channels.
any recommendations
SKIPPPPPPP THIS ONE. NO SATISFYING CONCLUSION, NO WIFE’s point of view or even regret. Story ends mostly unfinished. He moves away with the kids and after 5 years wife ask to see them. The end??? WHY DID SHE CHEAT ? What was her response when she found out he knew? Absolutely no resolution.
This story sucks, the ending was just way too fast.
This husband is too weak he knows his wife is cheating and doesn't fo anything for a while
Does the closed caption generator not know what punctuation is? Fu k it's annoying!
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They're making up for ads
pretty anti-climatic. seemed like a race to see what would finish first. the story or my interest. in the end no one seemed to be remotely upset.
What is it with you guys and dumb stories mixed with good stories lately?
Once again, there is very little justice to conclude this story.
The level of betrayal is grossly greater than any outcome in this narrative.
And even with this very weak narrative, there is almost no description of consequential detail. It is highly generalized.
Additionally, just a little more creativity could have made this story far better and far more satisfying.
In this narrative, even in Michigan, the law firm could have been, and should have been absolutely demolished, with disbarrment a very plausible outcome.
Hiding evil, immorality, and betrayal from any innocent spouse is simply NOT moral, right, or just. Yet hiding the immorality and betrayal from all innocent spouses involved seems to be the outcome in about 9 oit of 10 stories.
*It may spund harsh to some, but Hiding or covering evil and betrayal makes the initial aggrieved amd betrayed spouse as guilty of covering up affair betrayal as any other woman in these stories who actively conspires to cover up gross adultery for their girl friends!* Such denial of the adulterous betraya also enables the offenders to continue with fewer and fewer moral boundaries.
This would be just plain stupid and unrealistic to almost any person I know.
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Within this narrative, there is almost no descriptive detail as to consequences for the family wrecking law partners, or for the unapologetic wife. Just a cruze, brief assumed outcome, and a 5 year gap.
You can do far better!
gto baby
Geez this story was corny
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Good day from east Tennessee. I hope everyone is having a great day.
Yuck, story about a simp and a 304.